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Re: Take the risk --- Six and Seven. Updated!
« Reply #60 on: November 06, 2011, 08:23:35 pm »
Ayyy, ang loko ng 2 magpinsan! Pagpustahan ba ang tita nila!Hahaha.
Shoot. May OCD pala si Mia. Ang hirap nun ah, my tita has OCD too and she freaks out everytime na makakakita sya ng dumi or pag hindi maayos yung gamit nya.  </3

And Mia, yes you, Mia! Itapon mo na yang si Ethan kay Nat tutal baliw na baliw naman yun dun e! Hahaha. :) Kay Nathan ka na lang, sulit na sulit! :D Hahahaha. I love it Ate Ash. Post more soon! <3

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Re: Take the risk --- Eight: Fairy tale nightmare
« Reply #61 on: November 06, 2011, 08:31:50 pm »
Eight: Fairy tale nightmare

Nathan

I wanted to be Superman.

I wanted to save the world. That was my greatest dream when I was a kid. I remembered my pops telling me to reach for the stars. Well, obviously and literally I took my grandfather’s words of wisdom to heart.

So how could I reach for the stars if I couldn’t even fly?

I decided to test that theory one day. When I was only five years old I donned my cape and climbed up the roof of our two-storey house. It was pretty amazing actually. To see the world in a different perspective. To see the world with a kid’s eyes.

I flung my arms outward and smiled. Tomorrow I would be famous. My name would be whispered. I was going to be Superman. I took foot forward in the air… and there goes Superman. I was flying… flying… flying…

And yes, I told you, I was always right. My name was whispered the other day. By our neighbors. By my classmates. I became… Nathan the Super Stupid.

They said my head was injured. And I was born the fortunate among the most fortunate. I was too slow and sickly. I was even struck by typhoid which had damaged some of my brain cells.

And to top it all off, I was a product of a broken family.

At that time I had no powers whatsoever. I couldn’t even save my parents’ marriage. I couldn’t even tell them to fuuck off because it would only be fu-a-uck o-off. And they’d all laugh at my stutter all the more. I even thought I was almost a retard. Thank God, it was just almost.

And when they decided to call it quits. They asked an eight-year-old almost retard to choose between the two of them. Could someone believe it? Because luckily I was the only one who would brunt the trauma of their separation I became all the more withdrawn. If only they could just take half parts of me with them.

But it wasn’t to be. Thanks to Aunt Vernice, she took me to her wing.

Well, until she decided to marry husband number one at that time. And sigh, Aunt Vernice who was then telling me that it was for the sake of her happiness dramatically dropped me off to Aunt Lily and Uncle Brad, well— and with a cousin who looked enough like me. But never me.

Ethan.

Ethan who was never a day sick in his life. Ethan, who became more like a brother to me. And Ethan who could run and jump like Superman. I even asked him if he could fly with me at the rooftop of their house. And he just looked at me, looked at me.

At that time, I knew somebody cared about me.

Ethan didn’t look through me, he looked at me.

—like I was some dim-witted. “Nathan, that’s a shiit. If you want to be respected you have to change for the better.”

My eyes grew wide and he walked away.  Woah, I never heard him curse. And for a second time I would have wanted Ethan dead. Because I wanted to be him. And it only cemented my wish after seeing my damsel in distress.

She introduced herself in front of the class. She was pleating the hemline of her uniform. Her eyes were so huge. Ethan smiled at her. And so did I. Did I forget to mention what Ethan did, I followed?

No, well, I did. It was pathetic. Being someone else’s shadow. At least I was always seated in front of Ethan. Even if that shadow was younger than me by four years. They were all younger to me. And worst than me—to me.

And she smiled back. My princess smiled back at me!

I swore I had apoplexy then. And before I knew it I was peeing on my pants. Somebody shouted what on earth was I doing. I also didn’t know. I couldn’t just stop the fluid from flowing out of me. And then she whispered sharply, “He just couldn’t help it!”

