The Other Woman----THE END. Promoting SLUTTY BETTY!

[vague_yelhsa]

Ako din. Hangga't maaari.  Pero I think that's life.
Hahaha. Sensya na ha, napaiyak ka ba ni Lloyd? Kasiii eh.

HAHA. Anyways, part two? Haha. Sa kabilang buhay? Di ko na kaya.
Sa totoo lang this one's close to my heart, but then mabigat siya sa dibdib isulat.

[krizZ@candy]

Gosh! This got me teary-eyed! Nakahabol din ako sa wakas, Ash! Grabe, ilang beses kong binasa yung chapter 21, akala ko kasi may incest na nangyari. HAHAHAHA.

Maybe, sa susunod na lifetime, may mabubuo uling pag-iibigan. Legal na yun by that time.

Congrats to this Ash! And salamat at di ka pa nag-stop

[jjazz]

Ako din. Hangga't maaari.  Pero I think that's life.
Hahaha. Sensya na ha, napaiyak ka ba ni Lloyd? Kasiii eh.

HAHA. Anyways, part two? Haha. Sa kabilang buhay? Di ko na kaya.
Sa totoo lang this one's close to my heart, but then mabigat siya sa dibdib isulat.

[size=10pt Oo sobra niya akong pina-iyak!  Oo nga eh, life's really unfair sabi nga nila. Nooo...i mean yung mga anak naman nila.  Sobrang tragic naman kasi ng mga happenings eh kaya mabigat talaga yan.

[grounded_gal]

Ash! Sorry, sorry. Ngayon ko lang nabasa. Just been busy lately.
Anyway, nalulungkot ako sa story. Kasi it speaks of reality. Na hindi lahat ng love story e mag-eend just the way you like it. There are love stories that are not meant to be shared in this world.
Akala ko Lady Ann is Lloyd's daughter. Nalungkot ako na namatay pala ung baby nila ni Alex. 

Congrats on this one Ash! Another heartfelt story! 

[yanyan7192]

Chapter 17: Grabe! May Lloyd Junior?? Waaaah! I was being selfish, I knew that. Love had everything to do with it. He was mine at first and I was not willing to share him with anybody. Wrong as it may seemed. Was I that bad? No.. Mahal mo eh.. kaya ipaglaban mo..


Chapter 18: Speechless? Nako! Grabe si Nina talagang kinausap niya si Alex kahit bitter siya e ang tapan niya.. She laughed edgily. “Well, I thought about it. Was I the snake in the paradise?” Her words felt like a knife to my gut. Yes. She was the snake luring Lloyd to take a bite of the forbidden apple. Fave line..

Chapter 19: In time Lloyd… Maybe in another lifetime there would be you and me.  MEH GANOON? Ang sakit ng mga words na yan.. Haaay! Mahal nila talaga ang isa`t isa no? kaso forbidden love ang drama ng buhay nila and that sucks..

Chapter 20: Wait! Hindi ko nagets `to. Hahahah. sorry.

Chapter 21:“Sir please… my mom died six months ago. She specifically told me to… to… find you.” She felt like crying. Her mother’s last lucid words was about finding L.B. St. Claire. Ngayon lang nagsink in sa akin.. Patay na si Alex? WAAAAH! Sorry slow. THIS CHAPTER IS MY FAVORITE. Ash! galing nito.. Waaaaah!

Chapter 22: “There were things I regretted in my life,” I shook my head slowly. “But you were never one of them. Goodbye Alex… and thank you.” The wind was harsh on my skin. I was an old man who kept finding for something that had been lost long ago </3.. Grabe ash! Galing!!!!! hindi ko alam kung ano ang dapat kong sabihin e. Basta! Nice work. LOVE IT!

Tapos ko na kahit hindi pa matino net namin.. Haha!

[vague_yelhsa]

Alam mo Yanyan! You never cease to amaze me. Lahat ng chapters ah!
Weee. Alam mo I have this super BIG smile as I read your comments. Tsk.

THANK YOUUUUUUUUU!

And I note: She was the snake luring Lloyd to take a bite of the forbidden apple.
I also like this line. 

[yanyan7192]

Alam mo Yanyan! You never cease to amaze me. Lahat ng chapters ah!
Weee. Alam mo I have this super BIG smile as I read your comments. Tsk.

THANK YOUUUUUUUUU!

And I note: She was the snake luring Lloyd to take a bite of the forbidden apple.
I also like this line. 

Nagpromise ako diba? Haha!

[iamsoshy]

Ate Ash! Kilala mo pa ko? Ayy, I'm so late. But its always better than never. ;P Hehehe. Sayang naman, hindi sila nagkatuluyan. Baka naman sa life after sila na. Haha. Kaso wala yata tong sequel? Congrats ate! (kahit late na!) Ang ganda nito.

[Lilmiss_sunshine]

DUDE!!!!!! awesome! :"> finished it! grabe. super ganda ng story line, ng pagkagawa and all! TWO THUMBS UP! :> 

[vague_yelhsa]

DUDE!!!!!! awesome! :"> finished it! grabe. super ganda ng story line, ng pagkagawa and all! TWO THUMBS UP! :> 

HAHA. Thanks sis a lot. Ngayon ko lang ito nabasa ulit.

[aishiteruhachi]

I don`t know what to say. As expected, nagulat ako sa mga pangyayari. Hahaha! Hindi ko akalain na ung daddy ni Lloyd ay ung husband ng tinuring na mommy ni Alex. Wow! Grabe Ate, isa ka sa mga writers na kahit pure english ang story di ako tinatamad basahin! Yay!

[mochridhe01]

Can I have a copy of this one?
PLEASE? PRETTY PLEASE?

nicamiel_pinkie@gmail.com

[rcl.monica]

pa send po
cmariannegail@yahoo.com