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MY DYING GIRLFRIEND.[END. •She DIED•]
« on: March 27, 2009, 06:04:47 pm »
Good day po sa inyong lahat! Ako si Alexis ang inyong lingkod. haha.
Eto po ang isa kong story na finish na. haha.
Sana nawa ay suportahan nyo at magustuhan nyo. :]

At meron pa rin po akong dalwang story:
"10 wishes"
"I Love You So."
nasa signature ko po yung link. Support nyo rin po yun ha? :]
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MY DYING GIRLFRIEND

•pt.1• [nasa pg.1 ln.]
•pt. 2• [pg.1 ln din.]
•pt.3•
•pt.4•
•pt.5•
•pt.6•
•pt.7•
•pt.8•
•pt.9•
•pt.10•
•THE END•


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MY DYING GIRLFRIEND. [pt.1]


"we're sorry. We did our best pero... patay na sya.. we're really sorry..."


Sa buhay natin, we can't expect what to happen... Minsan mabibigla ka na lang na kahit yung pinaka-imposibleng bagay ay biglang magaganap. That's life, mapaglaro ika nga. Well, we gotta know how to play with life kasi kung hindi, we'll end up losing.


Nathaniel and Alexis.

Yan ang dalwang taong susubukan ng tadhana.

Sila ay magkasintahan. Mahal na mahal nila ang isa't isa at masayang masaya sila. Akala nila wala ng katapusan ang kasayahan nila. Pero hindi papayag ang tadhana na mawala ang balance.

Anong balance yun?

In life, everything should be balance. If we receive happiness, of course, in exchange we will face sufferings. Vice-versa. Yun ang tinatawag na balance of life. Hindi naman pedeng laging masaya. It wouldn't be called "life" if you wouldn't face challenges di ba?


"Alexis..."

hindi umimik si Alexis ng tawagin sya ng boyfriend nyang si Nathaniel. Nasa may tambayan nila silang dalwa, naglalakad-lakad. Ang tambayan na yun ay ang lugar kung saan punong-puno ng magaganda't masasakit na memorya nilang dalwa. Iyon ay sa tabing-dagat. Magkahawak-kamay sila.


"alexis..." makalwang tawag ni Nathaniel ng hindi sya imikan ni Alexis. Kanina nya pa napapansin ang pagiging tahimik ni Alexis at katamlayan nito. He's not used to this Alexis he's with now. The Alexis he knew is the cheerful, hyper-active and a happy-go-lucky one. Nagaalala tuloy sya sa girlfriend nya lalo na't hindi man lang siya nito kinakausap.


Hindi na nakatiis si Nathaniel sa ginagawa ni Alexis. Tumigil sya sa paglalakad dahilan upang mapatigil din si Alexis pero hindi pa din to tumitingin kay Nathaniel. Her eyes just staring at the sand.

Nathaniel removed their intertwined hands. And placed his hands in both of her shoulders and positioned her to face him. She was still looking down. Nathaniel held her chin and make her face into him. He was taller than Alexis.

"Alexis, why won't you look directly in my eyes? Why won't you speak up? It makes me worry. Is something wrong? Please tell me. I want to know. I want to ease up your pain."


Alas! Alexis' eyes faced his.

Pero... may mga luhang pumatak sa mga mata ni Alexis...

"If I tell you everything, may magagawa ka pa ba? Masasaktan lang lalo ako at masasaktan lang din kita pag sinabi ko kung anong problema ko. You can't ease my pain if I tell it to you. And maybe, hindi mo rin ma-e-ease ang pain mo after I tell you what my problem is."

"alexis.. i don't understand."

"Nathaniel... It's complicated. Pero mabuti pa, let's end our relationship... For each other's sake. For your sake."


"I don't get you. I'm lost."

"Well... Don't try to understand. Just get lost in my life nathaniel!!! I don't... i.. I don't LOVE YOU ANYMORE!" tumakbo si Alexis palayo kay Nathaniel, she was crying.

Iniwan nyang tulalado si Nathaniel. Gulong-gulo ang isip ni Nathaniel. All the things Alexis had said won't connect in his mind.


