Re: No Regrets :) [ Chapter Two ]

[SweetSmile27]

Hello po.   Sana po support niyo itong first story ko.  I'm willing to accept comment po para ma-improve ko pa yung flow ng story. Thanks po. bawal po ang silent reader. ^^v

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Prologue

Chapter One

[SweetSmile27]

PROLOGUE

" Hindi naman masama ang magmahal di ba? Ang mali ko lang ay doon sa taong hinding hindi ako kayang ipaglaban. Oo, inaamin kong noon pa lang tanggap ko na, na mawawala rin siya tulad ng iba, na iiwan niya rin ako at pilit itataboy palayo. Pero alam kong hindi lang dun dapat tumigil ang mundo ko, dapat akong magpatuloy sa buhay ko.  Sabi nga ni Jean de La Fontaine, sadness flies away on the wings of time. Hindi ito humihinto sa puso ng isang taong nasaktan, mawawala din naman ito sa tamang panahon ng hindi mo namamalayan. Pero alam ko, sa puso ko, darating din siya, ang Guardian Angel ko, ang Knight in Shining Armor ko, ang Prince Charming ko, Mr. Right, ang DESTINY ko. "   

---- Casey Buenavista

" Oo. Alam kong mali yung ginawa kong pagsuko, pero ginawa ko yun dahil alam kong iyon ang nararapat at makakabuti para sakanya, sa taong mahal ko. I'm holding those tears back dahil ayokong maging mahina sa harap niya, pipigilan kong tumulo ang mga ito hanggang sa makalimutan na niya ako at ang sakit na naidulot ko.  "   

---- Aidan De Silva

“Ako yung nag-iisang taong umintindi sakanya. Ako yung tumulong sakanya sa oras na kinakailangan niya ng tulong ng isang KAIBIGAN. Yeah, KAIBIGAN ang tingin niya sakin pero as time goes by, I'm fallen' for her. And I'm hoping that she's feeling the same way too. But I'm not forcing her; I know that it's hard in her part to forget HIM. But I'm willing to wait, even if it reaches FOREVER. "   

----  Blake Chandler

[SweetSmile27]

Chapter One

“Let’s all welcome, for our contestant number five, Ms. Akia Casey Buenavista.”

*clap clap clap*

[Weak - SWV]

“I don't know what it is that you've done to me...
but it's caused me to act in such a crazy way.
Whatever it is that you do when you do what you're doing...
it's a feeling that I want to stay.

'Cause my heart starts beating triple time,
with thoughts of loving you on my mind.
I can't figure out just what to do,
when the cause and cure is you.

**I get so weak in the knees I can hardly speak.
I lose all control and something takes over me.
In a daze, your love's so amazing, it's not a phase.
I want you to stay with me, by my side.
I swallow my pride; your love is so sweet.
It knocks me right off of my feet.
I can't explain why your loving makes me weak.

It's Time after time after time I've tried to fight it.
But your love is strong it keeps on holding on.
Resistance is down when you're around, starts fading.
In my condition I don't want to be alone.

Repeat **

I try hard to fight it.
No way can I deny it.
Your love's so sweet.
It knocks me off my feet.

Repeat **

I get so weak...
Blood starts racing through my veins
I get so weak...
Boy it's something I can't explain.
I get so weak...
Something 'bout the way you do
the things you do ooh ooh, it...
knocks me right off of my feet,
off of my feet.
Can't explain why your loving makes me weak.

Repeat **”

*clap clap clap*

“I dedicate my last song to the one I love. Babe, I love you so much. Sana magtagal pa tayo! Happy monthsary.”  *smile*

 Ang dami talagang tao. Kinakabahan ako. Waaaaah! Bakit ba kasi ako nakasali dito e. tsk! Eto na, magsisimula na pala second song ko. Pray! Pray! ^^v

[When You Say Nothing at All – Ronan Keating]

“It's amazing
How you can speak
Right to my heart
Without saying a word,
You can light up the dark
Try as I may
I could never explain
What I hear when
You don't say a thing

[CHORUS:]
The smile on your face
Lets me know
That you need me
There's a truth
In your eyes
Saying you'll never leave me
The touch of your hand says
You'll catch me
Whenever I fall
You say it best
When you say
Nothing at all

All day long
I can hear people
Talking out loud
But when you hold me near
You drown out the crowd
(The crowd)
Try as they may
They could never define
What's been said
Between your
Heart and mine

[Repeat chorus twice]

(You say it best
When you say
Nothing at all
You say it best
When you say
Nothing at all)

