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WAR&PEACE - Chapter 16.
« on: December 28, 2011, 12:42:01 am »
War & Peace
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Characters:
*click the names for the imaginary pictures*

Warren Miguel Rodriguez
- I don't find girls fun. Pare-parehas kasi sila. Tsaka nawalan na ako ng gana. Eh sa araw araw ba namang ginawa ng Diyos yung babaeng yun ang nakikita ko.


Noella Peace Godorecci
- Ew. Siya? Yang lalakeng yan? Nako naman kilalang-kilala ko yan. Mula ulo hanggang paa. Pati lokasyon ng nunal niya alam ko. Kaya kinakamuhian ko siya.


John Kristoffer Ormilla
- Di kasi ako makabwelo eh. Kasi ang daming nakapila sayo. Sa ganda mong yan? Tsaka meron kasi siya.


Luisa Monique Enriquez
- Ba't ba ayaw mo sa akin? Ang daming nagpapantasya sa kin tapos ikaw gaganyanin mo ako? Well. Gwapo ka kasi at matalino, mayaman pa. Sino nga ba ang hindi mahuhulog sayo?


Glenmore Del Rosario
- Oh ako? Bakit hindi mo man lang ako magustuhan? I did better for you. Ginawa ko lahat. Ba't ba bulag ka?




Prologue:

It was 6:30 in the morning when Mommy came and woke me up. The sun had already risen. Ugh! Another day in school means I will see him again. Warren Miguel Rodriguez, popularly known as War. My biggest enemy!

We were born on the same time, same day, at the same hospital. My Mom and his Mom are college roomies, not to mention they are best of friends. I know we should be in good terms but its the other way around. We hate each other. A lot. Competition is our common friend. We've been competiting in everything. From Grades all the way to Suitors/Lovers. LOL.

I hate his cockiness and arrogance. No. I hate him in general. I hate everything about him. His voice, eyes, mouth, the way he dresses. Ew, now I'm imagining him. Why am I even thinking about him anyway? Ugh! <insert disgusted smiley here>

I'm Noella Peace Godorecci. His biggest nightmare.




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Soooooooooooooooooo. If yo're interested, pabasa naman. I sound like I'm pleading. LOL :D. Anyway, just click the title and it will direct you to the story. Salamaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat :******

P.S Don't get shocked pag nabasa mo na may Kristoffer nanaman dun. I'm fond of using that name. Hahahaha :D
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Re: War & Peace ~ Readers ho?
« Reply #1 on: December 28, 2011, 12:56:55 am »
Pers! HAHAHA! Support ko to ng sobra Ate Biancs! Akin na rin pala si WARREN ah? HAHAHAHA! I've got gibs/tibs on him na :PP




PS. Natuwa naman po ako sa intro. Yung sa baba ng title  :D :D  Parang movie lang po eh xD Naalala ko nakita ko to sa beginning nung 5oo days of Summer xDD

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Re: War & Peace ~ Readers ho?
« Reply #2 on: December 28, 2011, 12:57:33 am »
So ito pala ung biankee :)
1st supporter \m/
wala pa nmn chapter e prologue pa lng :p
pero ssuportahan ko to

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Re: War & Peace ~ Readers ho?
« Reply #3 on: December 28, 2011, 01:00:41 am »
Pers! HAHAHA! Support ko to ng sobra Ate Biancs! Akin na rin pala si WARREN ah? HAHAHAHA! I've got gibs/tibs on him na :PP




PS. Natuwa naman po ako sa intro. Yung sa baba ng title  :D :D  Parang movie lang po eh xD Naalala ko nakita ko to sa beginning nung 5oo days of Summer xDD

Nako magagalit si Shei niyan inunahan mo na siya kay Warren. HAHA.

Medyo newbie pa ako nung sinusulat ko to eh kaya ganyan ang start  :D

So ito pala ung biankee :)
1st supporter \m/
wala pa nmn chapter e prologue pa lng :p
pero ssuportahan ko to

UPDATE NA :p


Ay hindi hindi ito yun. Seh. Uso barahan :D
Sandali nageedit na ng colors :)
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Re: War & Peace ~ Readers ho?
« Reply #4 on: December 28, 2011, 01:03:33 am »


ang cute naman nung mga name. support ko po to.

rhea nga pala. :)

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« Reply #5 on: December 28, 2011, 01:06:54 am »
AISH. Sige si John Kristoffer Ormilla nalang akin -_- inagawan na ako ni Thana e HAHAHA lol joke. ANYWAY, ikaw na :) SUPPORT. Dami mong alam! HAHA. Nako kapag ako natapos sa NP, saka ako gagawa ng bago :) Hindi ko kasi kaya atang i-manage e. Kaya ikaw na talaga xD

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« Reply #6 on: December 28, 2011, 01:21:15 am »
o cge. Take your time :)
may pinagkakaabalahan ako XD
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« Reply #7 on: December 28, 2011, 01:25:58 am »
o1.

"Honey, sasabay ka papunta, pauwi kay War ngayon ah. Hindi ka masusundo ni Mang Arenas kasi may sakit yung anak niya." Mommy said while brushing my hair. I'm readying for school.

