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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue
« Reply #15 on: July 11, 2010, 05:40:59 pm »
Even if how many times we begin it would always end up the same way. Because it was over even before we started. Shtbrix. So reminiscent of what has happened to me. I'm at lost for words.

Really? What happened? Too nosy of me. Experience is the best teacher that's why I felt like writing this. :)

I'm taking every line literally. HAHAHA. Need some refreshment! Woooo! :))
Okaaaaay, feeling ko , feeling ko lang ha? Forbidden love ba itech?

Wooo. Haha. Hmmm. What do you think Krizza? ::)
Feeling ko din. Haha. Truthfully? Yeah. It is.
« Last Edit: July 11, 2010, 05:58:05 pm by vague_yelhsa »

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue
« Reply #16 on: July 11, 2010, 05:45:09 pm »
Paano? Nasa isip ko e yung sa Moments of Love. Isa nasa present tapos isa nasa past. :D

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue
« Reply #17 on: July 11, 2010, 05:52:08 pm »
Krizza gusto mo ba kong maging spoiler? ;D
Awww. No, hui ah, I might not meet your expectations. It's not like that. It's more of a forbidden love. Yung soundtrack pala nasa taas ng prologue. :)

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue
« Reply #18 on: July 11, 2010, 05:56:42 pm »
Sorry. Nagkaroon ka ng makulit na fan e. :D HAHAHA.
Sige, pakikinggan ko yuuuun. Wait.

Done listening! Medyo nagkaroon ako ng hint. Lalo na doon sa part na, Or would you lie? Would you run and hide? Yaaaaan.
« Last Edit: July 11, 2010, 06:03:01 pm by krizZ@candy »

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue
« Reply #19 on: July 11, 2010, 06:36:36 pm »
ASHLEY :)) I WILL DEFINITELY SUPPORT THIS ONE <3
Chapter 1 na please?  :-\


Even if how many times we begin it would always end up the same way. Because it was over even before we started.

Ouch. Like Danni, I don't know what to say. That line really reminds me of my "best friend" haha.

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue
« Reply #20 on: July 11, 2010, 07:40:53 pm »
It always starts with Hello and always ends with Goodbye. :")

Btw, if anyone wants to join our little group for Ashley, you can PM me, Krizza, Yanyan or Danni. HAHAHA. ;D

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue
« Reply #21 on: July 12, 2010, 12:34:38 am »
Hi! New reader here :) Jaja is the name.

Nice start! Support ko 'to!

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue
« Reply #22 on: July 12, 2010, 07:46:57 pm »
Sorry. Nagkaroon ka ng makulit na fan e. :D HAHAHA.
Sige, pakikinggan ko yuuuun. Wait.

Done listening! Medyo nagkaroon ako ng hint. Lalo na doon sa part na, Or would you lie? Would you run and hide? Yaaaaan.

Hindi okay! HAHA. Okay lang yun, ano ka ba...
Natatouch nga ako eh. ;)

Wala lang, I just remembered that melodramatic song.

ASHLEY :)) I WILL DEFINITELY SUPPORT THIS ONE <3
Chapter 1 na please?  :-\


Even if how many times we begin it would always end up the same way. Because it was over even before we started.

Ouch. Like Danni, I don't know what to say. That line really reminds me of my "best friend" haha.

Aww. May 'best friend' ka din Isa 'di ba? :( Yeah I remembered your story.
Thank you. I'm writing this from the hea.... Haha. Wag na nga. :)

It always starts with Hello and always ends with Goodbye. :")

Btw, if anyone wants to join our little group for Ashley, you can PM me, Krizza, Yanyan or Danni. HAHAHA. ;D

Pinagtitripan na ko ni Anya! Waaah. magupdate ka na! ::)

Hi! New reader here :) Jaja is the name.

Nice start! Support ko 'to!


Hello Jaja, I'm Ash. Thanks. :)

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue
« Reply #23 on: July 12, 2010, 07:56:06 pm »
Yun song ba inspirasyon mo dito? Uy! Di ka pinagttripan ni Ate Anya, loves ka lang talaga namin! ;)

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Re: The Other Woman---- 00
« Reply #24 on: July 12, 2010, 09:04:25 pm »
No, Krizza. It's much more. Hehe. Can't tell my own story so I made something that reflects my own. :( Sira talaga kayo. ::)

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A year ago…

Alex

I dabbed the tears angrily with the back of my hand. As their sobs grew louder in my ears I felt empty-handed and lost to the world. I stared blindly at the deathly pale face of the man on the bed. The pain was something I thought I got used to as time passed by. But I was wrong. Dead wrong. Because I was still aching inside.

