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Teaser:


Long ago at a certain place.

There was a lonely princess who lost her beloved one - the prince.

Thus, she devoted herself in making the perfect doll...her perfect prince.

A doll like his lost love - astounding and delicate than any human.

And she gave the doll a life.



Whenever a woman walked by, they would stop and stare at his magnificent beauty.

There were no proper words to describe him.

It's easy to understand why all the girls love him and want him to be by their side.

Still...

There is one thing he lacked...

Though he is alive, he lacked...
A HEART.



There were no concerns to the princess.

There was nothing wrong. Or so she thought.

For a heart in love would always need a love in return.

As there were always sadness and longing.

She could not truly give life to her beloved doll.



This beauty.

This delight.

This happiness.

It could be love...

If I could feel as a human does...
it would be love.



The endless suffering...

This deep loneliness...

This indescribable pain...

All of those things...

Could be love...




The Mischievous Doll








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« Last Edit: November 06, 2011, 10:34:16 pm by angelyka »
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Re: The Mischievous Doll
« Reply #1 on: May 09, 2011, 06:38:46 pm »
 

support..

wooh..

cool.. prologue :)
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Re: The Mischievous Doll
« Reply #2 on: May 09, 2011, 06:47:10 pm »
ang nice ng teaser. i lik it O0 support ko ito. farzy nga po pala :)

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Re: The Mischievous Doll
« Reply #3 on: May 09, 2011, 06:51:02 pm »
naaays. support! :)
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« Reply #4 on: May 09, 2011, 06:51:52 pm »
WOW!! I'm like ---->  :o Ang ganda! Support.  ;)
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« Reply #5 on: May 09, 2011, 08:24:06 pm »
I loved your prologue! Definitely a catch! ;)
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Re: The Mischievous Doll
« Reply #6 on: May 09, 2011, 08:51:25 pm »
The teaser is definitely interesting. :D

Gonna support this, btw I'm Juna! O0

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« Reply #7 on: May 09, 2011, 09:07:12 pm »
Awesome prologue! :) I will definitely support this! :)

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Re: The Mischievous Doll
« Reply #8 on: May 09, 2011, 09:28:12 pm »
i'm gonna support this. . nice nice. . .
like it. . .

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Re: The Mischievous Doll
« Reply #9 on: May 10, 2011, 08:54:14 am »
@ sunnyshine , @farzy, @ dkdc, @ bien, @ Ramona, @ Juna, @ poohtoxicity, @jheyemmo8

Salamat sa supporta.
Sana magustuhan niyo ang mga susunod na update.
Weird po ang story na ito.
Nagawa ko na yun ending pero wala pang gitna.
Ako na ang weird na author.  :D

Nice meeting all of you sana support nyo hanggang ending...
BTW, angel here.
Daan po kayo lagi sa story ko. :)
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Re: The Mischievous Doll
« Reply #10 on: May 10, 2011, 04:22:02 pm »
Prologue:




Until the day we meet again...


I promise you.





Will you save my life...

Or...

Will you take me away?




You...

Will be reborn.





And with that...

the person with a heartwarming smile

and a pure gentle soul

disappeared...




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It all started with something my friend Celine said.




“The 'mischievous doll' is up for auction.”




“Again?” Fiona asked.




“Mischievous doll?” I asked. Clueless on what they are talking about.




“Yup the one they say was possessed by a vampire spirit. They say it attacks people and sucks their blood. That's why it was being sold over and over again.” Celine explained. She really knows a lot of things about this doll though that's not something to be surprised as she is a doll collector herself.




“It keeps it place in the auction so we can assume there's some creepy curse on that doll.” Fiona answered. Well she's an internet geek. No latest trend, blogs, tech stuff that she doesn't know. She's like the walking Google. She's better than Twitter and Tumblr when it comes to the internet trend.



“Yeah that's what all my friends in the doll community are saying.” Celine replied.



Interesting isn't it?




Curiously I asked them.




“I'd like to see what it looks like.”I am a college student but hey I am a child at heart. Though I don't have dolls anymore I do have some stuff toys at home. Maybe if it's pretty I'll buy it. Tee Hee!




But honestly.... I was drowning to the creepy story surrounding the doll. Not that I believe in supernatural. I'm just addicted in solving mysteries. What really caught my attention is the idea of solving the mystery of that doll. To prove the rumors to be false.





Logically speaking supernatural phenomena is taboo for someone like me who believe that everything has a scientific basis / explanation. Yeah if Celine is an obsessed doll collector and literature lover; and Fiona is the internet geek; I, Ashikin is a fanatic of mystery, science and psychology. 


So...




“It's not that costly you know. Here... this is it.” I focus my full attention to the picture on the screen.







What the...? :o







Is this that mischievous doll that everyone thinks is so creepy?







How's he creepy?  :-\











He's beautiful. Magnificently beautiful.










That was the first time...







“I want this one.”








Yeah! I fell in love at first sight.








Package for Ms Ashikin Perez.
« Last Edit: September 11, 2011, 04:50:39 pm by angelyka »
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Re: The Mischievous Doll <Prologue: Package for Ashikin Perez>
« Reply #11 on: May 10, 2011, 04:36:47 pm »
first! :D
yeeey. may update na. :D
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Re: The Mischievous Doll <Prologue: Package for Ashikin Perez>
« Reply #12 on: May 10, 2011, 04:38:07 pm »
Nice. Doollll. Nice. Nice. Nice.
 :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Support .
Good liars always tell the truth. That's how good they are at lying.

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Re: The Mischievous Doll <Prologue: Package for Ashikin Perez>
« Reply #13 on: May 10, 2011, 05:49:15 pm »
first! :D
yeeey. may update na. :D
Ikaw nga ang first. :)
Yup wala akong magawa ko tinapos ko yun Prologue today.
Hindi ko lang sure kung okay sya medyo windang ako...
Okay ba ang update?  ;D

Nice. Doollll. Nice. Nice. Nice.
 :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Support .

Yehey! Thanks Rhain.
Do you like dolls din?
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Re: The Mischievous Doll <Prologue: Package for Ashikin Perez>
« Reply #14 on: May 10, 2011, 06:05:53 pm »
Ikaw nga ang first. :)
Yup wala akong magawa ko tinapos ko yun Prologue today.
Hindi ko lang sure kung okay sya medyo windang ako...
Okay ba ang update?  ;D

Okay nga eh. Apruuuub! :D
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