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Could It Be: Ch.37 || TRAGEDY || Readers pls.
« on: May 17, 2011, 11:04:56 pm »
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Hi guys, this is my first ever story. I'm not really sure if I should post this but I hope you'll support it.
 I would really appreciate readers and your comments. Hehe. Ayanne here, hope we could all be friends. May GOD guide and bless us all.  :)

COULD IT BE:
Your First Is Not Always Your Last?


In fairy tales...
there is always one Prince Charming in every Princess’ life.


But...
   
What if there were two? Or more?


Who will you choose?

The first one?,

The Prince that you’ve been wanting to be your Guy?

Or

The Guy who is willing to be your Prince?


Would you still chose your first love?

 Or

 You would give the other a chance to prove you could have a second love?

Who will be your last?



COULD IT BE?
Your first is not always your last?





Characters: (Click!  ;))

Adrienne Joy De Vega
|Yen|


Andrew Kiel Fernandez
|Kiel|


Stephen Josh Arrieta
|Stephen|


Dallynette Madrigal
 |Nette|


Shana Gutierrez
 |Shana|


Juan Mikel Montez
|JM|


Bianca Montero
|Bianca|




Chapter Navigation
|1| |2| |3| |4| |5| |6| |7| |8| |9| |10| |11| |12| |13| |14| |15| |16| |17| |18| |19| |20| |21| |22| |23| |24| |25| |26| |27| |28.1| |28.2| |29| |30| |31| |32| |33| |34.1| |34.2| |34.3| |35| |36| |37|



Hello everyone!
Welcome to my first story ever.
I hope you'll support this one. :)

Note: I do not own any of the pictures po, they are purely for imaginary purposes.

Enjoy reading!
GOD bless everyone!

Sana po may sumuporta. :)
« Last Edit: May 22, 2012, 10:50:46 pm by ayanne »

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Re: Could It Be: Your First is not Always Your Last?
« Reply #1 on: May 17, 2011, 11:14:41 pm »
nice start! will support :)

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Re: Could It Be: Chapter 1 [Fix You...fix me, let's fix each other! :)
« Reply #2 on: May 17, 2011, 11:22:47 pm »
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Hi it's me again.  :) If you want some background music just click the link. hehe... All the chapter of this story is entitled with a song, however the meaning or message of the song doesn't necessarily reflect the chapter. Also, I don't own any of those songs or links. hehe.
Before you go on to the 1st chap let me introduce to you the other character...hehe...yung mga nakaitalicize po eh ang kani-kanilang mga conscience/konsensya po. Pagpasensyahan niyo na po kung maypagka-bipolar ang author. Enjoy reading. Comment po kayo please. Thank you so much. Hope you'll support this till the end. GOD bless everyone. :D




*** Chapter 1 ***

|| Fix You...fix me, let’s fix each other!  ;D ||




When you tried your best, but you don't succeed...

When you get what you want but not what you need...

When you feel so tired but you cannot sleep, stuck and reversed


And the tears keep streaming down your face...

When you lost something that you can't replace...

When you love someone but it goes away...



Could it be worse?

Lights will guide, you home...
And ignite you pose





And I will try to FIX YOU

Adrienne's POV

June 07
Monday
7:07am


Haii..late na kaya ako?di naman siguro 1st day of class naman eh, late din mga teachers eh...hehe…kaya Yen, relax ka muna makinig ka nalang muna sa radio... ’Fix you’ yung pinatutugtog, i like this song, kasi medyo nakakarelate ako. Naisip ko tuloy, kailan kaya ako makakahanap ng i-fifix ko at i-fifix din ako..hala!mag-fixan daw ba?

Nga pala...I'm Adrienne Joy De Vega, my family and close friends call me Yenyen or Yen...ordinary girl lang ako but still unique in my own ways ( In what way? Di ko din alam eh)...hehe...I'm not a popular girl nor a campus hottie...wala lang...Yung tipong hindi mo agad papansinin..Isa lang ang mapagmamalaki ko, Anak ako ni God and I know He loves me so much… of course I love Him too, He's my life... Ay teka! Nasaan na ba ako?

