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Re: Once Upon a Time - Story :) -- 6 || Comfort + SPECIAL
« Reply #450 on: November 24, 2009, 07:58:27 pm »
Marikina. 1st year, BS Bio, UPD  8) nyahahaha. tsamba yan. woot.  ;D ;D

Oh well, they're history  :D

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Re: Once Upon a Time - Story :) -- 6 || Comfort + SPECIAL
« Reply #451 on: November 24, 2009, 08:01:02 pm »
@Ate Alyssa: Wow, UPD. :)) Anong trabaho ba gusto mo? :)) Mamaw sa Science o, BS Bio e. Hahaha. Tsamba ka dian. :P

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Re: Once Upon a Time - Story :) -- 6 || Comfort + SPECIAL
« Reply #452 on: November 24, 2009, 08:16:06 pm »
DOCTOOOOOOOOOR! Yan lang pangarap ko. Haha. Hagulgol ang abutin ko kapag di yan matutuloy. Haha. Mamaw ka dyan. Haha. Yan kinuha ko kasi yan lang ang science na mataas ako nung highschool! haha. well, aside from physics (pero parang gusto ko na mag-physics ngayon dahil sa astronomy :P)

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« Reply #453 on: November 24, 2009, 08:18:36 pm »
@Ate Alyssa: PAREHO TAYO! :)) Hahaha! =)) Nako. Childhood dream ko naman yun. Gustong gusto ko talaga magdoctor. Hahaha! Physics? WHOA. =)) Galing galing! Teka, diba ang campus ng mga med. couses ay sa UPM? Pag lumipat ka ng course related to astronomy, sayang naman yung sem na pinagdaanan mo na.

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Re: Once Upon a Time - Story :) -- 6 || Comfort + SPECIAL
« Reply #454 on: November 24, 2009, 08:22:54 pm »
Wala pa namang majors eh. Haha. Next school year pa. wahahaha. saka ndi rin ako makakalipat kasi mahirap magshift.

Yup, sa UPM pero di ako kumuha dun. nyahaha. malayo eh. wahaha

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« Reply #455 on: November 24, 2009, 08:25:35 pm »
@Ate Alyssa: Ohh. Hahaha. :)) Hindi ko alam mga ganyan na pangcollege. HS pa lang ako. :)) Sayang naman. Lapit ng school ko sa UPM e. Hahaha.

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« Reply #456 on: November 24, 2009, 08:26:56 pm »
Nyahaha. Enjoy mo na lang muna HS life mo. haha. Pag may concerns ka about College, tanungin mo na lang ako. Haha. Yakk. Ate na ate ang dating. :P

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« Reply #457 on: November 24, 2009, 08:29:27 pm »
@Ate Alyssa: Hahaha. Ayee. :)) Sige sige. Magtatanong lang ako. Teka, an bang colleges ang pinagpilian mo dati?

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Re: Once Upon a Time - Story :) -- 6 || Comfort + SPECIAL
« Reply #458 on: November 24, 2009, 08:51:17 pm »
Nag-take ako sa UP, La Salle, Ateneo, UST, DLS-CSB. Haha. Pumasa ako except Ateneo. Wahaha. Di ko lam bakit.

Out na ang La Salle dahil di kami ganun kayaman saka sa apat na taon ko sa highschool, eh, sa La Salle Lipa ako nag-aral. Para maiba naman  8)

CSB, ganun din. Mahal. Haha.

UST ang gusto ko kasi andun "FRIENDS" ko halos. Haha. Kaso ayaw ng parents ko.

UP, ang dream school ko. Since first year HS ako, pangarap ko na dyan pumasok. HAHA. Saka sa UP ang gusto ng aking dear parents dahil madali daw makakakuha ng trabaho ;)

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Re: Once Upon a Time - Story :) -- 6 || Comfort + SPECIAL
« Reply #459 on: November 24, 2009, 08:57:04 pm »
@Ate Alyssa: Wow. Mga bigatin. :)) DLSU Lipa? Nice nice. Bigatin naman tuition dun. Kaya ayaw nila Mama na pag-aralin kami sa mga ganung school. Hahha. Pareho tayo ng dream school! :)) Hahaha. Saka yung standard of teaching, maganda. ;) Ang dami kong pareho sayo. =))

Bebes! <3 New update for a new character. :)) I'm still on the process of adding people in my story. I want to keep them low in number if possible. Anyway, you better read this and comment afterwards. :))

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7: Spark

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far, because once you're there, it's up to you to make it happen"

The next time I opened my eyes, the sun was majestically shining at the sky. I was almost blinded by the rays that entered my room, but my sleeping position refrained it from happening. My neck and back were stiff. I didn’t move much last night? Surprising.

Rising up from the bed, I realized that my dress last night was already replaced with something more comfortable – an oversized tee and jogging pants. Atrocious thoughts spiraled on my mind. Am I that pervert now? Some dignity, Elizabeth Hopkins. You’re an elite.

“Oh. You’re already up.”
I jumped back a bit from surprise. A woman around my age entered the room gracefully, a tray of oatmeal and chocolate drink in it. Her hair was of striking blond, her eyes stormy gray. She looked at me intently, as if waiting for me to burst and scream about my clothes. After an appraising look, she gave me a warm smile and placed the tray down.

“You should eat. He said you haven’t eaten anything last night. The Elders were having a meeting today in preparation for tonight.” Another weird glance from the blond girl. She sat at the bean bag and stared outside the window. Her face flashed a wistful expression. Her stormy eyes glossed over, as if seeing something unseen and ancient.

She whispered something along the lines “I thought she would believe easily, but then her line was ancient and cannot be deceived”. What does she mean? Her aura is creeping me a bit, just like James. Are they related in any way? Her eyes shifted to my direction, and the mysterious shadow was gone.

