DISGUISED --- WARNING: read @ your own risk! :) 082609 updated entry 33!

[jamielle]

DISGUISED
^{unveil the truth
unveil the mysteries}

PROLOGUE

I was washing the dishes as my friends and I were talking over the phone. We talked about the many guys we hoped to ask us out one day and about the trips planned out for us at school. Because my mother had to use the phone, I hung up and handed her the phone. I walked towards my computer and logged into Yahoo Messenger. It’s been a while since I’ve checked my emails. So, I went online and checked my emails. As expected, my friends sent me tons of chain mails. Annoyed, I deleted every single one of those chain mails until, that is, I got to a certain mail from an anonymous person.

"'Do Not Delete' it says. I wonder who could have sent this to me…” I asked, myself, opening it.

Without hesitation or suspicions, I opened the email and read what was on.

|_- Email-_|

‘Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
I love you dearly,
Will you accept me, too?’

|_- End of Email -_|

After reading that email, I heard the doorbell ring. So, I walked towards the door and opened it to see the postman standing there, with a bouquet of flowers, a box of chocolates and a letter in his hands.

"Is there a 'Shanna' here? I’ve got gifts and a letter for her." the postman asked, as he showed me the gifts.

I nodded and answered to his question that I was Shanna. When realizing, he handed me a form I had to fill out and after the signing, he gave me my gifts and left. Opening them, I found not only chocolates inside, but, instead of chocolates, I saw something rectangular wrapped in black gift wrapping paper. I carefully ripped it open and was wide eyed the very first second I saw the gift from the stranger. Laid before my eyes, was a black with red flamed designed Ipod! Looking at the features the Ipod had, I remembered the letter that was beside the bouquet of red and yellow roses. I reached for it and opened it, reading what seemed like a letter written by someone who was from way back renaissance period.

|_- The Letter -_|

Shanna,

I think you’ll find your gifts all well-liked and your favorites. Am I right? Turn around and face the computer.

|_- End of the Letter -_|

"Turn around? Why do I need to turn around?" I asked myself, mentally.

I turned around and faced the computer, my eyes went wide for a couple of seconds as I saw why I had to stare at the computer.

On the screen, a chat room popped up from nowhere and there was the first reply from who knows who. I walked over to the computer and read what was on and continued the chat.

|_- Chat Room -_|

Anonymous: Greetings, Shanna. I believe that you like all the gifts I’ve sent you?

Shanna: Yes, I love the gifts you sent me, thank you very much. I also love your poem you are such a sweet poet. But, who are you and how’d you know I liked red and yellow roses, Ipod and the design? I don't think that's a coincidence.

Anonymous: Let’s just say that I’ve been investigating you and that you can call me your secret admirer.

/Investigated me!?!?/

Shanna: Investigated me!?!? What do you mean by ‘investigated me!?!?’ Come to think of it, how’d you get my addresses and my name!?!?

Anonymous: Let’s just say, I’ve been watching your every move. Tomorrow at 9:00 pm, you are going to watch a movie with your friends. Am I right?

|_- Out of the Chat Room -_|

"How’d he know about this, you know what, this is just too freaky!?!? I’m going to close this chat room once and for all."

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C O N T E N T S

ENTRY 1 • ENTRY 2 • ENTRY 3 • ENTRY 4 • ENTRY 5
ENTRY 6 • ENTRY 7 • ENTRY 8 • ENTRY 9 • ENTRY 10
ENTRY 11 • ENTRY 12 • ENTRY 13 • ENTRY 14 • ENTRY 15
ENTRY 16 • ENTRY 17 • ENTRY 18 • ENTRY 19 • ENTRY 20
ENTRY 21 • ENTRY 22 • ENTRY 23 • ENTRY 24 • ENTRY 25
ENRTY 26 • ENTRY 27 • ENTRY 28 • ENTRY 29 • ENTRY 30
ENTRY 31 • ENTRY 32 • ENTRY 33

[kikaygurl016]

hey.... nice prologue... full mo mysteries... hehehehe... continue this... i'll support... btw, i'm cathleen...   

