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FALL FOR YOU

song by SECONDHAND SERENADE

Copyright © All rights reserved 2009.
Distribution for or of any kind is prohibited without the author's consent.


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Life is so unfair. Having you in my life felt really different.
All i want is to know if we're really made perfectly for each other.
I love you that much, but what if that cause everything to be worse??
Would our love survive in this whole stupid thing? Stupid nga ba??

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NAVIGATIONS
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10



♥♥♥♥
.MAIN CHARACTERS.

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Penelope Cassandra E. Lauren
Also known as CASSANDRA EVE. Only daughter of a couple that made a restaurant business
who was once so strong that it even grew all over the world until a woman from a divorced situation
entered they're lives. Princess before. But been lost after her parents died. She kept her life before to run away
the pain that she experienced. Seventeen years old. Had someone from the past but been seperated for a while.
Now that he came back, will be the two of them again? Or will it be her and the guy who's his knight in shining armor??


James Keith M. Montenegro
6 months older than Cassandra. Seventeen years old. Son of the fifth richest couple in the world. Had a
very workaholic parents. But had a younger sister who's been seen outside there house. Has a
strong personality, but so weak on the inside. What makes him weak is that he feels that his
parents never had time for him so he seeks for a girl who will
help him find the better JAMES MONTENGRO.


TWINKLE S. GARCIA
A long time bestfriend of Cassandra Eve. Also knows her secrets from the past. She
lives life to the fullest. Though she's just from a poor-living family, she still made it to college.
But because of hardwork, she's not living normaly. Has a boyfriend, Warren Madrigal, but ended
unhappily ever after. Now that Kurt has finally developed her
feelings for Twinkle, will he be TWINKLE GARCIA's prince charming?


KURT MICHAEL L. SANTOS
The Gentleman. Acting like a gay is the way of being sweet to others though he's a REAL MAN.
He's a NGSB. Can you believe that? Uh. That's why many of the girls there are wondering why he's not yet ready
for committments. But he's really a big-hearted person. And the time that he has developed her
feelings for Twinkle, will it be KURT SANTOS and Twinkle Garcia?


CHRISTINA MARIE O. BRAUN
The most gorgeous among the girls from Adelaide University. Yet, the more lovely she was, her life
isn't like the lookings she has now. That's why she chose to be mean to others cause she thinks that in
that way, it would make her feelings better. You know, like ruling the whole school is so much fun. That's why
she finds way to study how to live better, to stand my her own, and to let her parents know
that they should be proud of CHRISTIE BRAUN.




.PROLOGUE.

My life? UHH. Such a disaster. Princess before? That's right. Napa'kasarap sana ng buhay
ko kung walang mga epal sa mundo na nahihimasok sa buhay ng may buhay. Galit na galit ako sa taong sumira
ng lahat ng ito, sa taong pinag'hiwalay ang tahimik na pamilya. Ako nga pala si CASSANDRA EVE. Ang anak ng
pinakamayamang mag'asawa sa buong mundo na may hawak ng pinaka'mayamang restaurant. Seventeen years young. Nag'aaral sa Adelaide University, ang school na pinapangarap ng mga katulad kung saan gusto nila makapag'aral.

Hindi suwertihan ang maka'pasok dito dahil kailangan mo pa makadaan sa butas ng karayom
may pera ka man o wala. Ang kailangan dito, UTAK. At yun ang mayroon ako. Ulilang lubos na ako kung tawagin. Dahil wala na akong tatay at nanay. Di niyo maiintindihan kaya ikukuwento ko na lang. :P

Si Yvette Eve at Marlon Lauren ay isa sa mga mayayaman sa bansa. Mahal na mahal
nila ang isa't isa kung kaya't mahirap silang pag'hiwalayin. Nag'tayo pa nga sila ng restaurant na lumago pa sa iba't ibang parte sa mundo. Hanggang sa isang araw, may dumating kaming customer na galing single
yet divorced. Malay ko bang yun lang pala ang magiging dahilan para mag'hiwalay sila.
Ang drama noh?! HAHA. Don't worry, my life is somehow exciting. ^-^




Whatever will be written here in the story has no completely
truth that happened in real life. It was just all created by imagination of
the author, of the reader.
Comments are HIGHLY APPRECIATED! :]


This is my SECOND STORY. The first one was, HOPELESS ROMANTICS.
And was deleted. lmao. :D But, hope you'll like this new generation of imagination oringinally made by me.

                                                                  -- Ms. Author
« Last Edit: June 09, 2009, 10:20:44 pm by justice »
yes, i did fall for you..
a little bit too much.