I wanted to touch him for the last time. But I didn’t. It would be too much to ask. I absentmindedly touched the heart-shaped choker and pulled it out from my neck, ready to throw it to the nearest wicker basket. I always called it my ‘heart’ even then.

“Alex… you should go away. Mom’s not in a good condition to… to… assist visitors.” Jade tried to make it light. But I knew… I knew that I wasn’t needed. I nodded, just as I was about to walk away I looked at him. Really saw him for who he is. “I’m sorry…” I was walking down the hallway of the hospital when an agitated man marched across from me. In my grieving state I wouldn’t have given him notice but I felt the brush of our arms as he passed me by.

I felt the whole world started to dim. I lost the grip to my ‘heart’.

Lloyd

I was half-running, half-walking as I got out of the car. My heart accelerated in a gritty, fast pace. No one was about in the dim hallway of the hospital save for the woman walking blindly with a withdrawn, bland face and tear-stained cheeks. I hated the smell of medicines and antibiotics in the air. It was like a premonition.

Our arms brushed as I walked past her. I didn’t know why, but there was a silly voice telling me to look back. I was already beside her before she even crumpled on the floor. She fainted dead away.

“Lady, Lady…” I tapped her cheek. I was afraid she was sick as her fair complexion became deathly white. I lifted her in my arms as nurses came rushing to our aid. They took her away from me. I didn’t know why I had this sudden urge to protect her. Silly of course, maybe her vulnerability had just awakened in me my protective instinct.

I hurried just as I remembered Nina. My Nina. “Hello…” She smiled at me just as she saw the worry in my face. The doctor stepped forward with his prognosis.

“How long will I live?” She took my hand and squeezed it just as the words were out. I opened my mouth to say something… something to that startling question of her.

“I’m sorry. Your wife’s got Brain Cancer. Give a year or two.”

I was numb with disbelief then a receding pain washed over me. I slowly gaped at her. She tenderly hugged my midsection. I never thought it was this serious. We never heeded her symptoms.

I couldn’t take it in. She let me go. She knew I was just coming to terms with her illness. I didn’t know how I got out of there. All I knew was how suffocated I’d been. I stood on the hallway not knowing what to do, or what to feel.

I punched the wall with much force. In that moment of my misery I saw that glittering thing on the floor. I picked the heart-shaped necklace with pain. Deep down, I knew it was the woman’s. It felt like my lifeline for holding on to my sanity.

That was the day I unknowingly took her heart with me.
« Last Edit: July 24, 2010, 09:13:45 pm by vague_yelhsa »

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue and 'the beginning' updated.
« Reply #25 on: July 12, 2010, 09:07:23 pm »
UNA! Sana.

Whhoooot! Ang lalim. HAHAHA.

Si Alex yung nawalan ng malay? Sorry, I got lost with my direction :D So, doon nagsimula story nila?

Matagal naaaaa. HAHAHA.  ;D
« Last Edit: July 12, 2010, 09:10:45 pm by krizZ@candy »

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue and 'the beginning' updated.
« Reply #26 on: July 12, 2010, 09:09:34 pm »
Second!
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Nung nabasa ko tong line na `to: “I’m sorry. Your wife’s got Brain Cancer. Give a year or two.”.. Nalungkot ako kasi yung tita ko namatay dahil sa cancer.. Wala lang sinabi ko lang.. :))

« Last Edit: July 12, 2010, 09:20:05 pm by yanyan7192 »

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue and 'THE BEGINNING' updated.
« Reply #27 on: July 12, 2010, 09:20:48 pm »
Of course not, Ash.(: We simply love you! Update? Haha. I deleted the next 5 ready made chapters of MLMS para di ka madisappoint. ;D

Alex & Lloyd? ;D I remember John Lloyd Cruz.(: HAHAHAHA.

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue and 'THE BEGINNING' updated.
« Reply #28 on: July 12, 2010, 09:21:37 pm »
another WONDERFUL story from you. ikaw na talaga ang isa sa mga pinakamagaling na writers dito sa CC. You never disappoint me or anyone in that case with your stories. ang galing talaga. Kudos! :)

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Re: The Other Woman---- Prologue and 'THE BEGINNING' updated.
« Reply #29 on: July 12, 2010, 10:21:46 pm »
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Even if how many times we begin it would always end up the same way. Because it was over even before we started.
love this. hoy ASH! gumaganito? HAHA. who's your inspiration?  ::) like it. the heart thingy huh? <3  ;)
« Last Edit: July 12, 2010, 10:32:22 pm by patrickstar_05 »

 

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