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Confessions of My Broken Heart - Check out Page 10.
« on: November 21, 2010, 10:15:07 pm »
Every love story reaches its ending.

Most people want to have their own happy endings.
But unfortunately, we didn’t reach that point.

You said we’re better off apart.
I believed the complete opposite of that.

I know you wouldn’t care if I break into pieces.
But I want to continue writing what I felt and what I feel.

I hope you’ll get the chance to read this letter.
I hope you’ll get the chance to read the


Confessions of My Broken Heart.




Waa. New story. Again. This would be in a different format though. It would be written like a letter. So I hope you'll give this a shot.

Warning: Slow updates. I'm a normal person and I have a life besides writing. I'm in college and I'm working as a Student Assistant as well. Another thing, I have other ongoing stories as well so I have to balance everything out.

Another warning: This is just a testing. Don't be surprised if one day, this would be deleted. But I hope I'll be able to finish this.
« Last Edit: May 24, 2011, 08:12:30 pm by raice03 »

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Re: Confessions of My Broken Heart
« Reply #1 on: November 21, 2010, 10:16:40 pm »
Support~ :)
Promise hindi na po ako magttry mag silent reader

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« Reply #2 on: November 21, 2010, 10:21:06 pm »
Ayiee. Maraming salamat Yanyan! Hahaha. :) Yay for being the 1st tagger. :)





March 1

Dear Drew,

It’s been 3 years since we first met right? Do you remember how we met? Well, in my case, every time that I try to remember that exact moment, it’s as if I was really re-living the moment.

I was with my friend Sam when I first saw you. You were alone and I could sense loneliness in your eyes. The moment Sam left, I urged myself to go and talk to you. I made an irritating sound just to get your attention. You smiled at me and guess what? For the first time in my life, my heart started beating so fast. I guess my heart knew from the start that we’ll be sharing something special.

We talked for hours and it’s as if there’ll be no tomorrow. I’m getting kind of sleepy already but seeing you smile and laugh makes me want to talk to you more. But I guess I gave up because I just found myself hopping off to dreamland. Okay. I have to admit this.  When I entered dreamland, I dreamt of you. It may sound cheesy or what but that’s the truth! No lies! You know how much I hate lying, right?

Anyways, I’m so sorry if I slept. I know I caused you a lot of trouble that day. First, I’m this complete stranger who kept on talking to you and kept on insisting to make you share your story. Second, I made you pay the bills for the food that I ate. Sorry. I’m really into eating. I hope I didn’t use up all your cash that time. Third, I slept while you’re talking. I know it’s kind of rude for me but I’m really, really sorry! Fourth, because I slept without even telling you where I live, you had to bring me all the way to your home.

Oh well. I know there are more cons that happened that day compared to the pros but I’m happy that I got the chance to do all those with you. I’m happy because I got the chance to meet a person like you.

And I know I’ll never get the chance to meet someone like you again.

I love you Drew!

Confessing my heart out,
Michelle


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« Reply #3 on: November 21, 2010, 10:26:50 pm »
AWWW! Grabe yung effect nung letter/entry sa akin para kasing ang bigat nung nararamdaman nung character.

Love it, Rach! <33

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« Reply #4 on: November 21, 2010, 10:38:14 pm »
Support ko `to, siyempre!

Aw. Ang sad ng letter, Raice.

Feel na feel ko. AHAHA

 

VISIT MY BLOG. (o)__(o)

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Sino nga ba ang manhid?
Ako o ikaw? </3

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« Reply #5 on: November 22, 2010, 12:30:18 am »
Rachelle! Nakakaloka! New na naman. But of course, SUPPORT! ;)

This one's uhuhuh-mazing! Different.

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« Reply #6 on: November 22, 2010, 06:16:25 pm »
AWWW! Grabe yung effect nung letter/entry sa akin para kasing ang bigat nung nararamdaman nung character.