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« Last Edit: April 09, 2009, 03:30:43 pm by huntress_rhaine »

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Re: MY DYING GIRLFRIEND.
« Reply #1 on: March 27, 2009, 06:07:26 pm »
ow my gulay shing-shing!! is that you??!
You are so serious! i cant believe this. What happened to you?? Haha!
Anyways, im gonna support this one.  ;)


edit:

So, ikaw ang bida dito?? Nice naman.. hehe..
Nice start.  :) ;)
« Last Edit: March 27, 2009, 06:10:51 pm by yhukie »

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Re: MY DYING GIRLFRIEND.
« Reply #2 on: March 27, 2009, 06:13:14 pm »
ate rhaine! ahihi ;D

nandito ako! haha ;D obvious ba?  :P

siyempre, support ko to :) go ate rhaine! ;D

ang serious ah... mukhang malungkot to... tsk... di bale, nandito pa rin ako. haha ;D

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Re: MY DYING GIRLFRIEND.
« Reply #3 on: March 27, 2009, 07:37:11 pm »
OHMYGOD RHAINE!
I ended up liking the story. Kahit na walang colors and plain black siya. ILOVEIT!
Naku, nakakabitin ha. Si Alexis, wawa naman. Si Nathaniel, pag tsugi si Alexis, akin ka nalang. JOKE. :D

Super serious ito. Pero okay, I LOVE IT!
Nathaniel, wag ka maniniwala ha? Hihihih.


*PS. I love the Author's note. So REALISTIC :)
Wag kang magalala kung may isa na matitira na reader, ako iyon. :)
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Re: MY DYING GIRLFRIEND.
« Reply #4 on: March 27, 2009, 07:48:07 pm »
waw!! new story?
love it kahit not colored or what.
hahaa..
continue....
zomgee!

ive got a feeling this is a tear jerker.
whew.
love thiss..
and i totally agree with the thoughts ur story is tellng us.
i experienced that..

too much happiness....
and sumtin would cum up...
to balance things..

haizz.
anyway..waa.
support ko too
noeezz! hahaha.
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Re: MY DYING GIRLFRIEND.
« Reply #5 on: March 27, 2009, 08:05:31 pm »
ei..new here..
I like it..
promise..
nagustuhan ko siya even though na plain black lang siya..
sanay na din kasi.. :)
when I'm with you, my heart CRIES but it turned out that my heart DIES!
TEE'WAI

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Re: MY DYING GIRLFRIEND.
« Reply #6 on: March 27, 2009, 08:11:19 pm »
omg kapangalaaan.
you're suplada nga.
nako nako.

ikaw ang bida here?
naks.
don't worry, kahit hindi ka pa magreply ee suportahan ko pa din eto. ;)

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Re: MY DYING GIRLFRIEND.[pt.2]
« Reply #7 on: March 27, 2009, 09:49:21 pm »
MY DYING GIRLFRIEND.2

Why do I feel like the end of my life is coming? Why?

paulit-ulit na tinatanong ni Nathaniel iyon sa kanyang sarili. When Nathaniel had composed himself, he realized what Alexis had told to him...

"Alexis doesn't love me anymore... Kaya sya tahimik kanina, kaya sya matamlay kanina ay dahil hindi na sya masaya sa piling ko. She wanted to break up with me." umiiyak na sabi ni Nathaniel sa sarili nya habang umiinom ng alak sa kwarto nya. Lasing na lasing na si Nathaniel. It was his first time AGAIN to drink beer... It was 4years since last syang uminom kasi nung araw na makilala nya si Alexis, he cut off all his bad habits. Alexis is a devote Catholic kaya alam nyang Alexis won't like her if hindi sya magbabago. He tried to be good pero pag minsan ay  hindi nya mapigilan ang magkamali but Alexis always understand him. She accepted him for who he is kaya lalong lumalim ang pagmamahal ni Nathaniel kay Alexis. Alexis was his life. Alexis owns him. He was hers. At ngayong nalaman nyang gustong makipagbreak sa kanya ni Alexis, parang binagsak sa kanya ang napakalaking bulalakaw.

Sana ganun na nga lang... I'll rather choose to be crashed by a comet than being crushed here because Alexis doesn't love me anymore. Mas masakit kasi to. Kahit paulit-ulit akong bagsakan ng comet, wag lang akong iwan ni Alexis.

Nagpapakalango na sya ng tuluyan sa alak habang pinagmamasdan ang litrato ni Alexis sa kanyang cellphone...