Peace: "Ha? Sasakay na lang ako Mommy. Ayaw kong sumabay sa unggoy na yun." Duh! Sasabay ako sa right hand ni satanas? In his dreams.

"No. I'll ground you for a week kung sasakay ka ng taxi. I don't trust taxi drivers. Mas magandang si War ang maghahatid sayo. At least buo ang tiwala ko."

Peace: "Then I'll use my car." Sabi ko habang sinusuot yung necktie ko. Puputi lahat ng uwak bago ako mawalan ng rason.

"Where's your license?" Tanong ni Mommy ng nakapameywang. Hindi talaga siya mag-gigive up.

Peace: "Somewhere in my room." Oo nga pala. Nawawala ko yung lisensya ko. Student's License na nga lang yun. Nawala pa. Jirits!

"You can't find anything in your room." Then she stood up and headed to the door. "Sasabay ka kay War and that's final. I already told him he said yes."

Tapos may biglang pumitada sa labas ng gate. Mommy peek through the window.

"War's here. Magsapatos ka na."

After 5 minutes lumabas na ako ng bahay. I kissed Mommy goodbye.

War: "Makikisabay ka na lang ang tagal tagal mo pa." He said irritated.

Aba eh kung sapatusin kaya kita diyan.

Peace: "Hoy, hindi ko ginusto na sumabay sayo. Ang aga aga nangiinis ka. Leche!" Sabi ko sabay tingin sa bintana ng sasakyan.

War: "Wag mo kong maleche-leche." Sabay tingin niya rin sa bintana.

~SILENCE~ Mapanis na lang laway ko kesa makipagusap ako sa unggoy na yan. Sa sobrang bwisit ko sa kanya hindi ko napansin na nasa school na pala kami.

Peace: "Thank you po Mang Jay." Sabi ko ng binuksan ni Mang Jay yung pinto ng sasakayan para makalabas ako.

War: "Bakit sa kanya ka nagthathankyou? Sasakyan ko to." Reklamo naman ng mokong na yun habang pasunod na pababa sa sasakyan.

Peace: "Pakialam ko sayo."

Pagpasok ko ng building. Sinalubong ako ni Ria. Secretary ng USG (University Student Government). Presidente kasi ako ng buong school. At natalo ko yung alagad ni satanas. HAHA 8)

Ria: "Peace may problema pala sa fireworks mamayang gabi."

Peace: "Ha? Ano? Nako anak ng tinapa. Ba't ngayon niyo lang sinabi? Mamayang gabi na yun ah."

War: "Tawag diyan KARMA. Buti nga sayo. HAHAHAHA *evil grin." Sabat ni Miguel habang naglalakad papunta sa room.

Peace: "Kausap ka? Epal." Nakakabwisit.

Ria: "Hi War!"

Bati ni Ria na mukhang kinikilig.

War: "Hi!" sagot ni Miguel. Napakalandi.

Peace: "Hoy Ria. Ano yung problema?  Magconcentrate ka nga." Nakakainis agaw pansin yung lalakeng yun.

May inabot siya sa aking envelope. Pera ang laman.

Peace: "Ano to?"

Ria: "Nagcancel ng delivery yung pagbibilhan natin. Hindi daw nila kaya kasi may isa pa daw silang delivery sa Batangas. Baka hindi daw kayanin."
Peace: "HA? TSK. Ipatawag mo ang Officers. Emergency meeting to."

Tapos umalis na si Ria. Anak ng tinapa talaga. Ka jirits! Ito ang epekto ng pagsabay kong pumasok sa unggoy na yun. Malas leche!

Peace: "Hello. Anderson, kailangan ko ng 300 fireworks tonight. Kahit anong kind. Basta maganda quality at for fireworks display ang dating. Call me within 10 minutes kung meron. Bye."

Ay si Anderson, butler ko. Bantay. Bodyguard. Personal Assistant. Basta, he's a complete package.

Kris: "Hi Peace! You look pretty today. Ay everyday pala." Nako nambola nanaman si Kristoffer.

Peace: "Yan naman ang gusto ko sayo Kris eh. HAHAHA ;D"

Tapos dumating nanaman yung alagad ni satanas.

War: "Ano pang ginagawa mo diyan? Nakikipaglandian? Nagpameeting ka tapos wala ka doon."

Peace: "Ano bang pake mo? At tsaka papunta na ako. Kinausap ko lang saglit si Kris."

Nakalimutan ko. Nung natalo ko siya for presidency siya ang piniling Senior Ambassador. Kaya dapat meron sa meeting USG everytime. Wala ba akong takas sa lalakeng ito?

Pagpasok namin sa conference nandun na lahat ng officers ko.

Ange: "Why with the sudden meeting Peace?" Tanong ni Angelica - President for socio-cultural events.

Peace: "Nagkaproblema sa fireworks display. Walang fireworks. I called Anderson pero wala pa siyang sagot."

Josh: "Anong balak mong gawin Peace?" Tanong ni Josh - Vice president.