Ow. That was the greatest thing I ever heard. That was music to my ears. And I felt like Superman. It didn’t matter if the whole room was making jests at me. It didn’t matter if they told me I resembled Jack in their favorite cartoon movie The Nightmare Before Christmas.

She slowly walked to the aisle. Her head was high in the air. Like a real princess. My princess.

And I tentatively pushed my hand out—to reach for her.

“Hel-lo…”

My fingers slowly touched her soft skin. Oh, it was heaven. Her head slowly turned sideways. My way. Her eyes growing wide. And before I knew it, she was screaming. Shrieking. And slapped my hand away from her arm.

At the end of the year, Aunt Vernice took me far away from there. And Ethan made me promised one thing—to change for the better.

Because someday I would be Superman. Santa Claus. And everything I could be. Just for her. Just for Mia. However that didn’t include being her fairy godmother.

And it was short of poisoning Ethan. For the third time around, I wanted to kill my cousin. Because I wanted to be him…






My eyes were luminous. “They’re gone.”

And a tear leaked out of Mia’s eye.

I got off from her. As much as I’d like to be cavalier my eyes still turned to her lips. Her kissed-swollen lips that was my undoing. I remembered the way she reacted to me that night. That night when she thought I was Ethan. And when I even goaded her, her eyes turned brilliant red. I know, it was too cliché. But she was more beautiful when angry. I remembered our first encounter and the thing I should have told her.

She sidestepped around me and walked toward the door. “Mia?”

“Hmm?” She craned her neck at me. I mumbled something under my breath. I mumbled ‘I miss… you’. She shrugged her shoulders and walked away.


“Mia?” I whispered in the dim-lit corner.

She wasn’t shaking anymore. “I hate you.”

My eyes grew wide. “You hate me?” I wasn’t even sure if I heard her right.

“Why did you kiss me?” she whispered sharply. My heartbeat slowed down a little. I thought she was the smart one here. So why was she asking me questions when the answers were so obvious. Could I just blurt out something like, I’ve been giving you gifts every Christmas. Cards every Halloween. Roses every fu—cking bloody Valentine’s even if it cost me my allowance. After all I was miles away from her. And the fee wasn’t at all that encouraging.

And she wasn’t encouraging either.

So what the hell am I still doing?   Saving her probably.

“It was… the best thing to do.” I saw her cheeks tinged with red. Stupid. Couldn’t I just tell her what I feel and the hell with the consequences? I could take the risk of flying from a rooftop and probably broke my head and some bones. I risked my life.

But I couldn’t risk one small organ—my heart?

“M-Mia… I…”

She looked at me. “Y-you’re such a loser,” she muttered angrily.

“Excuse me?” I couldn’t believe this. She was angry at me! When all I did was save her. And love her.

“You are angry at me? You hate me? Why me? I wasn’t the one who hurt you and told Natalie I love her!”

And before I knew what was coming, her hand was raised in the air. This time I didn’t even flinch. It touched the side of my face with a loud vibration. I could feel it searing to my very bones. I’d like to believe that my eyes stung because of the blow.

And not because I hurt inside.

This was worst than fractured bones.

Maybe I was really Super Stupid. I could have been Martyrman instead. She stood up and tried to run away. Well, hell. I could probably let her go now. But I couldn’t. I couldn't just... let go without a fight, right? I reached out and roughly squeezed her wrist. She yelped. “L-let me… go!”

“No.”

“What?” she gritted her teeth. Her head was turned away from me. Tears were streaming down the sides of her face.

I could very well play the cards well this time. I was taking a risk.

“I-I’m... going to help you win Ethan.”

Her head snapped at me. It was a wonder her neck didn’t break. My facial muscles moved, thank God. I mastered a slow lazy smile. “We’re going to win over your Prince Charming, princess.”

