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ZYAiNE

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Better thαn Before ♥ Chαpter 6 My Virginity
« on: April 06, 2011, 11:34:47 pm »
Better than Before

"nothing is permanent but change..."


















Nerd + Fat + Shy type = That's the old ME

Yea. That's me before, but now I am different.

Wise + Sexy + Pretty + Talented + Famous = Totally ME



I am BETTER than before...


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C H A R A C T E RS



Zeth Gabriel Maurer
Zoe Porsche Sy
Keith Jasper Sy
Amber Ishe Aquino
Selena Du
Peter Shane Young

other characters will be added soon.
Click their names to see their pictures.

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| mikan35 | beriiXD | nitchie061215 | i.dont.have.a.name |
| elleellirama | x-iRis-x | anji07 | dj06 | converse_chq |
| sweetlover13 | dj06 | Vehement_  | badgirl03 |




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I hope you'll like my story. :)
Comments, and suggestions are highly appreciated. ;)
« Last Edit: September 22, 2011, 09:14:28 am by ZYAiNE »
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Re: Better thαn Before ♥ reαders ?
« Reply #1 on: April 07, 2011, 03:12:02 am »
Wooh! Me likey~ ♥  ;)
Feeling ko matitripan ko ang kwentong ito...
SUPPORT! SUPPORT!  :D
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Re: Better thαn Before ♥ Prologue reαders ?
« Reply #2 on: April 07, 2011, 11:19:31 am »
Prologue


 “Babe, wake up.”

“Hmm..”

“BAAAABBBEEEE!”

“Alright! Im AWW. >:( ” LOL  ;D

“Argh! What are you doing here! Can’t you see that I’m still sleeping? Tignan mo nauntog tuloy ako. Kapag to nagkabukol lagot ka sakin! >:(” Cute niya talaga pag bagong gising.

“HAHAHA you are really so cute babe. ;)” Then I pinched her cheeks.

“Let’s go downstairs so we can eat now :).”

“Fine I’m coming after 5 mi Zzzzz” She really loves to sleep that’s why she’s getting bigger. Bigger = Fatter  ::)

By the way, I am Keith Jasper Sy, 18 years old, brother of Zoe  8). Yea I’m her brother NOT her boyfriend. LOL ;D Maybe you got confused because I called her “babe” right? I got it in the movie Babe in the City. I call her that way so she can remember that she’s fat. Maybe it’s mean but it’s my way to help her realize that she needs to have a diet. She’s really a fat girl everyone teases her even us. But it’s nothing to her; in fact she doesn't even care on what we say. She’s just focus on what she wants especially FOOD and SLEEP. :-\
In our family she’s the only one who has a waist line of 34 even though she’s only 16. ::) I hope and praying that she can find her motivation to have a diet. Coz she’s really pretty. :D

Zoe’s POV

*Ting Tinining Ting Tinining* Cute ng tunog ng alarm ko noh? ::)

“ARGH! Gutom na ako. Makababa na nga.”

Pagkababa ko wala ng tao sa dining table. Nasaan na kaya sila? ???

“Yaya, where’s mom and dad?”

“Umalis ho sila kasama ang kuya mo.”

“Ah ganun po ba? Alam niyo po ba kung saan sila nagpunta?”

“Hindi po.” Hmm saan kaya sila nagpunta?  :-\

“Aa ganun po ba? Ano po palang ulam? :D” Sana fried chicken. Please ? :D

“Steamed fish po.” Ouch! Huhu bakit isda? :'(

“Wala na po bang iba :'(?”

“Ayun lang po sabi ni Sir Keith na lutuin ko para daw po sa diet niyo.” NAKU ! yung lalaking yun talaga. Bakit ba gustong gusto ako nun magdiet e CUTE kaya ako tapos huggable pa. CHUBBY lang naman ako ha? HINDI AKO MATABA. Hmp  >:(

“Sige po salamat yaya. :( ”Hayy ..papadeliver nalang ako ::) ..HAHAHAHA

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WAiT!!!

 Nakalimutan kong magpakilala. ehem! ;D
 I'm Zoe Porsche Sy, 16 years old, 1st year college.
Sabi ng parents ko maganda daw ako ~ siyempre naniniwala ako dun ;)
 I excel in Academics but not in extracurricular activities. Shy type kasi ako.

yun lang muna makikilala niyo rin ako pagdating ng panahon ;)
 
 so lets continue...

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CLiCK CLiCK CLiCK CLiCK CLiCK

Click un sa mouse ko. Sa site kasi ako ng McDonalds mag order. Kunti nga lang ung inorder ko e. ::)

12 pcs Chicken Nuggets
1 Big Mac
2 McFlurry Oreo
2 Large Fries
1 Monster Coke Float

Yan lang naman. ;) Brunch naman kasi ung kakainin ko kaya ok lng yan. Hindi nakakataba. Buti nga sinusunod ko na ung mokong na un.
Speaking of that guy.. Hmm nasaan kaya siya ngayon? ???


