♥♥♥ PLEASE BE CAREFUL WITH MY HEART ♥♥♥ Chap 4 08.28.09 NEED READERS!

[jamielle]

P L E A S E  B E  C A R E F U L  W I T H  M Y  H E A R T
_{by: jamielle ©}

"i hear what they say, playboy daw ako. wala akong pakialam! bata pa rin ako. who says i need to find a girlfriend now, but why do i feel this way about her? she's nothing special and yet i want to make everyday with her special. bakit ganito ang feelings ko para sa kanya?"

~♥ Lance Alexander "Xander" Montez ♥~


"i've learned to live without a love life. i have no time kasi and i need to keep this secret to myself so my daddy doesn't have to worry too much about me. he's not the boy i would like to be friends with but why does it feel like i need him in my life? is he my angel send by God? am i falling in love with him?"

~♥ Xyleena Dessirie "Xyleen" Castillo ♥~

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C O N T E N T S

CHAPTER 1 ♥ CHAPTER 2 ♥ CHAPTER 3 ♥ CHAPTER 4 ♥ CHAPTER 5

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C H A R A C T E R S

Lance Alexander "Xander" Montez
Xyleena Dessirie "Xyleen" Castillo

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L O G  B O O K

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S T O R Y  C R I T I Q U E S

to be posted when this story has come to its end.

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A D V E R T I S E M E N T
_{links to my other stories}

D I S G U I S E D
S C R A P B O O K

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_{Images and songs are for storyline purposes only.
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[not.a.barbie.doll]

Just a few corrections:

i have no time kasi and i need to keep this secret to myself so my daddy doesn't worry to much about me.

Doesn't worry too much about me.

he's not the boy i would like to be friends with but why does it feels like i need him in my life?

Why does it feel like.

[jamielle]

PL E A S E  B E  C A R E F U L  W I T H  M Y  H E A R T
_{by: jamielle ©}

♥ CHAPTER 1 ♥
_{FIRST ENCOUNTER & UNEXPECTED NEWS}

 

Xyleen (pronounce it as Celine) and Trish (supahfriend of Xyleena) are walking outside the campus...


Trish: Are you really sure of this? Baka hindi ka pa magaling or baka sumama ang pakiramdam mo...

Xyleen: Trish, don't worry about me. I can handle myself, I'm fine and I'll be doing fine! Oh, please wag mong sabihin yung secret natin kahit kanino. Please, promise me...

Trish: Okay, I promise... but you take care of yourself.


At the gate, Xander has his sunglasses on and he is smoking...

Xander: Pare!!!

Migz: Oh, Montez. Late ka na naman!

Nick: Kelan ba hindi nalate yan si Xander?!

Xander: Siraulo! *batok kay Nick* Nag-overnight ako sa kaibigan ko.

Nick: Sino namang kaibigan yan?

Migz: Anong kaibigan?! Baka ka-ibigan!

Xander: Wala kayong magawa 'no?! Si Jackie, pare!

Migz: Si Jackie?! Ang tindi mo talaga...

Nick: Ano naman ang ginawa nyo sa overnight nyo?

Xander: Basta, Im sure she had a full nights of rest.

Nick: Chickboy ka talaga, tol. Hindi lang basta chickboy... NUMBER 1 pa sa listahan ng chickboy!

They all laugh and then Xander bumps into someone.

Xyleen: Sorry.

Xander stands up and just nod.

Trish: Hoy, bastos ka! Magsorry ka sa kaibigan ko!

Xander takes off his sunglasses and smiles at them.

Xander: Sorry... *with smoke coming out of his mouth*

Trish: Aba, mayabang ka pala talaga!

Xyleen: Trish, tama na. Let's go! *pulls Trish away from Xander*

Trish: Bastos sya eh. Okay ka lang ba?

Xyleen: Yeah, absolutely fine saka kasalanan ko talaga. Sino nga pala yun? Di ba bawal mag-smoke dito sa campus.

Trish: Ah, yun... si Xander Montez. Bukod sa super yabang na, playboy pa!


Migz: Ano... gimik tayo mamayang gabi?

Xander: Kelan ba ako humindi, game ako dyan!

Dean: "LANCE ALEXANDER MONTEZ... TO THE DEAN'S OFFICE, NOW!"

Xander: Kita tayo mamaya.


Xander walks to the Dean's office.

Xander: Sir?

Dean: Mr. Montez, muhkang madalas ang pakikita natin. Have a sit.

Xander: What do you want?

The Dean pulls out 7 beer bottles and puts them on his desk.

Dean: Sabi ng security guard nandito ka at ang barkada mo kagabi. Since you're basically failing your classes, I have no choice but to put you in a community service.

Xander: Anong gagawin ko sa community service na yan? Isa pa... wala kang proof na kami ang uminom nyan. Ang daming estudyante dito tapos kami ang hula mo...

Then the Dean pulls out a leather jacket that belongs to Xander.

Dean: Would this be enough? Sa'yo ito, hindi ba?!

