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*PSYCHIC* [chapter three posted] in need of new readers...
« on: December 16, 2009, 02:26:42 pm »
PSYCHIC


a cursed gift,


or a gifted curse?


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::CHAPTER NAVIGATION::
PART ONE: BLOODY MYSTERY
CHAPTER ONE: BLOODY GIRL
CHAPTER TWO: ANOTHER DIMENSION
CHAPTER THREE: VOICES
CHAPTER FOUR: IN THE MIRROR
CHAPTER FIVE: 1986

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All coincidences to the past, present, future or dreams of the readers are pure coincidences.

All events, characters, names, places and the likes are all products of the author's mind.


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« Last Edit: December 24, 2009, 07:05:02 pm by _nESSa.4evr_ »

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Re: *PSYCHIC*
« Reply #1 on: December 16, 2009, 02:41:03 pm »
I'll post chapter one when 3 teentalkers post....

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Re: *PSYCHIC*
« Reply #2 on: December 16, 2009, 03:00:04 pm »
hmmm. looks like interesting :)

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Re: *PSYCHIC*
« Reply #3 on: December 16, 2009, 08:25:04 pm »
hi there! cool prologue.
simple yet catchy. i'm gonna support this one.
btw, LYNN here.
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Re: *PSYCHIC*
« Reply #4 on: December 17, 2009, 04:52:59 pm »
@princess pilya-thanks! kaw ba si ate gen? ^.^

@~mystic.lady-thanks din! hi ate lynn.

kapag may isa pa pong nagpost saka ko ilalagay yung first chapter. ^.^

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Re: *PSYCHIC*
« Reply #5 on: December 18, 2009, 06:18:16 am »
yap ko nga yun. ahah. :)

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Re: *PSYCHIC*
« Reply #6 on: December 18, 2009, 07:46:30 pm »
pwede mgpost ka na???

hehe, I got the third place...  :D

i like horror stories, blended with love....

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Re: *PSYCHIC*
« Reply #7 on: December 18, 2009, 09:04:23 pm »
PART ONE:

BLOODY MYSTERY

CHAPTER ONE
(Antoinette Xeirah Perez’s P.O.V.)

BLOODY GIRL


Sarah: Tonette?
Tonette: H-huh?
Sarah: You seem dazed. Anything wrong?
Tonette: Huh? Oh, nothng.

Hey. My name’s Antoinette, or Tonette. I’m fourteen years old, and I keep on seeing things that others don’t see. No, I’m not crazy. I’m a psychic. Your right. I can see ghosts, shouls, poltergeists, you name it. I have the so-called gifted curse, or cursed gift, whatever you call it.

Yumi: Antoinette!
Tonette: What?!
Darren: You just err, ignored us?

*sigh* Here I go again, ignoring people and walking absent-mindedly. Once, I fell in a mud puddle, just by doing this. I still cringe when I remember it. Ick.

Bryan: Yoo-hoo?
Tonette: I’m on earth.
Daniel: You should be.

My eyes lit up, as it always does when I see Daniel. You see, he’s my crush. Thank goodness, I can still act normal when he’s around.

Tonette: Hey.
Daniel: What’s up babe?

Babe?! He called me babe!!

Tonette: Nothing in particular.
Darren: Hey. Stop this flirtin’.
Sarah: Yeah.
Yumi: It’s disgusting.
Daniel: Oh, shut up.

Then, I saw a bloody girl, staring at me.

Tonette: Oh, the hell.

I saw the girl run, no, glide towards me and I can’t move a muscle, perhaps because of fear. I saw the girl face to face, and suddenly, I felt a coldness overcome my body, then, I felt nothing..

As if in a dream, I saw myself walking, holding hands with a girl in a white old fashioned dress and the girl was very pretty. Long black hair, rich dark eyes and red lips. But her skin… It has a creepy, deathly glow…

Girl: Come, Antoinette…
Tonette: Where?
Girl: Come with me…

Suddenly, I heard voices.

Voice1: Tonette? Tonette?
Tonette: Wait… Someone’s calling me…
Girl: Don’t mind them… Come.
Voice2: Antoinette!
Tonette: They’re calling me…
Girl: Don’t listen to them! You have to come with me!

The voices were distant, yet they were very clear and distinct.

Voice3: Tonette, wake up…
Tonette: Stop! They are calling me!

The girl suddenly frowned, then yelled,

Girl: Ypou need to go with me! We need you!!
Tonette: What?

The girl’s appearance changed, instead of being pretty and innocent, her face started to rot, one of her eyes fell out, leaving a bloody, gaping hole.

Tonette: *screams*

I ran away… But the girl still caught up with me. She held on to my arm.

Girl: You have to help me!
Tonette: No! No!

I closed my eyes, and when I opened them, I saw panic-stricken faces of my friends, all looking down at me.

Darren: Tonette, are you okay?

No, I wanted to say, but I felt weak. I can’t move a my body…

Daniel: Hey babe, are you alright?

I tried to move my hand, and surprisingly, I can. Groggily, I sat up.

Yumi: Just what the hell happened to you?

Even if I want to, I can’t tell them what I saw. They won’t understand. They’ll just laugh at me. Well, except for Yumi. She knows I have the “gift”.