Peace: "We need a back-up plan just in case. We need a plan B. Any suggestions?"

Tahimik silang lahat. Then Miguel raised his hand.

War: "Dance-a-thon na lang Noella. I can text Glen at sabihin kumanta sila mamaya."

*Glen - vocalista ng University combo band.

Peace: "Sinong agree sa proposItion ni Miguel?"

Then every girl in the conference agreed to him. What do you expect? Patay na patay lahat ng babae sa kanya. Except me. Ew.

Well hindi namin tinatawag ang isa't-isa ng War and Peace. Ewan ko kung bakit. Siguro dahil gasgas na yung pangalan na yun. Lahat ng tao yun ang tawag sa amin. So we agreed, for the first time, to never call each other with that name.

Peace: "Okey so Dance-a-Thon it is." tapos sinulat na ni Ria.

*phone rings

Tapos tumingin silang lahat sa akin.

War: "No phones at the conference. President ka pa man din. Pasaway!" sita ni Miguel sa akin.

Peace: "PAKELAMERO!"

Epal talaga to. Jirits!

Peace: "Hello Anderson. Wala talaga? Okey. No it's fine."

Tapos pinatay ko na yung linya.

Peace: "So Dance-a-Thon na talaga. Ria, i-ready na lahat ng kailangan. Bilhin lahat ng dapat bilhin. Meeting adjourned."

Tapos nagsitayuan na silang lahat.

Monique: "War, isasayaw mo ako mamaya ah."

Utos ni Monique, Senior representative ng Regular Class. Hay nako. What's new? Everyday namang may nanggaganyan sa kanya. Sa aming dalawa.

War: "Yea sure."

Monique: "Thank you. Aasahan ko yan ah." Tapos lumabas na si Monique.

I was checking the things needed for the decoration when Kris approached me.

Kris: "Peace. Ako first dance mo mamaya."

Well why not naman. I dumped my recent boyfriend so it's cool.

Peace: "Sure."
Kris: "Thanks."

Sagot niya. He was beaming. Natuwa ata siya ng husto? Then Miguel grabbed my arm.

War: "Tama na ang landian. Alika na dito sasamahan kita mamili, pinagkatiwala ka pa man din sa akin ni Tita ngayong araw na to."


Nagulat ako. SRSLY? Nakain nitong lalaking to?
« Last Edit: December 30, 2011, 07:32:03 pm by biancarnation »
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« Reply #8 on: December 28, 2011, 01:28:38 am »

ang cute naman nung mga name. support ko po to.

rhea nga pala. :)

Thanks Rhea. Bianca pala :)

AISH. Sige si John Kristoffer Ormilla nalang akin -_- inagawan na ako ni Thana e HAHAHA lol joke. ANYWAY, ikaw na :) SUPPORT. Dami mong alam! HAHA. Nako kapag ako natapos sa NP, saka ako gagawa ng bago :) Hindi ko kasi kaya atang i-manage e. Kaya ikaw na talaga xD

Natatawa ako sa inyong dalawa. Ano to? First come first served? HAHA.

Hindi matagal ko na kasing natapos to :) Nahanap ko sa old files ko sa desktop. Nag flashback tuloy ako. LOL

o cge. Take your time :)
may pinagkakaabalahan ako XD


HAHA. Ayan na ho. Sir! :)
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« Reply #9 on: December 28, 2011, 01:41:13 am »
Thanks Rhea. Bianca pala :)


ilang taon na po kayo?

17 po ako. :)

kailang update?

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« Reply #10 on: December 28, 2011, 01:48:09 am »
ilang taon na po kayo?

17 po ako. :)

kailang update?

Ate kita. HAHA. 16 ako :) Meron na pong Chapter 01 ;D
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« Reply #11 on: December 28, 2011, 02:01:15 am »
Ate kita. HAHA. 16 ako :) Meron na pong Chapter 01 ;D

Oo nga eh. :)

Astig. Feeling ko may nararamdaman tong si War kay Peace.

Natuwa ako sa tawagan nila. Si War tawag kay Peace, Noella.
Si Peace, tawag kay War, Miguel.

Ang cute lang. ^_^

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« Reply #12 on: December 28, 2011, 02:04:24 am »
Oo nga eh. :)

Astig. Feeling ko may nararamdaman tong si War kay Peace.

Natuwa ako sa tawagan nila. Si War tawag kay Peace, Noella.
Si Peace, tawag kay War, Miguel.

Ang cute lang. ^_^

Gasgas na daw kasi yung War at Peace. Daming arte lungs eh. HAHA.
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« Reply #13 on: December 28, 2011, 02:10:45 am »
Gasgas na daw kasi yung War at Peace. Daming arte lungs eh. HAHA.

Hahaha. Antaray naman nung 'gasgas' na word.

Kailan yung update?

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« Reply #14 on: December 28, 2011, 02:15:09 am »
Hahaha. Antaray naman nung 'gasgas' na word.

Kailan yung update?

Later siguro Ate. Di naman ako matutulog. I'm finishing my project kasi. HAHA. Pinagsasabay ko. Multitasker kunwari. Charaught! :D
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