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Re: Frozen In Time | END
« Reply #195 on: August 30, 2010, 01:43:54 pm »
Mama, Lorenzo and Natalie didn't end up together. That's just a friendly goodbye. cindy_red03, what's your name? Thanks for reading, though it's the end. ;p Ate Anya, Jaja, wala lang. Haha. Thanks for reading everyone.

This is, well, kind of crap. Lol. Be the judge.

Next post will be my lengthy(or not) author's note. Thanks everyone!


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Epilogue

Years later

Matteo opened his eyes.

The train lurched to a stop. His body was flung to the chair in front of him. He nearly toppled over. Cussing under his breath, he sat properly and pressed the curtains aside.

It was a mid-November afternoon. Sunrays were barely reaching the horizon. The air was cold even he was on a fully carpeted box. Matteo sniffed; he was never friends with the cold.

His long legs stretched to the chair in front of him. Searching in his backpack, he touched the dog-eared journal which held his thoughts. He flipped through the pages. Matteo could not remember when he started jotting down private matters; it must be maturity that made him to.

His eyes scanned the dates. 2012. 2011. 2010. 2009. 2008. 2007. He stopped. Matteo was back at the first page of his journal. His handwriting marked the surface roughly. He remembered why; of course, it was what drove him to follow his calling.

He knew she would succeed. He never heard a thing from her except for the occasional stories from Megan and Kate. Oh, they separated during freshman year. The two met their former friends, Ria, Yanyan, and Anya. The five remained on the hip since then. They tried to hang out, but it never worked out to be a group once more.

His eyes drifted to his violin. Inside, he gloated in pride. He heeded her words – go after your dream. And he did. Matteo succeeded and received honors way beyond his imagination.

But life was tiring. At some point, you have to take a break.

Matteo went out of his compartment. The hall was flooded with amber. His stomach growled. Matteo followed to where the hall leads and arrived at a snack bar.

There was an event going on. A table for two was set in the middle of the room. There was the guy, a decent looking one, in his coat and denim jeans. Matteo settled on the stool and ordered a sandwich and a soda. Once again, he looked back.

There came the girl, wearing a lacy green dress. Her eyes did not drift to the guy first. Instead, it scanned the room, as if trying to remove her thoughts off what would happen. Then it landed to Matteo.

Natalie.

Matteo was sure of it. He could not open his mouth to yell a greeting. As embarrassing as it was, he would surely not mind. Natalie, the girl who was once his best friend. Natalie, the lady who grew and told him to move on. Natalie, the stranger of a woman.

He saw a hint of recognition in her eyes. Natalie briefly smiled before proceeding to the guy.

Matteo did not linger at the snack bar. He was too enticed by that stranger; he would not be able to control himself from asking her who she was. Instead of moving his legs, his feet only curled. Damn it, he thought, he had to go somewhere.

“Happy anniversary, Natalie.”

He knew it. Oh good gracious, his suspicions were proven correct. Matteo balled his fist. What could he do, hold the guy on his neck and—

It was not like he had romantic feelings towards Natalie.

They were best friends. Confidants. Partners in crime. The relationship they had was purely platonic, but Matteo knew better when he saw Lorenzo and Natalie together that last day in grade school. He was simply too late.

As he walked out of the snack bar, he did not spare a glance to the happy couple. Maybe that was the reason why he dreamt of them, specifically of her. Because she was so close, so reachable. If he just knew she was in the same train as she was. If they had just continued being friends—

All he could do was regret. All he could do was relive dreams, reminisce the good times, and visualize her. All he could do was to plant in his heart what was frozen in time.

Fin.

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Re: Frozen In Time | END
« Reply #196 on: August 30, 2010, 01:51:47 pm »
All he could do was regret. All he could do was relive dreams, reminisce the good times, and visualize her. All he could do was to plant in his heart what was frozen in time.

FTW! O0

Congrats Baby. A job well done. :> Well, not-so-happy ending eh?
No one can kill the fire of love in your heart.