Her eyes grew wider. Her pupils dilated. Only her panting breaths were the sound I could hear in the room. And my heartbeat. Then the sound of something vibrating cut through the tension in the air. We didn’t even spare her cell phone a glance.

“Smile at fairy godmother, sweetheart.”

What a fine villain I was. Lying through my teeth.


curiousity kills: Napanood ko lang yun one time Bee! Yung OCD case. Meron tita mo? Aww. Feeling ko sobrang hirap nun. Hmm... si papa masyado ring malinis. At least it didn't border on OCD. Thanks sis!
« Last Edit: November 06, 2011, 08:44:27 pm by vague_yelhsa »

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Re: Take the risk --- Six and Seven. Updated!
« Reply #62 on: November 06, 2011, 08:37:12 pm »
hohoho sobrang gulo nila :D :D :D like et
bakit mas mahal ko si nathan ::)
parang he's the type of guy na hindi ka mabo-bore
and he's really sweet :)
i kinda don't like ethan


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even my kuya hihihihi ;)

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Re: Take the risk --- Eight: Fairy tale nightmare. Guys, please vote!
« Reply #63 on: November 06, 2011, 08:41:38 pm »
Oh shiit. Nate.
I wouldn't mind being your superman at all! I would embrace your past and leave it behind! Hahaha. :)

On a serious note, I couldn't believe him at first being weakling and all. But boy, did he look very manly na. Nagulat pa akong may pagnanasa nga talaga sya kay Mia! Haha. At may balak pang maging 2 in one a? Superman + fairy godmother? Oh sige. Nathan. You alreaddddy! But I don't think disadvantage yun sa part nya, given the fact that if you wanted to help her, does that mean you guys should be close din?

I'd tap that Nate! Hahaahha. :)))) Go lang ng go!
Natemia shipper ako e. :DD

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Re: Take the risk --- Eight: Fairy tale nightmare. Guys, please vote!
« Reply #64 on: November 06, 2011, 08:56:22 pm »
e bakit ikaw ATE ASH, tinatawag akong sis? kami pala. hahaha.  :P
and yeahhh. favorite ko GREEN. di obvious diba? :D

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yay! ito na nga ba ang sinasabi ko.
yung tutulungan mo yung taong mahal mo na makuha yung taong mahal nya.
super aww lang. </3
pwede bang, akin na lang si Nathan?
bahala na si Mia.
ako ang superwoman ni Nathan ko.   ;)  ;D
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Re: Take the risk --- Eight: Fairy tale nightmare. Guys, please vote!
« Reply #65 on: November 06, 2011, 09:01:11 pm »
palmahall.up: hahahaha magulo ang pag-ibig Corrs! Hindi nga ba?
It's good to hear from you again. Yes, yung kind ng guy na gentleman pero hindi halata, at me pagkamanyak!  ;D Why don't you like Ethan?

I miss you too! Hello, mabubuo ba mga stories ko kung wala ka din? Well, I can't remember a time you're not here and there... hehe.

Pati kuya mo? Wow. Namiss ko din siya! wahahaha. achuchu. jk.

curiousity kills: HAHAHA. Just the kind of guy... Eee. Kung sana lang Bee lahat ng sinusulat natin ay nagkakatotoo at yung mga guys na yun e nagkakaroon ng happy ending, no?

I know somebody who's just changed. Just changed from ugly duckling to a fine swan. May mga ganon diba? Magugulat ka na lang sila pala yung dating binubully nung araw. Yes, hahaha. It's like ano yun... yung close-close sa enemy. Nakalimutan ko!

