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[BOM] Book Two: Tears to New Beginning.
« on: February 22, 2011, 06:22:24 pm »
Book of Memories
Different memories of different people



A/N:
Some of you might get confused on who's point of view is it. So I put the name of the character at the bottom right of every update.




Book One: Summer Tales and Promises


Less than 10 years ago, I got a special present that I thought will last forever.
Until the day, that we have to go in different paths and forget everything we had in our past.


Even at the age of 5, I was a house girl, it’s not that I'm not allowed to go outside the house, but there was this fear of mine in talking with other people, until the day I met Celina...

Celina was a girl next door... It was kind a strange, how both of us met. My nanny was outside the gate waiting for a delivery truck and Celina was playing with a ball, trying to kick it as hard as she can, when she accidently kicked it too hard and went overboard in our house, my nanny let her in to look for her toy, which she did and found me as well while holding her ball. We looked at each other, the angels silence had come in our ambience, until she breaks it with a sweet smile and says;

Hi! I’m Celina, what’s your name?

From that day forward Celina and I became good friends.

There were those times when, she’d asked me to come over to their house to play dolls with her, or she’ll be the one to come over, carrying a box loaded with dolls and dress up materials. Though we can only do those things during summer vacation, during school days she often calls me to help her with assignments, sometimes she will write a letter to me and then drop it on the post mail that we locked a few summer years ago, that old mail box was our little secret, every day before she go to school, she’ll drop a letter telling me everything that happen to her after her school, and before I went home , I stopped by to pick up her letter and drop another as a reply for her first letter.

Our bond get stronger in each passing day, even we seldom see each other during school days, it was so impossible for us not to have a piece of each other’s life. Celina was indeed my first best friend.

Before I turned 7, I met two of her cousins, Xiel and Riel, they were twins - fraternal twins to be exact, having the same haircut it was hard to tell, who’s who, especially when both of them are wearing the same thing, they do have a lot of common things, but there were also some stuffs that separate them from being twins. Xiel likes puppies while his sister likes kitties, if Riel likes confectionary sweets, her brother would only eat one if the sweets would include tropical fruits. Celina loves both of them, and as days goes by, I was starting to like them as well, thou I was having difficulties with Riel, having this feeling that she dislikes me for no particular reason.

On the other hand, I’m fine hanging out with Xiel; his quietness makes me comfortable and secured. I have asthma, so when the game is all about running around Celina’s playground , I’ll sit on the swing to rest for a while and then Xiel would stop from playing and sit beside me on the other swing, and asked;

Are you okay?

I really love hanging around with the three of them, that’s why, when Riel had to go abroad due to the petition of their father it really sadden me . I know that I’m not in good terms with her, but...she is my friend. If you’re wondering why Xiel, is not included with the trip... well... that’s another story.

Anyways those days of child play were really fun, until the day he took my heart and put a promise on one summer midnight.



Lilian's POV
« Last Edit: February 26, 2011, 10:47:49 pm by doodleme »
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Hindi po ba interesting yung story?  :-[
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nosebleed teh?!!

maganda naman. . pero mas cool kasi pag tagalog. . you know mas pang masa yung. . pero sige GO! ka lang. . support ko 'to


ISHE nga pala. .


babae ba si Riel?  ;D

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nosebleed teh?!!

maganda naman. . pero mas cool kasi pag tagalog. . you know mas pang masa yung. . pero sige GO! ka lang. . support ko 'to


ISHE nga pala. .


babae ba si Riel?  ;D

Ay, sorry naman. Sige. ttry kong tagalugin yung iba. Haha!
babae si Riel. :)

Thank you ishe. :)
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Ay, sorry naman. Sige. ttry kong tagalugin yung iba. Haha!
babae si Riel.

Thank you ishe.


hehehe. . ok. .

update ka ha. .

pakisuport po yung story ko. .thanks. .

dapat ako lagi ang first dito. .whahaha. . GOODLUCK for both of us. . <nosebleed>  ;D

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hehehe. . ok. .

update ka ha. .

pakisuport po yung story ko. .thanks. .

dapat ako lagi ang first dito. .whahaha. . GOODLUCK for both of us. . <nosebleed>  ;D

Sure! :)

I'll try to update later.

Thanks.  ;)
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ok i will wait for that. .  ;)

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ok i will wait for that. .  ;)

Thanks.
Nabasa ko na rin nga pala yung story mo. :)
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Ay ang interesting naman!

Angel po pala ;D
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Book of Memories
Book One: Summer Tales and Promises [cont.]


Lilian was turning 10 and her family decided to throw a Hawaiian party for her in some beach, and of course, Xiel and I were invited.

Do you think she’d accept it?

Xiel was getting paranoid to his gift for Lilian, thinking that Lilian may not talk to him after giving it to her.

Calm down... I know she will, Lilian is a simple nice girl, and everything that is given to her is a treasure, so please... STOP WALKING IN CIRCLES, your making my head spin!

After saying those words of encouragement Xiel, gave out a warm smile.



It was almost 10 in the evening, two more hours; Lilian will be another year older.

Where is she? Do I look ok?

She’s on the nearby shore, sitting on the net swing under the palm trees, and please don’t be so nervous, and you look great!

Xiel searched for Lilian, by the shore and as expected, she was there, sitting quietly on the net swing.  Xiel was having doubts to approach her, he step back forward, but before he could even turn around;

Xiel! What are you doing here?

