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Author Topic: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 26 TEASER  (Read 5522 times)

jheyemm08

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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 23 na po [NEW READERZ PLZ!]
« Reply #150 on: January 01, 2012, 06:52:02 pm »
Ano ba naman yan Lynielle? Selos agad? Wala ngang namamagitan sa inyo ni Sanisha maliban sa pagpapanggap niyo na magpapakasal sila. Ugh. Nakakainis lang 'tong si Lynielle. Bahala ka sa buhay mo. Pag ikaw nilaglag ni Sanisha sa harap ng tatay mo pagsisihan mo rin yang cold treatment mo!

tama. . .hahaha
kawawa niyan c lynielle
pag tlga nilaglag siya
sanisha. . .

at eto pa
anu kea ang
mggng papel n
andrew s kanila

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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 23 na po [NEW READERZ PLZ!]
« Reply #151 on: January 04, 2012, 07:54:21 am »
more update please!!!!!!!!!!!!! . . i miss lynielle hahaha . . ang cute ng gesture niya kinikilig ako

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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 23 na po [NEW READERZ PLZ!]
« Reply #152 on: January 08, 2012, 02:19:01 pm »
more update please!!!!!!!!!!!!! . . i miss lynielle hahaha . . ang cute ng gesture niya kinikilig ako

hayaan m ngawa n
ku ng draft. .
wla p kc ku
tym mgtype eh

jheyemm08

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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 23 na po [NEW READERZ PLZ!]
« Reply #153 on: January 20, 2012, 04:38:34 pm »
guyz i'm really really
sorry kung hindi ako
makapag update
agad. . . .sobrang busy
hindi na nga ko
halos makatulog ehhh
be patient po
mag-uupdate din ako mga sis

kung wala p kayo mabasa naun
try niyo po ung isa kong story
yung link nasa first page

title
blinding lies

maganda rin po un
hehehehe hope madalaw niyo po sia

thanks mga SIS

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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 23 na po [NEW READERZ PLZ!]
« Reply #154 on: January 27, 2012, 03:20:30 pm »
hi im sha
im new po d2
support ku pu 2
mgnda po cia. . .
pagp2loy m po ate

jheyemm08

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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 23 na po [NEW READERZ PLZ!]
« Reply #155 on: January 28, 2012, 06:29:59 pm »
hi im sha
im new po d2
support ku pu 2
mgnda po cia. . .
pagp2loy m po ate

hi sha. .
ang nice naman
parehas kau
halos ng name
ng bida ntn. .
hayaan m. .
mlapit ku n 2 maupdate
d kc ku
msyado busy eh. .
untng tiis nlng. . .
tnx
tlaga

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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 23 na po [NEW READERZ PLZ!]
« Reply #156 on: January 29, 2012, 03:03:09 am »
Waaaaa. Ang gandaaaa! Can't wait for the next update! :D

jheyemm08

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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 23 na po [NEW READERZ PLZ!]
« Reply #157 on: January 29, 2012, 05:49:59 pm »
Waaaaa. Ang gandaaaa! Can't wait for the next update! :D

hantaray m gurl
nbsa m n agad. . ?
hehehe
thankz tlga s pag support. .
pag may mga tan0ng
k . . about
s story
d2 s CC
or kht saan
go lang. .
friends n tau gurl
hehehe

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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 23 na po [NEW READERZ PLZ!]
« Reply #158 on: January 29, 2012, 08:20:22 pm »
hantaray m gurl
nbsa m n agad. . ?
hehehe
thankz tlga s pag support. .
pag may mga tan0ng
k . . about
s story
d2 s CC
or kht saan
go lang. .
friends n tau gurl
hehehe

Thaaaaank you! :) Yep. Binasa ko agad siya kagabi, di ako tumigil hanggang di ko naabot yung last chap. :D Hehe. :)
Sana pag bumalik na si Brye inlove na sina Sanisha tas Xyre sa isa't isa at todo selos na siya. Bwahahaha. :))

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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 23 na po [NEW READERZ PLZ!]
« Reply #159 on: January 30, 2012, 02:07:55 pm »
Thaaaaank you! :) Yep. Binasa ko agad siya kagabi, di ako tumigil hanggang di ko naabot yung last chap. :D Hehe. :)
Sana pag bumalik na si Brye inlove na sina Sanisha tas Xyre sa isa't isa at todo selos na siya. Bwahahaha. :))

thankz tlga gurl
s pagbbsa n2
nkta k n ung iyo
uumpshn ku n cia
hehehe

anu nga pala name m?

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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 23 na po [NEW READERZ PLZ!]
« Reply #160 on: January 30, 2012, 02:51:11 pm »
thankz tlga gurl
s pagbbsa n2
nkta k n ung iyo
uumpshn ku n cia
hehehe

anu nga pala name m?

