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Seryoso. Itutuloy ko pa?

Sige na.
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Oo.
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Ikaw?
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No. pasukan na kasi. :|
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START AGAIN`eighteen. comments? haha. :]
« on: April 24, 2009, 01:32:05 pm »
` May ibang chapters na favorite ng ibang readers. At may ibang chapters na pangit o lame. I'm not a professional writer but I'm trying my best to write a nice story. ;D Kaya pagpasensyahan nyo na kung pangit sya or walang sense. :]]

SILENT READERS, comment naman kayo. :] kahit isang comment lang. haha.

Btw, I'm JHA aka biancaxchq.



[Prologue]

You're there for me,
Through all of my ups and downs
You care for me. You comfort me.
You dry my eyes whenever I cry.
More than a friend
You're my first love
And now you know.

I can never be with you forever
I don't want to pick you up when you fall
I don't want to hold you hand
I don't have to be the one who completes you
I know that I'll never make you whole.

Because now you know
You're my first love
Everything changed, is it too late?
I want to make it straight
Even though it's complicated


Why don't we just

Start Again ?


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Is it too late to stop
This pain that I created
From eclipsin the million
Precious things we shared

Is it too late I realize
I’ve been such a fool
Is it too late I just want

One more chance to
Hold your hand again
Once more chance to
Be the one your heart beats for
Again

Never ever be apart
I promise I won’t break your heart
Baby please can we just


Start Again

THEME SONG.

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CHARACTERS

Sasha Dizon
Jake Ramos
Pauline Go
Nicholas Ramos
Trixie Winter
Jason aka Candy Morales
Sasha's Family

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Re: START AGAIN`new story. :] Readers pleasee. Weee. :))
« Reply #1 on: April 24, 2009, 01:34:57 pm »
p <<perst post ko sa sobrang sabik. hahaha.


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anu ba yan. start na start naaaa. bilis naaa. hahaha
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Re: START AGAIN`new story. :] Readers pleasee. Weee. :))
« Reply #2 on: April 24, 2009, 01:52:50 pm »
Quote from: .L. on April 24, 2009, 01:34:57 pm
p <<perst post ko sa sobrang sabik. hahaha.


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anu ba yan. start na start naaaa. bilis naaa. hahaha


` HAHA. first ka nga. dahil first ka, YAY kita. :D Grabe sa sobrang sabik, P ang napindot? haha. =))
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« Reply #3 on: April 24, 2009, 01:56:57 pm »
hi ate biancs! hehe. pam here.
nice! parang ang ganda nito ;)
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« Reply #4 on: April 24, 2009, 02:01:29 pm »
Quote from: the_pam_jelly on April 24, 2009, 01:56:57 pm
hi ate biancs! hehe. pam here.
nice! parang ang ganda nito ;)


` Yehey! Yay kita. :D support mo ah? Till end, kung aabot. HAHA. :-* Thanks pam!

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« Reply #5 on: April 24, 2009, 02:04:27 pm »
sis i'll support this one!!!

DAAN ka naman sakin pleassseee


natz here
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when the whole world walks out
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« Reply #6 on: April 24, 2009, 02:20:24 pm »
waaaah!
hahahhahaha.
jha!
bongacious!
hahah.
sino naman gusto mo makipagulitan?? :D ;D
next na. hahaha.
4th lang ako nanay! :'(
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« Reply #7 on: April 24, 2009, 02:26:10 pm »
haha. oo nga e. dapat kasi perst ilalagay ko. e baka may maka agaw pa ng pwesto ko. ayan. p na lang tuloy. haha
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« Reply #8 on: April 24, 2009, 02:28:48 pm »
` NATZ, thank yoou. :)) haha. Wee. :-*

LYSS, ay ay ay ay. eheeeem. sino nga ba? ::) WALAAA. haha. YAY kita :D

RAYNE, haha. nagulat ako nung nakita ko yun eh. laughtrip ka saging. :D

OK, ipopost ko na yung chapter 1. Pero para iwas double posting, antay lang ulit ng isang reader :D
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« Reply #9 on: April 24, 2009, 02:40:59 pm »
haha sis ayan post mo pagkatapos nito. kung ok lang hehe

sis sino mga characters?

