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« Reply #15 on: September 11, 2009, 09:00:55 pm »
wahaha..ayan ok na..lol.. ;D
rachelle name ko..

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« Reply #16 on: September 11, 2009, 09:05:41 pm »
hello new reader

ganda ng story

demonyong demonyo ;D

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« Reply #17 on: September 11, 2009, 09:43:01 pm »
wahaha..ayan ok na..lol.. ;D
rachelle name ko..

ahaha oo nga sis eh, inedit ko nga yung post ko eh kasi nasabi na nga pala natin ang name natin hahaha peace  :D


hello new reader

ganda ng story

demonyong demonyo ;D


hahaha thanks dahil diyan may yay ka hahahaha
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« Reply #18 on: September 11, 2009, 09:44:48 pm »
wahaha..ok lang yun sis..
tao ka lang naman e..nagkakamali..haha..
saka ganyan talaga pag may memory gap na katulad ko..lol.. ;D

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« Reply #19 on: September 11, 2009, 09:58:01 pm »
@raice03 - uu sis tao ako wahahaha
haha ayos lng mag ka memory gap, may reason naman ,, lol  :D





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« Reply #20 on: September 11, 2009, 10:36:07 pm »
Waaa! grabe ngayun ko lang nabasa 2nd update..

 hahaha kick out from hell??

 ayus yun bute nga kay

 Alex.. hahaha.. napaisip tuloy ako

 sa 3 years na xang patay..

 bakit xa namatay?? waaaa

 curious lan.. heheh peace..

 update update ^_^  :D :D

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« Reply #21 on: September 11, 2009, 11:14:31 pm »
@skatechickaz - hahaha, malalaman din natin kung bakit namatay si Alex, abangan sa mga susunod na chapter wahaha




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*CHAPTER 3 -- FIRST IMPRESSION :]

*ALEX'S POV





Hanggang ngayon hindi padin ako makapaniwala, tinakwil ako sa hell dahil sa kwintas ko? oo sakin mahalaga yon, pero sa kanila? hindi naman siguro? hays, Lucifer bwisit ka  >:(


at dahil nakakabagot dito sa mansion, oo tama mansion , dahil habang naglilibot ako kanina grabe na pa wow talaga ako dahil ang laki ng bahay, may swimming pool, garden na may grotto, hahaha natatawa tuloy ako may santo kasi , pero hindi naman talaga ako masama , kaya hindi ako galit sa diyos , angels and saints, may dahilan lng talaga kung bat ako napunta sa hell ,  anyway mag ym muna ako, kasi parang nasa utak ko ang username at password ko sa pagkataong to  :D

USERNAME * chickboi07
password * (secret haha)

You are now signing in, Welcome to YM!



grabe ha? 30 offline messages? at puro babae pa, iba na talaga ako ngayon, pati username chickboi pa hahaha



Mfurukawa:BUZZ!
sino kaya to?
chickboi07: hu u?
Mfurukawa: anak naman, ang mommy mo ito, nasabi ba sa yo ng katulong na gagabihin ako kaya ikaw na lng ang mag enroll sa sarili mo, Ok?
wow nanay ko pala to, cool  8)
chickboi07: ok ma, san ako kukuha ng pambayad? saka yung mga kailangang bilin?
Mfurukawa: yung pang tuition mo andun sa office ko sa may table , yung credit card kong blue, at mag shopping ka na din , kung gusto mo isama mo si Ron
chickboi07: ok po
Mfurukawa is now offline


nice talaga, credit card? Ron? sino kaya yon? siguro tropa ko  ;D
itetext ko na lng, siguro naman nasa contacts yun ng cellphone ko, at siguro may cellphone ako , panigurado yan  ;D

ALEX: yaya! nakita mo ba yung cellphone ko?


MAID: Sir nasa ibabaw po ata ng study table niyo


ALEX: ok po, thanks


whoa! 139 messages?


Sender: Sophia

bHabes? gCng kNba? kitA tAu mEang 1pm ok? mUa


Sender: Rochelle

mhine? i miss u na XD


Sender: Bboy

tol musta? basketball ba maya o dota?


Sender: Rachelle

hUBBy?! bat d ka nagpaparamdam?