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Re: Take the risk --- Eight: Fairy tale nightmare. Guys, please vote!
« Reply #66 on: November 06, 2011, 09:12:43 pm »
Aww~ Super sad naman ng childhood years ni Nathan. Siguro, kaya ganito na lang yung pinagbago niya kasi desidido talaga siyang makuha si Mia. Naiinis ako kay Mia! Bakit hindi niya makita na all along, nandiyan naman si Nathan? Hindi naman siya mahirap mahalin! But why on earth, she can't see her true Superman? Ugh. :| Ayaw ni Nathan maging fairy godmother, pero sinabi niya pa rin. HAHAHA~ Akin ka na lang nga Nathan! Ikaw na lang Superman ko. Pwede? :">

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Re: Take the risk --- Eight: Fairy tale nightmare. Guys, please vote!
« Reply #67 on: November 06, 2011, 09:45:15 pm »
Ate Ash, bukas ko na to ieedit ha? May dinaramdam pa ako ngayon e. :(
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Re: Take the risk --- Eight: Fairy tale nightmare. Guys, please vote!
« Reply #68 on: November 06, 2011, 10:15:49 pm »
I'm so glad Nathan got over that stage in his life but I didn't see that proposition coming. Parang, super martyr. Surely, he didn't want to be the fairy godmother, he wanted to be the prince. :( Mia, 'wag ka na mabulag kay Ethan. May iba na 'yon eh. Nathan, for the win! ::)

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Re: Take the risk --- Eight: Fairy tale nightmare. Guys, please vote!
« Reply #69 on: November 06, 2011, 10:40:07 pm »
No Nathan! Don't play the martyr card. PLEASE. Ang sweet mo grabe. You don't deserve that.

Kung ayaw niya sayo akin ka na lang. PLEASE. Or kung ayaw mo sa akin may character ako para sayo. Swear. ;D

But seriously, this will not turn out good especially for Nathan.

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Re: Take the risk --- Eight: Fairy tale nightmare. Guys, please vote!
« Reply #70 on: November 06, 2011, 10:58:27 pm »
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Because someday I would be Superman. Santa Claus. And everything I could be. Just for her. Just for Mia. However that didn’t include being her fairy godmother.

Ah. So sa ginawa mo nagiging fairygodmother ka na niyan? Tol, imposible naman 'yun. Hindi'ng-hindi yun mangyayari, kahit ano pang gawin mo. Dahil magiging fairygodfather ka. :D


Awww, na'a-appreciate ko talaga ang effort ni Nathan para kay Mia. Magpapaubaya pa siya. Tssss. Hoy, Nathan! You don't have to pretend something that you're not and do something that you don't want to.

Peace tayo, Nates. (hahaha. new nickname  :D) Minsan lg ako magsermon ee. Pero bilib na talaga ako sayo, tol. Don't worry, that would just be the very first step to the closeness and development of feelings you'll have with Mia.


Uhm, question, 'te? Magkaklase naman po pala sina noon. So it means kilala na niya talaga si Nathan noon pa? :|


@Ate Ash: Twenteen! Like! (HAHAHA. Parang fb lg ee  ;D) Oh, dba, 'te? Teen ka pa, po. Isipin niyo na lang magka-edad lang tayo, at pangalan niyo po talaga ay Ate. HAHA :">
Chos lang Ate Ash. Siyempre mas byutipul ang Ashley.  8)
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Re: Take the risk --- Nine: Part II
« Reply #71 on: November 07, 2011, 04:10:50 pm »
Please forgive me for not answering your comments. I'm in a hurry today. Aalis ako. At may lalakarin din ako bukas. So, ayun. But I'm keeping true to my promise. I typed the next few chapters, guys! I decided to make Take the risk a three-part story. Soundtracks are on the first page.

Nine: Part II

Prince Charming and the wicked Witch.

The witch.

“I-I’m sorry. I don’t feel that way with you.” I mumbled under my breath. Trying hard to make it look as if I meant it. As if I was really sorry.

“Are you sure Nate because I—”

“Very sure.” never been sure… Richie’s face blanched. I winced. I guess my tone was a bit blunt. But there was no easier way to break a man’s heart. Especially when this was the third time of breaking his heart.

