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It Started With A Deal ~ Announcement ;) Nov7
« on: May 02, 2010, 06:21:21 pm »
Una sa lahat, HELLO! Haha. So eto yung First Story ko(na-ippost). Ngayon lang ako nakaipon ng tapang para ilathala kung ano man yung imbento ng utak kong mapagpanggap.  ;D

Pangalawa, gusto nyo ba malaman ang kwento sa likod ng storyang ito? Kung hindi, eh, sorry. Ikkwento ko pa din. >:D
Kasi nung isang araw, nagpaalam ako sa isang tao. Paalam ko sakanya na gagala ako with highschool friends ko. Eh sya naman naturingang maarte, HAHAHA, PEACE! Baka mabasa mo eh. So yun nga, nung una ayaw nya pumayag pero konting pilit pa, pumayag na din. Pero, PERO may mga rules syang binigay sakin. Kaya ang sagot ko sakanya was, DEAL. At dun na nga pumasok sa isip ko itong story na to.

Pangatlo, kung may kamuka tong story ko dito sa CC or anywhere, NANGANGAKO ako na sarili ko tong gawa at walang pinaggayahan.  :)

Pang apat, kung sakali namang may nakapangalan kayo dito, WOW! Good, right? Pero galing lang din sa sarili kong pagttyaga at pag iisip ang pangalan ng mga characters dito.

Panghuli, ENJOY! ;)



IT STARTED WITH A DEAL

CLiCK!:)

A DEAL?

It is a very particular word used to refer to an AGREEMENT,
much more to an action that was planned.

But, if a deal turned out to be the other way around,
would you rather back out?
Or still continue what was talked about?
Even if the consequences would possibly be altered?

***

Am I aware of what MIGHT be the outcomes?
Am I not scared?
Am I so sure about this?
BUT,

I agreed to this.
He agreed to this.

We had a deal.

A deal that was bound to last.




Questions, Comments, Suggestions and Yays are HIGHLY APPRECIATED!  ;)

BTW, I'm Karyl. :>
« Last Edit: November 07, 2010, 08:53:24 pm by Maqi »

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Re: It Started With A Deal ~ Prologue :)
« Reply #1 on: May 02, 2010, 06:23:49 pm »
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We had a deal.

A deal that was bound to last.

I love this part. Here to support. :)
"Carry out your literary dream no matter how far it may seem."

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Re: It Started With A Deal ~ Prologue :)
« Reply #2 on: May 02, 2010, 07:00:12 pm »
^ Uy, wow! Thanks! Hahaha. ;D
Loveyou na, sis!

Grabe, sana may mga magsupport pa nito. nakakakaba pala dito. :|

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Re: It Started With A Deal ~ Prologue :)
« Reply #3 on: May 02, 2010, 07:02:40 pm »
^ Uy, wow! Thanks! Hahaha. ;D
Loveyou na, sis!

Grabe, sana may mga magsupport pa nito. nakakakaba pala dito. :|

Meron yan, dadami din yan. ;)
"Carry out your literary dream no matter how far it may seem."

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Re: It Started With A Deal ~ Prologue :)
« Reply #4 on: May 02, 2010, 07:06:49 pm »
Hi! Ang cute ng intro. Support ko to. O0 Ria here. :)
No one can kill the fire of love in your heart.

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Re: It Started With A Deal ~ Prologue :)
« Reply #5 on: May 02, 2010, 07:08:25 pm »
waaaaaahhhh! :D

support din ako! 8)

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Re: It Started With A Deal ~ Prologue :)
« Reply #6 on: May 02, 2010, 07:11:53 pm »
pasali wa
support! ko po to

♥aira

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Re: It Started With A Deal ~ Prologue :)
« Reply #7 on: May 02, 2010, 07:13:39 pm »
ATEE!  :D
ange here  ;)
susupport ko to, as what i said  :P
post mo na chapter 1  :)
ge po. ingat.  :-*
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Re: It Started With A Deal ~ Prologue :)
« Reply #8 on: May 02, 2010, 07:14:39 pm »
sis~?hello!i want to read your story.. hihi! support po ako..

fighting~!<3


Why did I end up falling for you?


I Hate you but I Love you


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Re: It Started With A Deal ~ Prologue :)
« Reply #9 on: May 02, 2010, 07:23:33 pm »
Meron yan, dadami din yan. ;)

Hihi, thanks talaga Ate Bianca!  ;)

Hi! Ang cute ng intro. Support ko to. O0 Ria here. :)

Yes, thanks Ria/Ate Ria. Anong age mo na?

waaaaaahhhh! :D

support din ako! 8)

Thanks Lei!  ;)

pasali wa
support! ko po to

♥aira

Sure! hehe. Thanks Aira!

ATEE!  :D
ange here  ;)
susupport ko to, as what i said  :P
post mo na chapter 1  :)
ge po. ingat.  :-*

Wow, inantay kita. Haha. THANK YOU! ;)

sis~?hello!i want to read your story.. hihi! support po ako..

fighting~!<3


Ahaha, thank you! name mo?

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Re: It Started With A Deal ~ Prologue :)
« Reply #10 on: May 02, 2010, 07:32:37 pm »
Cool start. O0 I like.

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Re: It Started With A Deal ~ Chapter1A.
« Reply #11 on: May 02, 2010, 07:48:20 pm »
Chapter 1A: Shall We?


"Ehem. Deal?" What now, Kuleen? You asked this. Answer, dummy! You need him.