yay i was the first who voted in your poll
ahihi
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« Reply #10 on: April 24, 2009, 02:44:03 pm »
oha! nandito ako! im here! yoohooo!!! ;D ;D

game! update na ulet! haha ;D support ko to! ;D ;D
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« Reply #11 on: April 24, 2009, 02:48:06 pm »
ako pa talaga laptrip saging. HAHAHA.
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« Reply #12 on: April 24, 2009, 03:13:25 pm »
CHAPTER 1
Meet My Prince
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Sasha Dizon
Pauline Go
Nicholas Ramos
Sasha's Family
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SHA'S POV

Cause you were Romeo, I was a scarlet letter
And my daddy said stay away from Juliet
But you were everything to me
I was begging you please don't go and I said

Romeo take me somewhere we can be alone
I'll be waiting all there's left to do is run
You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess

"It's a love story baby just say yes..."
"Sha!"
"ROMEO SAVE ME, THEY TRY TO TELL ME HOW TOFEEL...!!"[/color]

*BOINK!*

"ARAY! What the hell!?" masakit yun aa. binato lang naman ako ni Kuya ng unan. Aaamp.
"Haha. Love Story nanaman kinakanta mo? Malalaos na yan dahil sa'yo eh. Andiyan na nga pala si Pau.."
"Ah ok. Di mo naman kailangan ako batuhin di ba? >:(" badtrip naman eh.
"Kanina pa po kaya kita tinatawag! ::)" tss. bwiset.

OOPS. PAUSE MUNA. Haha. Paano ko ba sisimulan to? :| anyway. Here it goes..

Once upon a time... in a far far away kingdom.. weh? ano 'to fairytale? haha. hindi yata to fairytale eh. Kwento to ng buhay ko no. Fairytale ba buhay ko? Oo na lang. Para may happy ending. Haha. May tanong ako sa inyo readers.. Nagka-first kiss na ba kayo? Ako kasi wala pa eh. I'm waiting for my Mr. Right and have my first kiss with him. Yung katulad sa mga fairytales.. Haha. :)) Landi. Pero ang cute nun siguro. :P

My name is Sasha Dizon. But you can call me Sha. Pretty name right? Haha. 15 years old na ako. At incoming senior student. Sabi ng mga friends ko na may pagka-boyish daw ako. :-X Yeah you heard it right. Matapang daw kasi ako. Tsaka hindi ako masyadong girlaloo, ayoko nga sa mga maaarte eh. Lam mo yun, daming make-up nilalagay sa mukha.. tas pangit parin naman. >:D HAHA. Hay.

Oo nga pala, NBSB ako or should I say No Boyfriend Since Birth. Proud ako! Ni-isang lalaki wala pang naglakas loob na manligaw sakin sa loob labing limang taon. Ewan ko ba sa kanila. Haaay. Babae po ako. Di ako bakla.. kla kla kla kla.. di ako shokla.. kla kla kla kla kla.. Ay tama na nga yan. Haha. Pero may first love na ako. Sino? Secret, malalaman niyo rin. Haha. ::)

Paano nga naman mabubuo ang fairytale story ko kung walang Prince?

Sinong Prince naman ang magkakagusto sa isang katulad ko na mukhang lesbian? Haay. Sana naging Juliet na lang ako tulad sa Love Story. Haha. At sana pansinin naman  niya ako. :| (sino? :D)


OK PLAY NA. Hehe.


"Yo Sha! Di ka parin naliligo? Malelate na tayo!"

Yan si Pau. Bestfriend ko. Sobraaaang kikay niyan. I wonder kung paano kami naging magbestfriend. ::) Haha. Siguro talagang pinagtagpo ang tadhana namin para maging bestfriends talaga. Wth, haha.

Alam niyang totoong babae ako at naiintindihan niya na talagang wala akong interes sa mga girly girl stuffs. Ayun, kaya love ko yan eeh! ::)

"Eh hindi pa tapos maligo si Kelly eh. Chillax lang." sabi ko.


Pumunta ako sa pinto ng CR..