"Para po..."

Muntikan na kong lumagpas ah..oh my! 7:30am na pala! Nako!!! late na ko!bilis Yen!

“Goodmorning manong guard” sabay takbo. Syempre dapat polite kahit late… :)

Naku baka malate ako first day pa naman, takbo Yen! pero teka lang, late din naman ang mga teachers pag 1st day eh, kaya okay lng yan Yen pwede ka maglakad sayang ang poise…meron ka ba nun? Meron yata minsan... ;) ;D

Pagdating ko sa corridor ng 1st floor, I saw a familiar face, very familiar indeed. Infact kakakita ko lang sa kanya kanina sa panaginip ko.  :D :D :D

Ang aking long-time crush, si Andrew Kiel Fernandez.

Teka anung gagawin ko? (a. Kakawayan b. dededmahin c. bubungguin or d. ALL OF THE ABOVE!? ;D :D ) hala ka! Gawin daw bang game show?!
Alam ko na! letter ‘c’ nalang, kunwari nagmamadali ako..hehehe..ang landi! Pero hayaan mo na minsan2x lang ‘to..kaya 1..2..3..takbo! ay hindi! lakad lang pala ng medyo mabilis… Go!

-boogsshh...- Yey successful! :D :D :D

"I'm so sorry, nagmamada-.."


“Actually, I’m sorry...di kita nakita”

Teka, cnu ‘to? hindi ‘to c Kiel ah?!  :o
Paglingon ko sa likuran ayun nakatingin sakin..nakaiwas pala siya..Ano ba ‘to yen nakakahiya! Sa susunod kasi lumiko ka pag lumiko siya para sigurado, ok?! Nakakahiya tuloy!

"I’m so sorry… Uh--Miss, uh-- are you ok?" Ay! may kumakausap nga pala sakin… ;D

".uhm..y-yes..I’m really sorry, I was in a hurry." Habang patayo ako, inalalayan naman ako nung guy… in fairness may pagkacute siya huh?!...pwede na… toinkz! Pero may kamukha siya. :-\


"Haha...It’s okay, by the way I’m JM” :)
   
“Ok. Nice meeting you... I’m really sorry, bye.”

Talagang di ko sinabi name ko kasi…


 ::)
 ::)
 ::)




di naman niya tinanong!  ;D ;D ;D Toinkz!  :P hehe…pero JM? Parang familiar? nagisip ako habang naglalakad.. Ah! Naalala ko na! Si JM! Yung bestfriend ni Kiel! Bakit nga ba di ko siya agad nakilala?Panu puro Kiel ang nasa utak mo!

Speaking of Kiel...

Naku! Sayang talaga yung kay Kiel..well, maybe it wasn’t meant to be, next time nalang ulit..toinkz!.. :P

Napalingon naman ako dun sa lalaki sa gilid kasi nakatingin siya sakin, nagagandahan yata!  :D ;D napapaligiran ata ako ng mga lalaki ngaun ah! toinkz ulit! Baka napansin lang niya yung kanina naku nakakahiya pero hayaan mo na! Ay! Malalate na nga pala ako..bilis!

Habang umaakyat ako ng hagdan nararamdaman ko na parang may sumusunod paglingon ko ung lalaki sa gilid ng corridor kasunod ko… :o
Sabi na nga ba nagandhan sakin eh! Pero anu ba yan! Stalker?! Alam mo Yen minsan masyado kang feeling eh noh?!

Binilisan ko yung pag-akyat ko nararamdaman kong medyo bumilis din siya kaya binilisan ko pa..pag dating ko ng 4th floor nag ha-hyperventilate na ko…oxygen2x…where are you? ang OA mo tsong…joke lang! ito naman!…pero hiningal talaga ako ng bonggang-bongga…paglingon ko sa likod ko wala na siya, hay salamat…success!  8)Pumasok na ko sa room late na ko!

