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TwentyFour. =) Chapter 2 on PAGE 2! UPDATED. Redears?
« on: August 14, 2010, 08:19:24 am »
   
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`Say what you wanna say, i really don't care.



I'm Self - centered person.
Just let me shop and you got your peaceful life.
I like troubles.
Trouble loves me.
I'm the life of the party.


My beauty is Extraordinaire.
Fashion is my Passion.
People loved me, but I don't loved them back.

Well, that's me. not your typical girl.

Just THE Gorgeous B-itch you can never forget.


PREFACE


Some things are true whether you believe them or not  -city of angels.



I never felt this pain before. It was ashamed. Embarrassed. Bitterness. Resentment and Hatred. I already drunk 3 litters of beer for the last 3 hours. I want to evaporate like water. Why is this is happening to me? I loved him like hell. I did everything for that relationship to work. And what the hell he'd done?! HE F-UCKING RETREAT IN OUR OWN WEDDING!



"Hey!" I called the bartender.

"Yes?" he said with a smile.

"If I ask you to marry me, Would you say 'yes'?"
I said while using my most innocent face.

his eyes widened that I  really think it shocked him. Don't need to ask, 'Do I dazzle you?' I smiled and i drink the last drops of my beer.

"I would love to." I put down my glass and look at the bartender.

"Did you say anything?"
I asked with full shocked. Pangahas ka! Sinabe ko bang sumagot ka?

"Nope. He did." Then he pointed the guy beside me.

"Hoy! Sinabe ko bang sumagot ka, ha?!"
I raised an eyebrow in him.

He scoffed. "Well, You were asking, right?" I scoffed too. And stare at him intently.

"And who the hell do you think you are?"


he gulped a beer, then smile not looking at me. "My name is Lux." Lux? As in `yung dating shampoo, na shampoo parin naman ngayon.

I groaned. "Whatever." I searched for my purse when I realized... I was still wearing this fvcking wedding gown I waited for 3 months to be finished pero hindi ko naman nagamit sa tamang panahon!

"Damn it." I cursed like a breath.

"Run away bride, eh?" Damn. Robert Akino!

"I will kill him. I will kill him until wala na siyang hiningang ilalabas pa."
Pinapangako ko sa sarili ko. Hindi na `ko magpapakasal ulit!

"Don't worry. I've got it."
Naglabas siya ng Wallet then paid everything i drunk. I was staring at him like his an idiot.

he look at me then smile. "I just wanna say before I go, You're a weirdo." and kissed him in his lips.


then whispered in his ear. 'mmmm. bvlgari' "Just a piece of advice? Wear a Tux next time we meet." Then I ran like a runaway bride. Just, the groom run away first.










Hi girls! I'm sorry for creating another story. dumaan lang kasi sa utak ko then nabuo ko `yung story. Okay lang ba kung taglish?  Tell me, If you like it. okay? Thanks! (: Call me Cake  :)
« Last Edit: August 28, 2010, 06:34:21 am by PieceofCAKE. »
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Re: TwentyFour. =) Readers?
« Reply #1 on: August 14, 2010, 08:22:48 am »
« Last Edit: August 14, 2010, 03:29:49 pm by PieceofCAKE. »
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« Reply #2 on: August 15, 2010, 04:13:24 pm »
Hi! Gonna support this! Hi Twin! :)

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« Reply #3 on: August 15, 2010, 04:20:47 pm »
Whooaw. Ako naman nahiya, Twin!  :-[ ::) HAHHA. Thanks, ha? >:*<
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« Reply #4 on: August 15, 2010, 04:23:23 pm »
HAHAHA! Nahiya ka pa e ang ganda ng prologue! O0

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« Reply #5 on: August 16, 2010, 02:12:39 am »
HAHAHAH. Loka ka!  ;D Pampalubag loob ulit. Yay-ed you. titigil ako ng YAY pag nabasa ko na story mo. Promise. Hindi lang makapagbasa muna kase aalis kame.
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« Reply #6 on: August 16, 2010, 02:46:52 pm »


Hahaha I like this
nice prologue
Veronica nga pala
call me Ronnie :D
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« Reply #7 on: August 16, 2010, 03:11:35 pm »
:D Thanks, Ronnie.
Call me Cake, Okay?  ;)
I'll update this later. Thanks ult.
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« Reply #8 on: August 16, 2010, 03:55:38 pm »
Astig nito! :) Hey Cake. Still remember me?

 

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LIKE MY PAGE

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« Reply #9 on: August 17, 2010, 08:32:44 am »
Smile Honey. Namiss ko lang ;)
LOVE DEALS


para kang Kpop song, di kita maintindihan pero di kita maalis sa aking isipan :]

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« Reply #10 on: August 17, 2010, 08:42:01 am »
O.

AM.

I stepped out of the dressing room for them to see my beauty.

“You’re the most beautiful bride I have ever seen.” Ninang Lira told me. I face myself in the mirror and amazed by how my beauty amazed me. I wore this floral, long tube gown. It reminds me of water colors.


I sighed. “I know, right?” I said with the sweetest smile I have. Well, no one said that not wearing the usual white, long, and traditional wedding gown is illegal, right? I’m not an attention seeker but they just loved putting me in the center-of-attention.


“That really fits in you and you look stunningly gorgeous. Just like me.”
Briggs sang standing up in his sit in the corner. He hugged me tightly.


