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Once Upon a Time I fell in Love. (Updated at long last!)
« on: September 20, 2012, 01:25:09 pm »
I was sixteen when my life changed.

My boyfriend killed himself and everyone in town hated me. I was condemned by every person I knew--friends, family, ministers. And I never had a chance to see him before he get back to dust. I never had the chance to explain and to be heard.

As a result, I have to pack my things, go somewhere far and relive my life in a land unfamiliar. I have to live in dorms and never go back home. To leave who I am and never look back.

However, after five long years of being away, circumstances brought me back to this chapter of my life I don’t want to take a glimpse of. A place that reminds me that...


Once Upon a Time I fell in Love

www.yuki.com   |    September 2012

« Last Edit: November 02, 2012, 01:33:55 am by www.yuki.com »


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Re: Once Upon a Time I fell in Love.
« Reply #1 on: September 20, 2012, 01:58:00 pm »
Hello!
I find the prologue interesting....hehehe...naadik kasi ako sa series na Once Upon a Time ngayon, kaya ayun, nabuksan ko 'to, and I don't regret visiting your thread...hihihi...
SUPPORT po!  ;)
Sana po may UD na really soon.  ;)

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Re: Once Upon a Time I fell in Love.
« Reply #2 on: September 20, 2012, 02:30:38 pm »
Hi Sis. Sue here :D Soooo like your intro. Friends? Post na your first chap. ;D

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Re: Once Upon a Time I fell in Love.
« Reply #3 on: September 26, 2012, 03:51:51 pm »
.nice intro girl.interestng ung st0ry m.i'll supp0rt ths.:)

.by the way,gabe here.:)
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Re: Once Upon a Time I fell in Love.
« Reply #4 on: September 30, 2012, 01:29:06 am »
i like your prologue i like
ksi mga english na prologue nakaka kuha ng attention
support ko po toh
mhay nga pla

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Re: Once Upon a Time I fell in Love.
« Reply #5 on: October 26, 2012, 03:31:50 pm »
Your story title just caught my attention.


I will support this!  ;)

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Re: Once Upon a Time I fell in Love.
« Reply #6 on: October 26, 2012, 04:19:03 pm »
This story seems magical... you have my support sis

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Re: Once Upon a Time I fell in Love.
« Reply #7 on: November 02, 2012, 01:29:09 am »
Hello!
I find the prologue interesting....hehehe...naadik kasi ako sa series na Once Upon a Time ngayon, kaya ayun, nabuksan ko 'to, and I don't regret visiting your thread...hihihi...
SUPPORT po!  ;)
Sana po may UD na really soon.  ;)

Hi! I wonder... Baka hindi ito yung "Once Upon A time" story na iniisip mo! HAHA! :))

Hi Sis. Sue here :D Soooo like your intro. Friends? Post na your first chap. ;D

Hi Sue! I'm Yuki. Friends for sure. :) I'll be posting the first chapter today. And the second hopefully as soon! Thanks!

.nice intro girl.interestng ung st0ry m.i'll supp0rt ths.:)

.by the way,gabe here.:)

Hi Gabe! Yuki here. :) Thank you!

i like your prologue i like
ksi mga english na prologue nakaka kuha ng attention
support ko po toh
mhay nga pla


Hi Mhay! :) I hope you still be my supporter! Love!

Your story title just caught my attention.


I will support this!  ;)

THANKS!!<3

This story seems magical... you have my support sis

What if it's not? HAHA! Thanks!!


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Re: Once Upon a Time I fell in Love.
« Reply #8 on: November 02, 2012, 01:33:24 am »
SORRY! for the very late update!:c Anyhow, I'm Yuki! And I'm back after a long time of hiatus. So, I figured I should give you a treat of 2 chapters but that would be really boring! So, here's chapter 1! and hopefully, chapter 2 is on Nov. 3. See you all! :)



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Looking through the glass window of the air-conditioned bus, I remembered memories.

When we usually say memories it gets that smile on our faces but to me, it gives a stagger right through my chest. Memories make me shiver, it makes me want to curl into my bed and slowly fade away just like a movie on the last scene before the cast starts rolling.

I saw my refection at the pane and saw a fragile person who doesn’t want to go back. It has been five years I told myself. My long curly brown hair now is just a short black bob then. I was sixteen. Nearly college and was full of hope. I was young and I was in love.

I clearly remember memoirs. I can’t help but remembering him—Chad. He was tall, at least four inches taller than I am. His black hair was shaved because he feels like they’re all annoying. His megawatt smile. His brown eyes.  And his death.

I opened my eyes and shook my thoughts.

The bus then stopped that made me realize my 6-hour drive is over. Picking my tote from the floor and another bag from the top compartment, I slowly went into the pile of people who are going down.

“Maggie!” I saw my dad waving his right hand and I threw it back. I figured I might need to smile so I did before picking my other things from the other bus’ compartment and went their direction.

With him is my mom, who doesn’t smile. Never smiled since that incident. My older sister is there beside her waving her hand with the twinkling ring.  I will never really get back if not for her and her wedding. She convinced me that I need to be there and it would just be 5 days or something.

I hugged my father as I reach them, my sister next and a slight smile to my mom. She didn’t look at me.

“So, how’s the bride to be?”

“Nervous!” She shrieked, “And how about my little sister? You look really beautiful than those awful pictures and cards you sent me!”

“Ha-ha, very funny! I missed you picking up on me!”

“Okay, enough.” My mom interrupted the mood with her chilly statement, “Let’s go home. The soup will get cold.” As soon as she said it, she left. And my eyes wanted to release some tears.

My dad took my shoulder, “Don’t worry, sweetheart. She’s just really tired.”

I know she isn’t. And the moment she knew the reason why Chad committed suicide—and it’s me, she hated me. She accused me falsely of committing murder. She sent me away.

It was hard getting through this. But it was harder to go back, five years later and realize nothing has changed. Everyone will always remember you as the reason why a person killed himself. And that memories, that’s the reason I don’t want to go back.


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Re: Once Upon a Time I fell in Love. (Updated at long last!)
« Reply #9 on: November 02, 2012, 08:30:19 am »
this chapter is full of mystery. her mom's action is so strange that makes you wanna know more what really happened.

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Re: Once Upon a Time I fell in Love. (Updated at long last!)
« Reply #10 on: November 03, 2012, 01:54:03 am »
.i agree with you.i'm pretty much curious with what really happnd.why did everyone blame her and why is it big deal for her mom that she seemd not to care about her anymore.
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Re: Once Upon a Time I fell in Love. (Updated at long last!)
« Reply #11 on: November 03, 2012, 05:39:08 pm »
this chapter is full of mystery. her mom's action is so strange that makes you wanna know more what really happened.

I guess we just have to wait for it. :D I might, update today. Thanks for the read!

.i agree with you.i'm pretty much curious with what really happnd.why did everyone blame her and why is it big deal for her mom that she seemd not to care about her anymore.

Yep, some question that will be answered soon!:) Thank you also for dropping!


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Re: Once Upon a Time I fell in Love. (Updated at long last!)
« Reply #12 on: November 07, 2012, 02:16:58 pm »
Hello po ulit!
Don't worry po, I'm fully aware that this is different from the Once Upon A Time I'm watching. hehehe...Nevertheless, I'm still supporting this and I'm like it more now...I'm really curious about the past...I want to know what really happened between her and Chad. And yeah, I agree with their questions...why is she the one to blame by everybody, most especially her mom? But somehow I do have a hunch about what might have happened. hahaha...

Anyway, I'm really excited for the next update! Hope you update soon ms.author!  :)

 

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