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Created for Him:22nd Creation POSTED! page 24
« on: May 01, 2011, 09:33:21 am »
Created for Him



“Someday you'll be marrying him. You should be the perfect wife for Caspian. Always remember Winter, there will be no other guy in your life. It will always be Caspian. Okay baby?”

“Yes Mommy, I will be a good girl. I will not think of any other guy. I will not look at any other guy. I will only love Caspian. Caspian will be the only guy in my life.”


Siguro nagtataka kayo noh? Ako rin kasi eh. Bakit nga ba sinisiksik sa utak ng isang 6 years old na bata ang pagpapakasal? At isipin pang nanay niya mismo ang nagsisiksik nito. Simple lang kasi ang storya diyan eh. Arranged Marriage, tama kayo. Yun nga to, ang kaibahan lang kasi sa murang edad na anim na taon, sinimulan na akong hubugin para maging perfect wife para kay Caspian.


Bakit sa dinami dami ng batang babae eh ako pa ang napili? Ganito kasi ang kwento…



Characters:
Click the names to see them. Imagination purposes

Winter Eliss Celestine

Caspian Erkin Rhodes

Icest Nicolas Tuazon

Cramae Lizette Graysen

Summer Bliss Celestine

Ethan Michael Traine

Liara Mia Lazaro

Heather Onyx Tuazon










hindi ko alam kung bakit ko naisip ang story na to. basta bigla siyang nag pop. nagulat na lang ako tinatype ko na pala. try ko lang. kung wala magbabasa, hindi ko na lang itutuloy. wala namang masama kung susubukan ko di ba?
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« Reply #1 on: May 01, 2011, 10:41:58 am »
Hi!!! I'll support this for you. ;)

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Re: The Heavenly Vengeance
« Reply #2 on: May 01, 2011, 12:49:40 pm »
Hi!!! I'll support this for you. ;)

thanks! yay. name niyo po? hehe

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Re: The Heavenly Vengeance
« Reply #3 on: May 01, 2011, 07:37:32 pm »
kailangan ko pala ng characters. meron na, kaso, haha, dahil biglaan to, hindi ko siya napaghandaan. hahaha  :D

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Re: Created for Him
« Reply #4 on: May 01, 2011, 08:31:44 pm »
dahil hindi na babagay ang The Heavenly Vengeance para sa story, pinalitan ko na lang siya. sa ngayon, baka temporary pa rin yun. haha, hindi ako makaisip ng matinong title

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Re: Created for Him
« Reply #5 on: May 04, 2011, 06:35:08 pm »
Ate elle! support ko ito  :)

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« Reply #6 on: May 04, 2011, 06:40:38 pm »
Will support this. :) Jeh here, BTW.
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« Reply #7 on: May 04, 2011, 08:00:18 pm »
Ate elle! support ko ito  :)

hehe. salamat sis. :) yay! hehe, ipon muna readers. kahit hanggang 5. haha.  ;)

Will support this. :) Jeh here, BTW.

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michelle. elle na lang para cute. haha  ;D

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Created for Him: Chapter 1 `posted. Wanted: Readers? *new*
« Reply #8 on: May 07, 2011, 08:40:10 pm »
1st Creation



I was sitting in our garden when I heard footsteps. I was pretty sure it was Caspian, he always came at this time of the day. To visit his future wife. I was still getting use to that idea. It’s all my Mom would talk about. I wonder why he chose me, my older sister Summer is way prettier. This guy must have an eye defect at the age of 9.
I can feel his presence behind me. Then, I felt something cold touching my neck. When I looked to find out what it is, I saw a silver diamond studded  star pendant in a simple silver necklace.(click me). I looked at Caspian and he smiled at me.

”What’s this?”

”Last time I checked I was sure it’s a necklace. Spell Sarcasm? C-A-S-P-I-A-N!!

”I know that, what I mean is why are you giving me this?”

”I want it to remind you that you’re the star in my life right now, I can appreciate you’re beauty shining oh so brightly, I can feel that you’re in my reach, but the truth is you’re to far away, and all I can do is admire you’re beauty from afar. And wish that some day you’ll be mine.” What was he talking about? I looked at him, and I was pretty sure he sensed that I didn’t understand what he was talking about ”I just want you to wear it, to let people know that you are special, and that someday the two of us will be married. Someday I guess you will understand what I’ve said, okay pumpkin?”

”Have anyone told you that you act and speak to mature for your age?” To my surprise he laughed.