[jamielle]

DISGUISED
^{unveil the truth
unveil the mysteries}

But, before I could close it, another reply came up and my eye caught one of the words.

|_- Back to the Chat Room -_|

Anonymous: I also know that you are thinking about closing this window. Not a good choice, Miss Shanna. Unless you want to see something horrifying happen to someone you love, then I suggest you leave the window open and look outside the porch door.

Shanna: Why should I listen to you?

Anonymous: Unless you want to see that person perish, then I suggest you look!

|_- Out of the Chat Room -_|

I moved from the computer to the porch door and saw something that almost stopped my heart. My boyfriend, Tyler, was tied to a chair a cloth covered his lips so that mumbles were only heard. Judging by the clothing he was wearing, he was probably kidnapped in between the time we were let out of school till dinner. Plus, he had bruises and slashes of blood all over his body. I noticed another response has appeared on the screen and saw what was written on it was more horrifying than the other responses.

|_- Back to the Chat Room -_|

Anonymous: You see that right? Now, turn the lights of the porch off!

|_- Out of the Chat Room -_|

I looked back at Tyler and saw the fear in his eyes when he saw me try to reach for the lights. I flinched back only to notice another response pop up.

|_- Back to the Chat Room -_|

Anonymous: Do it! Turn off the lights of the porch!

Shanna: What’ll happen if I do or don’t?

Anonymous: If you do, there’ll be a great frightening scene. If you don’t, you won’t be able to live past twelve tonight.

|_- Out of the Chat Room -_|

Looking at the clock on my computer, I saw it was already 11:00 pm. I then looked back at Tyler, still screaming in terror and begging to not turn the lights off behind the cloth.

‘I turn the lights off I’m scared that something bad would happen to Tyler. But, if I don’t, I might die. Seeing the stuff he’s done, I can guess that he’s serious about killing me before twelve. In a situation like this, I should stop the guessing and just listen to what he says, even if it means something bad will happen. But, before the lights turn off, I’ll get my cell phone ready to call the police.’

|_- Back to the Chat Room -_|

Anonymous: So, Shanna, you going to do it or not? The clock is ticking.

Shanna: … Fine… I’ll do it…

|_- Out of the Chat Room -_|

I walked towards the porch lights, standing an arms’ length away from the lights. Tears forming and threatening to fall from fear, I reached for it. The closer my hand was from the switch, Tyler continued to squirm in his chair, tears started to fall from his eyes in fear. When my hands touched the switch, I looked towards Tyler and began sobbing.

“Tyler, I’m sorry. Please forgive me.” I whispered, as I switched the lights off.

Once I did, I heard some very strange noise from the porch.

|_- Back to the Chat Room -_|

Anonymous: Okay, you can turn the lights back on. But, I won’t guarantee your screams.

|_- Out of the Chat Room -_|

Turning from the computer to the porch, I slowly walked over to the switch, afraid to see my boyfriend in terrible conditions. Turning on the lights, I closed my eyes and opened them to see an empty chair with a long piece of cloth and an arms’ length of ropes lying around the chair legs. Looking angry and confused, I quickly turned to the computer and began typing a response.

[jamielle]

hey.... nice prologue... full mo mysteries... hehehehe... continue this... i'll support... btw, i'm cathleen...   

heya, Cathleen. thank you for taking time to read my story. i really cannot believe it. i thought no one would ever dare read this story! haha. it is way different from the stories here in CC.

[kikaygurl016]

heya, Cathleen. thank you for taking time to read my story. i really cannot believe it. i thought no one would ever dare read this story! haha. it is way different from the stories here in CC.

I agree... this is so different... prologue pa lang may thrill na... update this story na... =) i liked your 1st chapter grabe... anu kaya meron bakit ginanon si tyler... =)

[jamielle]

DISGUISED
^{unveil the truth
unveil the mysteries}

Turning from the computer to the porch, I slowly walked over to the switch, afraid to see my boyfriend in terrible conditions. Turning on the lights, I closed my eyes and opened them to see an empty chair with a long piece of cloth and an arms’ length of ropes lying around the chair legs. Looking angry and confused, I quickly turned to the computer and began typing a response.

|_- Back to the Chat Room -_|

Shanna: Okay, enough of the !@#$ bullshit games! Where the !@#$ hell is my boyfriend and what the !@#$ did you do to him!?!?