Xander: ... Anong gagawin ko?

Dean: Clean and mop the floors, help with the mathematics team, and you will be getting a tutor yourself.

Xander: Mathmatics team??? Tutor??? Anong itutulong ko sa kanila? Mga geeks ang nandun at sino ang tutor ko?

Dean: I will pick your tutor. Wala kang choice, Mr. Montez. You may leave now.

Xander nods and walks outside.

Xander: Bwisit naman. Malas!

Nick: Anong sinabi ni Dean?

Xander: I need to take community service at may tutor pa ako.

Migz: Sayang. You're very unlucky, dude.

Nick: At least hindi kami napahamak ni Migz... kundi, patay na!

Xander: Sira! May utang kayo sa'kin. I wasn't even with you guys last night... tapos sinuot mo pa ang jacket ko. *pushes Nick*

Nick: Sorry, dude. Bawi na lang ako! So what are your plans now?

Xander: Bahala na... kaya ko naman siguro yun.


Dean: Xyleena, iha... may ipapatutor ako sa'yo.

Xyleen: Umm, sino po yun, Sir?

Dean: Ito... *handed Xyleen the papers*

Xyleen: Lance Alexander Montez?

Dean: Why? Is there something wrong?

Xyleen: Ah, wala po.

Dean: Good. Monday to Thursday ang mga sessions nyo.

Xyleen: Okay po.

[lyn22_luvs_YOU]

hi sis!

and just an additional correction in the part of xyleen.. "my daddy doesn't.." i think it should be "woudn't" or "won't" because i believe if you use "doesn't" its sense would be altered. that's what i think but you can correct me though. it's just ok.

please don't take it personally, but did you happen to take this:
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from my story? and just changed the colors of the heart? because we really are the same. no offense. but it's just fine with me 'cause anyone can use it. if it's just coincidence, i'm really sorry.. that's all.. just need to clarify things. 

[not.a.barbie.doll]

hi sis!

and just an additional correction in the part of xyleen.. "my daddy doesn't.." i think it should be "woudn't" or "won't" because i believe if you use "doesn't" its sense would be altered. that's what i think but you can correct me though. it's just ok.

Well, actually, doesn't could still be used. She just needs to add have.

so my dad doesn't have to worry much about me.

But yea, won't and wouldn't could work too.

[lyn22_luvs_YOU]

^thanks. i'm not really good in correcting grammars 'cause i myself also make mistakes.

[jamielle]

Just a few corrections:
Doesn't worry too much about me.
Why does it feel like.

thanks for pointing those out. actually, to be edited pa talaga yun! hindi ko pa naproproofread.

hi sis!

and just an additional correction in the part of xyleen.. "my daddy doesn't.." i think it should be "woudn't" or "won't" because i believe if you use "doesn't" its sense would be altered. that's what i think but you can correct me though. it's just ok.

please don't take it personally, but did you happen to take this:
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from my story? and just changed the colors of the heart? because we really are the same. no offense. but if it's just coincidence, i'm sorry.. that's all..

sorry kung super dami pang corrections. pero i think fit yung "doesn't" dun... basta, basta. gets ko kung bakit wouldn't pero doesn't talaga ayon sa tumatakbo sa imagination ko na mangyayari sa kwento. pag nagbago, i'll change it.

hmmm, i dunno if sa story mo yun ko nakuha pero if you don't want me to use that design o kung may naviolate ako or whatever, i'll change it. sorry. i just find it cute.

omg, don't get me wrong pero im starting to be scared of you. please, please... wag mo ko aawayin ah. impression ko lang naman yun. kasi siguro, may pagkaparanoid lang ako. forget it. anyway, thank you.

[lyn22_luvs_YOU]

^no no.. ayos lang sa akin. hindi rin lang naman yun pagmamay-ari, yung design na ganun. hehehe.. huwag kang matakot, actually cute nga ako eh. LOL. basta continue mo lang to. btw, support ko pala to. and nobody is perfect naman eh, ako nga din may mga mistakes. ewan ko nga kung bakit ko naisipang mag-english kanina. haha.. basta, gamitin mo lang yung ganun basta yun, hindi ko alam tawag dun eh.. friends tayo di ba? 

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peace tayo ah? di ba? di ba? ako nga pala si lyn.. anu nga pala name mo?  sige bukas na lang, tulog na ako. night!

[jamielle]

^no no.. ayos lang sa akin. hindi rin lang naman yun pagmamay-ari, yung design na ganun. hehehe.. huwag kang matakot, actually cute nga ako eh. LOL. basta continue mo lang to. btw, support ko pala to. and nobody is perfect naman eh, ako nga din may mga mistakes. ewan ko nga kung bakit ko naisipang mag-english kanina. haha.. basta, gamitin mo lang yung ganun basta yun, hindi ko alam tawag dun eh.. friends tayo di ba? 