”Yah, I get that a lot. What can I do I was raised this way. Before I forget, don’t you have a thank you gift for me?”Just trust on Caspian to be serious in this situations.

”None actually, I didn’t know that you’d give me a gift.”I shooked my head and looked at my foot.

”A kiss would do.”I was dumbfounded. A kiss? Isn’t that to much to ask. ”You look as if I’m threating to kill you. A kiss on the cheek will do, is that to much to ask for? I mean, we will be married someday.”He does have a point their so before I lost my courage, I kissed him, and ran as fast I could. I could hear Caspian’s faith laugh.




Memories. That was one of my most unforgetable childhood memories.

 I was six at that time. Now I’m seventeen. One more year and I’ll be of legal age, and that means, my marriage to Caspian will take place. How on earth did we got engaged? It’s pretty simple really, his mom told him that he will pick a girl, then his mom would teach that girl on how to be the perfect wife, they we’re planning to adopt a girl to be trained to be his wife, but since that would be illegal, his mom decided to make it a marriage of convience. He would choose from daughters of business associates of Rhodes Stone Co. And when they came to our house, as my dad introduced me and my sister Summer. He quickly pointed his finger to my direction and said ”She’s my perfect wife.”.

I didn’t exactly got what he was talking about, I was six for crying out loud. But when my mom came into my room and talked to me about it, I just obeyed what they wanted me to do. All my life I followed this rules:

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How to be the perfect wife for Caspian:

Rule #1: There will be no other man in your life aside from Caspian.

Rule #2: Must know all  types of household chores.

Rule #3: Should know how to cook all his favorite meals.

Rule #4: Don’t be a nag, let him be. Just be supportive and understanding.

Rule #5: Take care of him. By all means.

Rule #6: Must also be a business woman type of wife, not just household type.

Rule #7: If he kisses other girls, don’t be jealous, he’ll be yours and he will remain loyal to you at all cost.

Rule #8: Always see to it that he has a healthy life style.

Rule #9:Be by his side in times of trials and hardship.

Rule #10: Always look beautiful. Be smart. And speak in a mannerly tone.


You’ll have an idea on how controlled my life has been. I am not allowed to date anyone. While Caspian have had lots of girlfriends. It’s really unfair in my part. But what can I say? I’ll be marrying one of the hottest guys who have graced the halls of McKleins Special High.


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Re: Created for Him: Chapter 1 `posted. Wanted: Readers? *new*
« Reply #9 on: May 07, 2011, 11:31:10 pm »
Hi! I love the names of your characters and the story line is good! Keep it coming! ;)
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Re: Created for Him: Chapter 1 `posted. Wanted: Readers? *new*
« Reply #10 on: May 08, 2011, 09:37:14 am »
Hi! I love the names of your characters and the story line is good! Keep it coming! ;)

yay! keep the comments coming, they inspire me a lot.  ;)
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« Reply #11 on: May 08, 2011, 05:17:28 pm »
Grabe naman. Ginagawang business ang marriage. Tsk, bakit ba ganyan ang mayayaman?!
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« Reply #12 on: May 08, 2011, 07:06:41 pm »
Grabe naman. Ginagawang business ang marriage. Tsk, bakit ba ganyan ang mayayaman?!

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Re: Created for Him: Chapter 1 `posted. Wanted: Readers? *new*
« Reply #13 on: May 08, 2011, 08:34:40 pm »
Hi sis! I'm here na ;) Thanks pala for being nice! ^^ Btw, pagpatuloy mo lang story mo! It's so cute! I like all the characters' names! Super kakaiba. Halatang pinagisipan. ;) Even the story itself! ;) Nakakatuwa and at the same time nakakainis ng onte si Caspian kasi medyo demanding ang guy may rules pa!  ;D Pero cute naman ng tawag niya na Pumpkin! ;) HIHI.

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« Reply #14 on: May 08, 2011, 08:41:43 pm »
Hi sis! I'm here na ;) Thanks pala for being nice! ^^ Btw, pagpatuloy mo lang story mo! It's so cute! I like all the characters' names! Super kakaiba. Halatang pinagisipan. ;) Even the story itself! ;) Nakakatuwa and at the same time nakakainis ng onte si Caspian kasi medyo demanding ang guy may rules pa!  ;D Pero cute naman ng tawag niya na Pumpkin! ;) HIHI.

nakakatuwa ang comment mo. nakakataba ng heart. haha
hindi si caspian ang demanding. si mama niya, haha.
dmugo utak ko sa kakaisip ng mga an. haha, joke. appreciate ko comment mo iya. hope this wont be the last

 

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