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I'm in disguise, Am i?
« on: May 20, 2014, 08:37:12 PM »
 Prologue:

Have you ever heard of Elites?

Well if not...

ELITES are the ones who can make a big difference in your lives, whether you mess or you don't mess up with them. Your life can be in a complete danger when somebody knew that you're an Elite. Elites are smarter than anyone could possibly think they are. They have money and all but life can't be bought by money.


Elites are secretive, their identity and all. So who knows who?








What if you are an Elite?


What if your life isn't as easy as others?


What if you think that your just one of the ordinaries but you really aren't?














WHAT IF YOUR IN A COMPLETE DISGUISE?


Does love has to do something with what kind you are?


Does love has to do something whether you're an Elite or you're just a complete ordinary?


But who cares?


We are all special in different cases..


We are special in every way we can be..


We are unique...


BUT....


They're still laws around the world playing....


LIFE IS A DEEP !@#$? ISN'T IT?


KILL LAWS...


KILL GOVERNMENT...


AND LET LOVE CONQUER EVERYTHING...











DON'T LET LAW..... KEEP YOU IN DISGUISE...

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Re: I'm in disguise, Am i?
« Reply #1 on: May 28, 2014, 11:28:38 PM »
REMINDER:


EVERYTHING WRITTEN IN THIS STORY IS A WORK OF FICTION.

NAMES,PLACES, ETC.

READ ON YOUR OWN COSTS! THANK YOU :)




CHAPTER 1:Vanessa Speaks



*3rd Person's Words*


"News Flash: ELITES! Nowhere to be found! It is said that they're gone for NOW! What happened? Is it because they're afraid of---"

"Kalokohan!" sigaw ng isang matandang lalaki.

"Alam ng buong sambayanan na walang kinakatakot ang mga Elites. Pero sino nga bang maga-aakalang magtatago sila?  HAHAHAHA Tunay ngang maagap ang mga galaw nila." dugtong pa nito.

"Pero Pa, diba bago sila makapagtago na-ilayo na nila ang mga anak nila? Nung nagsimula palang magkalat ang mga rebelde?" tanong ng isang binatilyo.

"Oo, apo. 17 years ago, iniutos nila sa Head officer ng Empire Guards na ipatapon silang lahat sa lansangan. Pero sinigurado nilang layo-layo ang magkakapatid. Walang nakaalam kung isang Elite ang mga nakuha nila noon. Dahil nagkalat ang mga batang Elite at ang mga batang Orphan."

"Eh nasan na yung mga batang yun?"

Nagkibit-balikat lamang ang matanda.

"Hayy Papa! dapat siguro magpahinga ka na. Sabi ng doktor, bawal ka daw magpagod." sabi ng binatilyo..

"HAHAHAHAHA Alam kong matanda na ako, apo. Pero di ako mapapagod. Hangga't di ko nahahanap ang mga batang Elite."

"Bakit pa, Papa? Para saan pa, siguro naman kaya umalis sa Empire Land ang mga Elites ay para hanapin mga batang yun. At ano po bang paki-alam niyo sa mga batang yun? Malalaki na sila. Sabi niyo nga po 17 years na ang nakalipas, ibig sabihin nasa tamang isip na sila. Some of them may be 17 years and above." sabi ng binatilyo.

"Hindi mo pa maiintindihan ngayon, apo. Pero balang araw malalaman mo din."

Humiga na ang matanda sa kanyang kama at natulog na. Habang ang binatilyo nama'y naiwang tulala..


Biglang tumunog ang cellphone ng binatilyo.. At bumalik na sa sariling isip.

^Megan Calling^


"Hello, Megan?"

"Hello, Clyde? You're needed here in Leisure House. Urgent!"

"Anong nangyari?"

"Si Ken! Napaaway nanaman. Basag mukha."

Napailing nalang ang bata.

"Oh sige na, sige na! Bye!"