I was about to ask you the same thing, it’s almost your special day and you sitting here alone.

Lilian gave a smile that made Xiel blushed, she even asked him to seat beside her which made Xiel more nervous. Knowing both of them, I’m pretty sure that there was no conversation going on , since Lilian is not the type of person who will open up a conversation, and Xiel is having difficulties to move or even to gave out a stupid reaction. For almost one hour and a half, nothing had break their silence until;

OUCH!

Xiel got hit on the head by a small fan shell, Lilian giggle and then took the shell from Xiel’s head.

Where the heck does this come from?

I’m not sure, but, it surely gave you a smile...and a little headache for me.

They both laugh out loud, as fireworks lighten up their scene.

It finally started!

So that’s why your here!

I was looking for the best spot to watch to watch it more clearly, since the place of the party was surrounded by trees, I was looking for you and Celina, so we can watch it together, but, you were both out of sight... Anyways, I’m glad you’re here to watch it with me, how I’d wish Celina was also here.



Five minutes to go and it’s almost midnight and Lilian just got a phone call from her mom, asking her to come back at the venue.

Your mom?
Yes! She was asking me to go back now...but I told her just a few minutes more.
Lilian.... I.....

But before Xiel could finish what he was going to say, Lilian noticed a shiny stone by the sea shore, stand up and took it, Xiel followed her and;

Look Xiel, it’s pretty and... kind a... looks... like... the... moon....

As Lilian turns her back, Xiel was so close to her, making her words mutter.

But not as beautiful and nice as you!

Those words made Lilian blush and speechless. Xiel went around at Lilian’s back, and put a ring heart necklace to her.

Happy Birthday my dear Lilian!

Xiel... this is...

Xiel put his forefinger to Lilian’s lips;

Lilian, I never thought that my feeling for you as a friend will go deeper... I know it’s so sudden, but please accept my gift and my feelings for you...I like you Lilian!

Lilian was shocked; she didn’t expect to hear those words from Xiel.

I.... I don’t know what to say.... this is... all...

Lilian tried to take off the necklace, but Xiel stopped her.

I’m not asking you to return the same feelings, but please accept mine, until I return... and have your decisions.

Return? What do you mean? Where are you going?

My mom wants to talk with my father and fix things, I’ll be leaving for Canada and might return after 2-5 years, but I promise I’ll come back for you.

Lilian’s heart was touched; she hugged Xiel and thanked him for the gift.

Thank you, for your gift, I promise to keep it forever... I’m glad that you finally be seeing Riel and your father as well.

Xiel breaks Lilian’s hug and holds her hands;

Lilian promise me... when you’re ready, take off the heart charm on your necklace and give it back to me... and remember.... Even a part, you’ll always be in my heart.

Xiel hugged Lilian tightly... as if he doesn’t was to let go, the moon was full and waxing, it’s magnificent shape was indeed a blessing for them, and for new beginnings.


Celina's POV
« Last Edit: February 24, 2011, 01:04:58 pm by doodleme »
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Re: [BOM] Book One: Summer Tales and Promises [cont.] need readers :) UPDATED
« Reply #10 on: February 24, 2011, 06:32:30 am »
ayun oh first ako. . hehehee ;D

ahhhhhhhh. .


ang cute. . pero paano na si celina?
diba siya ang bida?

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Re: [BOM] Book One: Summer Tales and Promises [cont.] need readers :) UPDATED
« Reply #11 on: February 24, 2011, 01:08:57 pm »
ayun oh first ako. . hehehee ;D

ahhhhhhhh. .


ang cute. . pero paano na si celina?
diba siya ang bida?

Nope. Lahat sila dyan may sarisariling story. Just watch out for the next chapter. ;D
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Re: [BOM] Book One: Summer Tales and Promises [cont.] need readers :) UPDATED
« Reply #12 on: February 25, 2011, 09:25:05 am »
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Nope. Lahat sila dyan may sarisariling story. Just watch out for the next chapter.

ahhhh. . so walang particular na bida?!

ayos ah. . sige GO!! pero magka-connect ang kwento nila?. . malamang OO (diba ang saya TANONG ko, SAGOT ko. .hahaha ;) :) ;D )

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Re: [BOM] Book One: Summer Tales and Promises [cont.] need readers :) UPDATED
« Reply #13 on: February 25, 2011, 11:18:07 am »
mas maganda pa po 'yung ganitong stories :)

and yea, na nosebleed din po ako.  :D

SUPPORTED  ;)  :)

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Re: [BOM] Book One: Summer Tales and Promises [cont.] need readers :) UPDATED
« Reply #14 on: February 25, 2011, 09:03:00 pm »
ahhhh. . so walang particular na bida?!

ayos ah. . sige GO!! pero magka-connect ang kwento nila?. . malamang OO (diba ang saya TANONG ko, SAGOT ko. .hahaha ;) :) ;D )

Maraming characters na lalabas kaya wag kayong malito. Haha!
Taka hindi ko magawang tagalog kasi sa England yung setting ng story.

mas maganda pa po 'yung ganitong stories :)

and yea, na nosebleed din po ako.  :D

SUPPORTED  ;)  :)
Thank you sis. :)
Sorry kung nakaka nosebleed yung story kasi sa England yung setting ng story. :)
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