*TOK TOK!*

"Oi panget, dalian mo nga diyan! Malelate nako sa lakad namin ni Pau!" sabi ko kay Kelly na nasa loob ng CR.
"Oo na, ito na.."
"Buti na lang hindi nagmana yang si Kelly sayo.. Kung di, naku mawawalan ako ng kapatid na babae. ::)" sabi ni Kuya, psh. Sabi sainyo eh, akala nila tomboy ako. Di ko nga siya pinansin. Aasarin lang ako eh. >:(
"Haha. Oo nga Sha." PFT. Binigyan ko ng what-the-hell-look si Pau.
"Haaay salamat. Natapos din. ano ba kasing ginawa mo sa loob ha?"
"Naligo? Duh? ;D" sabi niya sabay irap. humph. >:(

Apat kaming magkakapatid. Third child ako. 22 years old na si Kuya Carlo. Tapos si Ate Chie na 17 years old. Tapos 13 years old naman si Kelly. Wala narin kaming daddy. Iniwan niya kami na hindi ko malamang dahilan. Then my Mom.. ayun, nagpapakalunod sa casino. :|

Nakaligo't lahat na ako. Mabilis lang naman ako maligo tsaka magbihis. Tshirt lang tapos jersey shorts tapos flip flops, okay nako. Haha.

Saan nga ba ang lakad namin ni Pau? Sa welcome party ni Nic. Bumalik na kasi pinsan niya eh. Invited naman kami. Haha. :P

"Tapos na ako. Tara?" sabi ko kay Pau na nakikinig sa iPod ko. Tinignan niya ako from head to toe.
"Yan susuotin mo?"
"oo, bakit? pangit ba?"
"di lang pangit. SOBRANG pangit. Hello! Welcome party yun. baka sabihin palaboy ka lang na napulot ko." ampf. sama naman. sorry na. comfortable ako dito eh. :-X
"Osige na magpapalit nako."

Nagpalit na ako ng pants and sleeveless top. Nagssleeveless din naman ako no. haha. Girl parin naman kasi ako. :P Binalikan ko si Pau na nakikinig parin ng iPod til now.

"Better. Let's go!"

Sino naman si Nic? Haha. Bestfriend ko rin. Paano kami nagkakilala? Well, nakilala ko siya dahil sa Mom ko. Super friends sila ng Mom ni Nic. Nagkasundo sa pagsusugal. Tsk. Anyway. Nicholas ang totoong pangalan niyan. Ayaw lang niya nun. Di daw cool at ang baho daw ng dating. Haha. Baka wala raw makipagdate sa kanya eh. PSH. Haha.

5:30 PM | Nic's House (Saturday)

"Waw Pau, ang daming tao. Daming rin food. Haha" nakarating na kami sa bahay nila Nic. Malapit lang naman eh. :D Pumasok na kami sa loob at hinanap si Nic.
"Hey guys! Buti naman nakapunta kayo. Nice look Sha!"
"Ano yan pang-asar? Humph."
"Di no. Tara pakilala ko kayo sa pinsan ko."
"Siguro mamaya na lang Nic. Hanap muna ako gwapo dito. :D ::)"[/color] nako, si Pau nga naman.
"Ako maghahanap lang din.." tumingin sila sakin,"ng pagkain.. kala nyo lalaki no?" GOTCHA! :P
"Osige, samahan na kita Sha. Pau, dun sa garden maraming fafalicious ;D" ginaya niya yung tono ng mga bakla sa pagsalita ng 'fafalicious' haha.

Pumunta na kami sa food table.. at Ohmy G! nakakaloka ang mga pagkain! kumuha ako dun.. kumuha ako dito.. subo dun.. subo dito.. yummy. :P

"Hoy! Baka mabilaukan ka! Nga pala, puntahan ko lang si Mama. Diyan ka lang a? Baka mawala ka eh." ano ko palaboy? amp. >:(
"Ow-chge!" sabi ko na punung puno ng pagkain bibig ko.

Kumuha ako ng drinks. Kinuha ko yung baso na may laman ng juice.. ang astig naman dito. Lahat naka-serve na.. Naghanap ako ng table na pwedeng upuan..

































































"Ui wait lang pare!"

Oh no, it can't be. :D ::)



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Comments? Pleaseee? Thaanks. Should I continue? Haha. :))

Natz, eto na oh. :D
Rang-rang, yeheeey. nandito ka din. Sige, YAY kitaa:D
SAGING, eto naaa. ;D
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« Reply #13 on: April 24, 2009, 03:15:36 pm »
perst!!!!! hahaha. :D :D ;D

waah?! boyish siya?
parang ako. amp. hahahahaha.

ano yung nakita ni sasha!!!!!!!? :D :D
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« Reply #14 on: April 24, 2009, 03:18:32 pm »
^spamming ka ate rayne! ;D

hindi na ako yung first! >___<
basahin ko muna ;)

....edit...

oh? sino yun? yung pinsan niya? haha ;D

parehas kami ni sha! haha ;D magkakasundo kami niyan! ;D
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