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Re: Breathe [PROLOGUE] readers please..
« Reply #45 on: October 23, 2009, 06:22:31 pm »
naalala ko si britney spears sa title mo...

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Re: Breathe [PROLOGUE] readers please..
« Reply #46 on: October 23, 2009, 06:24:49 pm »
huh?!bakit naman??
sorry ah..wala ako sa tamang pagiisip ngayon e.. :D
anon palang name mo??

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Re: Breathe [PROLOGUE] readers please..
« Reply #47 on: October 23, 2009, 11:12:49 pm »
hehe kakatawa talaga si rina at kevin ehhe

sis tanong story ba ni chris ito? hehe
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Re: Breathe [PROLOGUE] readers please..
« Reply #48 on: October 23, 2009, 11:19:38 pm »
sis! i'm here na.
ito muna uunahin ko. haha. ang dami kong hahabulin sa mga stories mo.  ;D
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Re: Breathe [PROLOGUE] readers please..
« Reply #49 on: October 24, 2009, 12:58:04 pm »
janne
wahaha..parang bata lang kung magaway e.. :D
uhm..sort of..medyo siya ang nasa spotlight ngayon..haha..

lynn
wahaha..ok lang yun sis..
salamat sa pagdaan..

yay sa inyong dalawa!!

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Re: Breathe [PROLOGUE] readers please..
« Reply #50 on: October 24, 2009, 01:55:31 pm »
waaaa! andito na aku!!
haha.
buti naman tinuloy mo na yung sequel. haha. kala ku mapaptagal pa. hahaha.
anganda ng theme song ng sequel. haha. taylor swift kasi. haha.
at tsaka yung lyrics. pasok na pasok. :D :D

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Re: Breathe [CHAPTER 1] readers please..
« Reply #51 on: October 26, 2009, 11:08:49 pm »
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wee!!
andito ka na!!
tinopak na kasi ako kaya pinost ko na ulit.. :D
oo nga e..matagal tagal din akong naghanap ng kanta para dun.. :D
yay for you!!




Chapter One


Nasa sasakyan na kaming dalawa ni Rina. Iniisip ko kung bakit kailangan pang maghiwalay nina Kevin at Rina. Pwede naman na yung mga kaibigan nila ang mahiwalay tapos silang dalawa yung magkasama para naman hindi masyadong masakit at nakakailang. Pero wala naman na akong magagawa. Umandar na yung sasakyan nina Choi e.

Ang malaking problema ngayon, NAKAKABINGI ANG KATAHAMIKAN. Hindi ako makapagsalita kasi di ko alam kung paano magsisimula. Di rin naman umiimik si Rina. Ano ba naman ito o? :D

"Uhm."


"Chris."

"Rina."

"Ok sige. Ikaw na muna."


"Sorry."

"Para saan?"

"Sorry kasi kung kailan kita binigyan ng chance saka pa naging kami ni Kevin."

"Ha? Ah e. Kalimutan mo na 'yun. Masaya naman ako para sa'yo e."

"Pero di ako matatahimik hangga't ganito yung nararamdaman ko. Alam mo yun? Ang bigat sa loob e."

"Wag mo na kasing isipin yun."

"Chris, paano mo nagagawa 'yan?"

"Ang alin?"

"Ang magkunwari na masaya at ayos ang lahat kahit na ang totoo, nasasaktan ka na ng todo."

"Ano ba 'yang sinasabi mo? Ayos lang naman talaga e."

"Chris sa tagal ng pagkakakilala natin, kilalang kilala na kita. At alam kong hindi ka ok."


Pagkatapos ng mga sinabi niya, natahimik na naman kami. Hanggang sa nakarating na kami sa rest house nina Choi. Pagbaba namin ng sasakyan...

"O! Bakit ang tahimik niyong dalawa? Anong nangyari?"

"Wala. Inaantok lang yata si Rina."

"Ah. Ganun ba? Sige Rina pumasok ka na sa loob tapos pili ka na ng room mo para makapagpahinga ka na."

"Ako na ang magdadala ng gamit mo."

"Ok. Sige. Salamat."


Rina's POV

"Rina."

"Pasok."

"Saan ko ilalagay yung mga bag mo?"

"Lapag mo na lang diyan."

"Ok. Sige. Rina, ok ka lang ba talaga?"

"Ha? Oo naman."
I faked a smile habang papalapit siya sa may terrace kung nasaan ako.

"Tell me, what's wrong?"

"Wala ito. Promise."

"Is it about you and Chris?"

"Ha? Oo e. :-\

"Wag ka na muna masyadong mag-isip ok? Nandito tayo para magrelax. Saka in time maayos niyo rin yan. Basta nandito lang ako for you."


Tapos hinug ako ni Kevin. Aaminin ko. Gumaan yung pakiramdam ko nung niyakap niya ako.

"Thank you ha."


"Wala yun. I love you."

"I love you too."


Pagkatapos nun ewan ko na. Nakatulog yata ko e. Dahil sa pagod at sa stress. Hay buhay. Bakit ba ganito? Hindi tuloy ako masaya ng bonggang bongga dahil naguiguilty ako. :(
« Last Edit: November 21, 2009, 06:16:42 pm by raice03 »

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Re: Breathe [CHAPTER 1] readers please..
« Reply #52 on: October 26, 2009, 11:11:40 pm »
oo nga noh? pagkakataon nga naman hmmm
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Re: Breathe [CHAPTER 1] readers please..
« Reply #53 on: October 26, 2009, 11:14:47 pm »
ewan ko ba kasi sa kanila..
ang labo nila e.. :D

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Re: Breathe [CHAPTER 1] readers please..
« Reply #54 on: October 27, 2009, 07:12:44 pm »
Aww, sweet Rina-Kevin moment. :)) Nakakaguilty talaga yun, yung alam mong may nasasaktan ka. I feel for Rina.

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Re: Breathe [CHAPTER 1] readers please..
« Reply #55 on: October 27, 2009, 09:53:39 pm »
aawww.. ang sweet ni Kevin.. :D
makikita lang din ni Chris yung para sa kanya...
wait for it.. weeee.. haha :D

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Re: Breathe [CHAPTER 1] readers please..
« Reply #56 on: October 27, 2009, 10:17:26 pm »
danni
wahaha.. :D
wow..naman..gumaganun..haha.. :D

monch
parang di nagaway bago magpunta sa resthouse e.. :D
tanong..kailan dadating??

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Re: Breathe [CHAPTER 1] readers please..
« Reply #57 on: October 27, 2009, 10:33:29 pm »
nkakaawa naman si chris.
sayang naman siya. tsk tsk.
sa part naman ni rina. nakakakonsensya talaga. i feel the same.
There's no easy way to say goodbye
so baby just say goodnight.

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Re: Breathe [CHAPTER 1] readers please..
« Reply #58 on: October 27, 2009, 10:53:24 pm »
wahaha..magvolunteer ka na lang para may kasama na siya..lol.. ;D
naks..may ganun??

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Re: Breathe [CHAPTER 1] readers please..
« Reply #59 on: October 27, 2009, 11:30:12 pm »
hayan mo lng sila ehhe
magiging ok rin lahat hahaha
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