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Quote from: mikan35 on April 07, 2011, 03:12:02 am
Wooh! Me likey~ ♥  ;)
Feeling ko matitripan ko ang kwentong ito...
SUPPORT! SUPPORT!  :D



Thankyou hope you'll really like it. Yay for you  :D
 
« Last Edit: April 19, 2011, 09:26:16 am by ZYAiNE »
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Re: Better thαn Before ♥ Prologue reαders ?
« Reply #3 on: April 07, 2011, 12:37:17 pm »
Naks. Haha. Mgging sexy siya?  :D
Ate~ pwedeng mag'suggest? Hihi.
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Re: Better thαn Before ♥ Prologue reαders ?
« Reply #4 on: April 07, 2011, 09:33:41 pm »
Quote from: beriiXD on April 07, 2011, 12:37:17 pm
Naks. Haha. Mgging sexy siya?  :D
Ate~ pwedeng mag'suggest? Hihi.

sure . ano pwede mong ma-suggest ?  :)
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Re: Better thαn Before ♥ Prologue reαders ?
« Reply #5 on: April 08, 2011, 12:25:33 am »
Quote
12 pcs Chicken Nuggets
1 Big Mac
2 McFlurry Oreo
2 Large Fries
1 Monster Coke Float

lang naman daw~  ;D dame nyan toL! jok! HAHAHAH!
Ang kyut ng chapter 1~ ♥
LIKE KO NA TALGA.
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Re: Better thαn Before ♥ Prologue reαders ?
« Reply #6 on: April 12, 2011, 03:13:41 pm »
alam ko namang matakaw ako pero di naman ganyan  :o hahahaha
hey sis. new reader here. im nitchie  :D

post the first chap na  ;)
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Re: Better thαn Before ♥ Prologue reαders ?
« Reply #7 on: April 12, 2011, 03:21:13 pm »
support! pwedeng magsuggest? pwede po?
gawin mo nalang eh iblack mo po yung POVs nila para po madali sanang mabasa, kasi mahirap basahin lalo na po yung kay Zoe. tapos po lagyan mo nalang po ng title na
Zoe's POV.. mga ganun po.. hehe! suggestion lang po. pero ikaw po bahala.. basta support ko ito  ;D
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Re: Better thαn Before ♥ Prologue reαders ?
« Reply #8 on: April 12, 2011, 03:29:32 pm »
haha. akala ko 12 Chicken. as in Chicken lang, may nuggets pala. oh well, konti lang naman yun ah. haha. nice one. gonna read this. nakakaexcite pagpumayat na siya.
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Re: Better thαn Before ♥ Prologue reαders ?
« Reply #9 on: April 12, 2011, 03:33:16 pm »
Mahirap talaga mag pigil lalo"t na masarap talaga kumain :))
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Re: Better thαn Before ♥ Chαpter 1
« Reply #10 on: April 13, 2011, 03:10:35 pm »
1

Zoe's POV

I'm here in Starbucks Tagaytay. Sipping a grande Chocolate Cream Chip and eating a  Cookies and Cream cake. I usually go here to study, mas relax kasi ako dito kesa sa library. Kasi dito may food habang nagrereview sa library hindi pwede kumain. tsk tsk



BUURRPP!!!

Nagtinginan mga tao sakin . :-\   WAAAHHH nakakahiya  :-[

"Sorry  :-[" Alis na ako dito nakakahiya sobra  :(

"Manong uwi na ho tayo. :-\"

"Sa bahay niyo ho?" Ay hindi po . Sa bahay niyo po Manong.  >:( Hayy si Manong talaga oh .  :-\

Nag nod nalang ako.


fast forward...


Monday na naman. GV please be with me.  ::)

"BAAABBBEE" Hay naku! Siya na naman.

"Kuya naman e. *pout* "

"Oh sorry babe. But I really love calling you that way  ;) At para marinig nilang ikaw ang babe ko  8)"

"Tara ihahatid na kita sa room mo.  :) " Sigh .Weird talaga niya mang-aasar tapos biglang magiging sweet.

"Oh pumasok ka na. Ingat ka ok?  * :-* sa forehead * "  :-[

"Okay Kuya. You too . And Thankyou :)"

"Your always welcome  8)" sweet talaga ng kuya ko kahit inaasar niya ako minsan. Di ko tuloy mapigilang kiligin kahit kuya ko siya.   :D




"OMG OMG OMG Ang hot talaga ng kuya mo." Mga fans ni Kuya  ;D

" ??? " Yan lang sagot ko sa kanila  :P

" May girlfriend na ba siya?"