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« Reply #1 on: May 25, 2009, 06:33:07 am »

pers ba ako? teka lang ah.
babasahin ko muna. hehe. ^__^

edit.edit.

wehehehe. malas naman pala niya.
bakit naman naging ganun ang buhay niya ohh.
wehehe. jeje nga pala. >__<
« Last Edit: May 25, 2009, 06:36:57 am by Jalerie »

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« Reply #2 on: May 25, 2009, 11:56:51 am »
^ hi pinkylinkylolly! :]
   i`m gonna support your STORY. ;]

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« Reply #3 on: May 25, 2009, 09:42:58 pm »
Hey Ms.Author. Camz, Ms. Justice. haha ;D

oh well, mahaba ang prologue ahh, pero I'll support this one :)

well done! :)

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« Reply #4 on: May 25, 2009, 11:42:30 pm »
camz! ang kyoooot! haha.XD
support ko toh. dalian mo pagawa nung chap1! ;D

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« Reply #5 on: May 26, 2009, 12:33:54 am »
camz..
support ko to..
like ko ung prologue.. :D
you're my everything :)


thread.. FRiENDS.?

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« Reply #6 on: May 26, 2009, 01:09:34 am »
wow..... bongga.. hehehe

tuloy mo... am proud of you.... mwahh!!! :)
I want something REAL!! (^_^)

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« Reply #7 on: May 26, 2009, 01:10:39 am »

woah .. interesting .. nkakarelate ako sa prologue .. haha ..
btw .. mkikiread lang po .. haha .. ^^

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« Reply #8 on: May 26, 2009, 01:42:12 am »

Chapter One. xx MY WORST NIGHTMARE

Mawala na ang lahat.. Masira na ang lahat.. Mag'away na
silang lahat.. Wag lang ang pamilya ko. HINDI KO KAKAYANIN.



Napansin ko na gabi gabi ay umiiyak si mommy. Tinanong ko siya kung bakit..
"Anak, gabing gabi na umuuwi ang iyong Papa. Hindi ko alam kung ano na ang nangyayari sa kanya." Naaawa na ako kay mommy. Nakatulog na nga siya sa kakaiyak nun eh. Pagdating ni Papa, tinanong ko siya kung bakit lagi na lang siya gabi kung umuwi. "Marami kasing trabaho si Papa mo eh. Sensya na darling ok." Kapag wala si Papa ay tinuturuan na lamang ako ni mommy na magluto. O diba! Siyam na ko nun nung matuto ako magluto ng iba't ibang putahi na niluluto sa fast food nila.


Si mommy kasi ang nagluluto doon at tinuturo na lang niya ang kaalaman niya sa pagluluto doon sa chef nila. "Balang araw Sandy, gusto ko ikaw ang magpapalakad nito ha. Ayoko mapunta sa iba ang pinaghirapan namin ng Papa mo." Hindi ko alam kung ano pa ang ibig niyang sabihin. Parami na ng parami ang kaalaman ko tungkol sa pagluluto kaya minsan eh tumutulong na ko sa cook nila doon. Habang tumatagal eh minsan hindi na umuuwi ng gabi si Papa. Ano na naman kaya ang sasabihin niya? Na hanggang madaling araw eh may customer sila sa fast food na yun?

Habang tumatanda ako eh natutuklasan ko na may tinatago si Papa sa amin ni mommy. Hanggang sinabi niya sa amin na "Yvette, Sandy, may gusto sana akong sabihin sainyo. Nagkaruon kami ng anak ni Sylvia. Yung customer natin dati sa fast food na divorced sa asawa niya. Ikakasal na kami bukas. Yvette sana maintindihan mo ko. Hindi ko naman tatakasan ang obligasyon ko kay Sandy eh." Umalis na si Papa at nagsimula ng umiyak si mommy.

"Tama ang kutob ko anak. Pagnawala na ako, gusto ko na ikaw ang magpapatakbo ng fast food na itinayo namin. Ayoko mapunta sa iba." So yun pala ang ibig sabihin ni mommy sa akin nuon. Nagkasakit siya ng heart attack. Nagalit ako kay Papa nun. Sobrang galit ang naramdaman ko kay Papa. Dahil sa kanya nagkaroon ng cancer si Mommy sa puso. "Bakit hindi na lang ikaw Papa? Bakit? Bakit si mommy pa!?" Hindi na siya nakasagot nun. Hanggang sa tumigil na ang tibok ng puso niya.

Iyak ako ng iyak nuon. Dumating ang madrasta ko. Sinisi ko sila pareho sa pagkawala ng nanay ko. "Kasalanan niyo toh! Lalo ka na! Kung hindi ka pumasok sa buhay namin.. hindi sila magaaway!!" "Sandy tama na yan! Umuwi na tayo sa bahay." Pagkaraan ng ilang taon, nalaman ko na nalason ang Papa at si Sylvia ang may pakana nito. Dahil kay Papa nakapangalan ang fast food na itinayo nila eh 50-50 lang kami ni Sylvia. Aba! Nakihati pa yun!? Eh kami lang naman ang legal na pamilya ni Papa.

Read that? Told you. This is the worst nightmare i've ever had in my real life. Fairytales seems
to come on my realistic life. But how come? Hindi naman ako naniniwala dun. FORGET ABOUT IT! Yun ang nangyari nuon. And now? I'm 17 years old. 4th year. Four nga ko nung nagaral ako nung grade one remember? HAHA. *end of pointless drama.