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peace tayo ah? di ba? di ba? ako nga pala si lyn.. anu nga pala name mo?  sige bukas na lang, tulog na ako. night!

sige, goodnight, lyn. ako naman si riel. thank you ulit. don't worry, papalitan ko ang kulay, tamad pa kasi akong magedit ngayon. usually naman mali ang mga first impressions. sure, sure, friends tayo. thank you ulit, goodnight, tulog na din ako.

[lyn22_luvs_YOU]

^nice to meet you riel! salamat nga pala. sorry ulit kung natakot kita. basta friends na tayo ah, ayoko kasing magkaroon ng enemies dito. thanks for understanding. mwah! haha..   

[jamielle]

^nice to meet you riel! salamat nga pala. sorry ulit kung natakot kita. basta friends na tayo ah, ayoko kasing magkaroon ng enemies dito. thanks for understanding. mwah! haha..   

my pleasure. okay lang yun, what's important is friends na tayo. ako din, ayoko ng enemies. tahimik akong namumuhay at tumatambay sa teentalk. simula ata 13 years old ako. haha. thank you din.

[jamielle]

PL E A S E  B E  C A R E F U L  W I T H  M Y  H E A R T
_{by: jamielle ©}

♥ CHAPTER 2 ♥
_{MEETING EACH OTHER}

Trish: Oh, Xyleen... bakit?

Xyleen: May itututor daw ako sabi ni Dean.

Trish: Good for you. Sino daw?

Xyleen: Si Xander!

Trish: Ano?! Oh my gosh! You wouldn't...

Xyleen: Yes, I would!


Xander drives to his tutors house and gets out of his car.

Xander: *he reads the paper given by the Dean* Xyleena Dessirie Castillo...

DING DONG!!!

Lenie: Sir, ano pong kailangan nila?

Xander: Im looking for Xyleena Dessirie Castillo, is she there?

Lenie: Ah, si Miss Xyleen po... tuloy po kayo. Tatawagin ko lang.


Lenie: Miss Xyleen...

Xyleen: Ano po yun, yaya Lanie?

Lenie: May naghahanap po sa inyo. Pinatuloy ko na po, hinihintay nya po kayo sa baba.

Xyleen: Sino daw po?

Lenie: Nalimutan ko po itanong ang pangalan. Mukha namang mabait saka po gwapo pa.

Xyleen: Yaya talaga... sige po, susunod na ako.


Xander was looking around the house...

Xyleen: *ehem* Excuse me, do I know you?

Xander: *turn to face Xyleen* So, you're my tutor...

Xyleen: Oh, yeah... you are Mr. Montez, right?

Xander: Yeah, your new tutor kid!

Xyleen: Lessons will start on Monday.

Xander: See you then. I have to go.


Xyleen calls Trish...

Trish: Hello, Xyleen...

Xyleen: Trish, we've met. Galing sya dito. Kakaalis lang.

Trish: Kinikilig ka ba?

Xyleen: Huh?! Hindi ah...

Trish: You're lying!

Xyleen: I admit, gwapo sya.

Trish: Ano ka ba naman, Xyleena Dessirie Castillo! Playboy yun...

Xyleen: So...

Trish: Naklalimutan mo ba or do I need to remind you?!

Xyleen: Joke lang. I just think he's cute. Masama ba yun?

Trish: YES!

Xyleen: Sira...

Trish: Basta, don't be stupid and act like every other girl at school! Be smart. He cannot commit to a relationship because he doesn't want to. Like he always say... he doesn't care!

Xyleen: Trish naman... tsimis lang naman ang mga yun!

Trish: Totoo ang mga sinasabi ko. Xander Montez is just one of those guys who just gets girls into bed and forgets them the next day.

Xyleen: Hindi natin sya kilala, Trish. Let's give him the benefit of doubt.

Trish: Im just telling you the facts that I know...

Xyleen: Im not saying that Im in love with him! I just said gwapo sya, cute... yun lang.

Trish: You promise... you won't fall for him?

Xyleen: Promise!

[lyn22_luvs_YOU]

yey! kailan ba ako nagsimula dito sa teentalk? this year ata. hehehe.. super thanks!
hmmm.. ano kaya yung sinasabi ni trish kay xyleen about sa "do i need to remind you...." haha.. nakakaintriga. 
"promise"? baka promises are made to be broken yan ah. 

[jamielle]

yey! kailan ba ako nagsimula dito sa teentalk? this year ata. hehehe.. super thanks!
hmmm.. ano kaya yung sinasabi ni trish kay xyleen about sa "do i need to remind you...." haha.. nakakaintriga. 
"promise"? baka promises are made to be broken yan ah. 

you're welcome.
yeah, promise nya daw yun.
let's see...
we'll never know what's bound to happen.
hindi naman natin lagi kontrolado ang mga posibleng mangyari.

[lyn22_luvs_YOU]

you're welcome.
yeah, promise nya daw yun.
let's see...
we'll never know what's bound to happen.
hindi naman natin lagi kontrolado ang mga posibleng mangyari.

pero kontrolado mo eh. ikaw author... haha..  ano kayang mga posibleng mangyayari?