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Take the risk --- Thirteen. Updated!
« on: October 30, 2011, 05:38:34 pm »
Take the risk


“I’ll only break your heart.” He looked at me with those dark, piercing round eyes.

“I know.”

“I thought you understand our rule.”

“It was your rule.”

He wagged his forefinger in the air.

“Never, ever fall in love with me.”

“I didn’t want to.” Though that was short of telling the truth I was still lying—by omission.

Because how could I fall in love with somebody I already loved?

“If you’re smart stay away from me because I’m gonna leave in the end.”

“I was tired of being smart. I became sick of playing safe. So I’m taking the risk.”

This was too cliché of a story. Girl met this boy. She fell in love with him. This boy was a notorious heartbreaker. She was afraid to love. And he was afraid to change, blah, blah, blah... and the rest should be written in any other historical romance books that had ever been read and revised time and again.

But somehow along the way… it wasn’t enough to wait for something that wasn’t going to come. What if there was no happily ever after? What if people only have now and there were no tomorrows? What if Cinderella didn’t have a fairy godmother?

Would we wait on the sidelines forever?

Life is a gamble. Take the risk.






Superman and the Damsel in distress
Addicted

The Prince Charming and The Wicked Witch
You and I

The Princess and The Royal Jester




I appreciate comments! And I hope... I'm really back! Lol. Sorry. I've been out for a long while here in CC. At sana matapos ko ito, sana. Feeling ko short story lang ito. I just missed writing.




« Last Edit: November 15, 2011, 03:52:05 pm by vague_yelhsa »

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Re: Take the risk
« Reply #1 on: October 30, 2011, 05:49:53 pm »
Dapat first ako! Waaaaaaaaaaaa. :D



Edit:

Waaaa. My gulay Ash! Me likey the start! Tagos na tagos e. Ang simple nung pagkakasulat pero iba yung dating. Ramdam na ramdam ko. Huhuhu.

Ituloy mo na 'to ah? Na-miss kong magbasa ng stories mo e!

Btw, sana magkita ulit tayo soon. Hihihi. <3
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Re: Take the risk
« Reply #2 on: October 30, 2011, 06:10:32 pm »
Megahd. Ate Ash.
Start palang hook na hook na ako. :) I love it!
Keep updating this! Ang galing mo e. :))) <3

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Re: Take the risk
« Reply #3 on: October 30, 2011, 06:20:58 pm »
BAM.

Yun lang yung sound sa utak ko after I've read your prologue.
Ganda! I mean, totoo siya, concise, straight to the point. :D Love it!

Hi Ash, I'm Katt. Silent reader mo sa Splitting Hairs and Don't Tempt Mary :D Chapter 1 please <3

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Re: Take the risk
« Reply #4 on: October 30, 2011, 06:24:24 pm »
ASH! NAMISS KITA! <3 Andito ako to support, as always. ^-^ Excited na ako! And I know (kinda) what it feels like to take the risk. :)

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Re: Take the risk
« Reply #5 on: October 30, 2011, 06:47:27 pm »
Ash, alam mo nanaman siguro kung bakit ako nandito, diba? WAHAHAHAH!!
Miss you! See you soon! <3

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Re: Take the risk
« Reply #6 on: October 30, 2011, 07:47:35 pm »
Kakaiba ka talaga magsulat.  O0

Ate Ash! Welcome back! Na-miss kita! HUGS!
Paalam, aking mahal
A sequel to Paalam, Noelle

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Re: Take the risk
« Reply #7 on: October 30, 2011, 07:55:32 pm »
Eeeeee! :"> I'm so excited Ate Aaaaaash! Susuport ko talaga to. O0 Number 1 supporter here. \m/
No one can kill the fire of love in your heart.