Sender: Jenny

Hon, starbucks tau mea, treat mo ko


Sender: Ron

Tol? nagtext mom mo sakin sabay tayo mag enroll txtback ka pag gising mo



ayun, si Ron lng ang nireplyan ko ng matino at kinancel ko lahat nung mga appointments ko DAW sakanila, sabay delete sa ibang text pare pareho lng naman puro babe, hon, mhine,etc  ;D








ARIANNE'S POV





ayun natapos na kaming mag enroll, nandito na kami sa mall, iniwan kami ng mommy ko kasi may emergency meeting daw
at sa Japan pa yung meeting buti na lng kasama ko yung mga 2 kong bhez kasi yung kapatid ko humiwalay at gumala,


LEI: uy teka bhez! ano yang suot mong necklace ha? ngayon ko lng ata yan nakita


RIANNE: ahh, eto ba? kwento ko maya sainyo, tara dun tayo sa cafe


ayun , pumunta na kami sa cafe, umorder muna tapos umupo na, excited kasi tong dalawa eh


JIELYN: ohh ano na? tell us about jan sa necklace mo at about dun sa dream mo


Rianne: kasi ganito yan ( at kinuwento ko sakanila yung nangyari about sa dream at tungkol sa necklace )

at ayun pag katapos ko magkwento ganito sila -->  :o :o :o


RIANNE: uy ? na tulala na ata kayo?


LEI: as in na na..na..ku..ha mo..oo yaaan sa dre..am??!!

hehe matatakutin kasi si Lei kaya ganyan yan, nung napatingin ako kay Jielyn nakangiti ng bonggang bongga naku nakakabaliw

RIANNE: You heard it right, nakuha ko to sa panaginip at wag ka ng matakot Lei, Jie bakit ka nakangiti?

JIELYN: kasi its a mystery! ;D

haha baliw talaga tong mga friends ko yung isa natulala yung isa tuwang tuwa naku , at ayon na tapos na kaming mag shopping at uuwi na kami dahil 3 days na lng at pasukan na






*ALEX's POV


its a long day nakapag enroll na din sa wakas at nandito nadin kami sa mall, balak ko sanang mag arcade ng mapansin ko yung babae sa cafe, parang familiar siya sakin


RON: pare? ayos ka lng ba? parang naglalakad ka sa liwanag ng buwan ha,


ALEX: may nakita kasi akong girl dun sa cafe, at parang may kamuka siya


RON: naku wag mo ng pansinin yun, baka isa lng yun sa mga ex mo na hindi mo na ma alala


ALEX: baka nga..


ayun natapos kaming mag arcade, tapos dota tapos uwi, sobrang pagod kasi,pero kahit pagod ako hindi mawala sa utak ko yung babae kanina, para kasing nakita ko na siya somewhere






AFTER 3 DAYS FIRST DAY NA NG KLASE




*RIANNE'S POV

Hindi ko sinuot yung kwintas kasi baka sapian ako :D.First day na ng school at excited na ako,lagi kasing may program dito sa school namin, pangalan pala ng school namin ay Thomas International School, sossy diba? hahaha magkakasama nadin kami ng best friends ko at papunta kami sa club meeting,


LEI: bhez? officer ka kaya ulit dito sa dance club?


RIANNE: naku baka hindi na, syempre madami daw transferee's eh


JIELYN: kahit na no, were still rooting for you!


at ayun nandito na kami sa multi purpose hall, dito daw kasi ang meeting, may pumasok na 2 guy, pareho silang gwapo pero ang korni nung buhok nung isa, hahaha


STUDENT1: I nominate Ms. Rianne for the position of choreo,


*clap clap clap*


STUDENT2: I nominate Alex For the position of choreo


*wooo!* *gwapo mo kuya* *clap clap clap*


ahhh, so Alex pala name nung gwapo pero weird ang buhok na guy, hmm let us see kung sino ang mananalo..


TEACHER: Rianne got 18 votes & Alex also got 18 votes, so its a tie?


oh? so its a tie?For the first time may nakapantay sakin  8)






ALEX'S POV


hays ewan ko ba at napadpad ako dito sa dance club, sabi kasi ni Ron ako daw ang choreo sa dati naming school pero natatamad ako  ;D


TEACHER: congratulations Rianne and Alex, first time nagkaron ng tie so, mag usap na kayong dalawa dahil may contest tayong sasalihan next next week, pagbutihan niyo ok?


ayaw lumapit nung girl kaya ako nalng ang lumapit
ALEX: Miss?


pag harap niya


RIANNE: My name's Rianne


ALEX: IKAW?




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ok lng ba mga sis?


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« Reply #22 on: September 11, 2009, 11:51:14 pm »
first!
ate new reader:D
bianca here
nice story kkaiba ung concept:D

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« Reply #23 on: September 11, 2009, 11:59:33 pm »
first!
ate new reader:D
bianca here
nice story kkaiba ung concept:D

hi sis bianca, precious here  :D
thanks sis,
dahil first kita may yay ka po sakin,

thanks again for reading,
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« Reply #24 on: September 12, 2009, 10:20:19 am »
auz 2!nagkita na cla!wohoo!
its too easy 4 alex nmn.haha ;D

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« Reply #25 on: September 12, 2009, 11:15:06 am »
MS. TS:
   - meg here.  XD
new reader.  LOL
ayoos to.  asteeg ih.
wahaha.  nexxt naa.  !!

