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Re: Fine Time. Chapter 2 na. YAY sa readers! ;)
« Reply #30 on: March 27, 2009, 10:32:57 am »
Chapter 2



Sungit! Oh bakit parang nakakita ka ng multo? Ano, busy ka parin?

Grabe yun ah. Hindi ako nakapagsalita, feeling ko namumula na ako sa kahihiyan. As I was organizing my thoughts, may tumawag sa aking magandang pangalan. HAHAHA.

Katy! I was startled.
Ah. Eh. Huh? Bakit?
Oh anong nangyari sayo? Tara na! Sabi mo gutom ka na. Sino ba yun? Hindi ka nagsshare ah. Kala ko ba friends tayo?
Huh? Ano kasi. Ano ba yan! Nawiwindang tuloy ako. Teka, huwag ka muna magtampururot diyan. Tara, ikkwento ko sayo habang papunta tayo sa canteen. Gutom na ako oh!
Sige, bilis! Excited ako. Mukhang I smell something fishy between you and that boy.
Tumigil ka nga diyan, wala pa ngang nangyayari eh.

Ayun kwinento ko na sakanya. As usual, wala akong nilagpasan na detalye. Ganun kasi yan si Nikka, kailangan detailed. Oh well, sino ba siya?
Siya si Nikka Ruth Agaste, siya yung pinakaunang friend ko nung lumipat dito sa school namin. Alam niya lahat sakin, dakilang kwentuhan ko yan! May ibang friends rin naman ako pero pinakaclose ko talaga siya. After I told her the story..

AHAHAHAAHA!
Naku, tinawanan pa ako nakakahiya na kaya. Pero infairness sakanya, may itsura siya ha. ^-^
Pustahan tayo, magiging kayo! I can feel it.
Huy, wag ka ngang magsalita ng ganyan. Wala pa akong gusto kay Brendon! Pero may itsura nga siya, cute.
Napansin ko naman Nikka wasn`t looking at me.

Then I turned around. :o OHMAMON! Earth eat me now! ;D

Sungit! HAHAHA. >:D Thank you, cute talaga ako. Wala ka PANG gusto sakin? Ganun ba?
Ah… ehhhh. Kanina ka paba nandiyan?
Medyo. And I heard what you said, tignan natin kung hindi ka mainlove sakin.
ABA! Ang kapal nito.  Nikka, ang hangin no?
Hindi naman ah! Init kaya, tignan mo nga yung sweat glands ko.
Makisama ka nalang no! I whispered.
Ehem! Ehem!
Aii nandyan ka pa pala yabang? Diyan ka na nga! Tara na Nikka, baka malate pa tayo.

We walked away na pero may narinig akong nagsalita.




You can never escape true love. ^-^




JANNE: Heto na update!
ERIN: Chap two na. AHAHAHA. Malalaman natin sa susunod na kabanata.
RIO: Wow. Thanks naman! I`ll try! ;)
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Re: Fine Time. Chapter 2 na. YAY sa readers! ;)
« Reply #31 on: March 27, 2009, 11:08:13 am »
OMG. hahaha. magrereply na sana ako dun sa first chap, kaso, eto! nakita ko yung chap 2. hahaha edit ko nalang mmaya yung comment ko~


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Chapter1
nays katy, hahaha.busy forever ang drama netaaah! hahaha.

Chap2
wahaw. hahaha.
"you can never escape true love"

soxaaaal. hahaha. grabe! nakakahiya naman yun! narinig ni Brendon your labssss. hahaha.


ayun, nabitin nanaman ako ng bonggang bongga.  ;D alam mo ba? habang binabasa ko `to, yung ngiti ko, abot tenga.  ;D ;D haha. adiik..


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Re: Fine Time. Chapter 2 na. YAY sa readers! ;)
« Reply #32 on: March 27, 2009, 11:14:01 am »
ayyy. parang familiar sakin to ah.

napasok na ako sa ganitong sitwasyon eh. hahaha.

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Re: Fine Time. Chapter 2 na. YAY sa readers! ;)
« Reply #33 on: March 27, 2009, 12:11:19 pm »
Quote from: angel67 on March 27, 2009, 11:08:13 am
OMG. hahaha. magrereply na sana ako dun sa first chap, kaso, eto! nakita ko yung chap 2. hahaha edit ko nalang mmaya yung comment ko~


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Chapter1
nays katy, hahaha.busy forever ang drama netaaah! hahaha.

