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Twisted Fate of Friendship - Author's Mensahe on p.8 <3
« on: June 05, 2011, 11:27:38 pm »
Note: Hello fellow TTalkers! By the way, I'm AJ. I've been a member here for 3 years already and I just want to give my writing side a shot. Hope you'll support me. Thank you!  ;)


Twisted Fate Of Friendship
© 2011 by aj27
         
1...

2...

3...

PLAY


♫ Need You Now by Lady Antebellum.mp3 ♫

Picture perfect memories
Scattered all around the floor
Reaching for the phone 'cause
I can't fight it anymore


Will I ever see you again?

And I wonder if I
Ever cross your mind
For me it happens all the time


Yeah, do you still think about me?

It's a quarter after one
I'm all alone
And I need you now
Said I wouldn't call
But I've lost all control
And I need you now

And I don't know how
I can do without
I just need you now

Another shot of whiskey
Can't stop looking at the door
Wishing you'd come sweeping
In the way you did before


I still remember your heart-melting smile…

I miss how you laugh like there’s no tomorrow…

And I wonder if I
Ever cross your mind
For me it happens all the time

It's a quarter after one
I'm a little drunk
And I need you now
Said I wouldn't call
But I've lost all control
And I need you now

And I don't know how
I can do without
I just need you now

Whoa, whoa
Guess I'd rather hurt
Than feel nothing at all


Maybe this is really the way it’s supposed to be…

But I still hope it’s not…

It's a quarter after one
I'm all alone
And I need you now
And I said I wouldn't call
But I'm a little drunk
And I need you now

And I don't know how
I can do without
I just need you now
I just need you now

I need you all my life…
                  
I love you all my life…


OH BABY, I NEED YOU NOW


I have been missing a lot of things in my life ---
my parents who are always on the road for
business matters, my grandfather who taught
me a wish and her, my BESTFRIEND forever.
                                               DAVIEN LEX HERMANO

I am not missing anything in my life infact, my
family care for me so much, my true friends
are always there and then I remember him,
my ENEMY forever.
                                               FRANCE RIA LOPEZ


bestfriend + enemy = BESTFRENEMIES


NAVIGATION LINKS:
Links will direct you to the designated chapter. ;)
01||02||03||04||5.1||5.2||06||07||08||09



Some parts of this story are based on someone's experiences. Moreover, that person gave me the permission to include those. If some things here happened the same as yours please don't be so assured that it is you --- those are purely coincidental.

Again, thank you in advance.  ;D

« Last Edit: November 09, 2011, 11:05:58 pm by aj27 »
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« Reply #1 on: June 05, 2011, 11:47:43 pm »
Davien! Love the name! Enemy and best friend, interesting! Alyssa I'm here to super support your first story! ;)
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« Reply #2 on: June 06, 2011, 11:45:09 am »
Davien! Love the name! Enemy and best friend, interesting! Alyssa I'm here to super support your first story! ;)

Yay for Ate Pau! Thanks for being the first commenter. HAHA. Thanks talaga! Di ko akalain may magrereply ng ganun ka-late sa gabi. Thank you so much! *hugs*



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« Reply #3 on: June 06, 2011, 11:55:33 am »
AJJJJJJJJJJ! My dear :) SUPPORT KO `TO! :D Natawa ako dun sa I missed how you laughed like there's no tomorrow. Parang ako lang eh. Hahaha :) Like your story! Keep it up!
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« Reply #4 on: June 06, 2011, 12:33:09 pm »
AJJJJJJJJJJ! My dear :) SUPPORT KO `TO! :D Natawa ako dun sa I missed how you laughed like there's no tomorrow. Parang ako lang eh. Hahaha :) Like your story! Keep it up!

