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BITTER SWEET 16 **Episodes 4&5 posted**
« on: August 31, 2009, 08:16:16 pm »
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Hi everyone! I've been listening to different sad love songs when I come up writing this story.  :D I'm not brokenhearted though. haha.  not a heartbreaking story either. ;) Read on the brief summary, I'm open for comments so please feel free posting 'em. I've also provided the initial title cover I made myself. Just click on the link to view. Ciao!  :D

PS: Sana magustuhan nyo.. hehe.. I'll post the 1st chapter after completing them asap. tenk u  ::)



"BITTER SWEET 16"

Sypnosis

Janee, a sixteen year old freshman college student, lives a normal life not until she founds out that she’ll be giving birth several months from now. One night of fun turns into a burden forever. Will she ever survive a new chapter in her life? How can she handle the role of a student, a worker, a mother and a father at the same time? Will she ever commit the same mistake of falling in love with the wrong person twice? Find out!

Prelude

Hi. I’m Janee Ramirez, the former top scholar in Eastwood University.  :) Former top scholar? Yes, I was – but not anymore.  :( I never imagined life would turn upside down for me. Being a mom at a very young age would be hard. Err, being a single mom would be harder.  :-X I had to give up 98% or should I say 99% of my everyday way of living – including my studies, my Friday night outs, weekend dates, shopping, shopping and more shopping.  :-\ Life would be really tough as I face a new challenging role – a mommy.

CHAPTER ONE
Episodes:

« Last Edit: October 13, 2009, 09:38:57 pm by pink_stuff »

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Re: BITTER SWEET 16 **LATEST STORY**
« Reply #1 on: August 31, 2009, 09:00:55 pm »
NOTE: If anyone of you guys are interested for story covers, I can make you one for free! hehe. Just let me know. Please check out www.studioarts4.multiply.com for sample art works. Thanx!!  :P

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Re: BITTER SWEET 16 **LATEST STORY**
« Reply #2 on: September 07, 2009, 12:16:20 pm »

Tuloy ko pa ba?? Guess noone is interested with the story.. huhu  :(

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Re: BITTER SWEET 16 **LATEST STORY**
« Reply #3 on: September 07, 2009, 12:27:47 pm »
Tuloy ko pa ba?? Guess noone is interested with the story.. huhu  :(
hey. Im interested po. I find it interesting. I wanna read stories like this. Kaya tuloy mo. :) chey nga pala. Gbü!
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si chey ganda ay sumasilent muna :)
©chey ♥

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Re: BITTER SWEET 16 **LATEST STORY**
« Reply #4 on: September 08, 2009, 07:49:32 am »
hehe. one and only! =) hi chey! im deciding na stop ko na xa but now that meron interesado, i'll continue it, myt be this week. thnx for reading +)

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Re: BITTER SWEET 16 **LATEST STORY**
« Reply #5 on: September 08, 2009, 12:01:00 pm »
u should continue this... it seems interesting
i affirm that now i can attract the perfect man

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Re: BITTER SWEET 16 **LATEST STORY**
« Reply #6 on: September 09, 2009, 12:31:45 pm »
u should continue this... it seems interesting

Surenezz =) i'll post the first chap probably this weekends. thanx for showing interest. hope uL support this all the way!

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Re: BITTER SWEET 16 **Chapter 1_Episode 1**
« Reply #7 on: September 20, 2009, 06:30:12 pm »
Chapter One
Episode 1


It was late at night when my boyfriend Zack fetched me from my apartment. Since I entered college, I was able to convince my parents let me move in a studio type unit near the campus. Living far from my parents gives me a lot freedom – no curfew, no house rules. I can almost do everything I want like attending Kia’s party, the famous and hottest chic in town. The grand celebration will be held at the most prestigious bar in the east. I really prepared myself for tonight and aimed to have the spotlight for this event. I have my hair styled in wavy curls. I’ve matched a pair of metallic stilettos with my black cocktail dress. It was a total make over – a head-turner look!

“Wow!”The three-letter word came out from Zack’s lips as I approach him outside the main gate. I knew he was totally impressed on my overall transformation.

“So that’s what took you for three hours?” he queried.

“Well… I’m really sorry.” I apologized. “It’s worth the wait. You’re amazingly gorgeous tonight babe.” Zack complimented. Nothing is sweeter than knowing my boyfriend appreciates me, he seldom does.


We arrived at the party on time. It was really crowded. Good thing Kia has reserved us a VIP slot in the parking area. The venue was all set up, including the lights, the sounds, the stage for the rock band, and all the rest. It was indeed an ultimate party blast!  I was so excited. I spent all night hitting the dance floor and drinking cocktails – plus several shots of Singapore sling and some bottles of beer.

“BLA-A-ARP...” It was disgusting. I’m not feeling well and it’s, it’s…

“BLA-A-ARP!” coming out again. I feel dizzy and tipsy and woozy – I am super wasted!

“Let me take you home.” Zack suggested.

“No! I don’t wanna go home!” I pleaded.