“Good morning ma’am

----ay wala pa pala… Joke lang.”
;)

Buti di nila masyadong napansin…hehehe…kundi panibagong kahihiyan… hinananap ko yung bestfriend ko, si Nette... sabi na nga ba late ang teachers eh mas late pa sakin! hehe...

“Yen, may paper na nakadikit sa palda mo.” :o :o :o

What? Nakakahiya...Kaya ka naman pala hinahabol eh! Wag kasi masyadong ambisyosa sa susunod.


Kiel's POV

Ang tagal ng teacher namin, kaya eto I'm just sitting here listening to my IPOD,the song is Fix You by Coldplay… I like this song ‘coz… ewan... bigla tuloy ako napaisip, kelan kaya dadating ang girl na mag-aayus sakin and aayusin ko din..anu?ang gulo!ewan!

"Kiel tawag ka ni Joyce"

"Bakit daw?"

"Ewan ko..basta tawag ka eh andun sa labas…”

“Kaya pala di mo naririnig eh.."
  >:( Sabay iling nung nakita niyang nakikinig ako sa IPOD ko.

"Kanina pa nagiiskandalo dun, di ka man lang lapitan may paa naman! Naku kung di lang kayo kahit maganda pa siya babarahin ko yan eh!" Naku nahihighblood na ata 'tong bestbud ko ah! kawawa naman.. :-X

"Haii naku...take it easy bro… ganun talaga siya eh, spoiled."

Makalabas na nga, talaga 'tong si JM hot tempered… kung sabagay kahit ako naiinis din kay Joyce, minsan ang demanding! Anyway, JM is my bestbud, madaming may crush dito eh... kateam ko siya sa basketball and table tennis, pareho kaming varsity. 8)

What took you so long? Let's go to the canteen I'm so thirsty na eh."

"Huh?may C2 ako dyan, di ko pa nabubuksan."

"I don't like that kanina pa yun eh..Gusto ko malamig as in ice cold."


Anu pa nga ba magagawa ko… Edi bumaba kami nagpunta kami sa canteen. Joyce is my girlfriend since last week. ok lang naman siya, minsan nakakainis, minsan nakakatuwa… gusto ko siya pero ewan ko ba,parang may kulang, parang di siya yung kailangan ko, pare-pareho lang sila, parang di talaga nila ko kilala, parang what we have is always fake, walang meaning... I want them but it seems like I don't need them. :-\

"Manang one C2...I want it cold… like ice, ok?"

"Why don’t you buy yelo nalang kaya? We don’t put our drinks in the freezer noh!" ;D

Medyo natawa ako dun ah! Si manang spokening in dollars! pero di ko nalang pinahalata baka pag-awayan pa namin at makipag-break pa ko ng wala sa oras. Syempre kailangan may kapalit agad si Joyce kung saka-sakali, may pinoprotektahan din naman akong image noh.  ;D

Meron kasi akong rules sa mga nagiging girlfriend ko, once na nag-away kami at nagdrama sila, it’s over! Kahit sino pa ang nagsimula ng away. Don’t get me wrong, di ko sila pinaglalaruan or something, they become my girlfriends because I like them not just because I want to play with them. At isa pa pag naging kami naman, di naman ako nagkukulang sa kanila, I treat them well, I take good care of them at kung anu-anu pa. I just don’t want them to be so dramatic! I have to break  up with them kasi kung hindi, sila ang gagawa nun. Di ko kasi ugali ang manuyo ng babae, because I’m an egotistical person, there I admitted it. I hate doing those stuffs coz nanliliit ako, that was why I never courted any of my previous gf.
Yup! Wala pa akong niligawan sa mga naging gf ko, palaging barkada ko ang gumagawa nun, i don’t know how or why but somehow it works.
8)

"Just give me one, will you?"

"Joyce, don't be rude"

"She's so irritating!!"