“Richie I—” I swallowed a lump in my throat. His head was bowed down. My eyes rolling, I gritted my teeth. “W-why?” it was barely out of his mouth but I heard all the same.

Goodness, I was running out of excuses. It was probably wrong to tell him that first time, ’let’s just be friends Richie, maybe… just maybe err, love will grow out of time,’—it was as good as saying ‘No, Richie, I could never ever love you.’

But I didn’t know that his interpretation of let’s just be friends were as different as black and white. Well, I should have left the second phrase out. But dammit, I was just being polite! The first time I was being conscientious in my whole life and this!

When he asked me the second time around I told him the lamest excuse ever, ‘I wasn’t ready yet.’ And well, I didn’t know he would wait until I was freaking ready.

And that would be in a million years when he was probably dead.

“W-why?” I whispered. My voice was on the edge of impatience now. My cell phone kept ringing. “It’s me, Richie. Not you.” I nodded appreciatively. His eyes slowly met mine. Truth was nothing was wrong with him.

Perhaps it was the truth. It was me.

His eyes were huge, “Y-you… you don’t like me?”

For the umpteenth time, yes.

I just nodded.

“Is there some guy—?”

“No. Not a guy. Never.” I nodded without thought and read the text message. He gasped. My head snapped at him. “Y-you… you like girls?”

I opened my mouth to say anything. Anything at all. But Richie was already walking out on me. Shaking his head. He looked back as if I’d grown two heads before going away. “Bravo, Nate…” I whispered wonderingly. I couldn't believe I had broken a guy’s heart in a parking lot. And not to mention the reason behind it. I rolled my eyes heavenward.

In my frantic moments, I caught a glimpse of a guy on the dimly-lit section of the parking lot. He was leaning against his trunk. His face was covered with one hand. Probably drunk.





“Riiing… riiing… riiing…” I rolled my eyes heavenward and gritted my teeth. “It’s just ringing! Mia’s eighteen! Not eight, Nat!” I hissed under my breath. “She’s not answering her phone, Nat.” I irritably brushed my short hair roughly.

“Hey Nate! Got Richie busted, didn’t you?” Leon came out from the door. “He would be the only guy who’d take you on.”

“Shut up!” I shouted back at Leon. He was the vocalist of our band. And my friend. I was the drummer of the group.

I swore my eyes were going out of their sockets by now. God, I would have wanted nothing but to put my phone down and get back there.

Natasha. You have to fetch Mia.” My sister’s frantic voice cut to my irritation. She seemed genuinely serious. Had I ever told you that she was a year older than I am? “I’m not your servant Nat. And please, stop calling me that disgusting name!” I was counting my fingers. Five more to go and I would really cut the line. She could go running to daddy for all I care. I would even come with her if she wanted.

Natalie’s end of the line went silent. I gnawed my lower lip. Even though we were only a year apart Natalie and I were so different. Like the sun and the moon.Oh-kay.”

I froze. Something must have happened. She had this mothering instinct like she could take care of everyone and everybody.

Which wasn’t really true.

“Nat? Is there something wrong?” I asked seriously. My body tensed. “Are you crying?”

“I… I… j-just have get Mia out of there. Please… Nate.” Her voice broke into a sob.

Even if I wanted to refuse my sister I couldn’t. She never called me Nate unless it was a matter of life and death. And heart problems.

I knew she shouldn’t have gone to that affair! To that wedding!

If only I could bump her head into the wall. Or… or make her drink some potion to forget that person! I sighed. It was irrational of me to hate him for my sister’s epic failure.

“Nat I—” the line went dead. Great. I started to run out of the bar. Leon lifted one brow impatiently and shouted again above the noisy crowd, “What? You’re running away coward?”

I muttered a silent curse. I slowly turned around and raised my middle finger in the air. He grinned.

“Mia, pick-up, pick-up! Pick up the phone please!” I chanted while squeezing myself into the crowd. It was only past nine. But the people were starting to come by. I went to the round table to get my body bag.