The smile on your face
The truth in your eyes
The touch of your hand
Let's me know
That you need me

[Repeat chorus]

(You say it best
When you say
Nothing at all
You say it best
When you say
Nothing at all)

The smile on your face
The truth in your eyes
The touch of your hand
Let's me know
That you need me

(You say it best
When you say
Nothing at all
You say it best
When you say
Nothing at all)

“Lets give around of applause to Ms. Buenavista” Nako. Dapat lang noh, halos maihi na ako dun sa stage eh. Hahah! Teka, asan na kaya sina besh ko? >.<

Ay! Hindi pa nga pala ako nagpapakilalla sainyo noh?   Ahaha . ang bad ko talaga, by the way, let me introduce myself. Heheh! I’m Akia Casey Buenavista, ang unique ng name noh? Saan kaya yan nakuha ng parents ko.    Hahah.     Anyways, third high school nga pala ako, 15 years old, one of those popular girls “daw” ng aming university.    Mabait naman ako kahit minsan ang pasaway ko, I belong to the highest section. Hahah . kakatuwa naman, kasama ko mga matatalino.  i’m the daughter of one of the best donor and sponsor of our school..

“Besh, Oh my God! Ang galing mo talaga kumanta. Hanep ah! Walang panama yung ibang contestant.  heheh” tsk. Ayan, ang makulit kong besh, si Felicity Morales. Nice name right?

“weh? hndi naman e. kakahiya nga sa mga nanuod, parang baliw lang ako na asong ulol na ewang nakanta don, hahah !”

“hey babe*kiss sa cheeks*. nice performance ah, galing talaga ng babe ko!  happy monthsary din.”  meet my lovable boyfriend ever ! heheh . name niya nga pala is Aidan de Silva.

“see? tulo laway nga yan kanina nung pinapanuod ka eh. Hahaha ! “

“babe, totoo? hahah . baka ma-dehydrate ka nian? Hahah, ubos na ata tubig mo sa katawan dahil sa kakatulo ng saliva mo !  eeeeew. heheh, peace babe ! iloveyou.”

“nku, ayan na naman kayo e.   pinagtutulungan niyo na naman ako.   Ayaw ko na sainyo!  Hmpp!!!”     Tampururot effect na naman . hahah xD

“ay, ayaw na sakin ng babe ko.  pano ba yan besh?    Hanapin ko muna si chad, buti pa yun e, hindi ako iniiwan , tsk tsk ! >”       gaya gaya kay babe,

“sssshhhhhhh, kids keep quiet!  The program is ongoing” .        uh-oh.   Ang ingay kasi namin, yan tuloy ! hahah .

“sorry ma’am.”   *smile*

*whispers* “ikaw kase babe, patampo tampo ka pa, pero infairness effective killer smile mo kay ma’am.   hahahahahah”

“Ako pa, kaya nga love na love mo ako, di ba babe?”     Kapal talaga ng mukha netong boyfriend ko. 

“Besh, ang lakas ng hangin dito ah? Bumabagyo na ata e. Tara, dun tayo!”    sabay turo sa labas ng gymnasium at takb0.

“HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOYY!"

“SSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHH” hahah . wawa naman si babe ! Patay ka.

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[SweetSmile27]

Goodmorning Philippines and Hello world. Bwahaha . Natimang na naman ako. Umagang umaga, nagpapakaloka na nman .

“Goodmorning iha. How’s your sleep?” Waaa. Si Mother Earth ko.

“Hi Mom, *kiss sa cheeks* tulog ko? Syempre ang saraaap. Hehe . ahm, nasan po si Dad?” Napatingin naman si Mommy saken.

Alam ko naman na I’m not into my Dad, yung tipong oras oras hinahanap ko siya. Pero still, Daddy ko pa rin yun kahit hindi niya ako maalagaan diba? Yikes. Dramamuch na? XD

“He already went to his work na. Alam mo naman, workaholic.” Then she gave me a smile. “I forgot to tell you kagabi, baka hindi kami makauwi later. May business kaming aayusin sa Singapore. Maybe we will stay there for two days to observe  it and to check na rin.”

Aww. Inaamin ko, ayaw ko talaga na alone ako dito sa house. Kahit sabihin pang nandito yung housemaids, iba pa rin yung parents ko kasama ko.

“Ahm, Mom, kasama mo si Dad pagpunta ng Singapore? “

“Well, Oo. At sa pagkakaalam ko. He wants to stay there a week or two?” Ganun katagal? Haneep talaga si Daddy, hindi man lang niya ako namimiss? “So? Can we start eating, so we can go to work-slash-school?”

