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Re: Once Upon a Time - Story :) -- 5 || Control (updated)
« Reply #15 on: October 18, 2009, 10:16:57 pm »
@Ate Precious: Yay~ May ate sis na ako dito. :) Ohh, first year. Mahirap ba magcollege? Saan ka nag-aaral ngayon? *Mang-iinterview ako, hahaha.

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« Reply #16 on: October 18, 2009, 10:21:59 pm »


Hahah. Ganun, okay lang yunnn. Ako kasi adik ako sa KPOP kaya ganun. Buti nga e, yung universal records nag-release na ng mga KPOP albums, kaya naka-bili na ako. Pero isa palang yung narerelease nila, kaya ayun. Pero may next na, kaya nag-iipon na ako, kaso yung ipon ko naging zero. Hahaha kase ba naman, pa-load ng pa-load. Pero kaya yunn. XD Yung crush kong january 6, kaklase ko. Pero yugn March 8 hindi, pero friends kami hehehehe. 4th year na kasi siya eee. Yung sa march 8 kong crush, may mga binigay na xa saken. Panyo & Bolerr. Tapos ngayonng yearr, nag iisip ako anong pwedeng hingiin, hahaha. I.D sana kaso bbgay nya sa GF niya. Wala naman me care kahit may GF siya e, inspirasyon ko lang xaaa. Wahah XD

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« Reply #17 on: October 18, 2009, 10:25:53 pm »
@Izza: Pareho kayo nung dalawa kong kaclose, ang adik sa KPOP! :)) Buti naman nakakaipon ka. Ang hirap kasi humingu sa parents eh. Strict masyado pag money matters, hahaha. Load? Ay, globe ka ba? :)) Crush lang naman eh. Apir tayo dian! Kala naman nung mga girlfriend, porke crush, eh aagawin na. Joke. =)) May iba lang kasing possessive masyado, di ba? ;)

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« Reply #18 on: October 18, 2009, 10:27:09 pm »
~ haha sa letran sis .. ahm mahirap mag adjust pero masaya naman.. new experiences ndin kasi like cutting class hahaha joke lng sis  ;D anyway daan ka din sa stories ko :)
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« Reply #19 on: October 18, 2009, 10:31:00 pm »
@Ate Sis: Letran? Whoa, medyo malapit lang sa amin. :)) Cutting daw oh, hahaha. Amp yung teacher namin, accusing us of cutting her classes. We're just late. Hay. Ang arte niya. Okay, nag-inarte ako, hahaha. Shor, dadaan ako. Daan ka ren dun sa isa ko pa. Yung sa iyo, I'll try stopping by and dropping some love this week. Puro practice kami. Para bago magtest makapag-comment na ko. ;)

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Re: Once Upon a Time - Story :) -- 5 || Control (updated)
« Reply #20 on: October 18, 2009, 11:12:09 pm »
Dahil maloko akong bata, nag-update ako ulit. Ayos ba? ;) Prologue lang siya, and maikli. I hope you'll be satisfied. And also, this story will be purely English. Author's notes lang siguro ang tagalog. :))

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PROLOGUE: Prominence

It never entered my mind that the past still holds important things in the present. I believed that what happened in the past stays in the past; they’ll never come to hunt you. I never thought that it’s really true.

The rumors are true. The gossips, they’re all true. I want to reason out, scream at them, and push them away. I finally know and understand, but why do they keep on pushing me to the limits? Is knowing not enough? Do I still have to go through it again? My will was mangled beyond what it can handle. I don’t know if I can do this still.

I ran away, tears of pain blurring my line of vision. I don’t know where to go, I don’t know if it’s still worth running the race. I want to jump and kill myself, but I can’t just die. Physical death isn’t enough. I have to die with my soul. I have to die in everyone’s memory. I have to die in his heart.

Finally, I reached an open spot. A dead end. I was stuck in the middle of now and never. What will I choose? I could hear them bashing me, cursing me endlessly, voicing out their disappointment about my inability to grasp stronger. I could hear them calling to me, trying to bring life back to me. As if I’m that important.

Through all the cries and screams, I could hear one sobbing. The heartbreaking sound was very prominent, as if he’s within me. I could feel every emotion he keeps inside. I could feel him as me. I could feel him as if we’re one.

I could feel him as if he’s mine, and only mine.


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LIKE IT? The characters will be introduced in the first chapter. Additional info: the story will be on the female protagonist's perspective. COMMENT NAO. ;)
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Re: Once Upon a Time - Story :) -- 5 || Control (updated)
« Reply #21 on: October 19, 2009, 08:41:46 am »
nice start. bianca here, support ko to. :)
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« Reply #22 on: October 19, 2009, 08:19:54 pm »
@Ate Bianca: Thanks for the support! :) Danni here.

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« Reply #23 on: October 19, 2009, 08:27:54 pm »
hello danni nice meeting you... ;) i'll wait for your uppie. :)
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Re: Once Upon a Time - Story :) -- 5 || Control (updated)
« Reply #24 on: October 19, 2009, 08:35:41 pm »

DUgo dugo naman ilong ko sa english mo danni!
Hahaha mas magaling ka pa sa aking mag-english inperness.
hahaha, ang lalalim!
Update na chapter oneee.
Hahaha ( :

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« Reply #25 on: October 19, 2009, 08:38:37 pm »
@Ate Bianca: Thanks ate. ;)

@Izza: Hindi naman. :)) Inspired lang ako, joke. TeeHee. I'll update as soon as I'm done with my Filipino homework. Pag carry ko pa.

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Re: Once Upon a Time - Story :) -- 5 || Control (updated)
« Reply #26 on: October 19, 2009, 08:40:28 pm »


Haha. Merond in akong assignment sa filipino. Tinatamad lang ako. :D Kaka-update ko lang kasi sa story ko,  two chapters na. Haha, gusto ko pang mag-type kakatamd gumawa ng assignment

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« Reply #27 on: October 19, 2009, 08:43:45 pm »
@Izza: Ay tama ka dian. *apir* :)) Nakakatamad talaga, grabe. Maganda kasi pag sa story, pag nag-start ka magtype, type lang ng type. =))

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Re: Once Upon a Time - Story :) -- 5 || Control (updated)
« Reply #28 on: October 19, 2009, 10:11:30 pm »
hi danni! i'm here na!
since ito ang may pinakashort na update.. nakahabol ako. hihihi.
next time na lang yung isa ah.  ;)
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Lonely Procrastinator

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Re: Once Upon a Time - Story :) -- 5 || Control (updated)
« Reply #29 on: October 19, 2009, 10:12:41 pm »
@Lynn: No problemo~ :)) Sana support mo 'to.  ;)

 

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