Love it, Rach! <33

Ay. Ganun? Super type lang ako ng type kagabi e. :D Pero maraming salamat Yanyan! :)

Support ko `to, siyempre!

Aw. Ang sad ng letter, Raice.

Feel na feel ko. AHAHA

Salamat Gee! :)
Ganun? Hehehe. Sensya di ko masyadong feel e. Wala kasi akong alam sa love. Hahahaha. :D

Rachelle! Nakakaloka! New na naman. But of course, SUPPORT! ;)

This one's uhuhuh-mazing! Different.

Oo. Naloloka na nga rin ako e. Pero nainspire kasi ako dun sa Love, Stargirl na book kaya eto. I want to make a story na pa-letter format din. Hehehe. Maraming salamat Jaja! :)

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« Reply #7 on: November 22, 2010, 06:26:56 pm »
First time ko atang makabasa ng ganitong story ah! Nice! ;)

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« Reply #8 on: November 22, 2010, 06:28:06 pm »
wow ang ganda.  :D

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« Reply #9 on: November 22, 2010, 06:40:15 pm »
First time ko atang makabasa ng ganitong story ah! Nice! ;)

O? Sabagay. Yung binasa ko nga yun yung 1st time kong makabasa ng ganun. Hahaha. I want to try something new e. Chos. Hahaha. :D

wow ang ganda.  :D

Aww. Maraming salamat! Ano palang name mo? I'm Rachelle. :)

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« Reply #10 on: November 22, 2010, 06:45:57 pm »
Haha. Umeechos! :D
Sabagay, pareho lang tayo gusto ng bago. :D
Anyways, bow talaga ako dito. O0

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« Reply #11 on: November 22, 2010, 06:58:25 pm »
Hahaha. Oo nga e. :D
Aww. Thank you talaga! :)




March 2

Dear Drew,

I know after our first meeting, I just left without a word. No thank you. No sorry. No goodbye. I don’t know what has gotten into me that made me left your house and didn’t even bother to wake you up. Maybe because I was hoping that we’ll be meeting each other some other day and I don’t want to run out of words to say. Or maybe I was just too scared to know the consequences of me sleeping out on you.

I remember the day when we met again. I was in school carrying about 5 to 6 books that time. I was looking on the ground and everything went fine until a person blocked my way. The books that I was carrying scattered across the floor. I screamed at that person and got really mad then I just heard some giggling all around me. When I looked up to know why the people around me are giggling, I saw you carrying a bouquet of roses and you were looking at me.

I have to admit this. Instead of being so happy at that exact moment, I got mad at you. I hate being the center of attention. I hate it when my things get scattered. I hate it when people are laughing at me. I hate making mistakes.

But guess what? You changed all those things.

You made me realize that it’s good to be in the spotlight every once in a while. You made me realize that being super organized could be bad too especially if you don’t want people knowing your secrets at once. You made me realize that people don’t laugh at me just because I humiliated myself. It could also be because I said or did something funny, well in the positive way of course. Finally, you made me realize that mistakes could actually make me a better person.

Thank you for bringing me out of my shell. Thank you for destroying the perfectionist and kill joy creature inside me. I know I wouldn’t have done those things if not because of you. So I’m really thankful that you entered my life.

How I wish you’d stay with me forever.

Confessing my heart out,
Michelle



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« Reply #12 on: November 22, 2010, 06:59:30 pm »
Pers~!

Waiteeeeeeey.


Aww. How nice! Naiinlove tuloy ako!
Ang sarap talaga ng feeling kapag in love.
Like Michelle, she realized something and changed dahil  kay Drew.
Sana ako rin mahanap ko na ang Drew ko. :D
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« Reply #13 on: November 22, 2010, 07:30:03 pm »
Ay. May ganun? Oo na. Ako na ang di nakaka-relate. Hahaha. :D
Ang tanong, may nag-eexist pa ba na ganun?

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SANA meron pa. :D

 

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