“H-Hello?”

“Oh, thank God Mia!” I breathed a sigh of relief. Though Mia was never on the top list of my most favorite persons on earth at least we had mutual respect for each other. “Where are you?” I shouted through the mouthpiece of my headset. I pulled the house duplicate key out of my jacket.

“I-I’m… f-fine.”

“When people tell me they're fine it fuucking means they're not! Mia, are you, oh my God, you’re also crying!” I gritted my teeth. What the hell was happening? I could have asked that if the line hadn’t gone dead. The second time!

Natalie and Mia were crying. At the same time!

It could be coincidence. So much for coincidence. Goodness, there was only one person in the whole universe that would make them both cry at the same moment. I was halfway out of the door when I turned into a solid—shiit, wall. Because really, it hurt!

“Awww. My chest! You stupid—” I covered my front with both hands. Of course, I had bodily bumped into something—no, someone. My breath whooshed out of my lungs. His hazelnut eyes pinned me against the ground. His head tilted to the side.

I couldn’t have careless about hazelnut eyes. The guy walked past me. His elbows brushed mine. My eyes grew wide as realization set in. Not even a ‘hello, how do you do?’ or ‘hey, I’m fu—cking sorry, it’s your fault.’

“Go to hell, Ethan,” I muttered under my breath. I felt him tensed behind me.

Craning my neck, there was no sign of him anymore. Before I could step forward my feet on its own accord turn back inside. An overwhelming anger was rising in my chest. I scanned the crowd for that one person. And he was there, lounging as if he owned the world.

The only reason why my sister and her best friend would be tearing each other’s throat by now.

That jackass. Who did he think he was? The king of the world? That he could get anything he wanted in just a snap of his finger? Why, was he everybody’s Prince Charming now?

My stride was getting faster. His eyes slowly, ever so slowly darted to me. Just as a panther to his stalking prey. He lazily tipped the bottle as if in salute—at me!

“Hell-o, Ethan.” I smiled widely.

He didn’t smile. He never ever smiled at me.

“Remember me?” his low, off-key husky voice floated in the air. He could have seduced some spineless woman with that voice. Including my sensible sister.

“`Course. How could I not?” I tilted my head to the side. “You fu—cking made my sister cry!” I screamed, slamming my hand on the table. In a flash my right hook had jammed into his almost perfect face.

It was short of killing Prince Charming.
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Re: Take the risk --- Eight: Fairy tale nightmare. Guys, please vote!
« Reply #72 on: November 07, 2011, 04:12:05 pm »
thereeeeeeeeeee!
Three part story?
Sure Ate Ash. As long as it won't get us confused. HAHAHA.  :D
and now there's a new character. NATASHA.
Hi Natasha, I'm AVON.  ;D  ;)

I think I'm gonna like Nate's personality.
Let's see then.
And wait, she's gonna be the partner of Ethan now? Parang ganun? interesting! yay!
I can kinds see their chemistry already  ;)
Parang mas gusto ko sya kesa kay Natalie.  8)

And there's mooooooooooore! The Princess and The Royal Jester.
sino kaya sila? dami mo talagang alam Ate Ash. hahaha.

I'll wait for the next update :)
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Re: Take the risk --- Ten: The wicked witch
« Reply #73 on: November 07, 2011, 04:51:04 pm »
Ten: The wicked witch


“Jesus, Nate! You put the nail on the pavement. He’s got a flat tire. You punched him in the face. What’s next?” Leon swore loudly. He was pacing the dressing room frantically.

“At least I didn’t use those nails on his coffin.” I said nonchalantly.

“It was good thing Ethan didn’t do you in.”

“Ha! I’d love to. Why didn’t he? Because he’s a coward and—”

Leon shook his head. “Ethan is a gentleman. He’ll never do something rude to anybody. Even to you!”

