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Author Topic: Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 26 TEASER  (Read 5522 times)

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« Reply #15 on: April 01, 2011, 04:03:18 pm »
" wag po sana kayong maoffend. .
okay lang rin kung di nio na babaguhin hehehe

Brye[pronounce as Brai] po yung name niya. .
Hindi po Bryle, :-[
galing po kasi yun sa Bryian. . pinaikli lang. .





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« Reply #16 on: April 01, 2011, 08:14:05 pm »
Shocks :D haha. Mas malimit ko kasing nakikita at naririnig yung 'Bryle ' na name. naku soryy ahhh..  :D :D

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« Reply #17 on: April 02, 2011, 04:43:00 am »
" Jeez ..still waitin' 4 da' next chapter  ::)

" Mhay , I think there was somethin' wrong in my link ------> ang hirap i-explain .. pki-click na lang pls ..  :-[

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« Reply #18 on: April 02, 2011, 03:36:49 pm »
hindi alam kung magugustuhan niyo ang chapter na to. .
inaantok na kasi ako ng ginawa ko to eh. . hehehe
so uunahan ko na kayo. .
sorry ah. .medyo boring siya




Chapter 2:True Friend


      “Hey, anong problema?” said Laila after taking the sit next to Sanisha. They have decided to meet at the mall after Sanisha called her. It has been a week since the incident happened, and since then Brye hasn’t called her yet. Ayaw niyang mag-sip ng masama, but she’s getting a little scared. Sino bang hindi, di ba?  Something happened between you and your boyfriend, and then out of the blue bigla nalang siyang di magpapakita sayo. “Bakit bigla bigla ka na lang nagpapatawag ng meeting,” she said smiling.

      “Have you seen Brye?” she said after exhaling.

      “Yan ka na naman sa pa-english english mo eh. At tsaka bakit sa akin mo hinahanap yung boyfriend mo, aso ko ba yun?”

      “Stop it Laila, seryoso ako.”

      “And so am I. Oh ayan tuloy tignan mo napapa-english na rin ako.” She said and at the same time scratching her head.

      Sanisha started crying. She tried to compose herself, but tears keeps on flowing. She has never been a strong girl. She was a pampered princess, spoiled by her parents. They have given her everything she needed. Sheltered her from all the pain the world could possibly give her. They have showered her with love, and let her live a privilege life. So ayan ngayon, hindi siya natutong lumaban sa buhay. She has never known the cruelty of the world, not until now. Ngayong nasasaktan na siya. “I don’t know what else to do, Laila.”

     “Nag-away ba kayo?”ani niya, habang awang awa sa itsura ng kaibigan. “Ano ba kasing problema?”

     “We broke up last week. I broke up with him.”

     “What? Bakit? Natauhan ka na ba?”

     “He . . . he . . . may nangyari sa aming dalawa!”

     “And so? Nasa modern times na tayo hija, hindi ka si Maria Clara. Nasa panahon ka kung saan uso na ang premarital sex.”

     “I know ok? But still he could at least ask me, I would have given it to him. Doesn’t he know I love him so much I’m willing to give up my virginity just for him? But I want him to admit that he planned everything. I want him to apologize. I want his SORRY. Hindi yung nagmamatigas siya, tapos gagawa pa siya ng kwentong pinikot ko siya. Gusto kong panindigan niya yung ginawa niya, pati yung magiging bunga nun kung meron man. Kilala naman niya si papa eh. Gusto ko harapin niya si papa at sabihin niyang, haharapin niya kung ano man ang mangyari.”she said with a sob.

     “You have a point. Sorry ah pero di kita matutulungan diyan sa problema mo. Wala akong idea kung nasaan ang hudas mong boyfriend.”

     Sanisha smiled at her friend, kahit may bakas pa ng luha sa mata. “When would you ever learn to call him by his name?”

     “Ang hirap naman kasing bigkasin. Pero seriously speaking. . .” she holds Sanisha’s hand with both of hers. “Lagi lang akong nandito kapag kailangan mo ng tulong ko. You two fix this ok? You talk to him, kalimutan mo muna kasi yang pride na yan. Oras na malaman ko kung nasaan siya I’ll call you. Kakausapin ko rin si Cloud, baka may alam siya.”

