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Re: When She Falls | 4 - Words
« on: October 19, 2011, 06:25:45 pm »
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A/N : main concept of this story is very messed up. read at your own risk. if you have any kind of psychological problem, do not attempt to read this. anyways. you have been warned. angst.tragedy.romance. psychological

When She Falls

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She is..

hot

sexy

daring

bewitching

desirable

beautiful

rich

and enchanting.


EFFY VIENNE SANTINEZ

A name you can never miss.

A goddess not in peace.

What happens when she falls?




since im starting anew, here comes another story by yours truly. <3
RN is about 20 chapters only so I decided to make another story is which is longer. Ako na talaga. Trololol. :D =)

« Last Edit: December 07, 2011, 07:41:46 pm by curiousity kills »

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Re: When She Falls
« Reply #1 on: October 19, 2011, 06:48:09 pm »
Support!  :D

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Re: When She Falls
« Reply #2 on: October 19, 2011, 06:54:18 pm »
fierce 8)

supppooorrrrtttt!!

you already!

HAHAHA :D ;D

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Re: When She Falls
« Reply #3 on: October 19, 2011, 06:59:41 pm »
Support!  :D
Hi thurr! Thank you sa support! :">
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supppooorrrrtttt!!

you already!

HAHAHA :D ;D
Yes, fierce kung fierce. Thankyou Corr! <3
Me already talaga. :""> Haha,

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Re: When She Falls
« Reply #4 on: October 19, 2011, 07:08:20 pm »
ate bee :"> support ako nito okay? what happens when she falls in love ba yan? :)

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Re: When She Falls
« Reply #5 on: October 19, 2011, 07:41:23 pm »
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Re: When She Falls
« Reply #6 on: October 19, 2011, 08:48:11 pm »
ate bee :"> support ako nito okay? what happens when she falls in love ba yan? :)
hm, pwede rin. :) Hehe. Thankyou Geeyah!!! <3

support!! :D ;D
hey there, thank you! <3


THE FIRST CHAPTER WOULD EITHER BE POSTED LATER THIS EVENING OR TOMORROW MORNING. :) PLEASE SUPPORT. :'>
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Re: When She Falls
« Reply #7 on: October 19, 2011, 09:48:37 pm »
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Sarreh. Everything about the POV is just messed up. Can't find the exact words eh since this story would be in a male perspective, I'm having a hard time with Zai's way of thinking. PS. Complex characters sila. Hopefully maging patient kayo sa transition ng attitude nila. :)

 

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“Pag wala pa sila after 10 minutes. Aalis na ako dito.” If it weren’t for them saving my @ss yesterday, di naman ako papayag na sumama sa date na sinasabi nila.

 

 

 

“Dude naman!” 
Paulo protested trying to calm the fck out of me.

 

 

“Kaya nga. I promise, they are worth the wait.” I scoffed. Iba na talaga pag mga desperado.

 

As soon as we heard the door open, napalingon kami sa area na yun.

“Told you dude!” Tumawa silang lahat at nagpalakpakan. Para silang mga asong ulol. Okay,that sounded so harsh pero ganyan talaga yang mga kumag na yan.

 

 What was to be celebrated anyway? Kung tutuusin, wala naman talaga. They are all Barbie doll wannabes  and stuck up b!tches.

 

 

“Hi!”


 

“Hi Dave!”

 

“Hello! OMG. You’re here Zai!”
Gulat na gulat sila nung nakita nila ako. Sino nga ba ang hindi? Girls are not my priority. Mas marami kang magagawa pag walang sagabal sa buhay mo. Aside from that, pare-parehas lang naman ang mga babae e. Gold-diggers.

I gave them a yawn as if I was telling them, I'm bored and not interested.

"Akala namin niloloko lang nila kami."

“Unfortunately,yes.I'm here/”

 

Being the gentleman that he is, si Dave yung nagvolunteer na mag pull out ng chair for them.

 

“Teka, ba't 3 lang kayo? Akala ko ba quadruplet date to?” Nagtatakang tanong ni Denis. Muntik ko ng nabuga sa kanya yung tubig. Quadruplet date? Wtf.

 

“I think she’s not coming na.” sabi ng partner ni Justin while eating her spaghetti. Not that I’m interested.

 

THEN GOOD IF SHE’S NOT COMING.

 

“So what am I here for? I should get going.” I smirked mischievously at tumayo na sa kinauupuan ko. I don’t want to waste my time sa mga ganitong bagay. My time is too d@mn precious para pag-aksayaan ko sa mga katulad nila.

 

“OMG. She’s here.”


 

“Hiiiiii!”

 

“EFFFFY!!!” The girls screamed, sila Justin naman napatunganga.

 

There she was. Looking godly and sexy at the same time. But I knew better. Effy’s more than just a pretty face because behind her caked make-up face and red lipsticks, lies the devil’s advocate.

 

She’s a heartbreaker.

 

Others call her a homewrecker,a slut,a b!tch and a  snake.

You know, those kinds of insults.

 

“You hit the jackpot dude!!!”  Damnit. Out of all the girls in the worl naman o.

 

I seriously don’t like her, everything about her.

She disgusts me..  from that angelic face down to her feet.

 

“Sorry late. Traffic e.” She said while taking the seat beside me. Umurong ako ng konti, ngumiti sya sa akin. What the hell, she's seducing me!

 

“Whoah. I didn’t know you’re into this kind of setup Mr. SC President.” She giggled.

 

I scoffed. She knows exactly how to ruin my day.


Way to go Santinez. Thank you very much.

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Re: When She Falls | 1 - the bitter Zai
« Reply #8 on: October 20, 2011, 12:06:27 am »
how come wala pa ng nagcocomment sa first chapter?
It got me craving for more. :) Update soon ate Bee. :D
Hate at first sight Zai ha. :D
Oh for crying out loud, Humphrey!

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Re: When She Falls | 1 - the bitter Zai
« Reply #9 on: October 20, 2011, 12:27:34 am »
baliw. XD Haha.
Ok lang yun, im sure meron din yan as soon as the story progresses. ;)
have to deal with this. :)
Kaya nga Niks e.What is perfectionist di ba, Zai? Haha.
Thanks!

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Re: When She Falls | 1 - the bitter Zai
« Reply #10 on: October 20, 2011, 06:31:34 pm »
Haha! Nice update po! ;D

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Re: When She Falls | 1 - the bitter Zai
« Reply #11 on: October 20, 2011, 06:56:40 pm »
Thank you!! <3

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Re: When She Falls | 1 - the bitter Zai
« Reply #12 on: October 20, 2011, 08:23:41 pm »
home wrecker huh? ???

VERY interesting  ::)

santinez  :D last name ng crush ko yun hihihi :D

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Re: When She Falls | 1 - the bitter Zai
« Reply #13 on: October 20, 2011, 09:10:21 pm »
home wrecker huh? ???

VERY interesting  ::)

santinez  :D last name ng crush ko yun hihihi :D
Haha. Let's see kung totoo ngang homewrecker sya. :D
Ay, o? Uyyyy! Cool naman~

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Re: When She Falls | 1 - the bitter Zai
« Reply #14 on: October 21, 2011, 06:33:14 pm »
Will support:">
Update :D
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