I rolled my eyes ceilingward. “If you want him! Fine, I'd gladly be of help,” I saw Leon's face turned paper white. I smiled smugly.  “I’m outta here, Leon.” I walked out of the pub without so much a glance. If it wasn’t for Leon they would have probably thrown me out earlier. I breathed a sigh of relief. And for the first time in my life I shook violently. I hugged myself when I felt the evening air cutting through my skin.

“Aww,” I flexed my knuckles. Gee, Ethan’s got a hard face.

Ethan…

Mr. Almost Fuucking Perfect. Everything about him was… almost perfect. He was too bloody handsome, an athlete, a dean’s lister, and everybody’s fantasy. And nobody should have the right to be that way. I hated Ethan at first sight. And that cemented my feeling when he flashed that million dollar toothpaste commercial smile of his to Natalie. Selfish of me, I hated him for taking Natalie’s attention away from me. I knew I couldn’t keep my older sister forever by my side. And I loathed him all the more when he hurt her.

Because I knew that first time, this love affair was doomed from the start.

Prince Charming had many fairy tale lead roles to make.

My cell phone beeped.

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Got home safe, Nate. Please take care of your sister. She needs you right now.
Sender: Mia

By eleven in the evening I was already at our doorstep. I fumbled for the key in my pocket. None! I fumbled for my body bag. I knew I had put it somewhere in here. Inhale, exhale. “Shiit, it’s really missing!” I cried out in horror. In my agitation and irritation I kicked the door, “Ouch.” That hurt.

And miraculously, it opened.

It wasn’t locked! My eyes grew wide as I slowly took a step forward. My ears were strained for some unwanted visitor. As I drew closer voices grew louder.

“You’re insane! You’re going to deceive Mia just by being her fairy godmother? And do you think she’ll love you because of your so-called plan?” Mia wailed.

“Nat, listen to me! That’s the whole point. I’m not really going to help her win… win…”

My brows creased. The voice seemed to be weary.

“—I’m going to make her fall in love with me.”

Mia’s wail rang out in the air. I drew up short at the scene unfolding before me. A gasp—which I wasn't sure come from me—startled both. My hands clenched. Eyes growing wide, I couldn’t grasp the situation before me. I… oh, my God, Ethan was holding Natalie in his arms! Right now!

“Natasha,” my sister’s mouth was agape open.

My heart thudded wildly. And in six strides I was in front of them. Natalie screamed. I leaped! Really jumped at him and pulled his hair. If my punch weren’t enough then I’d probably pull his hair out one by one! Damn him. Damn him.

Ethan’s eyes were bewildered. As if he didn’t know what he was doing! Or what he’d done wrong.

“I told you to go to hell! So why are you here?” I screamed. Natalie took hold of my arms. But I was wriggling away from her. My arms were touching every limb I could reach out. “Oh, God!” Ethan drew away from me. His face was so shocked. Eyes wide, looking at me as if I’d grown two heads! His hair was on his head as if counting his hair. “What is she? A she-reaper?”

“G-get away from me! I'm really going to kill that bastard!” I slapped my sister’s hands away from my arms.

I couldn’t believe this. My breath got hitched. He was… He was there in the pub earlier! And I’d even seen him when I walked out of the door. Tilting another bottle of beer at me. I even smiled at him sweetly as I looked at the side of his face where my knuckles had jammed him. And now, now he was here?

How could that be? Unless he… unless he outran the taxi driver and flew here—“What are you, Superman?” I hissed.

A slow smile tugged at his lips. “Even though you're trying to kill me now, I already like you.”

“Well, I don’t.” I snapped.

“Natalie what’s the meaning of—”

“He’s not Ethan!”

My head snapped at my sister. “F-Fu—cking hell, he’s not Ethan!? Then he's the devil!”

The guy beside me smiled sheepishly. “For the first time I didn’t want to be Ethan,” he nodded solemnly.