      “Salamat friend.” She smiled and then wipes the tears from her cheeks. “Natatakot kasi ako, sinusubukan ko kasi siyang tawagan pero laging busy. Sa condo naman niya walang sumasagot. Kung anu-ano tuloy yung pumapasok sa isip ko.”

      “Ano ka ba, wag ka ngang mag-isip ng ganyan. Baka naman busy lang talaga. Wag ka ngang paranoid. Tara kumain nalang tayo’t nagugutom na ko.” She said and gets up to order some food. “Dahil problematic ka, ililibre kita ngayon.” Sanisha nodded and tried to think positive. Maybe her friend is right, maybe she’s just getting a little paranoid. Everything would be alright, she hopes.

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« Reply #19 on: April 02, 2011, 11:00:18 pm »
Chapter 3:She’s Alarmed

     It’s been a month now and still there’s no sign of Brye. Nawawalan na siya ng pag-asang magkaka-ayos pa silang dalawa. Every night her pillows get wet from her tears. Of course masakit sa kanya ang nangyari, buti na lang laging nandiyan si Laila sa tabi niya. Hindi niya alam kung anong gagawin niya kapag wala ang kanyang best friend. Lagi niyang iniisip kung minahal ba talaga siya ni Brye o naglolokohan lang sila simula pa nung umpisa. She hates this. She hates her situation, kasi para sa kanya totoo yung lahat.

     “Oh tinanghali ka na naman ng gising.” Her mom told her after getting herself a sit. She was now in the dining room and was about to eat breakfast. Yeah her mom’s right, because when she looks around everybody’s already there. Her dad, her mom, her ate and kuya was now finished eating and was just having a family time. “Kumain ka na diyan.”

     “Alam mo ma, napapansin ko rin na lagi nalang siyang tinatanghali ng gising,” her ate Siera said.

     “Excuse me” Sanisha said the moment she feels something’s wrong “iihi lang po ako.” Of course that was lie. Nahilo siyang bigla kaya siya nagexcuse. Parang hinahalukay rin ang sikmura niya, nasusuka siya. She immediately gets up and run to the bathroom. Suka siya ng suka hanggang sa puro mapait na likido nalang ang kanyang nalalasahan. This is bad, this is really really bad. She thought to herself. These past few days she noticed na nadadalas ang pagsusuka niya. Lagi rin siyang may morning sickness at lagi siyang tinatamad bumangon sa umaga, hindi tulad ng dati.

     “Hija, ok ka lang ba.” her mom called. Sinundan pala siya nito.

     “Yes ma, nalipasan po ata ako ng gutom, sumasakit po kasi yung tiyan ko eh.” Pagdadahilan niya ng makita ang pag-aalala sa mata ng ina. “But I think I’m ok now.” She smiled to assure her.

     “Are you sure?”

    “Yes mom I’m sure, tara balik na po tayo dun. Mukhang maganda yung topic nila dad eh.”

     After eating, she returns to her room to get her cell phone. She have to call Laila and tell her what’s has been bothering her. She dialed the number and wait for the answer.

     “Hello, Sanisha bakit?” Laila answered from the other line.

     “Laila I think I have a big problem. I think I’m pregnant.”

     “YOU’RE WHAT? Are you sure about that? Naka pagpacheck-up ka na ba?”

     “hindi pa nga eh. Kaya nga ako tumawag eh para magpasama sayo. I don’t know what to do. I’m scared Laila. What if may buhay na pa lang nabubuo sa tiyan ko? Si Brye hindi pa rin nagpapakita. Hindi ko na alam.” She started crying again. She knows this was not the right time to cry, but what else could she do? Crying was the only thing that makes her feel better.

    “Ang hayup talagang yun. Pagnakabalik ako diyan sa Maynila papatayin ko yan.”

    “What do you mean ‘pagnakabalik’ asan ka ba ngayon ha?”