Yay sis! HAHA thank you sa pagpunta dito!  :D Hanggang ngayon kinakabahan pa din ako sa story ko na ito! haha.  ;D *hugs*
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« Reply #5 on: June 06, 2011, 12:35:46 pm »
Masasanay ka rin sis. Lalo ka pang kakabahan pag dumami na kami. Feeling mo kasi baka hindi mo magawa `yung ineexpect nila. HAHAAH.  :D Keri yan sis, HUUUUGS BACK ♥
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« Reply #6 on: June 06, 2011, 01:10:34 pm »
will support. though di ko pa sure exactly kung ano tatakbuhin nung story. well, ano namang exciting kung alam ko na diba? hehehe  :D
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« Reply #7 on: June 06, 2011, 03:47:36 pm »
Masasanay ka rin sis. Lalo ka pang kakabahan pag dumami na kami. Feeling mo kasi baka hindi mo magawa `yung ineexpect nila. HAHAAH.  :D Keri yan sis, HUUUUGS BACK ♥

Sana nga dumami kayo eh.  :-\ HAHA. Basta thank you ah. Yiieee! ;)

will support. though di ko pa sure exactly kung ano tatakbuhin nung story. well, ano namang exciting kung alam ko na diba? hehehe  :D

Hello leighsha! :) Thanks sa comment! :) HAHA. :) Yep tama ka, medyo bitin din talaga nagawa kong introduction. Mapapasaan pa't aayus din ang takbo nito. Salamat ulit! *hugs* Anu nga pala itatawag ko sa'yo sis? ;)
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« Reply #8 on: June 06, 2011, 04:42:41 pm »
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« Reply #9 on: June 06, 2011, 04:57:25 pm »
hello. :)) support ko'to! :) my  name is rhaine. ;) what's yours?

Hi Rhaine! I really love the name Rain/Rhaine or whatever spelling it is as long as it is pronounced as "rain". HAHA. AJ here. ;D Thanks for supporting! *hugs*
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« Reply #10 on: June 06, 2011, 06:02:38 pm »
Hi Rhaine! I really love the name Rain/Rhaine or whatever spelling it is as long as it is pronounced as "rain". HAHA. AJ here. ;D Thanks for supporting! *hugs*

haha! nickname ko lang yan actually. ;) pero, mahal na mahal ko yan. :) haha! thank you! hindi naman halatang gusto mo noh? ;D haha! Hello. :) haha! nahuli yung hello. ;P :*

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« Reply #11 on: June 06, 2011, 08:05:23 pm »

Chapter 1
Different Worlds At The Same Time

DAVIEN
(7:30am at Alabang Bella Homes)

*bzzzzttt! bzzzzttt!*

*bzzzzttt! bzzzzttt!*

*bzzzzttt! bzzzzttt!*


"DAVIEEEEEEEENNNN!!!"

*bzzzzttt! bzzzzttt!*

*bzzzzttt! bzzzzttt!*

"Get down here breakfast is readyyyyyy!!!"

*bzzzzttt! bzzzzttt!*

*bzzzzttt! bzzzzttt!*

*bzzzzttt! bzzzzttt!*

*bzzzzttt! bzzzzttt!*

*bzzzzttt! bzzzzttt!*

*bzzzzttt! bzzzzttt!*


*EEEENNNNNGGGGGG!!!*

"AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!”

BLAG!

"Oh my! Whatdaef!!!"

"C'mon down you sleepyhead brother! Mom's waiting for you since yesterday stups!"

"Yeah yeah! Fine fine! Bookerhead!"
   
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VIEN! VIEN! VIEN!
NASUSUNOG YUNG KWARTO MO!!!
BUMABA KA NA!!! :P

Nasusunog pala ha! Tsss. Bookerhead went out wearing his sinisterly laugh. Pesteng kuya naman talaga oh! Itutok daw ba ang torotot niyang kasing edad niya sa tenga ko, buti at tumutunog pa yun. TSSS.


"Good morning Mom! :-* And Go to hell David!" with an evil look at him and my brother as usual just laughed.