Chap2
wahaw. hahaha.
"you can never escape true love"

soxaaaal. hahaha. grabe! nakakahiya naman yun! narinig ni Brendon your labssss. hahaha.


ayun, nabitin nanaman ako ng bonggang bongga.  ;D alam mo ba? habang binabasa ko `to, yung ngiti ko, abot tenga.  ;D ;D haha. adiik..

Hahaha. Oo nga, bitin ba? Try ko mag-update pag-uwi ko. ;)
Thanks!

Quote from: RunningAway on March 27, 2009, 11:14:01 am
ayyy. parang familiar sakin to ah.

napasok na ako sa ganitong sitwasyon eh. hahaha.

next!!

Hi RunningAway!
Nakakarelate ka ba?  ;D Padamihin ko muna comments. ;)
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Re: Fine Time. Chapter 2 na. YAY sa readers! ;)
« Reply #34 on: March 27, 2009, 01:43:22 pm »
ang ganda! ang kulit! wag kang magalala hindi ka nagiisa.. hinahangin na rin ako. tinatangay na nga ako eh.. ;D ;D

naala ko sa kanya yung story kong Always By My Side. wag kang magalala kaunting pagkakaparehas lang naman. saka iba naman in many ways yung story mo.

anways, ang ganda talaga.  ;D

nandito na ako.  :) next na.  :)

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« Reply #35 on: March 27, 2009, 03:04:18 pm »
may story ka na pala and you're not telling me?
akala ko ba we share EVERYTHING?  ;D
ayoko naman magfeeling pero ako ba si NIKKA? :P
Bigyan mo naman ako ng lalaki  oh!  ;D
ay, kilala ko si Ohmamon. WALA KANG MAITATAGO SA AKIN!! :P

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« Reply #36 on: March 27, 2009, 03:04:44 pm »
your welcome
thanks for the yay
tama siya you can never escape from true love
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Re: Fine Time. Chapter 2 na. YAY sa readers! ;)
« Reply #37 on: March 27, 2009, 03:06:02 pm »
Yes,Katy is right. Love WAS happiness. Akala natin puro happiness, pero puro hatred naman mafefeel natin after. ---chapter 1

Wow, may bago ata akong papa ah. Oo, cute siya. PAPA YABANG :D


WOW, BITTER OH. :D

Ang ganda ng storryyy. ;)
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« Reply #38 on: March 27, 2009, 09:46:35 pm »
Woot!Ahaha!katuwa naman!ahaha!ahoi...narinig ka tuloy..ahaha!ganda! :D
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Re: Fine Time. Chapter 2 na. YAY sa readers! ;)
« Reply #39 on: March 28, 2009, 11:15:32 am »
Ate KC: Oo nga eh! Thanks! Natuwa naman ako sa comment mo!

Nikka: Di ka kaya online nung isang araw, tapos kahapon wala naman ako! Oo, ikaw si Nikka! Wala akong maisip na name eh! Dapat nga Lauro pa surname mo eh, pero may naiisip na akong papable sayo! ^-^

Cherry: Sure! Yeah, nakakainspire tong si Brendon.

Mareng Dana: Oo nga eh. Thanks mare!  :-*

Rio: Thanks! Di ko pa nababasa story mo, I`ll try next week!

Thanks sa comments! I`ll try to update mamaya!
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« Reply #40 on: March 28, 2009, 01:09:47 pm »

here na me. :]]

haha. ayus ah. you can never escape true love. ang confident ng dating ah. hahaha. x]

eh pano ba sya nakilala ni Brendon? pano nun nakuha ym niya?
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« Reply #41 on: March 28, 2009, 01:27:08 pm »
woiiiiiiiii. kala ko may update na, hahaha!


yiiiee. update ka ngayooon~  ;D
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« Reply #42 on: March 28, 2009, 01:31:42 pm »
Chapter 3

That was my first encounter with him. Asar na asar ako sakanya noon. Pero love nga naman. Kakaiba talaga! Kahit magkaiba kayo basta tinamaan ng love wala na. Hindi rin naman natin masasabi kung kanino tayo dapat mainlove. Minsan pa nga, yung lahat ng hate mo sa isang tao nasa kanya pero maiinlove ka parin dun. Oh well, that`s love.