"Alam ko po wala pa. Pero may nililigawan po yata siya." Ang galang ko no?  ;D

"Ayy ganun ba? Paano na kami?  :'(" Nakakatawa naman sila :P Obsessed dun sa mokong na un  ;D

"Madami pa naman po diyang mas gwapo sa kuya ko e  ;). Tsaka di naman po siya ganun ka HOT  ::)" Pano kaya nila nasasabing HOT nun e ang tingting niya?  ???

Dumating na rin ung professor namin kaya nagsiupo na kaming lahat.



After 2 hours uwian na  :D Yey makakauwi na rin .

"Bye Zoe  :)"

"Bye Selena  :)" Ang ganda niya talaga  :D Buti pa siya mabait at nakikipagkaibigan sakin kahit napakaganda niya ::).

"ZOOEEE !" 

"WAAAHH!"

" :o wag ka naman ganyan sakin PS gusto mo ata ako atakihin sa puso e.  >:("

Siya nga pala si Peter Shane Young, ang bestfriend ko. :D Nagkakasundo kami sa maraming bagay at halos sabay na kaming lumaki.

"Pasensya na bes. Binubully na naman kasi nila ako e. :(" Lagi siyang binubully dahil sa itsura niya. Lalo na't kulot pa siya.  :-\

"Wag mo nalang sila pansinin okay? Nandito naman ako e. Tsaka maniwala ka saking GWAPO ka at MAGANDA ako ok?  ;)  8)"

"Maganda ka ba bes? ???"

" Bakit hindi ba ?>:("

"Sabi ko nga maganda ka  :P"

"Bespren nga talaga kita  ;D Sige uwi na ako ha? Ingat ka din sa pag uwi mo."

"Sige thankyou bes. Bye :)"


at our house ...


"Oh bakit ngayon ka lang umuwi?"
 

"  :o  :o  :o "

"Oh bakit? Di ka makapagsalita diyan? ???" OMG kuya ko ba tong nasa harap ko?  :o

" Am I HOT? That's why your stunned ?  8)"

"Hindi noh!  >:( Tingting ka nga e. " Pero totoo nga. Ang HOT nga ni Kuya.  :D

Naka-topless kasi siya  :D eto oh . CLiCK ME Kung kayo nasa lugar ko ano ba magiging reaksyon niyo ?   ::)  :D


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Re: Better thαn Before ♥ Prologue reαders ?
« Reply #11 on: April 13, 2011, 03:17:25 pm »
Quote from: nitchie061215 on April 12, 2011, 03:13:41 pm
alam ko namang matakaw ako pero di naman ganyan  :o hahahaha
hey sis. new reader here. im nitchie  :D

post the first chap na  ;)

hi sis. thankyou for reading my story hope u like it  ;)

Quote from: elleellirama on April 12, 2011, 03:29:32 pm
haha. akala ko 12 Chicken. as in Chicken lang, may nuggets pala. oh well, konti lang naman yun ah. haha. nice one. gonna read this. nakakaexcite pagpumayat na siya.

Oo nga eh. DIET pa daw siya nun :P

Quote from: x-iRis-x on April 12, 2011, 03:33:16 pm
Mahirap talaga mag pigil lalo"t na masarap talaga kumain :))

I agree with you sis. Sarap talagang kumain :D

Quote from: i.dont.have.a.name on April 12, 2011, 03:21:13 pm
support! pwedeng magsuggest? pwede po?
gawin mo nalang eh iblack mo po yung POVs nila para po madali sanang mabasa, kasi mahirap basahin lalo na po yung kay Zoe. tapos po lagyan mo nalang po ng title na
Zoe's POV.. mga ganun po.. hehe! suggestion lang po. pero ikaw po bahala.. basta support ko ito  ;D

hi sis. thankyou for your suggestion and for the support  :D

Quote from: mikan35 on April 08, 2011, 12:25:33 am
lang naman daw~  ;D dame nyan toL! jok! HAHAHAH!
Ang kyut ng chapter 1~ ♥
LIKE KO NA TALGA.

wow thankyou sis :-*

YAY for all of you  :-*




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Re: Better thαn Before ♥ Chαpter 1
« Reply #12 on: April 13, 2011, 03:24:47 pm »
Shocks ang hot ni Jasper! HE IS MINE NA OKAY! Kapangalan nya ang crush ko WIIIIIHHHH!!!! DROOOOLLLLLSSS!!!!  :D
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Re: Better thαn Before ♥ Chαpter 1
« Reply #13 on: April 13, 2011, 04:17:20 pm »
ahahaha. baka pagpantasyahan niya ang kuya niya niyan. haha. kaya palabasin mo na sin bidang guy na partner ni Zoe na becoming sexy na. hehe. nice update. nakakatuwa :)
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Re: Better thαn Before ♥ Chαpter 1
« Reply #14 on: April 13, 2011, 06:53:40 pm »
Ang gwapo ng kuya ni Zoe!! :D Akin na lang sya! :D hahaha xDD

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