Thank youuu. :D Hmm. Zsusa here. :)

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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 23 na po [NEW READERZ PLZ!]
« Reply #161 on: January 31, 2012, 05:55:12 pm »
Thank youuu. :D Hmm. Zsusa here. :)

zsusa tlga name
m0. . ?
cute naman
naaastigan aku
hehe

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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 23 na po [NEW READERZ PLZ!]
« Reply #162 on: February 12, 2012, 09:53:57 pm »
zsusa tlga name
m0. . ?
cute naman
naaastigan aku
hehe


Yep. Zsusa talaga name ko. :D Hehe. :)

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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 23 na po [NEW READERZ PLZ!]
« Reply #163 on: March 05, 2012, 04:52:39 pm »
omg talaga gustong gusto ko na ulit
ito i update kaso ang daming problem
hu hu hu hu
sana po makapag hantay po kau
lapit na po bakasyon
tatadtarin ko po kayo
promise
hehehehehe

LOve you mga sis

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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 23 na po [NEW READERZ PLZ!]
« Reply #164 on: March 19, 2012, 08:47:38 pm »
Chapter 24: Mama Mia

      “Darn it,” Lynielle hissed inwardly. He can’t believe the man had the guts to pretend they didn’t know each other. He has trying to calm himself but every time Andrew’s grinning face flashes in his mind, he wanted to turn back and punch him in the face. The only reason he keeps on going is the innocent woman beside him. isa pa ito sa nagpapasakit ng ulo niya.  Why was Andrew talking to her? Not to mention, what are they talking about? It must have been a coincidence, but knowing Andrew, coincidence is just a word.

   He is really furious. Andrew and he were rivals since they first saw each other, since they fall in love with the same girl.
   
   Lynielle turn the car around the corner and stop in front of their house. He didn’t move and so is Sanisha. He took a lung full of air; he wanted to calm himself before he went inside the house. he balled his fist that was on top of his legs. The next that happened was totally unexpected. He felt a hand over his. He looked down and saw Sanisha’s gentle fingers touching his paling knuckles. He shifted his gaze and looks straight in her eyes.

   “You’re shaking is there anything wrong?” she asked full of anxiety.

   Lynielle look back at his hands and true enough he is shaking, shaking with anger.

   “I’m fine,” he mumbled. Akala niya tatahimik na ito ulit, but the next thing she did shock the hell out of him. She lean closer and wrap her arms around him. Dahil sa gulat, hindi siya nakapag-react agad. The hug was soothing and full of assurance. Her body felt so fragile and soft against his. He felt so warm and secure. Little does he notice was that his body is starting to relax. The shaking started to subside. His heart started growing crazy, his breathing heavy. He could feel every muscle in his body tensing. Before he could do something he’ll regret he gently push her away. Lynielle was glad Sanisha doesn’t notice anything.

   “Ah . . . Lynielle,” she cought his attention again. “Pasensya ka na. Sorry talaga hindi ko sinasadyang gisingin ka kanina. I should have asked Nana Leng bago ko gumawa ng kung anu-ano.” Sanisha was busy playing with his fingers while she was talking.

   “No, ako ang dapat humingi sayo ng tawad. I shouldn’t have shouted at you like that. Bago ka lang dito wala ka pa masyadong alam. I’m sorry I acted like a fool.”

   Sanisha looked sideways to meet Lynielle’s eyes. “Bahay mo yun, karapatan mong magalit. Nagging masyado lang talaga kong sensitive.”

   Lynielle shook his head. “Babae ka, only fools do that, and I admit I have been a fool. I’m sorry.”

   She saw sincerity in his eyes. how could she not accept such apology. She nodded her head as smile sprad on her face.

   “We should go nagugutom na ko.”

   “Yeah ako nalang magbubukas ng gate Lynielle,” she sighed.

   Bago pa siya makatutol ay nakababa na ito ng sasakyan. He watches her from his car. Her every movement, even the simple tucking of her hair seems so full of grace. Has she always been like that? Or did he just notice it now? But why? Kaninang nakita niya ito kasama si Andrew, hindi lang ang galit sa kasama nito ang naramdaman niya. Meron pang isa, he just couldn’t name it. He has some idea but he knows they were all absurd.

   He started the engine again to park the car inside. Pagkatapus nun ay bumababa na rin siya, Sanisha waited for him at the door para sabay na silang pumasok.

   Pagkapasok na pagkapasok nila isang nakabibinging tili ang bumungad sa kanila. And they both watch a woman running towards them.

   “Ma, what are you doing here?” he burst out of shock.

   “I heard a very good news from your dad last night. Hindi na nga ko makapaghintay makita ka eh!” Lynielle’s mom answered cheerfully. After that she turns her attention toward her. “Are you Sanisha hija?” Sanisha only nodded. She was beyond shock to answer. She can’t really believe na nasa harapan na niya ngayon ang mama ni Lynielle. She swallowed hard.

   Another deafening scream escaped her lips, kasabay nun ang pagyakap nito sa kanya. She looks at Lynielle to silently asking for his help.

   “Ma ano ba nasasakal na siya,” pigil nito sa kanyang ina.

   “Ay sorry natuwa lang ako. Hindi talaga ko makapaniwala eh. Napag-usapan niyo na ba ang kasal? I cannot believe you hide something like this to me, Lynielle” Mrs. De Guzman said looking a little hurt.

   “Ma anong pinagsasabi mo, at please tigilan mo na si Sanisha,” pigil ni Lynielle sa kamay ng ina nito na nakapulupot sa braso niya.

   “But seriously hijo kailan ang kasal?” Sanisha’s eyes bulge out in shock. Kasal? Hindi nila napag-usapan ni Lynielle ang tungkol sa kasal. Bakit kailangan ng kasal? Na tetension na talaga siya. She was glad when Lynielle took her hand from his mothers grasp.

   “Ma pwede ba! ni hindi ka pa nga niya kilala eh kasal na agad ang bukang bibig mo.”Lynielle shook his head in disbelief. “Sanisha this is my mother, Patsy De Guzman. Ma this is Sanisha.”

   Sanisha smile nodded. “Nice meeting you po ma’am,”

   “Anong ma’am, ma’am hindi ko yata yan matatanggap. Call me mommy ok?”

   Sanisha gaze at Lynielle to ask him what to do. When Lynielle nodded to her, she return her gaze to his mom and smile.
   




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