Pero layo pa ng birthday ko. Kaya hindi ko muna iisipin kung paano ako magdedebut. I'm sure my stepmother woudn't make a debut for me. That would be stupid for her. Wala naman siyang alam gawin kundi lustayin ang pera namin sa mga luho niya. Nagbreakfast na ako at kinuha ang bag para pumasok na. Wala naman siyang paki kung umalis ako ng bahay o hindi basta sakanya ang kayamanan yun na yun! Kapal talaga ng mukha ng babaeng yun.

Parang hindi pinalaki maayos. Pagdating ko sa school, dumeretso na ko sa classroom namin. "O ba't late ka na naman?" "Eh kasi pinagluto pa ko nung madrasta ko. Kainis nga eh. May katulong naman siya." "Masarap ka kasi magluto." Yun nga pala si Twinkle. Ang best friend ko! Siya lang ang nakakaalam ng tungkol sa buhay ko nuon. Siya lang kasi ang pinagkakatiwalaan ko dito. Paano kasi lahat ng kaklase namin dito eh nalason na ang utak dahil kay Christie Braun. Ang pinakamaganda sa campus yet the most spoiled brat sa amin.

Well, grupo kasi sila. Every girl here dreamt about being a member sa grupo nila. Magaling lang naman sila sa cheering ng campus namin. Kayang kaya niya kunin ang scholar ko pero aanhin naman niya yun e ang dami daming pera ng tatay nia? FYI, ang second dad niya ay ang mayari ng pinakamalaking department store dito. Kaya lahat ng uniform ng cheerleaders at basketball team dito ay sagot nila. Boyfriend niya ang MVP sa campus namin. Almost lahat ng babae na kilala ko has a crush on him. As in all girls are heels over head on him. Even teachers. Kaya nga malakas siya sa mga dun eh. Who doesn't?

Me? Of course not!! Ayoko sa mga taong masyadong gwapo. They just destroy a peaceful life like mine. Pabigat lang ang mga gwapo! Problema pa! Sabi nga ni mommy, swerte ko daw kung mahal ako ng isang lalaking gwapo na mabait pa! Yung tipong hulog ng langit. :D

"BREAK NA TAYO!!" "Ano? Bakit? Nagsorry na naman ako sayo ah?" "I HATE YOU SO MUCH! ALAM MO BA UN?" "No! Kasi alam ko na bibig mo lang ang may sabi niyan at hindi ang nararamdaman mo para sakin! Naiintindihan mo ba un? Well kung hate mo ko, MAHAL NA MAHAL KITA!"

Malamang hindi niyo ko naiintindihan. Urghh!!...




JALERIE: tenks sa pagbabasa! basahin ko rin un sau! :)
BEE: haha thanks! hope ur fine btw tungkol sa fam prabs.
MADD: hoped you liked it! thanks sa pagsupport! ;)
KRIS: ahaha thanks a lot! ::)
ATE PAO: update ka rin nung sau aa! i'll wait.:]
AQUAMARINE103: hello! tnx xa pagread! anu po name niu? camz hir. :)
« Last Edit: June 08, 2009, 03:13:18 am by justice »
yes, i did fall for you..
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« Reply #9 on: May 26, 2009, 03:59:49 am »
Nice story! ;)
Keep reading and supporting mine, will ya? :)

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« Reply #10 on: May 26, 2009, 04:29:09 am »
opcorz! why not?! supporting urs
til the end. thanks for reading! yay pur yoo! ::)
yes, i did fall for you..
a little bit too much.

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« Reply #11 on: May 26, 2009, 05:13:45 am »
nice ang chapter 1 .. madrama .. haha ..
* Eunice po pla ..  :) 13 .. ^^

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« Reply #12 on: May 26, 2009, 05:28:51 am »
Lab-u-too!!!! galing galing mo na ah, keept it up... I will update na mine once I have the time, iniisip ko pa yung mga next chapters ko.... basta maganda din siya nakakaiyak yung ending, iniisip ko pa yung best plot though kasi andaming pumapasok sa isip ko na mga stories eh.. finafinalize ko pa... support mine hah.. hehehe

hanep yung intro mo, ganda ganda..... 8)
hhmm.. inspired ka ah?
I want something REAL!! (^_^)

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« Reply #13 on: May 26, 2009, 08:25:25 am »
--mskibasa po..

nice intro by the way...

..grabe naman sya, four years old..grade one..galing nya..

ung madrasta..san na yung anak nila ng papa ni cassandra???

siguro sa susunod pa eepal yun... ;D ;D ;D

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« Reply #14 on: May 26, 2009, 11:44:07 am »

teka wait lang. sino yung nagsalita sa huli?
si sandy o yung christie? medyo nalito ako e
halos pareho kasi ng kulay. haha.
ohwell, ganda. kawawa naman si sandy.
buti may twinkle siyang karamay.
haha. update! ^____^

 

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