Before I forget, I'm Andrew Kiel Fernandez, a jock… I play basketball and table tennis. Most of the times, JM and I were the ones sent by the school to compete with other schools in table tennis. According to my buddies, since i’m popular,i’m only allowed to be with popular girls too, yabang ko noh? Ganun instructions ng buddies ko eh, eh magaganda naman sila eh,kaya ok lang.  8)

   Sobrang mataas ang pride ko, ayokong nanunuyo ng babae, siguro nadala na ako kasi in the end iiwanan din nila ako.




Stephen's POV

   I'm so bored, as always the teacher is late... all I can do is to listen to the music playing on my seatmate's cp, I think song is entitled Fix You, I'm not familiar with the song, however the message is quite good..
   'When will I find the girl who'll fix me, and I'll fix her?' I thought..but wait..parang ang gulo di ko na-getz ung iniisip ko ah! ahh..bahala na.. ??? :-X

Bigla kong naalala yung girl kanina…ang kulit..nakakatawa…Nalala ko nung paakyat ako ng stairs, sasabihin ko sana na may dumikit na paper sa palda niya kaso binilisan niya ung lakad niya, so binilisan ko din, pag dating ko ng 3rd floor bigla akong tinawag ni Ms. Salumbides, kaya yun di ko na siya nasundan…who would have thought, classmate ko pa pala siya?…
;D Pero everytime I look at her, may naalala ako…si –– :-X [/left]"Class I'm sorry, I'm late… something came up...”

  Finally dumating na din ang teacher...Well, we didn’t introduce ourselves kasi daw pang grade school lang daw yun so she discussed some topics, then we had a quiz, I only got 9...urgh...

"10.....9...."

   I stood up to give my paper, nakasabay ko yung girl kanina...bigla siyang napatingin sakin, so ngumiti nalang ako. Ngumiti din siya parang namula nga siya eh... ang cute niya… napatingin ako sa mata niya, sarap tignan, parang walang tinatago… She really reminds me of her… :-X ay ewan! ano ba 'tong mga sinasabe mo Stephen?

   Anyway, I'm Stephen Josh Arrieta, just a simple guy pero ewan ko ba, yung mga tao sa paligid ko tingin sakin ang taas2x. Tahimik lang ako pero pag nagsalita ako medyo frank and straight to the point. I love math, naeenjoy ko siya most of the times… madalas nga akong nilalaban eh. Sabi nila crush daw ako ng buong campus, well I couldn't blame them, who wouldn't? yabang...Joke lang! But I have never fell in love again since I lost her, I felt like no one could replace––
:-X :(

"Stephen tawag ka ni Ms. Salumbides..."

Haii..bakit nanaman kaya? Namiss niya agad ako? Joke! makapunta na nga lang.

"Stephen, the school will send you for a National math wiz next week, I want you to attend your trainings with Mr.Lapuz, together with the other contestants."

"Yes maam...” Sana kasama yung crush ko..hehe.. ;)




« Last Edit: November 16, 2011, 05:56:34 pm by ayanne »

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Re: Could It Be: Your First is not Always Your Last?
« Reply #3 on: May 17, 2011, 11:24:49 pm »
nice start! will support :)

Hello. Thank you so much!  :D :D :D
What's your name?  :)
GOD bless. :)

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Re: Could It Be: Your First is not Always Your Last?
« Reply #4 on: May 17, 2011, 11:34:08 pm »
April nga pala. so yeah, just finished reading chapter 1 :)

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Re: Could It Be: Your First is not Always Your Last?
« Reply #5 on: May 17, 2011, 11:38:07 pm »
April nga pala. so yeah, just finished reading chapter 1 :)

Salamat April. hehe...Hope you liked it. :D

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Re: Could It Be: Your First is not Always Your Last?
« Reply #6 on: May 18, 2011, 08:50:07 am »
wow! nakatatlong POV ka agad in one chapter, galing!  ;)

fix you. fix me. mag'fixan tayong lahat. hehe.
ang feeling ko noh? haha.

eros nga pala siz! :D
weeeee. siz kayo?
SUPPORT KO TO.
naaalala ko kasi kay Kiel yung bf ko. haha.  ;D ;D
so lame reason naman.
:) :)
nabitin ka sa NO BOUNDARIES ko?