“Janee, we are going home. You need to take a rest.” Zack insisted.

“I’m doing fine.. I-I… B-L-A-R-P-P...” Ok, maybe not that fine. My bf carried me on his back because I can’t even stand still. I think he’s right; I need to go home before I do something more stupid than looking like a jerk in front of this party crowd.

We arrived in my apartment a few minutes later or several hours? I’m not quite sure but I don’t care, what matters is that we’re already here in my apartment safe and sound. Zack led me inside my room and handed me a towel. I immediately went inside the bathroom and washed myself with warm water. This time I knew I can handle myself- I’m feeling a lot better! I went back inside my room after taking a shower. I saw Zack lying on my bed. I headed towards him and tried to wake him up.

“Zack… Zack…” I uttered softly.

He opened up his eyes and touched my face gently. “I love you.” He whispered in my ears.

“I know.” I replied.

“But for now you have to get up and drive home, it’s getting late.” I tried to pull him up but his weight is heavier than mine so I was pulled back.

“Hey!” I giggled.

“Janee…” He said in a very sweet voice.

“Janee…” I can hear him say my name over and over. I think I’m gonna melt. He slowly stroked my hair with his hands and kissed me.

“Let us make love tonight Janee.” he sighed.

I was speechless and completely blank. I don’t know what and how to response, all I know is that I love Zack so much.

“Do you love me?” he asked with his most angelic face. “I—I do…” I replied.

“Then show me…” He grabbed me gently and kissed me once more – this time on the neck. I’m finally losing myself. I know I have to resist the temptation, but I failed. I totally gave in and it felt so right.  It was the most beautiful thing that happened in my entire life.


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Re: BITTER SWEET 16 **Chapter 1_Episode 1**
« Reply #8 on: September 21, 2009, 08:15:32 pm »

Chapter One
Episode 2



The next day…

(Snoozing… Snoozing…. Snoozing….)

I woke up so late that I didn’t realize my alarm has been snoozing for almost 20 times. I was so addicted of sleeping. My head aches so much – it might be a hangover from consuming too much alcohol last night. And speaking of last night, I’ve slept with Zack and woke up this morning without him. I didn’t even know the time he left, maybe he doesn’t want to spoil my sweet nap.

I greeted him ‘good morning’ and messaged him ‘I love you’ on SMS thinking that he would reply back asap. Well, he didn’t. Guess he’s still snoring and lying on his bed.

I fixed myself up, take a shower, eat some waffles and drink brewed coffee just like the usual thing I do every morning. Today feels like sunshine even though the sky is dark and cloudy. I smiled as I think of everything that happened to Zack and me last night. It was wonderful.

(Pitter-pat….Pitter-pat….)

Droplets started to pour on the rooftop. I knew it was going to rain. I decided to close the window as raindrops began to wet the floor. Then I saw Violet just outside my front gate – soaking and freezing.

“Janee!” she shouted in a husky manner.

I took my umbrella hanging behind the door and immediately escorted Violet inside my apartment.

“What are you doing outside? Are you out of your mind? It’s raining and you’re all wet.”

“I know. I know, but have you forgotten? It’s our final review for the upcoming Asia Programming Contest!! You did not attend the tutorial. Our coach is looking for you.”
 
Oh gee! I almost forgot, the contest would be conducted few weeks from now. I wasn’t able to attend the tutorial. Great!

“Of course, I haven’t forgotten that!” I lied. “It just happened that I woke up late this morning.”

“Whatever!?” Violet responded.

“Are you sure you did not do anything lousy last night to make you woke up late this morning? Huh?” she added.

“Just don’t forget that our scholarship depends on this.” she continued as I help her dry herself up.

Vi, as I actually call her has been a good friend to me since we were kids. She’s like a sister to me and act like my mother sometimes – well, I get used to that. We have a lot of things in common: the university we’re attending, the scholarship we’re working at with, even the cutest posh pen we both purchased last week at the Pink shop. Our only difference? I’m stubborn and she’s not.

Though I know Vi is someone whom I can share secrets with, I decided not to tell her what really happened last night. I don’t want to disappoint her for a very lame excuse to skip our final review for the contest.

“How about a cup of coffee?” I offered.

“How about discussing what our coach have tackled this morning while drinking a cup of coffee with you?” Violet suggested as she flashes me an innocent smile.



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Re: BITTER SWEET 16 **Chapter 1_Episode 1**
« Reply #9 on: September 21, 2009, 08:24:22 pm »
Chapter One
Episode 3




“You did a very great job!” Mrs. Smith congratulated us.

She is our Math professor in Algebra and the teacher-in-charge of handling competition like this. She’s not just a coach but also a responsible mother of her three sons whom she raises all by herself since her husband dies in an accident long years ago. I truly admire her for making our University the champ for five consecutive years despite the busy schedules. She’s the real winner for me!

After receiving the plaque and gift certificates, Vi and I invited Mrs. Smith for a sweet treat at Éclair’s.