     “Oh, eto nga yung gusto kung sabihin eh. Hindi kita masasamahan, friend. Nandito ako ngayon sa Baguio, meron kaming seminar for 3 months and after this kailangan kung puntahan si mom sa states.” Bumagsak ang balikat niya sa narinig. Yung tanging taong inaasahan niya sa mga ganitong pagkakataon ay wala. Saan siya ngayon kukuha ng lakas. Of course she can’t demand anything from her. Laila’s life doesn’t revolve around her’s alone. Her friend has her own life to live, and she must not forget that. “I’m really sorry. Do you think you can handle everything until I get back? Can you be strong for me?”

     “Of course.” She faked a smile even though Laila won’t see it.

     “Just don’t hesitate to call me, if you need anything and if you need someone to talk to okay? I’ll be back before you even know it. And Sanisha, update me.”

    “Yeah I will, don’t worry so much about me. I can handle this.”I can’t. . . .How can I handle this?

     “I know you can.” Don’t trust me so much, Laila.



update again.. . . .
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« Last Edit: April 03, 2011, 02:01:47 pm by jheyemm08 »

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« Reply #20 on: April 02, 2011, 11:23:48 pm »
laila tulungan mo siya. be a good best friend :D  brye magpakita ka na!!!
thumbs up :D

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wow Good Job!
Ang sipag!  ;)

I like this one kasi "let's face it" kumbaga Common Scene ito basing on reality.
This is one step of awakening teen's awareness about pre marital sex  :)

Cant wait for the chapter 4 :)
Keep it up dear!
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Ayyy pasensya! mostly kasi sa mga nababasa ko 'Bryle'  :-[ sorry tlaga ah.. akala ko kasi Bryle eh Brye lang pala  :D

anyhow, kawawa nmn si Sanisha...  :(
gusto ko tuloi hanapin si Brye at suntukin hahaha lol

cant wait din po sa next chapter..
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kathryn- ok lang yu. . .  paxensiya na ang adik ko kasing pumili ng name. . hehe pwede namn kasing Clixto nalng. . hahaha
hay na ko, kung ako yun papatayin ko si Brye. . [ay brutal masyado] hehe ;D

jhewohmania-pwede pong malamn true name mo?
gusto ko po kasi na sa pangalan i-address yung mga readers. . also i like your comment..tnx. .

amae-good job sa story mo. . d halatng first time.  . .
si Brye,magpakita p kaya yun. .
ano sa tingin mo??

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Oks lang po yun! para nmn ma iba dba..  8) unique tas ang cute ng name.. sana din naman noh kung gaano ka cute yung name nya sana nman tlaga ganun din xa... bat nmn kasi hindi na xa ng papakita.. leche plan tlaga  ;D
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Nakakainis yung brye na yun! Sarap balatan ng buhay! Hehe.. Affected?  Sobrang nakakadepress iwan ng kaibigan alam nyo ba yun? Lalo na pag sa time pa na kailangan mo sila.. Anyways..! masyado akong nadadala sa story.. Haha, Update pa! Update pa! Hehe i like it..

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Mhay, ang ganda ng update mo. Idol na kita ;D This is what i call story. ;) based on reality kasi since marami na ngayong mga menor de edad na nabubuntis at nakakabuntis. Keep it up!!

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Chapter 4: Result

     “Ma’am Php. 158.50 po lahat.” The cashier said.

      “Here.” Sanisha gave the cashier Php. 200.00

      “Wala po ba kayong barya Ma’am?”

      “Wala eh, sige keep the change na lang.” she said and started for the door of the convenient store. After her talk with Laila, she immediately took a shower at dumiretso na dito . Bumili kasi siya ng pregnancy test. She’ll try this first, kapag positive yung lumabas tsaka nalang siya magpapacheck-up. She’s really hoping until now na sana negative yung resulta. Kanina ngang hinawakan niya yung Pregnancy test, lahat na yata ng dasal gianawa niya, paano pa kaya kapag titignan na niya yung resulta. Ilang santo kaya ang matatawag niya. She really wished Laila was here right now. She really needed her company especially, ngayong may pinagdadaanan siya.