eto ang KARMA ko. O0
[the story next to NB]

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« Reply #7 on: May 18, 2011, 11:32:39 am »
wow! nakatatlong POV ka agad in one chapter, galing!  ;)

fix you. fix me. mag'fixan tayong lahat. hehe.
ang feeling ko noh? haha.

eros nga pala siz! :D
weeeee. siz kayo?
SUPPORT KO TO.
naaalala ko kasi kay Kiel yung bf ko. haha.  ;D ;D
so lame reason naman.
:) :)

Hahaha...hi eros...
Yes, sis na kame, may reklamo ka? hahaha....
Umpisa kasi. hahaha....to introduce the main characters pero magnanarrow down din yan. hahaha....Thank u. sana support mo til the end. :D
Oh? Kay Kiel? Bakit?
hahahaha...
GOD bless. :D

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« Reply #8 on: May 18, 2011, 11:44:39 am »
YES! sis na kami.  :P

okay. kami rin. :P

welcome sis.
sure2x. susubaaybayan ko to.  :)
pasyal ka rin minsan sa thread ko. ;)

egoistic din kasi yung bf ko noon ehh. :D :D :D
nabitin ka sa NO BOUNDARIES ko?


eto ang KARMA ko. O0
[the story next to NB]

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« Reply #9 on: May 18, 2011, 01:14:08 pm »
YES! sis na kami.  :P

okay. kami rin. :P

welcome sis.
sure2x. susubaaybayan ko to.  :)
pasyal ka rin minsan sa thread ko. ;)

egoistic din kasi yung bf ko noon ehh. :D :D :D

Sure sis...i will...
Thanks.
Ow...it must have been hard. hahahaha...joke lang.  :-X ;D ;D

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« Reply #10 on: May 18, 2011, 01:18:40 pm »
Sure sis...i will...
Thanks.
Ow...it must have been hard. hahahaha...joke lang.  :-X ;D ;D

THANK YOU SIS.  ;)

sinabi mo pa. Suupppeeerrr hard talaga sya. :D :D :D
nabitin ka sa NO BOUNDARIES ko?


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[the story next to NB]

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Hi guys... Thank you po sa mga susupport nito,
sa mga silent readers, thank you din. pero sana magingay din kau paminsan2x.  ;D ;D ;D
Di ako nangangain ng tao, you can comment anytime. Pls. hehe...

I'll be posting Chap.2 po kapag umabot na sa 4 ang known supporters po nitong story
and pag 7 na po kasama po ung Chap.3.
So guys, please? hehehe...
Thank you so much.
May GOD bless us all.
Have a great day. :D

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Hi guys... Thank you po sa mga susupport nito,
sa mga silent readers, thank you din. pero sana magingay din kau paminsan2x.  ;D ;D ;D
Di ako nangangain ng tao, you can comment anytime. Pls. hehe...

I'll be posting Chap.2 po kapag umabot na sa 4 ang known supporters po nitong story
and pag 7 na po kasama po ung Chap.3.
So guys, please? hehehe...
Thank you so much.
May GOD bless us all.
Have a great day. :D


nice. clap clap for you dear! will support this one.
really nice. daming POVs!  :D
grammar geekazoid. dreamer. aspiring writer. wanting to be either a lawyer or CFE or both. single by choice. program planner. conversationalist.

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nice. clap clap for you dear! will support this one.
really nice. daming POVs!  :D


Thank you so much Leighsha? Tama ba?  :-\ hehehe... :)
1 nalang Chap.2 na! hahaha... :D

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« Reply #14 on: May 19, 2011, 10:01:35 am »
THANK YOU SIS.  ;)

sinabi mo pa. Suupppeeerrr hard talaga sya. :D :D :D

Hahaha...atleast nasurvive mo sis...hahaha...matagal din kayo? hehe... (ok lng ba itanong?)
hehehe...
GOD bless us.

 

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