Straightjacket Feeling. | Chapter III at page 4 <3

[Achtung, baby!]

Straightjacket Feeling

prologue.


Take back now my life you’re stealing,
Yesterday was ours, but today I’m fine without you.
Runaway, but this time without you.
And all I’d ever thought you’d be,
That face is tearing holes in me again.

It was just one night – and in the grand scheme of things, what did one night really matter? One night couldn’t hurt anything, could it? It is, after all, just one night. One night when we were just Skye and Gabriel, one night where the world would just melt away – and this night forgotten, shelved away in the deeper regions of our memories. But he didn’t want to forget. I didn’t want to forget. But neither of us could really tell.

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She could feel it in his bones as he pressed himself against her, the longing that just begged to be set free. His lips gently touched hers, and fired coursed through both their veins. She wanted him, so much it was almost a need. Scratch that. It was a need. There was an impossible heat between them that no amount of ice could ever hope to cool. They fell back on the pillows, scrambling for the protection and cover of the white sheet. She allowed herself to take in the moment, feeling every part of his body against hers. Their lips parted, and she struggled to catch her breath as he caressed her – for all it was worth.

“I love you.”

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Later, I would be able to remember the euphoria, however brief it might have been. I would remember every sound we made, every word he’d spoken, and every place we touched. I would relive that night when I needed to escape, even though I know that the aftereffects of the memory might kill me. I would always remember the way he told me he loved me, how gently he’d held me, and how safe I’d felt as I drifted to into a peaceful sleep – and remember all the times he’d been with me when my world came crashing down.

I would also remember, unfortunately, how we both acted as though nothing happened, and how much it hurt to look into his eyes after that.

It was just one night. But it was the one night that would haunt me forever.


Hey. This is Reese, Achtung, baby!, presenting "Straightjacket Feeling". I'm pretty active at FF.NET, so most of my original stories never see the lights of day. Straightjacket Feeling is one of those stories, and is probably one my most daring originals to date. I don't really have much confidence in my writing skills, so it'd be much appreciated if you guys could give me constructive critique? Read, and review please. : D

[thePLAYMAKER]

^^Pers ako~!? Yehey~! Hehehe

Hmm... medyo nosebleed ako. Sensya naman po, english eh. hehehe

I like the intro~!

Support ko ito~! Awee~!!

Ako pala si Khay (yahk06)

[Achtung, baby!]

Thank you, Khay! : D
natatakot talaga ako sa mga sasabihin ng mga tao. ( correct grammar? D; )
especially since... <__<;; how many 14 year olds do you know attempt a story like this? takot talaga ako. sobra.

[Koo]

wow. already love the prologue.
SUPPORT! what's your name?
Koo here btw, new reader.

[missSHAKEspeare012]

wow. support ko to. Ria nga pala. pero you can call me anything you want. support mo din yung stories ko ah. click mo lang yung links sa SOMETHING sa siggie ko. 3 stories yan.

[thePLAYMAKER]

Thank you, Khay! : D
natatakot talaga ako sa mga sasabihin ng mga tao. ( correct grammar? D; )
especially since... <__<;; how many 14 year olds do you know attempt a story like this? takot talaga ako. sobra.

^^You're welcome~!
Hope we can be friends~! Awee~! Hehehe
Naku, wag ka matakot. Modern na ngayon sis~!
Teka teka, you're 14 years old? Cool~!

[Achtung, baby!]

Koo ; My name is Therese, but people usually call me "Reese", but my close people call me "Ria". Thanks for the support, darrliiing. : D
It is much appreciated.

missSHAKEspeare012; hello Ria! 8D amazing how i find someone with the same (sorta) name as i do. thanks for the support, btw. i'm gonna check your stories out later. 8D

thePLAYMATER; yep. 14. i wrote that in my who's who thread. =)) of course we can be friends, daaarling. 8D




ahem. please excuse me and my odd obsession for the word 'darling'. i blame grell sutcliffe from kuroshitsuji. XD

[mvr027]

Kanta ng All American Rejects toh ah?

Anyway,Suportahan ko to

[thecagedDOLL]

HEYYYY babe! very nice prologue you got there.
YOU HOOKED ME! Bravoooo! (:
My name is Gee *drumrolls please*
This is my graaaand entrance. (:

I'm dying to know what would happen next.
Will you please update as soon as you can, dear?

And I've read from your posts, you're obsessed with the word darlinnng. (:

AND SO I AM DAHLINNGGG 8D S'kay, kindasorta hyper today.

I'll be waiting for your update. Mkay?

[thePLAYMAKER]

^^wow~! You're such a talented one.
Good luck to this~! Everybody will love this~!

[sweetrax]

I will definitely read and support this!
-alyssa ♥

[Achtung, baby!]

HEYYYY babe! very nice prologue you got there.
YOU HOOKED ME! Bravoooo! (:
My name is Gee *drumrolls please*
This is my graaaand entrance. (:

I'm dying to know what would happen next.
Will you please update as soon as you can, dear?

And I've read from your posts, you're obsessed with the word darlinnng. (:

AND SO I AM DAHLINNGGG 8D S'kay, kindasorta hyper today.

I'll be waiting for your update. Mkay?

OH MY GOD ANOTHER PERSON WHO ABUSES THE WORD DARLIING <3
I love you already. XD
I'll have the first chapter up soon - I swear. It just needs proofreading and it's done, I swear.

Kanta ng All American Rejects toh ah?

Anyway,Suportahan ko to

Thanks for the support. And yeah, the title is from an AAR song. They're my favorite band since 2004. 8D

^^wow~! You're such a talented one.
Good luck to this~! Everybody will love this~!

Praise the Lord. Thanks! <3

I will definitely read and support this!
-alyssa ♥

Thank you! <3

[thecagedDOLL]

Ah, I love you more darling. We're sooo superfriends now. <3
I'll be waiting, alright. I'll wait patiently. XD

[Koo]

Reese then. I hope you update na. I <3 your story.

[thePLAYMAKER]

^^Hahaha~! Oh yeah~! Praise the Lord~!
Toinks~!