Tonette: Nothing. I just, err, feel tired and hungry.

They looked at each other, then looked back at me.

Bryan: Are you sure?
Tonette: Yeah. Come on. To the cafeteria.

I stood up, and Bryan, Yumi and Daniel helped me.

Tonette: Thanks guys.

We walked towards the cafeteria, but I felt a familiar coldness behind me. Even though I am freaking terrified, I looked back, and saw the same bloody girl.

Girl: help me…

I screamed, and everything went dark and cold…

>>end of chapter<<


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@vague_yelhsa- ito na po....

after 2 teentalkers post, saka ko ipopost ung 2nd chapter... pro kung wala pa, sa December 21 na po...
« Last Edit: December 20, 2009, 06:08:19 pm by _nESSa.4evr_ »

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Re: *PSYCHIC* [chapter one posted]
« Reply #8 on: December 18, 2009, 09:18:50 pm »
hey. Lin here ;D
interesting yung story mo ah  ;)
post mo na yung next ngayon :D (demanding eh noh? :D)

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Re: *PSYCHIC* [chapter one posted]
« Reply #9 on: December 18, 2009, 10:06:00 pm »
creepy... :o

bloody talaga ...

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Re: *PSYCHIC* [chapter one posted]
« Reply #10 on: December 19, 2009, 04:58:31 am »
wow. parang horror 'to ah. haha ^^
babasahin ko 'to!
angie here! :D

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Re: *PSYCHIC* [chapter one posted]
« Reply #11 on: December 19, 2009, 07:48:36 pm »
so i presume na pure english `to?
anyway..  natakot ako sa part na.. instead of walk eh glide. haha. creepy.
nagwowork pa imagination ko.  :D

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Re: *PSYCHIC* [chapter one posted]
« Reply #12 on: December 19, 2009, 08:09:09 pm »
katakot naman yun. gonna post the chap 2 tomorrow maybe. :)

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Re: *PSYCHIC* [chapter one posted]
« Reply #13 on: December 20, 2009, 05:58:01 pm »
Chapter Two:

ANOTHER DIMENSION

(Darren Evans P.O.V.)

Tonette: *screams*

As I was in front of Tonette, I had to turn back, only to see Tonette sprawled on the floor.
Darren: The hell! Tonette! Tonette!

The others also tried to revive her, but Tonette remained motionless.

Daniel: Let’s bring her to the infirmary.

The others nodded, though I did not.

Darren: I’m going to call Mrs. Perez.
Sarah: I’ll come with you.
Darren: Quickly.

Sarah and I ran to the elevator, but it was still on the 4th floor. The telephone booths were on the ground floor, so, no choice, we have to use the stairs. Sarah must have been thinking of the same thing, for she ran to the stairway.

Sarah: Come on.

I followed, but as soon as we entered the door leading to the stairway, the surroundings changed. Instead of the stairs, we emerged in a very peaceful garden, although it was misty. I can hear twittering birds, but the sounds were distant. I looked around for Sarah, instead of her; I saw a girl with long black hair, rich, dark eyes and red lips, with a deathly complexion that brings goose bumps on my back.

Girl: Come with me...
Darren: Who are you?
Girl: Come…
Darren: Where am I?
Girl: Come with me…

At first, I followed, but a part of me tells me not to.

Girl: Come with me…
Darren: What?
Girl: We need you…
Darren: But why?
Girl: Help us…

The girl’s face suddenly changed, and started to rot. More girls materialized behind her… They emerged from the mist. Some of the girls were missing arms, hands, even heads! But the bodies showed stitches…. They were all drenched in blood that gave off suffocating stench of decaying carcass…

Girl: help us…
Darren: No! No! *screams*

Sarah: Darren? Darren?

As quick as lightning, the other dimension vanished.

Darren: …
Sarah: Darren, are you okay?
Darren: I think so…

I stood up. I don’t know how I ended up lying on the ground.

Sarah: What happened? I tried to call you, but you just ignored me.
Darren: What?
Sarah: Come on, I’ll tell you about it on the way.
Darren: Err, okay.

I turned around, but I sensed something wrong. Still not facing Sarah,

Darren: Sarah?

I turned around, only to see the familiar rotting face.

Girl: Help me, please?

I ran away screaming…

Darren: No!!

>>end of chapter<<

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my dear readers, try to click the chapter titles.

@Lin-Lin-ate Lin, eto na po...

@vague_yelhsa-haha. thanks for the compliment!

@ai-ree♥-horror po talaga sya...

@~mystic.lady-yep, english po sya... pure.

@princess_pilya-ate Gen... thanks for the compliment. babasahin ko yun agad!! sana perstager.


BTW, Nessa here, 13 years old. ^.^

Chapter three, after one new reader posts. If not, the chapter will be posted on December 23/24. Thanks for all your support!!!
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Re: *PSYCHIC* [chapter two posted]
« Reply #14 on: December 20, 2009, 07:42:26 pm »
hmm? anu kaya ang problema ng mga multong 'yun? ;D
bat kailangan nila ng help ni Tonette?
i'll be waiting for the next chapters!

 

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