“I’m Irene. Irene Logan. Sorry I just entered. I was a bit distracted before he rushed in our house and asked me to do some favor for him. I mean, really, is he an idiot for pulling me out of our house early in the morning without any notice. I am busy with reading a book then bam! Then when he brought me here, he just pointed me a note. A note, for Pete’s sake!” Then the Irene girl kept on complaining and babbling about he who brought her to watch over me. Whoever he is, I hope he knows I hate staying with anybody. I like being alone.

“..but it’s fine if I stay here. I have work to do here. And don’t go at the corner and look at me like I’m some lunatic who escaped from the mental hospital. Come here. I have to prepare you.” I sensed the double meaning in her last statement. Prepare? Prepare for what?

“Prepare for what?” Bravely asking, I stood up properly and give her a criticizing look. Her eyes widened, but she snapped out of her trance.

“You’ll see.” She winked before wrapping her slender hands on my wrists. They felt a bit colder than the usual, which caused the formation of goosebumps in my arms. I thought I saw her smile, but it was nothing. Whatever I’m going to prepare myself for, I could face it. If only I know about what is really behind it..

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“Who is the he you’re talking about a while ago? The one you might be choking to death at this very moment if he was here?” After that bedroom scene, with Irene’s help, I finished my personal responsibilities quickly. Taking a bath, brushing my teeth, fixing my hair, eating breakfast. This girl is a tornado. I should ask her to come by often.

“He? The idiot’s Andrew.” She snorted before taking a grape between her thin lips. We’re now at the porch, waiting for another ‘he’. With the mention of Andrew’s name, my heart beat frantically. I managed to slow it down by breathing deeply.

“Oh.” I couldn’t process any coherent thought. For the nth time, she gave me a knowing look.

“Can’t believe he’ll ask someone to babysit you while he’s out, eh? Shame on that flirt. But then again, when you feel that spark..”

“What spark?” Is she going romantic on me? To tell you the truth, I am no fan of any romance or another sickly movie that involves those torrid kisses. I would surely barf everything I’ve eaten if you let me watch something like that. Get a life people. Romance isn’t always about passion.

“You know. Fast heart beat. Blushing cheeks. Being tongue-tied. Denying when you’re really guilty about it. Things like that. The movies portrayed it lamely. You have to feel it first-hand to be carried away.” Rolling my eyes, I stared at the grass dancing with the wind.

“Ridiculous concept. I mean, love is mythical. Love is imaginary. There’s no proof that love exists! If it does, then everything would be fine. There would be no war and people would always be struck as if they’re in heaven.” I reasoned out. From the corner of my eye, I saw her laughing hard. My eyebrow raised in confusion.

“Defensive, Elizabeth. You have to cut some slack and look at things closer. You never know, you might be missing something really important.” Irene warned with a serious tone.

“I’ll tell you when I get there.” She rolled her eyes, but was in deep thought afterwards.

“You don’t have to tell us, ‘cause we know it before you do.” A chill ran down my spine as I hear that voice.

“Nice seeing you again, Elizabeth.” He gave me a respectful bow, which I have no idea why. Irene slapped James at his arm, but he ignored it and went for her kiss.

It’s not just some smack, or that torrid kiss when the couple would almost eat the face of their partner. It’s not some joke. With that kiss, the spark Irene was talking about was understood by an ignorant, self-centered brat named Elizabeth Hopkins. I have to face away because jealousy was creeping in me. The longing of having someone to stay with me and kiss me senseless become potent.

I have to find that spark she’s saying to me.

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Tell me if it sucks bigtime. I know I do. :)) Hahaha. Go! Comment! Next chapter includes big reveal, so I suggest you nag me about it. ;)

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Re: Once Upon a Time - Story :) -- 7 || SPARK
« Reply #460 on: November 24, 2009, 09:12:25 pm »
DanniBebe wahaha. Wag ka nang kumontra  :P yan na tawag ko sa'yo >:D I'll comment later. Tinatapos ko pa yung Chem. ;D Nagsisipag lang.

Hmm. Di naman katulad ng sa La Salle Zobel at GreenHills ang tuition sa Lipa. Haha. Saka sa Batangas yun :)

Wooot! Magkakasundo tayoooo!

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« Reply #461 on: November 24, 2009, 09:14:59 pm »
AlyssaBebe. :)) Hahaha. Oh, wag ka ring kokontra. ;) Sige sige, hintayin ko yung madugo mong komento. Hahaha. Go Chem!

Hahaha. MAMAW yung sa Zobel at Greenhills. Meron nga nadaan sa amin pag umaga na schoolbus nung DLSU Greenhills, naiintimidate ako. Hahaha.

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« Reply #462 on: November 24, 2009, 09:18:42 pm »
Di naman ako kumokontra ;D haha. anyway, spokening dollars ang mga taga Zobel at GreenHills. Haha. Saka laki ng pagkakaiba sa school namin.

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« Reply #463 on: November 24, 2009, 09:30:35 pm »
@AlyssaBebe: Shucks. OMG naman yun. Duguan ang ilong. :>> :))

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Re: Once Upon a Time - Story :) -- 7 || SPARK
« Reply #464 on: November 24, 2009, 10:27:27 pm »
oh danni.. ayan nah. oh ng comment na ako.. hndi ko matapos ung pinapapagawa nila sakin. tsk3.. isusulat ko na lang. sila pagtataypin ko. ahhha...

danni... anu ba yan... next a nga bitin eh.. peo san b gling na planeta ci Elizabeth at hndi nya alam ang spark na un.??? ahhaha,... nyways. nd nam lame ung update ah... btin nga lng/...

 

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