The Loss of Innocence---- FINISHED. Please don't distribute without permission.

[vague_yelhsa]

Hello. I'm here again with another story. Anyway... I have my mind set on finishing this one, that I promise. I'm just getting restless these days. Though may On-going story kami ni xfvckdollx entitled The Doll. This one's another suspense/romance story just like Promiscuous. I hope this will work.

The Loss of Innocence

character poster by p!nk

13 Offerings 

13 Virgins

One man

One book

One goal

That is to obscure… immortality.

Who will stay alive?
Who will still be sane?
Who will remain innocent?

13th of May, I looked around at the people crowding the black casket while the priest is praying for the good soul to make it to heaven. I did not intend to kill her, that precious soul. It wasn’t my calling to be a murderer. But do I have a choice? She left me with none. Poor me, if she’d only let herself be a sacrifice… tsk, tsk. At least she served her purpose. Now, I’d have to contend myself with the last one, the 13th virgin. I told you again, and again… I did not commit murder; I wouldn’t have done it without a great cause. I am not really obsessed with it… but I would go to greater lengths just to have it. If anyone would have termed me mad. I would have laughed off in his face. I am just… a genius.


Who would have thought I have this mind set for something bigger than life?
Who would have thought about the black book?
Who would have thought my next victim will be…

Characters:

Sabrina Mendez
Rolf Dumas Walker
Derrick Murray
Sire Jamie Dell
Brent Ford a.k.a. Spiky
Detective Willhelm Hinnes
Professor Duncan Rufus
Dara Osbourne
Riva Valdez

[curiousity kills]

yay!!!
i love the title and the prologue!<3 post more soon!

[grounded_gal]

super like ash! 
superb prologue. very catchy!

[sweetrax]

Hello Ash. Very interesting story. Will support this. -Alyssa

[yanyan7192]

Ash! Support ko `to. HAHA

[vague_yelhsa]

yay!!!
i love the title and the prologue!<3 post more soon!

Hello. Thanks. Yeah, soon.

super like ash! 
superb prologue. very catchy!

Wow. Hello Mae.
Thanks talaga.

Hello Ash. Very interesting story. Will support this. -Alyssa

Hi Alyssa. Thanks.

Ash! Support ko `to. HAHA

Yanyan is also here! Thanks.

[♥2nd_vhie♥]

hey-hey.. my new story ka na naman! haha

support .. haha

[missSHAKEspeare012]

HAHALOOOL. Puro 13 anak naman ng ASSDFGHJK oh. Support to ni Riapot.

[vague_yelhsa]

hey-hey.. my new story ka na naman! haha

support .. haha

HAHAHAHA.

HAHALOOOL. Puro 13 anak naman ng ASSDFGHJK oh. Support to ni Riapot.

Oo unlucky number daw. Haha. Waaah. Tinatamad na naman ako Riaaaa. Medyo nagsasawa ako ngayon sa routine ko araw araw. I'm getting fickle-minded about this story.

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Sana may madagdag pang readers. I'm being fickle-minded nowadays about this story, bigyan niyo naman ako ng inspiration.

[ic3]

support ko toh

[xfvckdollx]

WHAT THE HELL IS THIS? OHMYFCKINGGOSH I SWEAR SOMEONE MADE KALABIT TO ME JUST NOW. OHMY THERE'S NO ONE AROUND.

Okay, I'm freaking out ))))))))))

Anyway, INTERESTING! As always. Go, go go Ashleigh

[aeinlovewithyou]

Support ko ulit to Ash. Langya, eto ka nanaman sa restless mind mo. HAHAHA. Babasahin ko nalang mamaya. Inaantok na ko eh. >.<

[missSHAKEspeare012]

Oo unlucky number daw. Haha. Waaah. Tinatamad na naman ako Riaaaa. Medyo nagsasawa ako ngayon sa routine ko araw araw. I'm getting fickle-minded about this story.

Grabe. Di ba sabi nila malas daw yung Friday the 13th? Hindi naman kaya sakin. Abnormal ako. XD Wag kang mag-alala Ate Ash. Pag nagpasukan na, hindi ka na mabobore. Kasi super dami na ng gagawin mo. You're fickle-minded naman pala eh, why don't you update na? Riapot is waiting. :">

[Lonely Procrastinator]

Really felt the suspense. First entry pa lang.

[aeinlovewithyou]

Sounds like Kulto. Hahaha. Update naaa!