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The Bus Stop - Updated; Wasted Confessions
« on: November 23, 2010, 09:43:13 am »
The Bus Stop
where the heart also stops for a second
(c) JC.xxviii 2010


Looking above, I saw the clouds, moving along with wherever the wind was taking it. A drop of water fell on the tip of my nose. I squinted my eyes and wiped it. Then I thought, there's no place like home in this quiet city. I've said, there's no place. Not even my own house.

The bus stop is an exception for I am always alone, which is a good thing. I'm the only one who's in this stop, and I obtain peace.

I walked and turned. There I saw a midget-sized girl standing in front of the other side of the road. She must be new. The bus usually crosses the right side of the street, and not the side where she's facing at. Nevertheless, I'm sure she'll hear the sound of the engine of the bus when it arrives.

The second I pressed play on my iTouch, I heard the song 'Here With Me' by Eleventyseven. Boy, was it a great feeling standing here beside the road, feeling the cold breeze of the morning and hearing the playful words of the song. Just the right feeling.

I looked down at my wrist-clock and it said 7:40. I assumed that the bus would be here in any minute so I removed the little buds placed on my ears. I heard footsteps, and saw the girl walking away. And the bus arrived, stopping in front of me.

"Uh. The bus is..." I uttered but she won't turn around. Another assumption was made—she was on her earphones. "UH. THE BUS IS RIGHT HERE..." I smiled, though looking like a total idiot, I was still glad she turned around; however, feeling puzzled.

I kept my smile, but I was now standing in awe of her physical features. "It's here," I managed to say. She chuckled, probably feeling embarrassed. Her brown ringlets danced with the wind, but she didn't even bother to hold them just in case. She wet her lips and it was rose-pink again. My hormones went berserk for a reason I could not specify. And as we walked toward the door, I felt the urge to let her enter first. And I did. I sat one seat away from her. Being able to see her reflection through the big rear view mirror, I spent the whole time recording ever detail of her face in my head. It felt amusing.

As the bus stopped in front of the main-campus door, I thought of one thing.

I guess this year would be a little different.
« Last Edit: January 01, 2011, 03:55:04 am by JC.xxviii »
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« Reply #1 on: November 23, 2010, 09:53:11 am »
I LOVE THE INTRO. HOOKED NA AKO. OMG. OMG. PLEASE POST THE NEXT UPDATE I`LL GIVE YOU MY FULL SUPPORT! <3

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« Reply #2 on: November 23, 2010, 10:10:39 am »
I LOVE THE INTRO. HOOKED NA AKO. OMG. OMG. PLEASE POST THE NEXT UPDATE I`LL GIVE YOU MY FULL SUPPORT! <3

xoxo,
Gee.
Yay First. Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou Ate Gee! I read what I wrote again, tapos na-isip ko "Hindi ba siya mukang stalker nito?" Hahaha.

I'll post the first tomorrow. Anyway, thankyou ulit! <3
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« Reply #3 on: November 23, 2010, 11:19:26 am »
Woah. Ang ganda lang ng pagkakasulat. I love the start! I'm here to support.
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Chapter One
« Reply #4 on: November 24, 2010, 09:56:55 am »
Chapter One

I consider myself lucky to be admitted in this university. Lucky because my parents have the decision and money. Lucky because I am not pursuing enough, yet they still decided to let me in. However, summing it all up, it all comes down to what the administrators say business.

Though forced to go to a school I don't plan on graduating in, I have been given the opportunity to take the field I want to take. I'm a major in chemistry, and now in my second year of taking it.

As I walked myself to the front door, I found myself following the girl's footsteps. However, when I finally got inside, I lost sight of her. Sighing, I encouraged myself. I'll see her tomorrow...or maybe later. Knowing that there's a million students attending this school, my little statement started holding on to my little hope.

The everyday atmosphere in University of Millburgh can be described in one word—unchanging. Seeing people smiling at you, greeting you and hugging you every weekdays can be a little bit tiring. The same thing applies to the people in my dorm. I go out, hoping to wave good morning at my neighbors, but later realizing that no one actually comes out to breathe the fresh morning air.

"What's up, Luke?" Brad gave me a set of high-five's and a pat on the back, which made me feel like a boss in a football game.

