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I understand her.

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue and 'THE BEGINNING' updated.
« Reply #30 on: July 12, 2010, 10:26:35 pm »
Aww, sheeeeiks! Brain cancer!  :'( may naalala akong movie, na yung wife nya may cancer din. It's really heart-breaking.  :'(

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue and 'THE BEGINNING' updated.
« Reply #31 on: July 12, 2010, 10:30:21 pm »
Eee. Prologue, super relaaaate. 00, saddening overload. Nawala yung pagkajumpy ko bigla. Pero okay lang yun. It teaches us to value our lives much much more than we do now. (:
No one can kill the fire of love in your heart.

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue and 'THE BEGINNING' updated.
« Reply #32 on: July 13, 2010, 02:55:16 am »
Ang sakit naman malaman na nabibilang na pala araw ng asawa mo. It's very hard to accept.

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue and 'THE BEGINNING' updated.
« Reply #33 on: July 13, 2010, 06:17:03 pm »
Oh, how fate twists their lives. Shucks. (((:

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue and 'THE BEGINNING' updated.
« Reply #34 on: July 13, 2010, 06:24:22 pm »
Hey Ash, you have a new story! Yey!
Interesting choice of topic. Wala pa ata akong nabasa about third party dito sa CC.
"sometimes love's just ain't enough"

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue and 'THE BEGINNING' updated.
« Reply #35 on: July 15, 2010, 08:33:16 pm »
UNA! Sana.

Whhoooot! Ang lalim. HAHAHA.

Si Alex yung nawalan ng malay? Sorry, I got lost with my direction :D So, doon nagsimula story nila?

Matagal naaaaa. HAHAHA.  ;D

Yep, it's Alex. Tama Krizza. ;D

Second!
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Nung nabasa ko tong line na `to: “I’m sorry. Your wife’s got Brain Cancer. Give a year or two.”.. Nalungkot ako kasi yung tita ko namatay dahil sa cancer.. Wala lang sinabi ko lang.. :))



Really? Awww... sorry Yanyan. Nakakalungkot nga yun. :(

Of course not, Ash.(: We simply love you! Update? Haha. I deleted the next 5 ready made chapters of MLMS para di ka madisappoint. ;D

Alex & Lloyd? ;D I remember John Lloyd Cruz.(: HAHAHAHA.

Talaga lang ha Anya ha? SAME HERE! ;D Weh? meron na??? Tsk!
Haha. I like JL. :D

another WONDERFUL story from you. ikaw na talaga ang isa sa mga pinakamagaling na writers dito sa CC. You never disappoint me or anyone in that case with your stories. ang galing talaga. Kudos! :)

I hope I won't disappoint you with this, truly. I'm really flattered that there's someone who appreciated my effort in writing. :) :D Thank you!

love this. hoy ASH! gumaganito? HAHA. who's your inspiration?  ::) like it. the heart thingy huh? <3  ;)

I'll tell you Star. In my own good time, haha gumaganon? ;D
Naaah. It's nothing no.. echuserang froglet si STAR.

Aww, sheeeeiks! Brain cancer!  :'( may naalala akong movie, na yung wife nya may cancer din. It's really heart-breaking.  :'(

Awww. Anong movie yun? :(

Eee. Prologue, super relaaaate. 00, saddening overload. Nawala yung pagkajumpy ko bigla. Pero okay lang yun. It teaches us to value our lives much much more than we do now. (:

Super relate ba? :D I know why. Hehe.
Yeah... it's life.

Ang sakit naman malaman na nabibilang na pala araw ng asawa mo. It's very hard to accept.

Yes. It's hard to deal with... :(

Oh, how fate twists their lives. Shucks. (((:

It's really fate... :(

Hey Ash, you have a new story! Yey!
Interesting choice of topic. Wala pa ata akong nabasa about third party dito sa CC.

Wow. Mae's here! Thanks! I'm keeping my fingers crossed that this will work. :)

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue and 'THE BEGINNING' updated.
« Reply #36 on: July 15, 2010, 08:48:05 pm »
Nakalimutan ko na yung title eh :( Btw, when's the next update?

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Re: The Other Woman---- 01
« Reply #37 on: July 15, 2010, 08:48:05 pm »
01

Alex

I rolled on my stomach to make a better position, facing my laptop.

Alexandra Valdez: I’m not in a good mood today. My head aches.

Baron Lloyd: Why? Have you taken meds? You should see a doctor.

Alexandra Valdez: Don’t be paranoid. It’s just a headache. How’s your day?

“Alex!” I looked up to see Casey standing on the doorway with her arms crossed over her chest. She rolled her eyes and sighed. She walked over to me but I knew her too much. She was the nosiest best friend I know. Well, not to mention she’s the only one I have.

“What?” I tried to block the screen from her view as her neck was strained to peek over me.

“Alex… you’re still chatting with that ‘best friend’ of yours?” She didn’t hide the bout of sarcasm in her voice as she emitted another exaggerated sigh. “How can you befriend somebody who you haven’t seen, haven’t talked to personally or… what if he’s a psycho? He’s married? He’s…”

“Case…” I gritted my teeth in frustration. “It’s not as if I love him. It’s not as if I’m going to marry him.. and…” I wriggled one finger in her nose. “I’m not that kind to meet up with… with!” I screamed at her face. I glared at her.

