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ENOUGH. [I IZ BAK!]
« on: April 15, 2010, 11:53:53 am »
ENOUGH.

Jericho Jeno Zamora
Angelia Ishelle Alyoza
Juan Gabriel Arsena
Jose Miguel Arsena (but we call him Mike or Michael)
Kaye Ramos

MOM and DAD
MR. and MRS. ARSENA and RAPI
under " ", extras.
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INTRO:

Lahat kulang sa buhay ko.
I have everything.

Lahat pinaghihirapan ko.
I can have anything I want.

Lahat ata mali sa'kin.
I have a complete life.

Siguro, pagkakamali ako mismo.
I am perfect.

Pero masaya naman ako.
But I was never contented.

Then you came and made me realize what I was missing.
I have nothing.
I cannot have everything.
I am missing almost half of my entire life.
I am so imperfect.

but you made me happy. :)

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Hi! I'm Gel. A new Teentalker. A new CC writer. I used to read stories here at CC way back in high school but I'm not really into posting so I'm a certified silent reader. haha. But now, I feel like sharing my own work of art. Hope you'll like the story. Sorry for grammar errors and this is just a product of my imagination. I would be using English, as well as Tagalog or Taglish or  any suitable language in the story, whenever I feel like using them. Hehe. It would definitely depend on my mood while writing. Ika nga, minsan mas masarap magkwento gamit ang sarili nating wika. Ayun. Thank you and I would love to read your comments and suggestions.

loves. :)

TRIVIAS:

1. When I was looking for an idea for my title,I came across a post in a forum that says that the filipino word, "basta" came from the spanish word "bastante" which means "enough" in english.

2. A minute after I wrote the second name of Jericho, I noticed that his name was kinda JEJEMONIC. haha. Jejemon= from Jeje. You knoooooow. Okay, hindi ko maexplain. haha. But I like the name Jeno so hindi ko papalitan. hehe.

3. Jericho's character is inspired by PBB Teen Eslove. haha. Siya naiimagine kong si Jericho.

4. I'm not good with titles and intros. PROMISE. xD
« Last Edit: November 03, 2010, 08:40:29 pm by gelibee »

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« Reply #1 on: April 15, 2010, 12:15:51 pm »
Nice Prologue.  ;)
Ellaine here. Ooh. You love Eslove too?  :D

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« Reply #2 on: April 15, 2010, 12:20:47 pm »
Hi sis, rian here!
ill read your story habang vacation pa.

when next post mo?

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« Reply #3 on: April 15, 2010, 12:31:03 pm »
HELLO ... OK OK!
I'M GOING TO SUPPORT HERE!
LIZA IS THE NAME ... DON'T FORGET! :-*

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« Reply #4 on: April 15, 2010, 12:37:29 pm »
Hi po. carlene here. I'll support your story.  ;D I'm creating my first story too. goodluck satin. friends?

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« Reply #5 on: April 15, 2010, 01:53:51 pm »
Thanks Ellaine! :) yep. I love Eslove too! haha.  :D

Rian, Hello po! Thanks. :) eto na po ang chapter one.

Dear Liza, thanks! I won't forget. hehe. ;)

Wow! good luck sa atin sis Carlene;) thanks din. ano po title ng story mo? :)

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CHAPTER ONE - HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME  8) ::) :-\ :-[ :-X :'(

party music
party lights
party dress
party people
party..
party..

PARTY!

Yes, it's a party. My biggest birthday ever. Syempre, debut yun. Well, I really do not like to have one but my parents insisted. Ano bang magagawa ko DIBA? Haay, ano ba kasing maganda sa mga ganitong party? Maingay, magulo, maasikaso, MAGULO. I don't like it, 'kay? I am not and will never be a social person. Hindi naman ako loner type, I still have friends. Actually, I am little miss popular but I don't care. I prefer quiet places and be peaceful as much as possible. Magulo kasi talaga buhay ko. My parents are business people and they always drag me to different events para daw makilala ko ang mga business partners. ANO BA? GANUN BA LAGI? Siguro nga. Ganito ang business world, BADTRIP. Pinagbibigyan ko na lang sila, kasi mahal ko naman sila. Tsakaaaaaa, may kapalit naman tuwing pipilitin nila ako sa party, siguro kaya naging papilit din ako 'no? haha.

"Lia.."

Ay, may tumawag sakin. Excuse lang ha. Mamaya na tayo ulit magkwentuhan. Pero oo nga pala, I'm Lia nga pala. Later you'll know more about me so stay tuned, 'kay? hehe. :)

LIA: po?

MOMMY: The Arsenas has just arrived, salubungin mo sila.

LIA: Ok Mom.

Mr. Arsena is one of my parents' business partners and he's the best friend of my dad. His family is really close to us, especially his cutest and hottest son, Gabriel. haha.

LIA: hi tito! Tita! (beso)

Mr&Mrs. A: Happy birthday hija! Ganda ngayon ah.

LIA: ahe, thank you po. pasok na po. A table is reserved for you.

sinalubong na rin sila ni Daddy, at siya na nag-guide sa kanila, pero hinarang ko yung isa nilang kasama.

LIA: You're late!

that's Gabriel, my boyfriend. :)

GAB: sorry sweetheart. Sila mommy kasi, sabay-sabay na daw kami. Hindi ka naman daw magagalit. hehe. ;D

LIA: anong hindi? galit kaya ako.

GAB: really?

LIA: yes.

GAB: if you really are then, I cannot do this? :-*

then he kissed me on my left cheek.

LIA: che!

GAB: see, you are not. ;D

LIA: wag kasi ganun. eeh.