"HEY MAN," I raised my eyebrows, "New year, huh?"

"I have Professor Norman for Biochemistry."

"Sucks for you," I laughed, "Only have to take four classes this semester."

"Still not gonna drop band, eh?" Anne popped behind.

I was taken aback by her new look. She wore her hair orange two years ago, then brown, and what is it now? Blond? Whatever works, I shrugged as I thought of how girls play show their looks off in this campus.

Placing her arm on her hip, she asked defensively, "What are you staring at?"

"Nevermind," I resigned. Bringing myself back to the topic, I finally uttered, "It's called passion."

"That's the spirit," she looked flustered, walking away with her new XXL black converse shoes.

Anne Scott is simply, if I have the permit to say this, an emo girl. Though how hard I push the thought—that she is mature—in my head, I can't seem to recognize it. For all the ladies' sake she's eighteen. Isn't it time for her to grow up and step aside from the high-school trend? I don't like to judge and whatnot, but her outfit is disturbing.

All of us went out for a walk but sadly, the main clock leaning on the wall of the High Tower alarmed us. Time for my first class for the day, and for all of us. An experience that should be missed, for nobody thinks going to your first class is exciting—except the new people in the school; freshmen.

Having extra five minutes to get to class, I first went to the Band Hall and dumped my instrument in there. Having a two minute argument with my band professor, Coach Lloyd, I hurriedly went to the other building, leaving him an unfinished debate.

Hearing the bell, my reflexes buzzed my muscles and I started dashing, room to room. I'm dead! I'm dead! Crap!, I screamed in my head as my heart pumped for more oxygen. I was almost there, but my feet were exclaiming for a break. Slowing my pace a little bit, I grabbed the chance to inhale and exhale—only in an intense manner. My throat was so dry that I felt like scraping it with my own fingers. My chest was popping in and out as I gasp for air. My heart slammed against its walls, creating an indefinite rhythm.

Organic Chemistry. Organic Chemistry? I blinked several times as I read the note glued on the metal door. Organic Chemistry! My eyes bulged out and my lips drew a grin as if I were a lost kid, feeling relieved after seeing his beautiful mommy.

Deliberately, I opened the door only finding my professor; already explaining what's written on his syllabus.

"Mr. Wright, ain't it?"

"Yes indeed, Professor Mayer."

"Tardy on your very first day," he sighed in sarcasm while flipping through the pages of an encyclopedia.

I rolled my eyes as I walked through the room, finding a seat. I found a seat on the fifth row, and the spot was comfortable enough for me to squeeze my soft butt on that cushion for two whole hours learning Carbon from this professor.

"Mr. Wright?"

"Yes?" I asked and everyone's eyes were on me.

"Being late is being absent. Don't come in late next time thinking you'll get exempted from my rules."

"Yes, sir."

I sighed in relief knowing that it is over, and that everyone's head turned away from me. However, I still felt that someone was still looking at me. It was the girl diagonal to my right. She looked at me with a dropped jaw and mortifying eyes. She looked so familiar, though.

I flashed a half-smile and looked away quickly. Whatever, I looked away, but actually looking at her in the corner of my eyes. She looked at me again and as I was about to return the glance, she already turned her head away.

Looking at the ceiling for twenty seconds, I came to realize she was the girl I saw awhile ago. How stupid of me for not recognizing her immediately. My mouth withdrew a smile from the little happiness I was feeling.

"Being absent is failing, Mr. Wright. Chemistry is not for daydreamers."

I covered my mouth and muttered, "Y-Yes, sir. I apologize."

My anger rose from within, Mayer, I swear, it'll only be today, and I call it quits with your sarcasm.

But deep inside I know I cannot lie.

I don't want him degrading me in front of this lovely lady...

Just look at how she stared down at me.

« Last Edit: November 24, 2010, 10:18:53 am by JC.xxviii »
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« Reply #5 on: November 24, 2010, 10:13:14 am »
Chaw, promise me one thing.


Tapusin mo to ha? Kakaloka kang bata ka.  ;D

haha. parang ang tanda-tanda ko na a.

basta tapusin mo to. ha? ha?  :)

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tapusin mo ha?  ;D kulit ko no?  ;D

haha. you should write more stories like this. tuluy-tuloy mo lang to pramis sisikat ka dito sa CC in no time.
« Last Edit: November 24, 2010, 10:18:25 am by mikaayre »
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« Reply #6 on: November 24, 2010, 10:24:49 am »
Chaw, promise me one thing.