“Oh, my God. I never picture you being like this. `You really wanna be a bride?”
He asked with a frown.


“I do.” As pationately as I can. I imagine what Robert looks like. It makes me blush. I twirl around. I love this flowy floral gown.


“here, the last touch and you’re ready for your day.”
George the make-up doer put an oversized earings in my ear.


“there-there. Your mama and papa is absolutely envy in me-us for not seeing this young lady to get wed.”
ninang Rina cut in. Lira and Rina are twins. They’re my father sisters’, They’ve been taking care of me since my parents died. They died when I was 7 years old because of that damn water flood in Hawaii.


“Why are you crying?”
Concerned flooded on Liras’ voice. My eyes became watery for I have seen in their eyes the equal happiness I can feel right now. The happiness that my life will now be and forever composed with a peaceful and full of love and not b-itchy life.


“Ohhh. I think I’ll be at peace.”
I smiled and hug them.


“Why, Are you going to die?”
Rina asked with a giggle.


“Oh, she’s just over reacting! Because this is the day she can legally claim the ownership to Mr. Robert Akino.”
Briggs brag. Oh, how good that sounds in my ears.


“don’t worry the hospital is around the corner and I just bought a memorial space. Do you want anything before you die?”
Chastity walks in. The girl friend you’ll always want to have.


“Oh,” I sniffed. “Sabe ko na may kulang e.” I laugh then run to hug her.


Dalawa silang bestfriend ko sa treadmill ng buhay ko. Si Briggs Storm na confuse sa kasarian at si Chastity Moore na careless like, wala talagang pakielam.


“Akala ko ma-mimissed ko na ang wedding of the Bit-ch. Sheesh! My bestfriend will gonna be locked in the house cooking some cupcakes for my inaanaks. Hay.”
She looked at me with a pityful look.


“You make me cry. I’ll never going to attend any parties na. It sucks.”
Sinabayan ko kaartehan nila.


“What a pity! I planned pa naman that I’ll treat you girls a gin tonic and such.”
Like si Briggs mang lilibre? Eh pati langgam dinadamutan ng pagkain, e. Walang pwedeng masayang. Yan ang motto niya.


“Like, yeah whatever.”
We all said with unison and laughed.


Suddenly something flashed. We look to where the flash came from and found a guy staring at us while smiling. He’s weird.


“Bliss. Ok-ay, Time for memories.”
He must be my photographer because a Nikon camera’s hanging on his neck.


“Dude! You’re cute but taking a picture without permission is so not cool”
Ma-rereach na ata ng eyebrows ni Briggs ang pinakamataas na building sa San Francisco. The photographer guy didn’t take it seriously and just smile at us.


“*im sorry*”
The guy mouthed.


 I giggled. “Briggs! Seriously, He’s my photographer.” He put his hands up like his surrender.


“Oh c’mon guys. Lets get whacky!”
Full of energy naman si Tita Rina.
We, then, fixed ourselves and form a straight line. We posed, smile, laugh and play behind the camera.


He takes 8 shots. And we’re done. On call na ang mga bridesmaid and abays ko. Syempre pati ako kaya inayos nalang ng onti at tinakip na `yung veil ko.


“You’re hot. I want you to take my number in case I wanna have some Hot shots.” I over heard what Chastity is saying to my photographer. I scoffed. Kung hindi lang ako magpapakasal sa taong mahal na mahal ko ngayon. Naunahan ko na si Chaz. No kidding, he’s really hot.


“Okay. But I just take photos of weddings.”
He grins and goes out before Chaz has to say anything flirty again.


“That Sl-ut.” She cursed and flip her hair.


“There’s itch in bi-tch. Now his giving me the reason to like him.”
and she's the ITCH:D


I laughed and approach her. “What the  hell is that. HAHAH. Binusted ka, Chaz!”


“6:30 na pala! the song was now on. Comeon ladies! Lets go!”
The twins shout. My heart fluttered. This is it! Show time na! pinaghalo? LOL.


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I wear my million dollar smile and walked through the aisle.   














Hi guys! Hope ya like the first chap. (:

Astig nito! :) Hey Cake. Still remember me?

Hey Gee! Grabe ka naman. Of course I still remember you. Thanks sa pagbasa! (: Hope you like the fist chap.  :D

Smile Honey. Namiss ko lang ;)

Hi sis. Uh, Sorry pero medjo `di ko nagets `yung na comment mo.  ??? ;D
« Last Edit: August 17, 2010, 04:09:08 pm by PieceofCAKE. »
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« Reply #11 on: August 17, 2010, 08:45:06 am »
Medyo hawig kasi yung concept, nitong story and nung Smile Honey kaya yun..
support.. ;)
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para kang Kpop song, di kita maintindihan pero di kita maalis sa aking isipan :]

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« Reply #12 on: August 17, 2010, 12:41:29 pm »
ooooooooh. Hahahahahahahaha! Ayun todo laugh naman akech. Hindi, ayun uhm, anu pala yung smile honey? As in parehas na parehas ba? :)
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« Reply #13 on: August 17, 2010, 05:44:01 pm »
medyo.
Run away bride kasi ang bida ;)
LOVE DEALS


para kang Kpop song, di kita maintindihan pero di kita maalis sa aking isipan :]

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« Reply #14 on: August 17, 2010, 06:00:14 pm »


hahak :D
nakakatuwa gown niya watercolors nga XD
I'll wait for the update
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