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Re: Frozen In Time | 02
« Reply #30 on: June 13, 2010, 09:08:12 pm »
Awww. I like this.

When I started reading this, it made me want to go back in time.
I reminisced being that little again like Natalie. ::)
And Matteo being the arrogant brat. HAHA.

And I don't want to lose my heart to someone else also.

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« Reply #31 on: June 14, 2010, 12:06:57 pm »
@Baby: Yung chapter two, after lunch ko kahapon pinost. :))
@Mama: HAHAHA. Napaglilipasan na ba tayo ng panahon? :P
@Kuya Ken: Yes. Hahaha. I used my elementary classmates as reference. Ganon kasi sila. Hohoho.
@Ate Ashley: Hahaha. :)) Can't resist Matteo's charm. LOL. Thanks for reading!

Author's Note: Last update before resumption of classes. HAHAHA. Okay, I must remind you that the characters in this story as just kids. Easy to please and all that. So, no bashing once you're finished with the chapter. Enjoy!



03

It was the last day of classes, but there is something bigger happening.

Natalie looked up to the clock. A few minutes pass two. In less than half an hour, she would be out of this room, dancing around the playground with her friends and giggling like hyenas. They would wait for their fetchers whilst greeting her a happy birthday.

She told no one about it. Natalie even asked the teachers not to say a word about it, though there was a noticeable star in her notebook. It was a present for being a fine girl for the whole school year.

Fifteen more minutes.

Anya, the one on her left, was casually humming the birthday song. Too conspicuous. The other person on her side was giving her weird glances.

Ria, the one on her right, could barely keep her butt on the chair. She was clutching the arm rest tightly, her knuckles turning white. Natalie bets she would be the first to go out of the classroom scream like a banshee.

Natalie tapped her feet, catching the eye of Ms. Ferolina. She was giving them last minute speeches. Natalie hated farewells; the long two-month vacation was waiting for her with open arms. Her lips turned to random twists before settling to a thin line.

The bell rang loudly. Kids squealed as they grabbed their bags and ran outside. Anya and Ria were a part of the overjoyed throng. Natalie, being the good girl she was, walked out like it was a regular school day.

Someone blocked her path.

It was unfair being so tall for eight years old, Natalie muttered under her breath. Her eyebrow rose a few millimeters as she saw Matteo grinning from ear to ear. Her foul expression turned to a curious one.

"Happy birthday."

Her jaw dropped a little. She was sure nobody knows it. Kids have short attention spans, Natalie quoted her mother. Her eye then dropped to the big paper bag Matteo was holding out.

"Thank.. You?" Matteo passed the gift to her small hands. It was shaking; Matteo noticed it and laughed.

"It's the last day. I won't bite." He even poked her cheek. "I hope we can be friends." Matteo held his hand out.

It was all too fast. Friends? After two years of being archenemies? But the time of being toddlers was gone. They were now growing; as they bloom alongside each other, the distance between them widens. Maybe friends wouldn't be so bad.

"Do you think my hair still looks pretty?" Natalie whispered, too shy to let their teachers hear. Her head dropped; she was being silly. This was Matteo we're talking about, selfish, boisterous--

"You're hair will always be the prettiest."

It was all it took for Natalie to give him a bear hug. She jumped to him, her arms in his neck and her head resting on his shoulder. He did not smell like sweat. Natalie took in the sweet scent and smiled.

Ms. Ferolina and Ms. Silva could not help but be awed by the sudden change of course. The two looked at the kids with starry eyes. Deep inside, they were sure that at one point, the roads in their lives would merge.


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Re: Frozen In Time | 03
« Reply #32 on: June 14, 2010, 12:10:46 pm »

"You're hair will always be the prettiest."

aww. right words at the right time. yihee!
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Re: Frozen In Time | 03
« Reply #33 on: June 14, 2010, 12:17:48 pm »
Labs, nag-apir pa kami ni nanay nyan. haha. Ang cheesy!!!!
Haha. Mga batang nagkakabati. Hahaha. Oh tama na. Malalaman mo na naman kabulastugan ko nung elem haha.  ;D ;D ;D
napaghahalata si Ria oh. hindi makapaghintay! Hahaha.  ;D ;D ;D
Anyways, ang cute talaga nila!!! Ang sarap tignan. :) :) :) :) :) :)

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Re: Frozen In Time | 03
« Reply #34 on: June 14, 2010, 12:23:03 pm »
Nakita ko pangalan ko. HAHAHA. At magkaklase kami ni Natalie. SAENGIL CHUKHA HAMNIDA NATALIE! =) HAHAHA. That`s happy birthday in korean. Kakantahan din kita if you want, at dahil birthday mo, libre na. HAHA.

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Re: Frozen In Time | 02
« Reply #35 on: June 14, 2010, 01:05:20 pm »

@Kuya Ken: Yes. Hahaha. I used my elementary classmates as reference. Ganon kasi sila. Hohoho.

That's cool. I utilize people in the past also pero I mix them up together rin, para just to see what kind of combination character I get.  ;D And good yan na ginagamit ang past classmates as reference, kase ang daming past classmates na kalog that is so cool to use diba?
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Re: Frozen In Time | 03
« Reply #36 on: June 14, 2010, 03:17:13 pm »
aw, how sweet of Matteo.  :)
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« Reply #37 on: June 14, 2010, 04:48:18 pm »
I really like the way you write this Danni. :)
Matteo reminds me of my childhood friend. Sweet.

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« Reply #38 on: June 14, 2010, 05:39:22 pm »
Danni! Habol ako this weekend ha? Don't worry, susupport ko to. ;)
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Re: Frozen In Time | 03
« Reply #39 on: June 14, 2010, 06:17:54 pm »
Happy Bday Natalie.. HAHA
Naalala ko tuloy nung bata ako.. mga simpleng bagay matutuwa na agad ako..

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Re: Frozen In Time | 03
« Reply #40 on: June 15, 2010, 07:40:39 pm »
Hi, Danni. :D ---

I'll read all three updates muna. Haha! I'll support this, pare! *apir
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« Reply #41 on: June 15, 2010, 09:54:05 pm »
ai girlaloo haha ;D ;D ;D
wala lang padaan. ahha. bukas ka na mag-reply eh. ahha. astigin. fixed and sched. haha. sana ako din. ahha ;D ;D ;D
ko imposible sa takbo ng utak ko. pero gusto ko talaga role dito. eye witness eh.

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« Reply #42 on: June 15, 2010, 10:24:18 pm »
new reader. Jaja here... Awwww :) ang cute naman ni Natalie at Matteo.. I like your story.... :)

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Re: Frozen In Time | 03
« Reply #43 on: June 16, 2010, 04:01:01 am »
HAHAHAHA Being a kid is better than being a teacher. Yay childhood! \m/ HAHAHAHA. Di ako makaget over. XDDD Anak ng tata mo, Matteo, aagawin kita kay Natalie, okay lang? ;D

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« Reply #44 on: June 16, 2010, 06:15:12 pm »
Oi yhabby, awayin kita. Haha. Being a kid is better than being a teacher ka dyan,. Porket ikaw, lagi ka na lang bata sa storya ganyan ka ah. haha ;D ;D ;D

 

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