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Re: Take the risk
« Reply #8 on: October 30, 2011, 08:59:10 pm »
Support ko po 'to, Ate! Fan mo po ako pagdating sa mga stories mo. Juna here! :)

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Re: Take the risk
« Reply #9 on: October 30, 2011, 09:07:34 pm »
Hi Ash!haha I don't know if you remember me...  ;D Bianca pala. Anyway I'm here to support your story. Ang ganda ng prologue. :)
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Re: Take the risk
« Reply #10 on: October 30, 2011, 09:38:08 pm »
raice03: Rachhhhhh! Ikaw na ikaw na ang first! HAHAHA. Hyper tayo? Yes, I also want to see you soon! Bakit may huhuhu? Parang may pinaghuhugutan? lol.

curiousity kills: Hello Bee. Thank you! Megahd din, nako sana matapos ko hehe.

allaroundprincess: Hello Katt? Ate Katt? Hehe. Wah, assuming ako na mas matanda ka sakin. Anyways, salamat sis! Hindi ka na silent reader.

sweetrax: Alyssa! NAMISS DIN KITA. Ano bey, sayang di ako nakasama non. Kaatar, hehe. You do? Hmm... ikaw ha.

yanyan7192: Yanyanitaaaaa! Need  I say more? Salamat!

mediumvioletred: Zee! You're here. Hehe. Ang tagal kong nawala, imyt! Hugs!


missSHAKEspeare012: Riaaa! Hahaha. Kamusta ka na? I missed our 'talks' hahaha. Salamat!

junachoopxz: Hello Juna! Aww. Thank you sis! At least me natitira pa. Asahan ko yan ha?

bien_021: Hi Bianca! I still remember you. Sino bang hindi? Salamat sis.


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Re: Take the risk
« Reply #11 on: October 30, 2011, 09:55:24 pm »
One: Trick or Treat!

Superman and the damsel in distress

The damsel in distress


This wasn’t any of those a hundred and one day let’s try this fling. Or any of those I believed I would make the most gorgeous guy on earth fall to my knees story. Maybe this was one of those ‘I wish’ trash list under a mistletoe.



“Trick or treat!” I shouted at the top of my lungs. I better not be drunk. Not this sober drunk. I should have been any place tonight but here. “Hey, you, you should be drinking with me!” I hissed and snatched Natalie’s cell phone. I thrust another bottle of Tanduay Ice in her hand instead.

She yelped. “Let’s go home Mia! You’re—”

“Drunk? Em not!” I giggled.

“Exactly.” She whispered annoyingly. “Those are the in famed words of persons who don’t admit they are drunk.” She presented her palm to me. I rolled my eyes heavenward and handed her cell phone. “It’s 31st of October. Why are my friends celebrating with their boyfriends? And not with me? Tell me, had Valentine’s Day been moved today? Officially?” I raised one brow at her and chanted under my liquor-smelling breath. “Happy Birthday to me… Happy Birthday to me…”

“Mia I need to go home, it’s already past eleven and—”

“No, don’t tell me you need to sleep early. That’s rubbish. We know where you’re going.”

“And we know what you’re doing. It’s semestral break, dear.” She said in an even tone. I avoided eye contact with Natalie. I didn’t want to see in her eyes how a heart could break into million pieces.

“I’m going to call Ethan.”

“Okay, call Ethan.” I waved my hand dismissively. Then in apprehension my eyes grew wide, “You won’t fu—cking call Ethan, Natalie!”

She shrugged her shoulders. “You never curse Mia... except when you hear the name Ethan.”

“What the fu-ck.”

“See?”

I gritted my teeth in anger. She stood up and patted my shoulder blade. “It’s because I’m drunk.” I said defensively.

“A-and it’s because he’s got a new girl.”

“Shut up, Natalie. Ethan and I don’t see each other that way!” I wailed. My tone mellowed down a notch. “We’re not even in speaking terms unless it’s about... you.”

“F-fine. But he’s still going to get you home.” She held out her cell phone as I tried to reach out for it the second time. I heard the voice so familiar from the other line it sent shivers down my arms and back. The hair on my nape stood on ends. I was really, really, really, really, really this foxed to even feel this way.

“Natalie. Hallo?” His voice was low, husky. And it could be a million years before I could forget it. And another million years before I decided that I didn't want anything to do with the owner of that bedroom voice. Ahem, in or out of the bedroom.

“Mia’s drunk. She needs a lift.”