So yun nga. Kumain kami ni mother. After that,  hinatid na niya ko sa school using her Buick LaCrosse na type ko pero syempre mas type ko yung Mazda MX-5 Miata. LOL.

Pagdating ko sa school, nakita ko yung Banner na nakasabit sa may gate malamang. Alangan naming sa leeg ko? It says that Intramurals is coming! Nyahaha. Ka’excite tuloy.

“Goodmorning Casey!”

“O Chad. Ikaw pala, Goodmorning din. How’s yah?” Guy-Bestfriend ko, Chad Harris. Sosyalen ng name anoh? Haha. Mala-hollywood si besprend. Haha XD

“Okay lang naman. Papasok ka na ba?”

“Ano kase, iintayin ko pa si Aidan dito e. Mauna ka na lang” Kakahiya naman kung magpapaintay pa ko kay Chad.

“Sure ka? Ayaw mo nang samahan kita?”

“Okay lang. Baka ma’late ka pa sa klase mo e. Parating na naman yun”

“Osge. Ikaw ang bahala. See you later sweetie.”

“Hoooy. Kapal neto, sweetie your peys. Ewwww ka.” Kadiri si besprend. Haha

Bago pa man makaalis si Chad. Dumating na ang Oh-So-Handsome-Boyfie ko.

“Babe! Kanina ka pa?” OhhhEmmmmgiiiiii. Ang wafuuu ni Papa Aidan . HAHA XD “Oh Chad. Andito ka pala?” Walangya naman oh, akala ko masosolo ko si babe ngayon hindi pala. Tsk. Humanda ka sakin Chad Harris. Ibabaon na kita sa lupa, NOW NAAAA!”

“Actually babe, kararating ko lang din. At yang si Chad naman, sinamahan na ko. *whispers* kahit ang tunay, si babe naman yung hinihintay. Badeeeng!”

“Casey, may sinasabi ka ba? Baka gusto mong halikan kita dyan. Baka mapatunayan kong I’m not a gay. Want some kiss? >” Yuuuuuck. Then nag’foform na yung lips niya na parang iki-kiss niya na ako

“Kadiri ka naman. Mahiya ka naman kay babe, he’s in front of us tapos nilalandi mo ko? Pwede mamaya na lang kapag wala na siya?” HAHA XD

“O sure. Sige na, Aidan. Chuchu na. Ako na maghahatid kay babe mo.”  Napakunot noo naman si Aidan my loves sa kanya.

“Gusto mong lumipad pabalik sa inyo? HANDS OFF, She’s mine!” Aww. Ang sweet niya talaga kahit kelan.

“Eto naman,hindi ka na mabiro. Tsaka, hello to Aidan?! Ang pangit kaya ni Casey para magustuhan ko!!” Aba’t ininsulto pa ang beauty ko. Err.

After nung sentence niyang yun. Hinabol ko na siya. Haha. Para na nga ata kaming bata e, pinagtitinginan pa nga kami nung ibang students. Kulang na lang sabihin nila na “gawin ba naming playground ang school?!” haha . Not even care.

“Guys, tama na yan. Baka ma’late na tayo sa class oh. It’s already quarter to eight”.

“HA!! Grabe. Ayaw ko na habulin yang si Chad. May lahi atang kabayo yan e. Bilis tumakbo.” Tapos I look at Chad. “Hoy kabayo. Sa susunod. Wag ka na kaseng mang’asar ng hindi kita habulin. Nakakawala ng poise ha.”

“Haha. Pikon ka kase. Tsaka, para ka naming aso. Nanghahabol ka. Ay mali! Hindi pala “parang”. Aso ka na talaga, kalahi mo talaga."

“Aba’t—“

“Hep!! Enough with the argument." tapos humarap siya sakin. "Babe, nagseselos na ko. Dati ako yung ginaganyan mo. Parang lambing na yung ginagawa niyo e.” tapos nagpout siya. Awww. Ang cute niya talaga.

Hinawakan ko yung magkabilang pisngi niya. Then kiss him on the lips. Tsl. PDA to e! haha. Smack lang naman. “Oh, nagseselos ka pa babe?” the he shook his head and smiled.

“Oh my! My eyes! My pretty virgin eyes!” Sabay takip na mata niya. Baliw talaga ‘to.

“Loko mo talaga ‘tol. Tara na nga.” Then he wrapped his arms across my shoulder. I feel safe anyway.