"Okay, enough of the two of you." At nilunok niya ang pagkain sa bibig niya tapos tumingin sa akin. "And you Vien, how come you woke up late? Didn't you miss me?"

“Of course I missed you Mom! Ikaw lang naman umuuwi eh.”

“Yeah…”
 
You heard it right. My parents are busy like bees but Mom always find time to cook for us even once or twice a week and then hang out a little bit at our garden, have a talk with her flowers. Weird but cool at least she shows her care and love for us. And dad, there in his boring office. Think, type and print, present on the board and sign is his routine since birth. Umuuwi siya dito mga 3-4 beses sa isang buwan at kung uuwi man siya iniisip niya pa din yung trabaho niya.

“O-kay. Breakfast is done. Go and brush your teeth and...Papaliguan ko kayong dalawa ng sabay. ;D

“MOOOOOM!!!”

“Joke lang eh! HAHAHA!”

At talagang humalhak si Mommy. She used to do that with the rubber duckies on the tub. Davien Lex Hermano here, an incoming sophomore of San Agustin Academy. David Louie is 4 years older than me and I call him bookerhead for he is obsessed in reading! ;D And my parents? Are the busiest people in the world.

*BOOGSH!*

*KLANG!*

*KLANG!*

*KLANG!*

*EEECCCCKKK!*

*BOOOOOOGGGSSSSH!!!*


 :o

And I run upstairs as fast as I can.
*****
FRIA
(7:30am at Makati Flexi Homes)

♫ Sho I put my handsh up, they’re playin’ my shong da butterplaish plai awaaay. Naddin my head like yeah, movin’ my hipsh like yeah.

Got my handsh up, they’re playin’ my shong, you know I’m gonna be okay.
Yeah! Itsh da party in da U-ESH-A…

Yeah! Itsh da party in da U-ESH-A

Itsh da party in da U-ESH-A

Its h da party in da U-ESH-A                         

Itsh da party in da U-ESH-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! ♫

“WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! Sh!t! Miaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!”

“Whoo! Galing ni bunso! Anak! Sayaw ka nga! Sayaw Mia, Sayaw Mia! Yehey!!! Ang galing galing ni bunso!!!”

Langya!!! Ang aga-aga nagkakaraoke. Bigla akong nahulog sa kama sa sobrang pagkagulat ko. Grabe! Sakit sa ulo nun!!! Mia talaga bakasyon na bakasyon hyper! Tsss!

“Wow! Sarap naman ng breakfast danggit with rice, itlog with ketchup and mango shake. Mamu, baka mag-tae tayo dito ha! ;D

Sa dining table kasama si Mamu Pey, Dada Vic, ang kambal na sina Brother J for Joshua at Brother K for Kyle ang sumunod tapos ako na at syempre ang pinakamakulit na bunso naming si Mei-mei or Mia. Ganito madalas sa bahay. Masayahin lahat ng tao, palatawa at makukulit. Sa sobrang kasiyahan ng magulang ko, naisipan nilang magpagawa ng mini park sa labas ng bahay namin para daw makapaglaro kami ng block123, tagu-taguan, piko at kung anu-ano pa. Nagsisilbi na din iyong garden para sa mga halaman ni Mamu.

Papunta ako ngayon sa mini park namin. Ay oo nga pala, I’m France Ria Lopez an incoming sophomore student of Marian Catholic School but now, I’m chillin’, relaxin’ and enjoyin’ the fresh air of vacation. ;D

*PAK!*

“Aray!!! Ulo ko un ah!”

“TAYA!!!” That’s brother J and I’m the It! Gotta go! :D
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« Reply #13 on: June 06, 2011, 10:17:35 pm »
Cool update Alyssa! Next! ;)
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« Reply #14 on: June 07, 2011, 10:15:30 am »
Ano nangyare kaela Vien sis?  :o Hahaha. Ang kulit nung tagu taguan e. Batukan! Yeahbah! Nice update sis. Ang cute para sa mga Highschool or college? Hahah.
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