Anonymous: Well, turn around and go to your backyard. You’ll definitely see him there.

|_- Out of the Chat Room -_|

Quickly I ran towards the backyard and found the lights turned off. Turning it on, I had high hopes that Tyler was standing in front of me, alive and happy. But instead of what I fantasized, Tyler was hung from the lights and was gutted, his organs slowly pouring out of his stomach area. I screamed in horror, as my mother and siblings came running out of their rooms. They all stared and screamed and whispered in fear as I ran towards the computer and began typing to this !@#$ who killed my boyfriend!

|_- Back to the Chat Room -_|

Shanna: You !@#$! What the !@#$ did you do to Tyler!?!?

Anonymous: Hasty, aren’t we now? Let’s just say that he ‘hung’ with my friends.

Shanna: What’s in it for you if you killed my boyfriend? What are your motives in doing this?

Anonymous: What’s in it for me is that he’s finally out of my way. My motives, simple, I want you, Shanna.

Shanna: What? You want me? What the hell is that supposed to mean?

Anonymous: You’ll understand when the right time comes. I’m very sorry, but, it looks like it’s time for me to say bye. Ta my lovely Shanna. Oh, and before I leave, if you tell anyone about this, I will send some ‘minions’ of mine to kill your family.

|_- End of Chat -_|

After the conversation was over with, I copied the entire conversation and saved it into a hard drive disk, tears continually falling from my eyes. Doing so, I walked over to my boyfriend’s body and looked up at him, sobbing. My mom quickly called the ambulance as I stared up at him. Looking into Tyler’s blank eyes, anger began to grow inside of me like a fire.

‘You stinking little piece of bullshit, you’ll pay for killing my boyfriend!’ I yelled, mentally.

[jamielle]

I agree... this is so different... prologue pa lang may thrill na... update this story na... =) i liked your 1st chapter grabe... anu kaya meron bakit ginanon si tyler... =)

kahit ikaw lang ang reader ko, i'll finish this whole story. wala lang, im just thrilled and gusto ko lang ng medyo ibang story as of now. haha. some of my stories were on hold! thanks for reading!

[kikaygurl016]

yes finish this story... ang brutal nung ginawa kay tyler ha... nakakatakot naman toh... napaka mystery, hahaha... continue mo na...   

[sheilamay_07]

wow a very mysterious and exciting story nice start

[jha_xx]

waa.. very creepy.. i really had goosebumps while i was reading your story.. paano ba naman.. di ko alam na nakakatakot pala yung story mo.. medyo madilim na dito sa bahay.. *share..
btw, nice intro, very scary an i agree with them.. very mysterious.. ang bad naman nung secret admirer na yun.. i'll support your story.. btw, jha here.. new reader

[sheilamay_07]

grabe nakakatakot naman yun and super weird naman nung mysterious guy na yun.. may bipolar disease ata yun

[jamielle]

yes finish this story... ang brutal nung ginawa kay tyler ha... nakakatakot naman toh... napaka mystery, hahaha... continue mo na...   

okay, i'll be posting the update na. enjoy reading!

wow a very mysterious and exciting story nice start

thank you!
wow, may bago na akong reader

waa.. very creepy.. i really had goosebumps while i was reading your story.. paano ba naman.. di ko alam na nakakatakot pala yung story mo.. medyo madilim na dito sa bahay.. *share..
btw, nice intro, very scary an i agree with them.. very mysterious.. ang bad naman nung secret admirer na yun.. i'll support your story.. btw, jha here.. new reader

hello, Jha. i am Riel.
anyway, oo nga medyo creepy pero hindi naman masyado.
basta, basta... haha
naku, pasensya ka na kung natakot ka.
naisip ko lang na gusto ko lang ng ibang plot ng story.
thank you for reading!

grabe nakakatakot naman yun and super weird naman nung mysterious guy na yun.. may bipolar disease ata yun

medyo mysterious nga sya. weird, weird!
mga weird imaginations ko lang yan!
feeling ko minsan lunatic ako. just kidding

[jamielle]

DISGUISED
^{unveil the truth
unveil the mysteries}

It was just another cool October night as my friends, Diana, Patrick, John, Ryan, Mara and I, walked out of the theatres. We were standing in the lobby, waiting for Jane’s car to come and pick us up. As we waited, I left myself out of the conversations they were having and was silent once again. Mara realized my silence and sat next to me, looking at me face. She didn’t like how I was silent and still thinking about ‘last night’s incident.’ Her arm now around my shoulders, she held me closer and whispered slowly into my ears.

