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sabi ko dati, until chapter 30 nalang itong story na ito. pero kung kayo po ang tatanungin, hanggang anong chapter nyo gusto?? pag nakaabot sa 10 votes ang kahit na ano man sa mga choices, yun ang susundin ko, pero pag hindi, i'll decide for myself. deadl

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Author Topic: Stay Away Stranger |•THE END•|author's note@p38  (Read 19326 times)

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Stay Away Stranger |•THE END•|author's note@p38
« on: January 07, 2011, 07:52:39 pm »
PROLOGUE:

Did it happen to you when you have to end a relationship just because one decided to end it up and you have no other choice but to give up? I can tell you, it's painful!

Babae ako pero ako yung binreakan, ako yung tinalikuran, ako yung iniwan. For some stupid reasons--- everything fell down. Nasayang yung 2 years namin together. Wala akong kasalanan at alam ko iyon, kaya nga hindi ko makuha yung point kung bakit hindi ako? bakit hindi ako yung pinaniwalaan nya..?

this is between a matter of bestfriends and girlfriends.. luckily, he chose his bestfriend, and chose to treat me as a stranger?!?... hoping I could do the same

All i needed was someone i could rely on when i'm down, someone to lift me up when i am happy, someone to wipe the tears away from my face, someone that will never leave me behind..

but he...

pushed me unto the ground and left me bleeding on the floor, put the tears back in my face when i finally found the smiles, run away and left everything hanging and doesn't even makes any sense...

but still...

I find a hard time to move on
I am still affected by the presence of him
and most of all

I think I still love him...


I am Kaizen Santiago and this is my bizarre stern story...  :-/

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Note: point of view po ng bidang babae (Kaizen Santiago) ang maglalaro sa buong story IF EVER maituloy ko po ito. HOPEFULLY naman eh yes.. comment please, thanks! =)

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Re: Stay Away Stranger... (new story! please support)
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2011, 08:14:46 pm »
Hello! Eloise's here, bago lang po ako rito sa teentalk. sana po magustuhan nyo ito

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« Reply #2 on: January 07, 2011, 08:23:06 pm »
Hello Eloise!
Support!
Jeh here, 12 :)
Never lose hope. Someday, you will have your own coloured rainbows.

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« Reply #3 on: January 07, 2011, 08:26:20 pm »
Hello Eloise!
Support!
Jeh here, 12 :)

WEE! 1st reader ka po! Hello Jeh!  ;D, I'm 16 na pala.. hehe, itry ko pong iupdate ito bukas.. salamat po ulit!  :-*

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« Reply #4 on: January 07, 2011, 08:30:01 pm »
Pwede kitang tawaging Ate Eloise? ::)
Haha! No biggie, sis :)
Interesting eh ;D
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Re: Stay Away Stranger... (new story! please support)
« Reply #5 on: January 07, 2011, 08:44:46 pm »
Hi Eloise
Andrea pala. nice  prologue.
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« Reply #6 on: January 08, 2011, 08:40:45 am »
Pwede kitang tawaging Ate Eloise? ::)
Haha! No biggie, sis :)
Interesting eh ;D

sure sis you can call me ate..  :)

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« Reply #7 on: January 08, 2011, 08:48:37 am »
Hi Eloise
Andrea pala. nice  prologue.
 :D SUPPORTAHAN KO ITO.

WOW! hello po Andrea!  ;D salamat po!  ;)

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« Reply #8 on: January 08, 2011, 08:50:05 am »
here's the first chapter pero sorry talaga kasi weak at boring pa sya since simula palang.. sorry talaga kung boring..  :(

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Stay Away Stranger... (Chapter 1)
« Reply #9 on: January 08, 2011, 09:26:15 am »
**1**

I can do it!


Mahirap talaga pag 4th year ka na, parami na ng parami yung mga dapat mong gawin sa school­—sunugin, magrally at isumpa—joke lang!
 
 
I am a competitive student, running for honors kasi ako, nakakahiya naman kina mama kung magloloko ako diba? But I actually did…

“Kaizen naman! Sumali ka na please?” ang kulit naman eh!

Oo nga pala , hindi pa ako nakakapagpakilala, Kaizen Guia Santiago, Kaizen for short, 16, senior student.

“math wizard contest?! Ok ka lang? si Kaizen at ang math ay hindi bagay, wala ngang gusto yun sakin eh!”

“ikaw ang MATHalino eh! Well, dalawa kayo ni Crisostomo.. kaya please naman, paa sa school” makulit talaga kung sa makulit itong si Laya, kaklase ko yan at Supreme Body Gov’t president.

“ayoko! Mas ayaw ko!”

“kasama mo naman si Nikko Jayson Crisostomo—the love of your life, that’s why wag ka nang magpaligoy-ligoy and say yes!” boom! You hit the wrong note!

“Laya please? A-Y-O-K-O NGA! At isa pa, hindi ko na nga yun boyfriend
” sabi ko ng mahina “so please stop”

“ting-ting-ting! I did miss something! Break na kayo? Totoo yung balitang break na kayo?”