Tapusin mo to ha? Kakaloka kang bata ka.  ;D

haha. parang ang tanda-tanda ko na a.

basta tapusin mo to. ha? ha?  :)

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tapusin mo ha?  ;D kulit ko no?  ;D

haha. you should write more stories like this. tuluy-tuloy mo lang to pramis sisikat ka dito sa CC in no time.
opo te! opo! opo! hahaha. thanks, eto lang kasi ang storya kung saan hindi na ako pwedeng magpaka-hirap hirap mag-imagine.  ((= echos.
ay di ko sinasadya. mature yung lalake kasi e, parang manong. haha. thankyouu!~

nga pala, di na ako nagreply nung isang araw. nanalo kasi si pacquiao e. ((:
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« Reply #7 on: November 24, 2010, 10:30:06 am »
opo te! opo! opo! hahaha. thanks, eto lang kasi ang storya kung saan hindi na ako pwedeng magpaka-hirap hirap mag-imagine.  ((= echos.
ay di ko sinasadya. mature yung lalake kasi e, parang manong. haha. thankyouu!~

nga pala, di na ako nagreply nung isang araw. nanalo kasi si pacquiao e. ((:

haha. ayos lang yun. alam ko namang mananalo si Pacman eh kaya alam kong di ka rin magrereply.  ;D

haay. buti ka pa nahanap mo na ang story na hindi ka mahihirapan nang bonggang-bongga kakaisip ng susunod na mangyayari.  ;D
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Re: The Bus Stop *One - Support?
« Reply #8 on: November 24, 2010, 06:24:34 pm »
Ay nako. I really hate professors who are so bibo that they really start teaching on the very 1st day. For Pete's sake, why don't they loosen up a bit? They have the whole semester to teach for crying out loud! At nakakainis lang kapag nagpapahiya pa. Nako. Prof, wag ganyan. Nakakasira ka ng diskarte e. :D

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« Reply #9 on: November 24, 2010, 10:12:57 pm »
Another interesting story to wait for. I will drop by once in a while.

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« Reply #10 on: November 24, 2010, 10:48:22 pm »
Hi! Yanyan here to support! <3

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« Reply #11 on: November 24, 2010, 10:50:21 pm »
@mikaayre; haha. malakas yung faith mo sakanya? XD oo nga eh. kasi minsan, ang OA ng mga naiimagine ko. |: kaya mahirap magrely. haha. uy pero realistic yung MFNH ah. :"> Kala ko nga totoong events yun e.   ;D

@raice03: Hi rachelle! Ako pala si chaw. Haha. Amen, I agree with you. Ganyan akin eh, nakakabanas. First day na first day pa naman. |: Haha

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« Reply #12 on: November 24, 2010, 10:53:31 pm »
Chaw! Makiki-Chaw na rin ako. Pwede? HAHAHA. I`ll read the update tomorrow, okay? :D Hahabol ako, pramis. <3

 

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« Reply #13 on: November 24, 2010, 10:58:26 pm »
Chaw! Makiki-Chaw na rin ako. Pwede? HAHAHA. I`ll read the update tomorrow, okay? :D Hahabol ako, pramis. <3
oo naman. <: HAHAHA. okey. iggreet na rin kita. bukas. haha. pachowking ka ha. charot ((=
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« Reply #14 on: November 25, 2010, 01:38:03 pm »
Hi Chaw! As promised, andito ako at natapos ko nang basahin `yung update.
Anuba `tong si Mr. Wright. Para Mr. Right lang e. ;D
Si girl nalaglag `yung panga niya nung nakita niya si Mr. Wright. HAHA.
Mortifying eyes. Wow, ano kaya hitsura ni girl nun? HAHA.
`Tong prof ni Mr. Wright, favorite student ata si Mr. Wright ah. ;D
Organic Chemistry pa! FTW! I love that subject. <3
Astig ng kurso ni Mr. Wright ah. :D
Anyway, ang ganda ng pagkakasulat mo ng update. I like your English skills.


 

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