“Shanna, cheer up. Whatever happened last night wasn’t your fault. It was that !@#$ head’s fault! He was the one who killed Tyler!” Mara told me, her arms holding me tightly.

“But, if I hadn’t listened to him in the first place and turned the lights off, Tyler would’ve still been alive! He would’ve been with us today! Watching the movie with us, laughing with us and telling me how much he loved me like he usually does! I shouldn’t have listened to the bastard! It was my fault Tyler died! ” I whispered as tears began to fall from my red swollen eyes.

As I continued crying, Jane’s car was parked into the parking lot and she was honking her horn, signaling us to assemble into the car at once. While everyone walked into the parking lot, Mara saw that I was still in the lobby. She ran back in and saw at once that I was already walking into the mall that was attached to the theatres. Running up behind me, she tugged onto my coat sleeve, trying to get my attention.

“Shanna, where are you going? Aren’t you riding back home with us?” Mara asked, looking up at me.

“I think I’m going to ride the bus home this time. I just want to straighten everything out first. Plus, I want to be alone. But, thanks for asking me. Also, say hi to Jane for me. I got to go now. See you in school tomorrow.” I explained, as I continued walking towards the bus station.

‘Ugh, last night was enough of a living hell. Can everyone just stop looking at me like I’m some kind of murderous monster! Seriously, this is very rude and very disturbing!’ I thought to myself, mentally.

As I walked, I felt very uneasy and uncomfortable. Everyone in the mall stared at me, newspapers in their hands and comparing my face to the tear streaked face from the papers. Elderly women gossiped in low voices as I walked past them. My eyes were still swollen from what happened last night. All the blood and seeing Tyler gutted! I was ready to scream. I looked away from the people and continued walking. When I finally exited the mall, I saw a woman with the news crew behind her, smiling putting on heavy make up on her face. She looked up and walked towards me, smiling and signaling her crew to follow.

“Excuse me, Miss Shanna?” I walked right past her, as she held her microphone up to my face.

I could feel her face turn into a reddish color because of me ignoring her. I guess she was angry because she stormed after me before I could get past the ticket man in the theatre. She caught hold of my arm and spun me around, the both of us facing the camera man.

“Good evening, this is Mary Garcia with the news of the century! Standing beside me is Miss Shanna, the girl whose boyfriend was hung and gutted in her backyard. Now, I’ve been hearing rumors that you’ve been having enough of your boyfriend, resulting to you assassinating. Is it true? Is it true that you your self assassinated your own boyfriend, Tyler Sarmiento? I think everyone out there deserves to know the truth about this heart-breaking mystery!” Mary Garcia said, as she turned to face me, sticking the microphone in front of me.

“Well, are you sure you want to hear the truth about Tyler and me? ” I asked, as I smiled at her.

She nodded and smiled back, her teeth flashing to the camera. I chuckled and smirked. Seeing her face was hilarious as her eyes shined proudly.

“Well, here’s the truth about this mystery!” I yelled, cracking my knuckles.

After quickly cracking my knuckles, I landed a straight and hard punch on her left cheek. She landed on the floor behind her and some man with a box of cold pepperoni pizza dropped the pizza on her face. As she slowly got up, I smirked, handed a ticket to the stunned ticket man and ran towards the stairs. Before I ran down, I turned around, a mischievous smile played on my lips.

“I think that you’re a big mouthed !@#$ that should keep her mouth shut. I think that no one deserves to know the truth about the news! Instead of talking !@#$ on TV, why don’t you continue writing your shitty books?” I yelled, as I ran down the stairs.

[sheilamay_07]

wow! may pag ka maldita pala si shanna hehehe.. hhmmm.. tama lang yung di niya pagsabi baka kasi balikan siya nung weird na guy hhaayyy...

[jamielle]

wow! may pag ka maldita pala si shanna hehehe.. hhmmm.. tama lang yung di niya pagsabi baka kasi balikan siya nung weird na guy hhaayyy...

sabagay, maissue pa sya. saka hindi nya din naman alam kung sino yung mystery guy! para pa naman syang stalker. haha.