We indulged ourselves in yummy cakes and pastries. I ordered one of my favorites – the famous chocolate tower with roasted pistachio and cashew nuts!

“This is really a good place for a sweet tooth. I think my boys would love it here!” Mrs. Smith commented as she scoops over a big bowl of strawberry and apple fondue.

“I’m very positive with that Mrs. Smith. My youngest sister loves this place so much that she’ll exchange a Barbie doll for a plate of honey rolls and peanut butter sticks.”

“Well, kids are Éclair’s no.1 fans!” Mrs. Smith added.

“Why don’t you bring your kids here tomorrow coach?” I asked in excitement.

Mrs. Smith rolled her eyes and said, “Oh maybe some other time, I hope I could bring them here over the weekends. I got a really, really tight appointment this month.”

“Is it difficult to have kids?” The question has popped up out of nowhere as I take the last dollop of my choco tower.

Mrs. Smith and Vi laughed in chorus. “Areyou serious?”Vi almost dropped from her seat in laughter.

“What?” I was intrigued with them in making fun of my question. “I just wanna know… that’s all… no big deal… really.” I blushed in shame.

“What made you asked that question Miss Janee?” Mrs. Smith queried in a light tone. I just shrugged as I avoid eye to eye contact with both of them.

Mrs. Smith tapped my shoulder. “You’ll never know until you’ll get there Janee… Someday, you’ll be telling me that parenthood is never a play-thing. It’s a big responsibility… way to big!” coach Smith explained.

“And before we go on to deeper thoughts inside your curious minds, let me remind you to enjoy life as a teenager first. Don’t rush things and never turn pages from cover to cover. By the way, I have to go now. I’m going to fetch my kids from school. Excuse me girls. Thank for the yummy treats! Bye!” Mrs. Smith walked through the main door as she leaves the table.

Her words sing to me like a melody in my heart. It’s true. I shouldn’t be running things too fast. I’m too young and I have so much time to have fun and be happy. I should be focusing myself on studies, careers and goals.

Then I thought of Zack and me. Words have begun questioning my mind over and over. Are we having things too soon? Is it not wrong to sleep with him on the same roof even before our wedding? Am I really sure he’s the one I’m going to spend my whole life with?


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Re: BITTER SWEET 16 **Episodes 1-2-3**
« Reply #10 on: September 21, 2009, 08:33:56 pm »
comments? anyone?? juz wanna know if meh readers ako o wala  :-\ i'm really working on this story though  :-X

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Re: BITTER SWEET 16 **Episodes 1-2-3**
« Reply #11 on: October 04, 2009, 08:48:06 pm »
nyaha.. meh readers poh ba?  :D lolz. ill pot the next episodes dz week.. bye-bye!

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Re: BITTER SWEET 16 **Episodes 1-2-3**
« Reply #12 on: October 05, 2009, 12:07:26 am »
cool plot :)
update :D
Somewhere, between those late night calls and small talks,
I fell inlove

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Re: BITTER SWEET 16 **Episodes 1-2-3**
« Reply #13 on: October 12, 2009, 11:19:01 pm »
wee. new reader! hehe. ok i'll write the next episodes.. try to finish them by this week. keep reading. enjoy! =)

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Re: BITTER SWEET 16 **Chapter 1_Episode 1**
« Reply #14 on: October 12, 2009, 11:36:41 pm »
Chapter One
Episode 4



“Hey, babe!” Zack greeted me as he gives me a quick peck on the lips.

“You’re late again…” I responded in a low voice.

“I told you to come at 8 o’ clock sharp… it’s 9:15, how are we supposed to go on our speech class now?” I continued, this time I said it in a higher pitch.

“C’mon, I can’t wake up that early. My team plays basketball practices every night and you know that.”

“Of course I know that. But it’s not an excuse for skipping classes especially in my case! I’m a scholar remember? ”

“Oh I’m sorry Ms. Brainsick, your boyfriend didn’t even ask you to wait for him. You can attend the class by yourself anyway!” He began raising his voice.

“I-I’d thought you would love that…” I replied keeping myself as calm as I could.

“No Janee, not anymore! I don’t like a clingy girlfriend who yells and nags all the time. I’m sorry Janee but I had enough of you. I quit!”

He grabbed his bag and walked away. I tried to pull him back but he just pushed me away.

“Babe… let’s talk about this…”

I begged reaching for his arms but it was too late. He left me. He left me just like that. I have missed the whole class spending my time to tears. I’ve lost Zack. I’ve lost the one who made me believe that there is forever. The one I gave myself completely. The only reason I’m living for…

“Janee?” I heard a voice coming from the casted shadow near the corridor. It was Violet.

“What on earth are you doing here alone?” Vi draws closer as she walks through the hallway.  I looked away from her thinking she wouldn’t notice my swollen eyes.

“Is everything alright Janee?” I nodded.“I don’t think so.” She disagreed as she grabbed my shoulders and embraced me. “Whatever it is… you can always tell me…”

« Last Edit: October 12, 2009, 11:40:59 pm by pink_stuff »

 

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