“He’s Nathan!” Natalie shouted at me. “Nathan? Who in hell? You’re not?” I whispered wonderingly. Yes, this guy was bulkier around the shoulders. And his jaws were more pronounced. Ethan’s features were handsomer than this guy.

Who looked so much like him.

“Do I have to repeat it over and over again?” he rolled his eyes ceilingward.

“So… who are you? Ethan the second?”

“I said I’m Nathan. You really got a problem with your eardrums, sweetie.”

“Natasha, he’s Ethan’s cousin. Remember Nathan the—”

I gaped. “The guy who peed on his pants in class? The retard who stuttered a lot? The guy who chase Mia like a lapdog? The skeletal system?!

“Gee, thanks,” he said sarcastically. “That’s thoughtful of you to remind me.”

“If I’m not already hooked with somebody else I might have considered you, darling.” This guy was saucy. His smile was sexy. He wasn’t by far a very handsome guy with his harsher features. But oh-kay, I knew a sexy guy when I see one.

“Gee, thanks,” I said sweetly. “That’s thoughtful of you to flirt with me.”

Natalie smirked. “Let’s go Nathan!” she tucked her hand in his left arm and walked him to the door. Who would have thought—I turned around numbly. I followed them to the door. “Natalie, are you going out with Ethan the second?” I said aplomb.

“I am not Ethan the second!” he snapped.

I smiled innocently. “Take her home before midnight, will you?”

“Natasha!”

“Natasha?” Nathan started laughing. “She's a woman?” My teeth grated when he laughed all the more. He didn't even bother trying to hide his ridicule. He was hunched over while he was so happy about me.

“No kiss. No embrace. No—” I extricate his arm away from my sister. “No taking advantage.” Because I wouldn’t risk my sister having another heartbreak over another Ethan. His voice turned buttery soft. “How will you know if I’m going to kiss her? Unless,” he groaned. “I'm not inviting you out. Three is a crowd!”

I slowly pulled out a picture. His eyes turned to my hand. “Take her home before midnight. If you don’t know by now I can chant curses. Or… my spells will haunt you down.”

“Great. Another psychopath on the way. Hey, that’s not me! That's Ethan!”

I shrugged. “You looked the same to me.”

Nathan swore aloud. “Was she bloody serious?” he turned to Natalie.

“Bloody.” I smiled at him too sweetly.
 



I closed my eyes and turned the shower off. Wrapping the towel around my body I hugged myself tighter. My teeth chattered. The house was so quiet without Natalie in it. I didn’t even bother to turn the lights on. I took another towel off my bed and roughly shook my short hair dry. The hair on my nape stood on ends.

I slowly turned around. A silent curse escaped my dry lips. My face turning white sheet.

“Hello, Na-ta-sha…”

“W-what the hell are you… doing here?”

A slow, lazy smile split his handsome face. And for the first time, he was smiling at me. His eyes gleaming in the dark made me shivers down my spine. And it had nothing to do with my exposed skin mirroring in his eyes.

He stood languidly. With grace. You know, he was the kind of guy who walked surely. Confidently. Like he had all the time in the world. I swallowed a lump in my throat. My shin bumped the side of the bed. While he was moving forward, forward, forward. While I had... nowhere to go!

“Going to confront the witch, I guess.”
« Last Edit: November 07, 2011, 05:15:48 pm by vague_yelhsa »

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Re: Take the risk --- Nine and Ten. The wicked witch!
« Reply #74 on: November 07, 2011, 04:55:55 pm »
Oh hi Natasha. You are by far the most adorable witch I've ever met. Not to mention awesome being a drummer and all. Hahahaha. Nakakaexcite talaga to all the more! Ate Ash, text mo naman ako pag mag-uupdate ka na. Kasi di na ako laging online pag nasa Baguio na ulit ako. HAHAHAHA. As always, job well done. O0
« Last Edit: November 07, 2011, 05:13:07 pm by missSHAKEspeare012 »
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