“Alex, I tolerated you for a few months after…” She stopped as she saw my downcast glance. “Okay. It’s been a year. But it’s silly. Don’t revolve your world around a non-existent stranger. Psychologically speaking, that… that man had been your diversion from your misery.”

“He’s existing…” I whispered hesitantly. Somehow I knew how true her words are.

“Anyway, what you need is a vacation trip!” She jumped on the bed as she hugged me and wagged two tickets in my face. My gasp turned into a big O. “Caribbean Island?” I arched my eyebrow. My eyes blinked in suspicion as she avoided my gaze.

“It’s time you meet your mother Alex. And leave the past behind…” She tapped my shoulder just as I heard the buzz from my yahoo messenger.

Baron Lloyd: Are you okay?

Baron Lloyd: Hey…

I smiled sadly and I promised myself for the last time. This would be over.

Alexandra Valdez: Yes. I am. And I’m going away… for good.

Why do people always have to say goodbye?


Lloyd

What does it take for people to stay?

I nibbled the tip of my pen absentmindedly as I kept reading the words in my mind.

She had gone offline. A few months before, my brother asked me to e-mail a document to his officemate. I had gotten the wrong address. A mistake that started a silly friendship online. I chuckled humorlessly on my swivel chair. Not that I took it seriously… well, not really. But why did it feel so depressing just now?

“Goodbye Alex…” I whispered just as I typed the last words, shutting the computer in front of me. I closed my eyes for a few minutes when two arms encircled around my chest in a sweet, suffocating embrace.

“Mr. Lloyd Baron St. Claire’s whispering to himself huh, who’s Alex?” She kissed me on the cheek and smiled wanly in front of me. I cupped her slackening cheek; she was in her chemo sessions for a year now.

Just someone…” I shook my head. “You shouldn’t have gone here alone. Where’s Yvette? She should have been with you.” I scowled, trying to sound the reprimanding husband. But as usual, Nina just smiled her way and everything would be great.

“My private nurse also needs a day off. She’s not a robot unlike someone here. Lloyd… you’ve been the best person I’ve had in the world. Don’t you think it’s time you have something for yourself? A gift perhaps?” She pouted prettily but the sadness in her eyes wasn’t lost on me.

“Nina… what ar—” I didn’t like the gleam surfacing in her eyes. She was cooking something fishy.

“Let’s have a vacation!” She wagged our passports and hooted a loud laugh. “To Caribbean Island!”

My brows creased at that. “I can’t. We can’t. How about your session? You’re due to—”

“Yvette told me about a great neurosurgeon residing there. We’re going to find her. Pretty please?” She put her palms together just like in a prayer. I sighed as she always gets her wicked way with me.

“Caribbean it is. I already know the doctor; I thought we could send her here. She is… Dr. Aleja Valdez.”



Sorry if the update is lame. That's stored in my files for a few days now. Hay, I wish I didn't have a prelims on Eco tomorrow. :(

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Re: The Other Woman---- 01
« Reply #38 on: July 15, 2010, 09:04:19 pm »
i've always wanted to read a story about the other woman
just to be rid of the cliches
ever since i heard the song saving all my love for you
i just fell in love with the plot

i wish that this will be a good one!
looking forward to your updates
 :) :) :)

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Re: The Other Woman---- 01
« Reply #39 on: July 15, 2010, 09:10:31 pm »
Wait! May sakit sila tapos pupunta sila sa Caribbean? Nice!

Maganda naman yung update ate e. Hindi siya lame.. promise

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Re: The Other Woman---- 01
« Reply #40 on: July 15, 2010, 09:42:10 pm »
Hi!!! New reader here...

Prologue: Aww...saklap naman nun. Bakit hindi pa nga nila nauumpisahan, naggiveup na kaagad tong si Alex. Don't you think mas maganda kung you try all the possiblities in this world? Wala naman mawawala eh. Minsan lang mangyari yung nagmahal ka at mahal ka din ng taong mahal mo. You're very lucky, girl!  :D

Chappie 0: OH?! Married na tong si Lloyd??? Di ko expected yun ah. Wawa naman nung wifey niya. Cancer is a very treacherous illness.  :(

Chappie 1: TH?! Parehas sila magbabakasyon sa Carribean island? It only means na may chance magkita sila doon. Ooohhhh..... excited na ako!!!!


BTW, Jazz here. Support ko po ito.  :) ;)

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Re: The Other Woman---- 01
« Reply #41 on: July 16, 2010, 04:43:20 am »
Magkikita pa yata sila. Can't wait na magkita sila at magkakilanlan. ;D

next. :)

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Re: The Other Woman---- 01
« Reply #42 on: July 16, 2010, 07:03:28 am »
John Lloyd! Mag-email ka na sakin at pumunta na tayo sa Carribean!! ;D

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Re: The Other Woman---- 01
« Reply #43 on: July 16, 2010, 11:41:17 am »
Of course this will work Ash.  ;)

Hm, could it be destiny that Alex and Lloyd will go on a Carribean Trip?
And I got a feeling that Dr. Aleja Valdez is related to Alex  ;)
"sometimes love's just ain't enough"

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Re: The Other Woman---- 01
« Reply #44 on: July 16, 2010, 05:03:53 pm »
Oh! They're going to Carribean! Sama akooo! :))
Getting excited naaa! Next na Ash! Can't wait for them to meet!

 

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