GAB: hehe. Sige, sorry na ulit. I'll give my gift later ha, pag tayo na lang dalawa. :)

LIA: okay. :)

GAB: Happy birthday Sweetheart.:-*

I smiled. Well, it was my sweetest smile that night. Kahit badtrip na badtrip na ko sa party ko masaya na kong nandyan siya. Yii. kaya nga naiinis ako na ngayon lang siya dumating eh. Well, in fairness naman sa party ko, hindi siya yung may 18 18 ek-ek. ayaw ko kasi nun, at napapayag ko naman sila na wala na nun.

LIA: Uh, where's Kuya Mike and Rapi?

GAB: andun pa ata sa labas. Tinitignan yung bagong bahay dun. Alam mo naman si kuya.

LIA: ay, oo nga.

GAB: nacheck mo na yun?

LIA: syempre naman.

GAB: tutuloy ka ba?

LIA: Gusto ko talaga.

GAB: alam na ba nila tita?

umiling ako. He then gave me a pity smile. Alam ko masaya siya na hindi nagpoprogress yung gusto kong pagshishift pero hindi niya lang masabi sakin kasi alam niyang gustong gusto kong magshift sa arki. Nga pala, nasa commerce kasi kami pareho. Business, business aaaaand business. He likes that. Ako, AYAW SYEMPRE.

"Lia!! happy birthday!!" :D

LIA: Kuya Michael! thank you! Glad you made it. Hello Rapi.

RAPI: Hi ate, happy birthday! ;)

He hugged me. kay cute na bata, mana sa mga kuya, at magulang syempre. hehe.

MIKE: Punta ka na kela mommy, Rap. Sama ka kay kuya Gab.

GAB: tara Rap.

umalis na sila, Kami naman ni Kuya Mike naglakad papunta dun sa table ng drinks.

LIA: buti pumunta ka, kailangan kitang makausap talaga ngayon e.

MIKE: I know, right? haha. 8) ::)

LIA: talaga to. yabang. haha.

MIKE: di ah. Sinabi lang ni Gab na buo na yung bahay dian sa may tapat kaya naisip ko na ring tignan.

LIA: so hindi ako ang pinunta mo dito? >:(

He nodded. I glared at him.

MIKE: joke lang. hehe. ;D So ano na bang status?

LIA: wala.

MIKE: wala? You haven't told tito and tita?

umiling ako.

MIKE: tara.

LIA: huy, kuya! di ako ready. :o

walang pakialam, hinila pa rin ako papunta kela mommy. Patay naaaa. Nako. Nako naman. Masisira na ata ng tuluyan ang araw ko. ay si kuya talaga. Anyway, Si kuya michael kasi ay Arki senior na sa school namin. Kaya kasundo ko to e, pareho kami ng hilig at pareho din naming hindi hilig ang business, kaya nga si Gab ang nagpapakabusy dun sa kanila e. Kaso samin naman, solo lang ako. At umaasa silang ako ang magtutuloy nung business nila, kaya hindi ko pa nasasabi kela mommy na ayaw ko ng course ko at gusto ko talagang magshift.

MIKE: tito, tita, I have something important to tell you regarding Lia's life interests. ;)

at life interests pa talaga?

DADDY: o, ano yun Michael? Let's have a sit.

Naupo kami dun sa sala namin.

DADDY: Game Michael.;)

magsasalita na sana si kuya pero tinapik ko siya at ako ang nagsalita.

LIA: I'll shift to Architecture next school year. :-\

I just said the line that would make my biggest birthday ever into the WORST birthday of my entire life.

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TRIVIA:

I love spanish sardines. haha. walang konek sa story, xD


« Last Edit: April 19, 2010, 12:46:28 am by gelibee »

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« Reply #6 on: April 15, 2010, 01:55:41 pm »
Better in time yung title sis. try reading if you have some time kayy?  :)

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« Reply #7 on: April 15, 2010, 02:06:17 pm »
Yay! ang kulet ni kuya mike! hahaha.naki-kuya?
sana makapagshift na si Lia para pare-pareho na course naming tatlo!
nice sis!!

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« Reply #8 on: April 15, 2010, 02:16:56 pm »
Nice Update.  ;) If you have time, Read my story a? Title is Welcome to the Real World. Di ko na yun nauupdate.  :)

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« Reply #9 on: April 15, 2010, 03:00:09 pm »
Hi,new reader po :)

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« Reply #10 on: April 15, 2010, 03:52:22 pm »
Dear Carlene and Ellaine, sige po, susuportahan ko rin ang inyong mga kwento. ;)

Dear Rian, matanda na siya kaya ayos lang daw na kuya-hin siya ng mundo. haha. WOW! arki ka rin po. hehe. Magkakasundo pala kayo nila Lia at kuya Mike. hehe. :) thanks for reading!

Dear Criz(?), thanks for reading, enjoy! :)

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« Reply #11 on: April 15, 2010, 04:24:00 pm »
When is your next update? so i'll know when will i log-in..

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« Reply #12 on: April 15, 2010, 04:31:29 pm »
baka mamayang gabi na po, o bukas na nang umaga. :)
Aalis po kasi ako ngayon,

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« Reply #13 on: April 15, 2010, 04:53:53 pm »
Ah,sige.
baka saturday ko na lang mababasa.
marami akong gagawin ngayon pati bukas.
okey lang sayo yun?

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« Reply #14 on: April 15, 2010, 04:59:06 pm »
Gora lang sis! ;)
Basta daan ka na lang dito ulit pag nagonline ka.
thanks again!

 

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