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Burden of a Mistake↕ CHAPTER 26 TEASER
« on: March 31, 2011, 09:11:29 pm »
Burden of a Mistake
By: JHEYEMM08
All rights reserved.Unauthorized reproduction and/or distribution of text, pictures, or any other information which appears in this story, in any form or by any means, without the permission of the author is strictly prohibited. All names, places, dates, and events are used for fictional purposes. If this story contains any resemblance to real life, it is purely coincidental.


They say carrying a baby in your womb is a miracle;
Having a seed of life form inside of you
They say it feels wonderful to have your own child
They say it was the very Essence of being a woman




They say a lot of things, but you believe otherwise
Simply because you feel the contrary
You were not ready, and yet you have to face the responsibilities
You were not prepared, and yet you have to be strong
You were not a woman yet, but then you would have to be a MOTHER.




How could you accept everything, when you know from the start it was a mistake?
You were tricked, but no one wants to believe you.
How could you face everything, when everyone you were relying on turns their back on you?
How could you stand up, when the source of your strength is pushing you away?
How could you move on, when the father of your child abandoned you,
Leaving you all alone to face everything on your own?




You need help. . . . But where would you run?
You wanted to be angry and curse the world for letting you go through all this hardship





For letting you carry the Burden of a Mistake




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« Last Edit: April 15, 2012, 09:04:24 pm by jheyemm08 »

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Re: Burden of a Mistake [need support]
« Reply #1 on: March 31, 2011, 09:32:08 pm »
Mhay! ako ito. haha. ;D support!! ako ay naeexcite sa chapter 1. may pagkadrama ba to?? hmmm ::)

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« Reply #2 on: March 31, 2011, 10:06:09 pm »
Czhareen yup may pag kadrama siya. .
hehehe. . . matagal ko na tong naisip eh. .
so ipopost ko na siya. . ngangati na ang mga daliri ko. .

baka bukas makapag update na ko ng
OMG.  . .hehehe
naurong yung tst namin ehhh. .
aprl 15, na siya so
gala gala muna ko dito sa CC

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« Reply #3 on: March 31, 2011, 10:23:32 pm »
Mhay! Gusto ko 'to! <3
Support support support!

 

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« Reply #4 on: March 31, 2011, 10:31:50 pm »
tnx sa pagsupport GEE. .
salamat talaga
alam mo i really like your mending wall.
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« Reply #5 on: March 31, 2011, 10:40:12 pm »
Hi im jane, 20.. Newbie po ako.. Support ko ito mga te.. :)

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« Reply #6 on: April 01, 2011, 12:56:28 am »
Chapter 1;Deception



    “You drink this Sanisha, this would make you feel much better,” Brye invited Sanisha to drink the wine. “Akala ko ba we are going to celebrate because you won the quiz bee competition. Bakit parang ako lang nagcecelebrate dito?”

    “Ano ka ba Brye, how many times do I have to tell you na di ako umiinom.” Tanggi naman dalaga sa aya ng boyfriend sabay tabig sa baso. “Alam mo namang ayaw ni papa na umiinom ako eh. Gusto mong magwala na naman yun? You know him. Isa pa, bakit dito tayo sa condo mo magcecelebrate?”

     “Because I think this is the best place to have fun. Sige na Sanisha inumin mo na to. Isang baso lang, and then I’ll stop insisting.”

    “Isa lang ah? Promise?” she said taking the glass from Brye.

     “I promise.” He said making a cross sign above his heart. And then he grinned. “See, it’s not that bad.”

     “Not that bad? Eh halos di na nga maipinta ang mukha ko sa pait nito eh.” And then she touches her head. She’s getting a little bit dizzy all of a sudden. “Brye, what’s happening? Nahi. . .hi. . hilo ak−” she swooned.

     Brye took her and bring her to his room. He started taking her shirt off and his too. He started kissing her first from her lips and down. “I have always wanted to do this Sanisha. I always have. Pero napaka kipot mo naman eh. Wala na kong ibang alam na paraan para maging akin ka, but this.” He kisses her again in her lips, and started moving. And from that night on, he marks Sanisha as his own.


     The next day. . .

     “Ouch, what happen? My head hurts.” She opens her eyes, at umupo sa kama. She looks at her side to find Brye sleeping soundlessly. “ano bang nangyari kagabi, wala akong matandaan?” she asked. When she looked at herself she was horrified to find out she was naked. She immediately took the blanket and covers herself. “What did you to me Brye.” She protested habang inaalog-alog ang boyfriend para magising. “hay*p ka gumising ka diyan.”

     “Ano ba! Kitang natutulog yung tao eh, what’s your problem?” he answered without opening his eyes.

     “What’s my problem? Gumising ka diyan ng Makita mo. Paano mo to nagawa sa akin.” Tears started flowing from her eyes. She can’t believe her precious Brye do this to her.