*toot toot*


$Clyde's Thought$


I am Clyde Felix Tan, 2nd Class. I lived without parents. Only with my Grandpa. 18 years old. Currently Studying at Royale High.


I'm on my way to Leisure House when I got caught up by the traffic-causing girl.


"Ano ba Miss? Tumabi ka na muna diyan. Walang magagawa yang kakaiyak mo." sabi ng isang matandang lalaki..

"Madame, pumasok ka na po sa sasakyan. Please? Magagalit po sa akin si Boss. Pag nalate po kayo.

"Ayoko pumasok sa Royale! Ayoko dun.. Gusto ko sa Emp--" Tinakpan ng lalaki yung bibig niya.

"Ma'am. Tara na po." Hinigit siya papasok nung lalaki sa sasakyan.


Must she be saying Empire State University? Woah! 1st class teenagers are the ones who can enter there.


There are castes kasi.

Elites- it's not a class. But a throne.

1st Class

2nd Class

3rd Class

4th Class

at yung lowest Caste

5th Neon



Sinundan ko yung kotse.. Papunta na din yung kotse sa Royale..

Hanggang sa bumaba na yung babae. Pagkababang pagkababa niya, I saw her stand straight. Lahat napatingin sa kanya. She wasn't wearing the uniform properly.. She's wearing shorter skirt 4 inches above her knee. Tas folded long sleeves na open yung first 3 buttons, 3 inches stilettos instead of using black shoes then yung vest nakasabit sa shoulder niya. Then someone's handling her bag.

Spoiled Brat! Napailing na lang ako. She's the first 1st class that entered Royale. Kahiya-hiya siguro para sa kanya.


I was following her tracks by my eyes. I can see na everybody's looking at her. Lahat tumatabi sa daanan niya.


"Who is she?" Girl 1

"She's Vanessa Speaks! The hottest Teenage Model/Gangster. 1st Class Teen...." then kinuwento nung babae yung lahat ng accomplishments.

Gangster? She can't be it..


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Re: I'm in disguise, Am i?
« Reply #2 on: June 04, 2014, 06:05:45 PM »
Prologue:

Have you ever heard of Elites?

Well if not...

ELITES are the ones who can make a big difference in your lives, whether you mess or you don't mess up with them. Your life can be in a complete danger when somebody knew that you're an Elite. Elites are smarter than anyone could possibly think they are. They have money and all but life can't be bought by money.


Elites are secretive, their identity and all. So who knows who?








What if you are an Elite?


What if your life isn't as easy as others?


What if you think that your just one of the ordinaries but you really aren't?














WHAT IF YOUR IN A COMPLETE DISGUISE?


Does love has to do something with what kind you are?


Does love has to do something whether you're an Elite or you're just a complete ordinary?


But who cares?


We are all special in different cases..


We are special in every way we can be..


We are unique...


BUT....


They're still laws around the world playing....


LIFE IS A DEEP !@#$? ISN'T IT?


KILL LAWS...


KILL GOVERNMENT...


AND LET LOVE CONQUER EVERYTHING...











DON'T LET LAW..... KEEP YOU IN DISGUISE...

<3

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Re: I'm in disguise, Am i?
« Reply #3 on: June 04, 2014, 06:10:25 PM »
REMINDER:


EVERYTHING WRITTEN IN THIS STORY IS A WORK OF FICTION.

NAMES,PLACES, ETC.

READ ON YOUR OWN COSTS! THANK YOU :)




CHAPTER 1:Vanessa Speaks



*3rd Person's Words*


"News Flash: ELITES! Nowhere to be found! It is said that they're gone for NOW! What happened? Is it because they're afraid of---"

"Kalokohan!" sigaw ng isang matandang lalaki.

"Alam ng buong sambayanan na walang kinakatakot ang mga Elites. Pero sino nga bang maga-aakalang magtatago sila?  HAHAHAHA Tunay ngang maagap ang mga galaw nila." dugtong pa nito.