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« Reply #26 on: September 12, 2009, 02:47:27 pm »
auz 2!nagkita na cla!wohoo!
its too easy 4 alex nmn.haha ;D


ahahaha, syempre may twist yan hahaha  :D

MS. TS:
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new reader.  LOL
ayoos to.  asteeg ih.
wahaha.  nexxt naa.  !!

hi, hehe thanks! precious here  :D


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update ako later.. hahaha
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« Reply #27 on: September 12, 2009, 03:14:37 pm »
naalala kaya nila yung isat isa??

wahahaha.. siguro si alex kase.. kase.. hmmm

pigbigyan ng kwintas eh! hahahah anu na keang mangyayari waaaa!!

natutuwa na ko hahahah,, hirap naman nun walang

alam sa ginagalawan nia hahaha...

Go! Go! Go! support ko to Sis! hahahah
 :D :D :D :D :D

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« Reply #28 on: September 12, 2009, 03:19:35 pm »
*CHAPTER 4 -- THE PLAN :]

*RIANNE'S POV






ALEX: IKAW?

huh? ano bang pinagsasabi ng lalaki na to, ni hindi ko nga siya kilala eh, hmm.. iba pala ichura niya pag malapitan parang nagkita na kami, pero ewan ko, he's such a weird guy


RIANNE: huh? excuse me mister, i dont even know you ::)


ALEX: ahh .. ehh sorry miss, i'm looking for someone eh medyo hawig mo kasi


aba, weird talaga siya ha, pareho pa ata kaming familiar sa muka ng isa't isa, buti na lng at nagtext yung classmate ko, pinapatawag na kasi kami sa gym


RIANNE: ahh, sige ha, una na kami, other time na lng tayo mag usap


umalis na kami, haha kahit gwapo siya weird padin siya,hindi lng siya pati yung buhok niya,  :D


LEI: girl ha, mukang type ka nun,


JIELYN: naku bhez ha, wag mo sabihing isa din yun sa mga papa asahin mo


natawa naman ako sa mga nasabi sakin ng best ko, nagkaron nadin kasi ako ng lovelife pero na loko lng ako, syempre na hurt ako, buti na lng crush ko pa lng yung guy, at simula nun ayun, ang dami kong nakaka close na guy pero as in close lng talaga pag nanligaw na, busted agad, na trauma na ata ako, :D




*ALEX'S POV




RON: oi pare, anu yung inasal mo kanina kay rianne? kilala mo ba yun?


kilala ko nga ba yun?
ALEX: kamukha niya kasi yung babae sa cafe,


at yung girl sa dream, parang same features lng sila, naku mahihirapan ako nito, dapat kilalanin ko siya , sa dami ba naman ng babae pano ko yun mahahanap,nakakainis naman kasi eh bakit nag blublur yung ala-ala ko pag andun na sa part nung kaharap ko yung girl,sinabihan ko pamandin na maganda, hays bahala na si lucifer :D





*RIANNE'S POV




Nandito kami ngayon sa starbucks, nag ffs, facebook,  twitter, multiply, plurk lahat na ng social sites ng bigla akong tawagin ni Lei,


LEI: bhez, look at this,

pinakita niya sakin yung profile ng guy, ang name Alex07, teka eto yung kanina sa dance club ah, hmmm, binasa namin yung comments , puro comment about playboy ha, d daw marunong magmahal, mukang enjoy to ah,dahil playboy to, tuturuan ko siya ng lesson , kahit hindi kami close, gusto ko ipaghiganti ang mga babaeng niloloko niya


RIANNE: girls i have an idea, ::)


JIELYN: ano yun?























RIANNE: i'll teach him how to love  ::)






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ayan meh update na ako , haha sorry po maiksi update na lng ako mamaya pag may nag comment :D

naalala kaya nila yung isat isa??

wahahaha.. siguro si alex kase.. kase.. hmmm

pigbigyan ng kwintas eh! hahahah anu na keang mangyayari waaaa!!

natutuwa na ko hahahah,, hirap naman nun walang

alam sa ginagalawan nia hahaha...

Go! Go! Go! support ko to Sis! hahahah
 :D :D :D :D :D


ahaha , thanks sis sa pag support, kaso may memory gap sila pareho eh, kaya pareho silang walang alam hahahaha
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« Reply #29 on: September 12, 2009, 03:33:34 pm »
@raice03 - uu sis tao ako wahahaha
haha ayos lng mag ka memory gap, may reason naman ,, lol  :D

wahaha..adik.. ;D
ay..ganun??
naks naman..ang yaman na ni alex..lol.. ;D
at babaero talaga e..haha..

 

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