     Bumangon na rin si Brye kasabay nun ang pagsalubong sa nakabibinging sampal. “What’s that for.” He said massaging the part na natamaan ng sampal.

     “BAKIT?” She said. Her tears still flow without a stop in her cheeks.

     “Anong bakit? Eh gusto mo rin naman yan eh. Ikaw pa nga ang nagyaya sa akin di ba? Don’t you remember flirting with me last night?”

     “I can’t believe this, ako pa ngayon ang may kasalanan? I remember drinking one glass of wine. Isang baso lang Brye. Nakaimposibleng malasing ako ng isang baso lang. Tell me, what did you put in that wine?"

     “Nothing.”

     She looked at him furiously. She stands up and took her undergarments, shirt and pants lying in the floor. She enters the bathroom, after a minute lumabas na siya. She walks directly towards Brye. “BRYE CALIXTO DEL VALLE, as of this moment we are OVER. I don’t want to see your face anymore. I want you to get out of my life dahil kung hindi, kakasuhan kita ng rape.” Of course she can’t do that. No matter what Brye did, she would forgive him. No matter what he did, she would still loves him. Her father might not like him for her, but she loves him and he her; and that’s what’s important. She just hopes Brye realizes his mistake before she changes her mind and forget him totally. As she gets out of the door, she promises herself that she would not talk to Brye unless he admits his mistake and he would apologize. 




Hi ate Jane i'm mhay nga pala,
welcome sa aking story. .
and welcome rin sa CC. .
SAna try mo rin yung isa ko pang story
ongoing p rin siya.  .
Oh MY Ghost . .nanjan po yung link sa baba. .
salamat. .

super effort na ko na maging wholesome talaga tong first chap . .
sana di siya gaano bastos.
kailngng kailngan ko talaga yung scene na yun ehh
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« Last Edit: April 06, 2011, 04:36:43 pm by jheyemm08 »

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Re: Burden of a Mistake↕ [chap1 posted] [need support]
« Reply #7 on: April 01, 2011, 01:38:59 am »
i'll support :D gondooo . sana may mag-support din ng kwento ko. hope you'll read my work. hoping lang po

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« Reply #8 on: April 01, 2011, 05:38:26 am »
waaaahh  :D

very nice ng story!!!!!  :D kahit na ne rape xa ni Bryle!!! hmp

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« Reply #9 on: April 01, 2011, 10:42:49 am »
Wow, Mhay. Ang ganda ng chapter one ah! <3
Thanks sa support sa stories ko. It's my turn to support yours. :)

 

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« Reply #10 on: April 01, 2011, 10:51:10 am »
nice story ate :D

I'm amae po pala.
15 years old
hope you'll support my story too. Perfect timing . salamat po .

http://www.candymag.com/teentalk/index.php/topic,199458.0.html

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« Reply #11 on: April 01, 2011, 11:07:07 am »
" Jeez , you have a gud talent mhay ! by the way , i'm Qkev .. I am new here in candymag && I am so shock nun' nabasa ko yung story mo .. naku , i will tell this  to my friend , kasi ganyan din yung nangyari sakanya .. ang kaibahan lang .. alam nilang dalawa na gumagawa sila ng buhay , anyways -- support ko to' ng bonggang-bongga .. -- try ko rin basahin yung Oh my Ghost -- it's seems interesting  :D

" I don't know how you did that link under your story .. so you will make one click na lang , then .. pwede mo ng basahin yung ibang kwentong ginawa nun' author .. amp -- anyways -- sana magustuhan mo yung story ko .. lagay ko na lang yung title  .. i hope mahanap mo .. actually , kakagawa ko lang .. eto sya ---------------- >

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« Reply #12 on: April 01, 2011, 12:48:57 pm »
hello everyone.. .
Qkev
Kathryn
Gee
Amae
Czhareen

-salamat sa pagsupport . .
sa mga d nakak-alam ako po yung author ng Oh My Ghost.
kung gusto niyo po siyang mabasa
just click the link nalang po nasa baba [ongoing p rin siya]. .
hope magustuhan niyo po yung story. .

at wala po akong pinaghuhugutan sa story kong toh.
hehehe good girl po ako
NBSB po ako hahahahahahaha ;D
mahilig lang po ako talagang gumawa ng story. .

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« Reply #13 on: April 01, 2011, 02:29:21 pm »
Nbsb ba kamo? Apir sistah.. Hehe.. Nbsb din ako eh.. Anyways i like your chapter one although may mga typo error ata? Sana magtuloy tuloy yung update.. Hihi :)

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« Reply #14 on: April 01, 2011, 02:41:35 pm »
Bwisit na Bryle yun ahh..kung love nya talaga si Sanisha dapat naghintay sya na maging handa yung girl.. >:( >:( >:(
Galing ng update mo Mhay. :) nadadala ako e. hahaha

 

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