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Re: Frozen In Time | END
« Reply #197 on: August 30, 2010, 01:53:32 pm »
aww,  :'(

danni, i hate you for making me cry.  ;D i feel so sorry for Matteo.  :(

but it was a good story anyway, i just wished it ended the way i expected it to be.

i'm a sucker for happy endings.  :'( :'( :'(
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Re: Frozen In Time | END
« Reply #198 on: August 30, 2010, 06:43:46 pm »
Ohmy. Tapos na pala to. Sorry Danni. Ang dami ko ng namiss pati sa ibang stories mo. Habol ako sa iba, Promise!  ;)
Anyway, nalungkot naman ako for Matteo. Akala ko pa naman, in the end e sila din ni Natalie ang magkakatuluyan. Kasi naman e, ang bagal niya. hehe

Congrats on this one Danni.  :)
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Re: Frozen In Time | END
« Reply #199 on: August 30, 2010, 09:25:19 pm »
labs. ang haba ng hinabol ko. IMY!!!
i super miss you.

oh by the way, great job. ang galing mo talaga. super nain-love ako. at super nagkaroon ng heart breaking sound sa loob ko sa pagbabasa nito.

natalie and matteo would simply be a perfect memento of childish love and friendship. but it'll be stuck in my heart like everyone. :)

p.s. enge akong copy. thanks.
:) love yah:)

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« Reply #200 on: August 30, 2010, 10:03:19 pm »
Baby! I love the update! As in the whole story.. :)
Kahit hindi siya happy ending maganda pa din.. LOVE IT!! Sorry late na ako nakabasa wah? Kakauwi ko lang e

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Re: Frozen In Time | END
« Reply #201 on: August 31, 2010, 11:53:41 am »
Aww. A not-so-happy ending eh? :'( Matteo, ayan kasi e. Tsss. Wala na akong masabi.

But at least, nakita mo na kung ano ang dapat makita :)

Good Job Sis!!

I so so so love it! (:

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Re: Frozen In Time | END
« Reply #202 on: August 31, 2010, 01:14:29 pm »
Aw. I thought magiging sila sa huli.  :-[ But the endings great though. Sana may season 2. :)

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Re: Frozen In Time | END
« Reply #203 on: August 31, 2010, 06:35:48 pm »
Mama Strawberry, JaneGanda, Ate Lyn Labs, Ate Mae, Baby, Jaja, Ate Anya, thank you.

Author's Note:

The concept of the story was basically to narrate childhood love between the protagonists. Well, I thought it would be easy, since I have passed through that stage in life. I was wrong. Writing Frozen in Time was a challenge; I was not one to make things easy. I am used to complication and drama.

This story made my heart melt. This was a memoir of what I have experienced before. Innocent. Reckless. Silly. Not life-changing, but this would stand as a foundation for what we would be.

I'm glad you took time to read this. Thank you. God bless. See you in my other stories. (:

<3 Danni

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Re: Frozen In Time | END
« Reply #204 on: August 31, 2010, 06:42:18 pm »
Hahabol ako dito! Once I'm done with MOARH, I'll re-read this tas I'll post my comment. :)

Congratulations, Bebe! Another finished story :) O0

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Re: Frozen In Time | END
« Reply #205 on: September 01, 2010, 07:47:26 pm »
Danni! Congratulations on this one! ::)

First and foremost, I think the ending was just right. Though I hated almost-tragic endings, but reality bites, it was always not the way we wanted it to be. Hey, I'm getting melodramatic over this. HAHA.

Hiramin ko pala ito pangstat sa FB (Hope you don't mind): But life was tiring. At some point, you have to take a break.

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Re: Frozen In Time | END
« Reply #206 on: September 02, 2010, 06:44:39 pm »
Wee... Kakabasa ko lang nito kahapon tapos ngayon lang ako nakapag comment.  ;D Anyways, sobrang ganda nito ate!  ;) Waa.
To be with you... Forevermore. :)

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Re: Frozen In Time | END
« Reply #207 on: September 02, 2010, 06:51:10 pm »
Bebe: Sure.

Ate Ash: Hahaha. :3  We have to be real, people. ;p Sure, you can borrow it.

ChocoLabs: Hello there. Thanks for reading this. (: Ano palang name mo?

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« Reply #208 on: September 02, 2010, 08:22:23 pm »

ChocoLabs: Hello there. Thanks for reading this. (: Ano palang name mo?


Weee.  :) Irah nga po pala  :D
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Lonely Procrastinator

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Re: Frozen In Time | END
« Reply #209 on: September 02, 2010, 08:30:06 pm »
Oh, Hi Irah. Nice meeting you. Sana masuportahan mo rin yung iba kong stories. Lol, promote.

 

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