"The face of an angel... Bakit ganto ako? baliw na baliw sa iyo? Ano bang meron ka, dati naman sanay ako na ako ang nagpapaiyak sa mga babae, bakit ngayon, ako ang umiiyak ng dahil sa iyo? Bakit? bakit ko binago ang g@go kong sarili ng dahil sa iyo? Bakit mukha na akong Alexis? Bakit? sabihin mo Alexis, bakit ba mahal na mahal kita?!! At bakit ba gusto mong makipagbreak sa akin?!!! Bakit ba?!!" puro na lang bakit, bakit at bakit. Bakit nga ba tayo nagmamahal ng tao ng sobra-sobra?

11:30pm

"Alexis! Parang awa mo na!! mahal na mahal kita!!!" napagdesisyunan ni Nathaniel na puntahan si Alexis sa bahay niya, gusto nyang tanungin si Alexis kung hindi na ba talaga sya mahal nito. Gusto nya lang marinig ang sagot, pag sinabi nitong hindi na sya mahal ay aalis na sya at rerespetuhin ang nararamdaman ni Alexis kahit sobrang sakit non sa kanya pero... pero.. hinihiling nya na sana mahal pa rin sya nito. Sana...

"Alexis.. anak.." it was Alexis' mom, she was knocking on Alexis' door and begging her daughter na kausapin naman si Nathaniel kasi awang-awa na sya dito.

"Ma!!! Tell him to leave!! i dont want to talk to him! I don't want to see him anymore!!!"

"But he is drunk, Alexis." pagsusumamo ng mommy ni Alexis. Pero buo na ang desisyon ni Alexis, she doesn't want to see Nathan's face. Kasi pag nakita nya pa ang mukha ni Nathaniel baka sumuko na naman ang puso niya at yakapin si Nathaniel, she can't do that. She needed to give Nathaniel the impression that she doesn't want him anymore. Kelangan.

"Alexis!! please!!! I love you so much.." She could hear Nathaniel's shouts... Hearing his drunk voice, every letters of it was like a soothing music to him and somehow containing poison. She always loved to hear his loving voice but in her state, their state, hearing every single word, every letter of his shouts of pleading was like killing her again and again.

No Alexis. remember, Kelangan. Kelangan.

She kept on reminding herself na she needed to be strong enough to hurt him. kasi if she wouldn't hurt him now, mas lalo lang tong masasaktan in the near future. She needed to hurt him in order to avoid him in a much greater pain. Mas pipiliin nyang saktan na lang ang sarili nya kesa masaktan ang pinaka-importanteng tao sa buhay nya. She needed to get the man she love out of her life para lang ma-save ito sa pain.

Pinuntahan ng mom ni Alexis si Nathaniel sa gate.

"Nathan, anak. Alexis said she doesn't want to see you. I'm sorry."
"But tita, I love her... so much." desperadong sabi ni Nathaniel.
"I know nathan, I know."
"Pero why tita? Doesn't she love me anymore? bakit? may mali ba akong nagawa? Tita, tell me, I would change it kung ano man yung nagawa kong mali. Please."
"Sorry, Nathan. I wish I could tell it to you but i can't. Only Alexis can tell it to you. Ayoko syang pangunahan."
"But..."
"I'm really sorry, anak."
"Ok... Tita, last favor. Please tell her na I won't leave in front of your house hanggang hindi nya ako kinakausap. I really needed to talk to her. Just a talk."
"pero... oh ok. I'll tell her."


"Alexis, anak. Nathaniel told me that he won't leave there until you talk to him." Alexis' mom told her on the door.

She didn't respond to her mom. She knew that her mom left the door after she told it to her. Her mom understand why she's doing this to Nathaniel. Her mom knew her condition, everyone knew it except Nathaniel and she wouldn't want him to know it. He was the last person she wanted to know about it.

"Alexis, anak. Nathaniel told me that he won't leave there until you talk to him."

parang sirang plaka na nagpaulit-ulit sa isip ni Alexis ang sinabi ng ina. She was worried kay Nathaniel, it was near midnight and malamig masyado, baka magkasakit si Nathaniel or mapahamak sa labas if he really meant what he said.


"No. I don't believe na gagawin nya yun. Mapapagod din yan kakaantay. Aalis din sya..." she looked at her close window... She wouldn't dare to peek there kasi once she do it, hindi nya alam kung matitiis nya pa ang lalaking mahal nya kasi pag tumingin ka sa window na yun ay matatanawan mo ang sinumang tao sa may gate.