Todo todo flashback! ;)

You can never escape true love.  Aba! Kapal ng mukha nito. Teka.


Nikka! Wait lang ha, mauna ka na.
Ayiiee. Babalikan niya.
Tseh! Huwag ka na humirit mauna ka na lang!

Umalis na si Nikka. Ako naman, binalikan ko yung ugok with matching blood rushing to my face.

Huy yabang! Sabay batok sakanya.
Aray naman! Sakit naman nun, san ka ba pinaglihi at bakit mo ba ako binatukan, bakit nandito ka pa?
Ang dami mong tanong, para kang reporter! Ano ba yang sinasabi mong true love true love na yan? Nahihibang ka no? Gusto mo na ko no? Aminin!
Grabe, isa-isa lang! Mas madami kapang nasabi sakin oh. Mas mahangin ka pa nga sakin eh. ;D
Kapal mo no! Walang tatalo sayo.
Oo na lang! Aba. Nahirit pa talaga eh. Bakit narealize mo na ba yung sinabi ko, baka ako na true love mo? ^-^
First of all, ang kapal kapal mo to the nth level! At never akong maiinlove sayo! Tseh!


Suddenly, the bell rang. :o OMG! Sabay naman kaming tumakbo papuntang 2nd floor. Malas naman talaga oh, first day na first day! Terror pa naman daw yung teacher naming. Patay na!

Ikaw kasi may kasalanan eh!
Aba! Ako pa, eh ba`t mo kasi ako binalikan? Yan tuloy. Ako pa sinisisi.
Bahala ka nga diyan, tumakbo nalang tayo!

Nasa labas na kami ng room, at nandun na si Sir Nostra. Nag-aalinlangan pa ako kung papasok ako, kasi naman! Terror talaga yan, ayoko namang mapahiya. First day na first day eh.

Ikaw na muna!
Ayoko nga! Ladies first eh!
Ikaw na, please? With matching pleading eyes pa yan. It`s your fault naman eh!
Kung hindi ka lang- Ano, ako na nga!

He opened the back door.  I`m so nervous na talaga, pinagpapawisan na ako ng malamig.

Good Morning Sir! Sorry, we`re late!
Mr. Minto and Ms. Cruz right?
Yes, sir.
Why are you together?
Sila na po! AHAHAHA. Ramon said, classmate namin.
Shut up, Mr. Lao!
Ahm, sir.. It`s just pure coincidence. May we sit down now?
No! Both of you are late and I don`t accept any excuses! Get out! You may enter this class after my subject!
Yes, sir and sorry!

 
 Jusko naman. Sa lahat pa ng taong makakasama ko siya pa! Grabe na ito. Nakakahiya pa oh. Dadaan yung mga tao tapos makikita kami. 80 minutes pa naman yung subject na ito. Sana kainin na ako ng lupa, as in right now!  >:(

Oh sungit? Anong nangyari at nawala kasungitan mo?
Eh kasi naman po! Nakakahiya kaya, tsaka mamiss ko yung first lesson dahil sa katulad mo! Tapos ikaw pa makakasama ko ngayon, nakakainis talaga!
Ang yabang mo naman..




Who knows? Maybe you`ll enjoy my company?

Anak ng tinapa. MAHANGIN TALAGA! I swear.




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Quote from: huntress_rhaine on March 28, 2009, 01:09:47 pm

here na me. :]]

haha. ayus ah. you can never escape true love. ang confident ng dating ah. hahaha. x]

eh pano ba sya nakilala ni Brendon? pano nun nakuha ym niya?

Malalaman natin yan as the story goes on. ^-^

Quote from: angel67 on March 28, 2009, 01:27:08 pm
woiiiiiiiii. kala ko may update na, hahaha!


yiiiee. update ka ngayooon~  ;D

Eto na oh! ;)
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« Reply #43 on: March 28, 2009, 01:36:57 pm »
woo! hangiin! hahaha. adik na brendon yan,  ;D ayiiie. you'll enjoy his company daw oh, XDD
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« Reply #44 on: March 28, 2009, 01:40:34 pm »
Quote from: angel67 on March 28, 2009, 01:36:57 pm
woo! hangiin! hahaha. adik na brendon yan,  ;D ayiiie. you'll enjoy his company daw oh, XDD

Bumabagyo na sa sobrang hangin. Wala na hindi na to true story, super naiba ko na yung love story namin.  ;D
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