      Pagkalabas niya ng convenient store, she immediately went to her car. Yes, she has her own car; her dad gave it to during her 18th birthday. She will turn 19 this coming December, its 8 months from now. Ayaw niyang mabuntis ng ganito kaaga. She's still attending college, graduating na nga siya next year eh. Ano na lang ang mangyayari sa kanya kapag mag bunga ang nangyari sa kanila ni Brye. And speaking of Brye, kailangang makausap silang dalawa. She has to find a way, one way or another. Up until now, she still can’t believe na magagawa siyang pagtaguan ni Brye. Ngayon niya kailangan ang presensya ng binata. NGAYON !

      She starts her car, and start driving. She planned on going to some restaurant, dun niya kasi balak gawin ung test eh. Ayaw niyang gawin yun sa bahay nila, mabuti na ang maingat. When she arrived at the restaurant, she immediately parks her car. Hindi na siya nagpaligoy-ligoy pa, dumiretso na siya sa rest room. She enters one of the cubicle and start doing what she needs to do.

      She closed her eyes, before looking at the result. Slowly she opened it, para tumambad ng isang nakapanghihinang resulta. Biglang sumikip ang dibdib niya. Her hand, like it has its own life, went straight to her mouth; to stop her from making any unnecessary noise. With shaking hands she took her phone. She typed. .

     
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“Laila, its psitive, wat do I do nw? I dnt knw wat to do ani’more. Pls hlp me.”

     After a moment her phone beeped.

     
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“Sha, dnt lose hpe. Evrting wil b alryt. I rili hate meself for leaving u n diz stuation. I’m rili rili sori. I want 2 strangle Brye ryt now. U dn’t know hw angry am I wit dat boy. Any idea wer dat bastrd is?”

     She replied,
     
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“Nope, bt I’m stil trying to cntct him. Lai, am I bad grl? Why do god prmt diz 2 happen? Pnaru2shn n b nya ko?”

     
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“of curz nt, he jst trust u so mch. Sa tngin nya kasi mkkya u 2. Juz believe in hm. Dn’t frget to c ur dctr ok? I hve 2 go now. I’ll txt u later. Bye. ingatz”

     After she read Laila’s reply, she put her phone back to her bag. Lumabas na siya ng cubicle, buti nalang walang tao; walang magagalit kasi ang tagal niya sa loob. She walks toward the mirror and watch her reflection. “From this moment on, you have to be strong. You’re not alone anymore. Mommy ka na, kailangan mong lakasan ang loob mo.” She muttered at herself, at the same time wiping a single drop of tears that fell from her left eye. A sad smile appeared on her lips. She remember what Laila told her once, na kapag ang unang luha na lalabas sa mata mo would come from your left eye, it means a ‘tears of joy’. Masaya ba talaga siya ngayon? Bakit parang hindi? Kung ang pagiging masaya ay yung magsuffer ka, matakot at masaktan, then siguro nga masaya siya, kasi nasasaktan siya ngayon.

     After fixing herself, she went to her car and drive home. She thinks she needs a rest, bigla kasi siyang napagod. Ganoon siguro talaga ang mga buntis mabilis mapagod. She would also have to call her doctor to make a schedule of their meeting. Of course kailangan niya pa ring masigurong tama yung resulta ng pregnancy test, she would also need some advice from her.




Czahreen-
Wow. . thanks
natuwa naman ako sa comment mo. .
ans sarap sa tenga. .  ;D ;D
oo nga eh. . ang dami na ngayong nabubuntis ng maaga. . tsk tsk

Jewel-
Nice meeting you jewel. .
Mhay nga pala ang name ko. .
i'm 18 years old. . hehehe

Simplejane_8 -
Jane po ba real name mo?
salamat naman at nagustuhan mo yun story ko. .
'natutwa ako kasi nadadala ka. .
Yup ang hirap nga pag iniwan ka ng mga friends mo
lalo na kpag kailangan mo sila.






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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ [chapter 4, posted][STILL NEED SUPPORT]
« Reply #29 on: April 03, 2011, 07:52:08 pm »
Hi everyone. . .
chapter 5 will posted on tuesday. .
hehehe. . .
sana po you keep on supporting. .
. . .

kung may time po kayo. . .
sana po maka gawa kayo ng poster nito. .
wala lang, para lang marami etong poster. .
kung makakagawa po kayo send niyo nalang yung
link sa akin. .
katuwaan lang po. . pagandahan. . .hehe ;) ;)
please use the same character. .
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