"Y-yes, deal." I shaked his hand, signed the contract and walked my butt out in his office. I rushed in my car and drove my way home.

***
So, sino ba ko? Sino yung kausap ko? Anu yung deal namin?

First of all, I'm Kuleen Fiobella. 17 yrs old. 4thyr student of La Carmela Academy. 2nd family lang kami ng mom ko. Yes, kabit yung mom ko. I never met the other family, I mean the legal family. At di rin naman ako interesado sakanila. Mom said, they knew nothing about us. I neither love nor hate my dad. Parang wala lang. When he's with us, sinasagot ko naman pag may tanong sya but I never started any talk.

Whenever dad's inside the hous madalas ako pumupunta sa kapit bahay, kila Elise de Guzman, bestfriend ko. Dun ako nagstay all day, uuwi lang pag past 12 na, kasi for sure nakauwi na si itay nun, sa totoong bahay nya. Tatawid ako ng bakod at sa terrace ng room ko sa 2ndfloor dadaan. Rebelde ba? Haha. Di naman. Yung kausap ko naman kanina, si Ian. Short for Christian dela Roma. He's 18yrs old. Working. Pero sa company ng dad nya. Though tambay lang naman sya don. Ahaha. College student ng Ateneo. Rich, famous, handsome, hot. In short, hearthrob. He plays with girls but once he's inlove, bye bye girls, he'll be dead serious. Isa pa lang sineryoso nya. Si Tiffany Suarez. Classmate ko. Head ng cheerleading squad. Sexy and beautiful. But I heard they broke up. HAHAHA. Tsismosa ko no? Well, di naman. Ganyan lang talaga dito. Natural na ang pagkalat ng balita. Loser ka if you're not updated.

If you're wondering kung ba't kami magkakilala ni Ian, it's because yung dad nya ex ng mom ko. Tas yung mom nya at mom ko, bff. Weird. IKR? So madalas naman kami bumisita kila Ian and sila samin. Friends kami ni Ian, but not that close. Hi, hello ganun. Mga simple greetings lang.

And to answer the last question, Ian and I had a deal. May jejemon kasi ako na stalker. Hahahaha. Joke! ;D Actually, nerd sya. Si Aaron Balmores. He keeps on sending me mushy letters, poems pa kamo na gawa daw nya. ::) Sunod ng sunod sakin. Nung minsan pa, may inipit na picture sa windshield ng car ko. Guess who yung nasa picture.

HIM KISSING ME ON MY LEFT CHEEK! :O Though edited sya, kahit na no! For pete's sake! Kamusta yun diba? Okay lang sya? Lagi pa kong tinatawagan sa cp at landline! Pati sa FB! Gumawa daw ba ng account naming dalawa! Plus, fan page! Oh, bonga diba? I told him naman ng maayos, masinsinan, matino, hinay hinay, dahan dahan at kung anu ano pang paraan na AYOKO SAKANYA, pero wala. He'll wait daw. Hindi naman sa dini-discriminate ko sya dahil sa pagiging nerd nya, pero kita nyo naman yung mga ginagawa nya diba. Ewan ko na lang. Kaya nga I asked Ian's help. Sabi nya, he'll pretend to be my boyfriend. Sa school nya pati sa school ko. Di naman siguro magagalit si Tiffany kasi boyfriend nya na si Joshua Dee. Captain ball ng soccer team sa school namin. Half chinese, half pinoy. 4thyr din pero ibang section. Yea, he's like Ian pero mas okay pa din si Ian. Si Joshua kasi super yabang. As in SOBRA. So yun nga, then as for Ian, kaylangan daw nya din ng tulong ko kasi iniisip daw ni Tiffany, head over heels pa din si Ian sakanya. Kaya eto, tulungan kami. May nagtatanong naman sakin na gusto manligaw, oo gwapo, pero not my type.



Sorry if medyo boring pa. Introduction pa kasi ng characters eh. Sana naiintindihan nyo.

So yan, HAPPY READING MUNA NG CHAPTER 1. Part 1 pa lang naman to!  ;)

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Re: It Started With A Deal ~ Prologue And Chapter1A :)
« Reply #12 on: May 02, 2010, 08:04:27 pm »
Ga;ing nung nerd magphotoshop. LOL. =))

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Re: It Started With A Deal ~ Prologue And Chapter1A :)
« Reply #13 on: May 02, 2010, 08:04:58 pm »
Me likey Joshua. HOHO. :)) Nakakainis talaga yung jejemon stalker. FEELER. :)) Ano yung deal?! OHMAAAY. Naeexcite na akoo~

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Yes, thanks Ria/Ate Ria. Anong age mo na?

Katorse lang ako. :)) Ikaw...po? ;D
No one can kill the fire of love in your heart.

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Re: It Started With A Deal ~ Prologue And Chapter1A :)
« Reply #14 on: May 02, 2010, 08:11:22 pm »
Cool start. O0 I like.

THANK YOU! :D Haha. Name and age mo?

Ga;ing nung nerd magphotoshop. LOL. =))

dakilang stalker eh. haha. pagbigyan na natin. ;D

Me likey Joshua. HOHO. :)) Nakakainis talaga yung jejemon stalker. FEELER. :)) Ano yung deal?! OHMAAAY. Naeexcite na akoo~

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Katorse lang ako. :)) Ikaw...po? ;D

Si Joshua like mo? Haha. Oo nga eh. Buti na lang hindi jejemon si Aaron. Nerd lang. >:D the deal? Wait for it. ;)

I'm 17.  8)

 

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