“RUDE”

“OMG sorry.. but you have to join! Regardless of him, ok toss coin, head means yes, tail is a no”

“fine” tapos tinoss nya naman at pinakita sakin..

“college Library, 1pm mamaya, see you!”
tapos umali na sya.. CRAP!

I did something wrong, but hypothetically no! 1 week palang since nung break up kaya naman di ko pa sya kayang harapin..

Mahirap nga ang math, but believe me, mas mahirap ang sitwasyon ko, kumplikado na nga, wala pang formula para maderive sa simplest form—that makes it more complicated..


Silent ang break up namin di tulad nung naging kami na buong school ata yung nakaalam (exaggerating though). Pero yung silent na tinutukoy ko eh taliwas sa dahilan kung nakit kami nagkahiwalay.. maingay, masakit sa tenga.. what’s worse than experiencing a boy dumping you—for another girl?


At ito namang wizard na ito eh nakikisabay sa problema, now I am going to meet him pa, magkikita kami sa classroom pero ito yung first time since nung nangyari, semester break kasi nun at kakaresume lang ng klase ngayon..

“Wella, sa library lang ako ha, wala naman atang klase pa”

“sure! Hoy Kaizen, sigurado ka na bang makita yung ungas na yun?”

“walang choice eh”


“sabi ka lang pagsinaktan ka, reresbakan natin”
napatawa naman ako

“salamat! Pero I can do it!” tapos tumango lang sya..

Wella Villamin pala, bestfriend ko. Sya yung nakakaalam ng lahat kaya naman ganyan nalang yan kaconcern.

Pagdating ko ng college bldg. umakyat na ako sa 3rd floor bago ako makarating sa library, dito kasi eh reserve-an ang sistema, para maminimize lang yung ingay.

Table 24nakita ko na sya.. breathe in!

“go Kaizen!”
bulong ko pa tapos lumapit na ako.. table for three yung kinuha nya, meaning may kasama pa kaming iba.. ayos!

Magsasalita na sana ako nung biglang..

“table 24 right?” tapos napalingon naman ako sa likod ko, ganun din si—uh.. ang hirap banggitin, Mr. N nalang..

“oh yeah!” tapos nilagpasan lang nya ako na parang wala ako rito “sit”tapos nagkwentuhan na sila.. aba?

“excuse me?”binigyan naman nila ako ng ‘do I know you’ look “ may sinabi sakin si Laya na dito raw yung review para sa—“

“dito nga, umupo ka na, o baka naman gusto mong alalayan pa kita?”
di na nya pinatapos yung sinasabi ko then ganyan pa ang tono nya..

Umupo naman ako tapos nagbuklat ng aklat, sila naman eh biglang tumahimik.. tumingin lang ako tapos nabasa ulit.. nung may naalala ako saka naman ako nagsalita..

“oh, I believe you don’t know me, Im Kaizen, Kaizen STRANGER, Ms. Stranger for short.. you are?” sabi ko naman ng hindi humihinga..

nevermind her
sabi ni Mr. N sa kasama nya..

“oh you’re Nevermind, hello, and you’re?” turo ko naman

“ha?”

“oh his tutor” tapos hindi sila umimik..

I know right who you two are.. You and your beloved bestfriend…
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« Reply #10 on: January 08, 2011, 11:18:35 am »
Kapangalan pa nung ex ni Kaizen yung ex ko.
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Re: Stay Away Stranger...Chapter 1 (new story! please support)
« Reply #11 on: January 08, 2011, 01:55:26 pm »
support here! crisostomo.. reminds me of Ibarra.HAHA. go Kaizen!

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« Reply #12 on: January 08, 2011, 02:32:37 pm »
Hala!
Ang sama naman ni ex. Resbakan na 'yan! :D
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« Reply #13 on: January 08, 2011, 05:34:38 pm »
Kapangalan pa nung ex ni Kaizen yung ex ko.
HAHAHA. I'll support this! Please do continue this. :">

what a co-incidence! haha! nice naman yun! ;D thanks! yes I will, Eloise nga po pala, ikaw sis?

support here! crisostomo.. reminds me of Ibarra.HAHA. go Kaizen!

Crisostomo, nagpoped up nalang kasi yan sa utak ko kagabi since nameless pa naman si guy sa prologue ko.. crisostomo, para mukhang pangmayaman lang.. haha! yeah! GO KAIZEN! more from her as the story goes.. =D Eloise nga pala, anong name mo sis?

Hala!
Ang sama naman ni ex. Resbakan na 'yan! :D

haha! tama ka jan Jeh! mas maiinis pa tayo sa kanya sa mga susunod pang mangyayari.. ayon sa nakasulat na plot sa utak ko.. ewan lang.. AJA! ;D


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« Reply #14 on: January 08, 2011, 07:36:23 pm »
Crisostomo, nagpoped up nalang kasi yan sa utak ko kagabi since nameless pa naman si guy sa prologue ko.. crisostomo, para mukhang pangmayaman lang.. haha! yeah! GO KAIZEN! more from her as the story goes.. =D Eloise nga pala, anong name mo sis?
Haha. Ganda nga ng crisostomo eh.Type ko.Haha. EJ na lang sis.. :)

 

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