She choose to sleep and ignore what her mother told to her, what Nathan said.


3:20am.

Nagising si Alexis dahil sa lakas ng ulan.
Isa lang pumasok sa isip nya ng maalimpungatan ng ulan.

"Alexis, anak. Nathaniel told me that he won't leave there until you talk to him."

"Nathaniel!" she got worried. Baka kasi tinotoo nga ni Nathan. She hurriedly went to her window and about to open it but... she didn't. She went back to her bed.

Hindi sya makatulog. Ang lakas lakas ng ulan. Pinipilit nyang itaklob ang mga unan sa tenga nya, she doesn't want to hear the raindrops.

"No. Impossible. Baka kanina pang wala yun dun." She kept on telling herself habang pinipilit na wag pakinggan ang raindrops.


Darn! hindi din nakatiis si Alexis. She stood up from her bed and hurriedly open to window para makita ang isang taong nakaupo't nakasandal sa may gate nila na basang-basa ng ulan.

"Oh my gosh." Nagmadaling lumabas ng kwarto si Alexis at kumuha ng payong at dumeretso sa labas.

Pagbukas nya ng gate...

There he was... the one she loved more than her life, more than anything else.

"Alexis." nabitawan ni Alexis ang hawak nyang payong ng bigla syang yakapin ng mahigpit ng basang-basang si Nathaniel. Nabasa na rin sya.

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NOTE: thanks po sa mga nagcomment sa story kong to. I just yayed you all guys na lang. Kasi sabi ko i wont reply di ba? hehe. salamat talaga. :]

And also sa silentreaders kung meron. basta salamat. Godbless you all. :]
« Last Edit: March 27, 2009, 09:51:24 pm by huntress_rhaine »

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Re: MY DYING GIRLFRIEND.[pt.2]
« Reply #8 on: March 27, 2009, 09:51:05 pm »
first..

edit:

oh my gosh. alam ko na. may sakit si Alexis. tsk..
Grabe napakadramatic..
Ganda shing-shing..
Akala ko lokaret ka lang.. seryoso din pala si kyut. haha.
 ;)
« Last Edit: March 27, 2009, 11:06:26 pm by yhukie »

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Re: MY DYING GIRLFRIEND.[pt.2]
« Reply #9 on: March 28, 2009, 08:40:20 am »
kakatouch naman... :'( love na love ni nathaniel yung author... hehe ;D

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Re: MY DYING GIRLFRIEND.[pt.2]
« Reply #10 on: March 28, 2009, 09:54:31 am »
oh my god!  :'( i love your story sis. aabangan ko 'to. promise.. super nakakarelate kasi ako eh.  :D

i'm keesha btw. keep up the good work! sana may update ka na. hehe! i'll support your story sis. go!  :)

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Re: MY DYING GIRLFRIEND.[pt.2]
« Reply #11 on: March 28, 2009, 10:25:19 am »
Ohmygod This is GREAT.  8)
Nakakalungkot naman yung sitwasyon nila.
Alexis, sabihin mo na kasi kay Nathan. Please? :)

Maganda to. O0
Keep it up! Support ko ito.
Cause lately you make me weaker in the knees.

Para sa may mga problema sa puso.

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Re: MY DYING GIRLFRIEND.[pt.2]
« Reply #12 on: March 28, 2009, 10:36:53 am »
OHMYGOD. :) Super ganda ng story mo.
Asar. Alexis, sabihin mo na kay Nathaniel.
Ang payong nawalan ng use oh, baka maghina na ulit si Alexis. Baka sumuko na siya sa mga pangako niya sa sarili niya. Hayyy.


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Re: MY DYING GIRLFRIEND.[pt.2]
« Reply #13 on: March 28, 2009, 10:42:22 am »
hi uli sis..



OT: napansin ko lang halos lahat ng comment dito ng mga readers mo nagsisismula sa "oh my god!" hehe! lmao  :D


i think it just shows that you can wow your readers.  ;) sana may uodate na.  :)

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Re: MY DYING GIRLFRIEND.[pt.2]
« Reply #14 on: March 28, 2009, 12:01:39 pm »
WOW.  :) :) :)
simula palang, ganda na. :)


NEXT na po. :)
excited me eh. :D
mwuah..

 

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