"Pero Pa, diba bago sila makapagtago na-ilayo na nila ang mga anak nila? Nung nagsimula palang magkalat ang mga rebelde?" tanong ng isang binatilyo.

"Oo, apo. 17 years ago, iniutos nila sa Head officer ng Empire Guards na ipatapon silang lahat sa lansangan. Pero sinigurado nilang layo-layo ang magkakapatid. Walang nakaalam kung isang Elite ang mga nakuha nila noon. Dahil nagkalat ang mga batang Elite at ang mga batang Orphan."

"Eh nasan na yung mga batang yun?"

Nagkibit-balikat lamang ang matanda.

"Hayy Papa! dapat siguro magpahinga ka na. Sabi ng doktor, bawal ka daw magpagod." sabi ng binatilyo..

"HAHAHAHAHA Alam kong matanda na ako, apo. Pero di ako mapapagod. Hangga't di ko nahahanap ang mga batang Elite."

"Bakit pa, Papa? Para saan pa, siguro naman kaya umalis sa Empire Land ang mga Elites ay para hanapin mga batang yun. At ano po bang paki-alam niyo sa mga batang yun? Malalaki na sila. Sabi niyo nga po 17 years na ang nakalipas, ibig sabihin nasa tamang isip na sila. Some of them may be 17 years and above." sabi ng binatilyo.

"Hindi mo pa maiintindihan ngayon, apo. Pero balang araw malalaman mo din."

Humiga na ang matanda sa kanyang kama at natulog na. Habang ang binatilyo nama'y naiwang tulala..


Biglang tumunog ang cellphone ng binatilyo.. At bumalik na sa sariling isip.

^Megan Calling^


"Hello, Megan?"

"Hello, Clyde? You're needed here in Leisure House. Urgent!"

"Anong nangyari?"

"Si Ken! Napaaway nanaman. Basag mukha."

Napailing nalang ang bata.

"Oh sige na, sige na! Bye!"



*toot toot*


$Clyde's Thought$


I am Clyde Felix Tan, 2nd Class. I lived without parents. Only with my Grandpa. 18 years old. Currently Studying at Royale High.


I'm on my way to Leisure House when I got caught up by the traffic-causing girl.


"Ano ba Miss? Tumabi ka na muna diyan. Walang magagawa yang kakaiyak mo." sabi ng isang matandang lalaki..

"Madame, pumasok ka na po sa sasakyan. Please? Magagalit po sa akin si Boss. Pag nalate po kayo.

"Ayoko pumasok sa Royale! Ayoko dun.. Gusto ko sa Emp--" Tinakpan ng lalaki yung bibig niya.

"Ma'am. Tara na po." Hinigit siya papasok nung lalaki sa sasakyan.


Must she be saying Empire State University? Woah! 1st class teenagers are the ones who can enter there.


There are castes kasi.

Elites- it's not a class. But a throne.

1st Class

2nd Class

3rd Class

4th Class

at yung lowest Caste

5th Neon



Sinundan ko yung kotse.. Papunta na din yung kotse sa Royale..

Hanggang sa bumaba na yung babae. Pagkababang pagkababa niya, I saw her stand straight. Lahat napatingin sa kanya. She wasn't wearing the uniform properly.. She's wearing shorter skirt 4 inches above her knee. Tas folded long sleeves na open yung first 3 buttons, 3 inches stilettos instead of using black shoes then yung vest nakasabit sa shoulder niya. Then someone's handling her bag.

Spoiled Brat! Napailing na lang ako. She's the first 1st class that entered Royale. Kahiya-hiya siguro para sa kanya.


I was following her tracks by my eyes. I can see na everybody's looking at her. Lahat tumatabi sa daanan niya.


"Who is she?" Girl 1

"She's Vanessa Speaks! The hottest Teenage Model/Gangster. 1st Class Teen...." then kinuwento nung babae yung lahat ng accomplishments.

Gangster? She can't be it..

<3

 

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