I wanted to bang my head against the table. Natalie shouldn’t be doing this to me!

“I’m busy.”

My head shot up as those two words rang silently and precariously in the air. “Natalie, I don’t need anybody else!” I shouted not minding the curious stares of the people around us. I was drunk remember? I had an excuse to act like this. For once, I had to shed my goody two shoes sometimes. 

I never cared about him anyway. It was a mantra I had for a year now that made me still alive to this day on. Because if I believed otherwise I might go insane or worst profess some undying love I had for a man who cared little about me. Who knew I existed because… well, because…

“Ethan still loves you Natalie.” I whispered out of the blue, still playing with the rim of the bottle.

Because Natalie was the only link I had of that guy I couldn’t even bear to name.

Her lips quirked. Didn’t know if that was a sad smile or if it was even a smile.  “But he didn’t want to change.” It was barely out before she could take it back. “Not with me.”

“He’s going to fetch you in a minute or two. And I have to go, so behave.” She stood up and turned her back on me when I abruptly dropped the bomb that was overdue to explode, “He’s your ex, for Chrissake.”

“So?”

I couldn’t look Natalie in the eyes. I couldn’t even tell her outright how I felt when she summoned that guy to do things for her. And now she asked him to fetch me. Me! Like I was some lapdog. Some poodle that needed affection. Was Natalie giving me something on my birthday? 

I hated this feeling.

Who’s the coward here, Nat? I wanted to ask her. But she quietly and quickly took her bag. Her stilettos were dragging on to the tiled floors. And believe it or not, she was leaving me to the arms of her hero. So much for happy ever after.

But I wasn’t just going to sit here and wait for him. As I was doing… forever.

I felt the sting in the corners of my eyes. I stood up dizzily. I walked several steps and breathed for relief. I could still take seven bottles down and be sober. I could still walk upright and think clearly because I wasn’t that—

My eyes grew wide. As if on cue, my stomach twisted painfully. And my hand flailed, holding on to something more substantial. To the wall. To anything that my panic-induced mind couldn’t grasp.

“Hello.”

I swallowed convulsively. Two arms snaked around my waist to support me. And for the first time in my life I felt the static electricity hitting every nerve, every pore in my body. It was painful. Tingly even. And delicious afterwards. Just the simple touch.

And just like that I felt like hearing that famous line of Jerry Maguire, you had me at hello.
« Last Edit: November 07, 2011, 05:01:12 pm by vague_yelhsa »

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Re: Take the risk --- One: Trick or Treat!
« Reply #12 on: October 30, 2011, 10:10:46 pm »
Kaya yan ate Ash. <3 I just love this and you *insert giggle*. I swear~

First of all, Happy Bday Mia! :)
So parang she's caught in between.Di ko ma-explain pero gets ko naman. (:
Natuwa lang ako, I love Mia's character. Ethan. Ethan. Hm, what can I sayyy?
For sure gwapo yan. ;)
And I wonder kung sino yung lalaki na naghello sa kanya. Was it Ethan or some other guy?
Excited sa next. :) Thank you for the update! :)
God bless ate Ash! :)

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Re: Take the risk --- One: Trick or Treat!
« Reply #13 on: October 30, 2011, 10:24:47 pm »
Will edit this tomorrow! <3



Dinugo ang ilong ng lola mo kakabasa nito. WAHAHAHAH!

Anyway, Mia, since ikaw bida, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
Baby Ethan, hi! Ako nga pala si Yanyan. HAHAA! Jokelemeng.
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Re: Take the risk --- One: Trick or Treat!
« Reply #14 on: October 31, 2011, 10:51:39 am »
Nung nabasa ko yung update, feeling ko kailangan yung comment ko, english rin eh. Tsskk! Ang saklap naman nun. Yung friend mo pa yung gusto. Tapos yung friend mo, fetcher lang ang turing sa gusto mo. Sino kaya yung si "Hello" guy at nakuryente si Mia? Baka taga-Meralco yan? Weee~ Ako na cornyy. ;D Ganda ng update, ate Ash! Super ka-abang-abang as ever. <33

 

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