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« on: February 26, 2009, 01:29:36 pm »

"10 Wishes"




I'm Ron Esguierra. I live a pleasant life. 4thyear hghschool.Gwapo. Mayaman. Sikat sa Campus. Habulin ng girls. 8)
Wala na nga akong mahihiling pa sa buhay ko eh---well, that's what I thought until I met her....
Sachiko, yan ang name niya. I once saved her sa pagkakabunggo sa isang truck, imbis na sya ang nasagasaan, ako ang nabundol ng truck. It was a miracle ng kaunting galos lang ang natamo ko. I don't know what happen to her after that incident. Then, after 1 week, I was surprised ng sumulpot sya sa harap ko and she told me that she can grant my 10wishes. Creepy? Weird? Hilarious? name it, i can't explain.

"I was contented in my life until you came... Kala ko wala na akong mahihiling pa.."

"DEATH cannot do as apart. Coz I'll follow you even in your death. That's a promise."

"When you came, there's nothing more that I can wish coz you're presence granted a thousand wish i could ask for."



ÜÜÜ☺☺☺☺☺
ayan po story ko. hehe. Please support. hehe.
☻☻☻

Sachiko pics:
SAchiko peace and tweetums
Sachiko with friends. sachiko is the one at the left.Ü
Sachiko pacute.

Stephanie's pics:
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc117/3f_nami/nr2.jpg
http://i587.photobucket.com/albums/ss318/EmiB/Avatars/narumi_riko4.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k142/THEJELLYBEAN66/My%20favorite%20dorama%20stars/riko3a.jpg


Erinn's pics:
http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll18/maiimi/Ariel%20Lin/142.jpg



TABLE OF CONTENTS:(hehe. may ganun?)
CHAPTER 1-nasa page 1
CHAPTER 2-nasa page 2
CHAPTER 3-nasa page 3
CHAPTER 4-nasa page 5
CHAPTER 5-nasa page 8
CHAPTER 6-nasa page 10
CHAPTER 7-nasa page 12
CHAPTER 8-nasa page 14
CHAPTER 9-nasa page 16
CHAPTER 10-nasa page 19
CHAPTER 11-nasa page 21
CHAPTER 12-nasa page 23
CHAPTER 13-nasa page 26
CHAPTER 14-nasa page 27
CHAPTER 15-
CHAPTER 16-nasa page 30
CHAPTER 17-nasa page 32
CHAPTER 18-nasa page 32
CHAPTER 19-nasa page 33
CHAPTER 20-nasa page 35
CHAPTER 21-nasa page 37
CHAPTER 22-nasa page 39
CHAPTER 23-nasa page 40
CHAPTER 24-nasa page 40
CHAPTER 25-nasa page 41
CHAPTER 26-nasa page 42

« Last Edit: April 17, 2009, 06:46:53 pm by huntress_rhaine »

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Re: 10 wishes<new story.ÜÜÜ>preface.Support nyu po.please?Ü
« Reply #1 on: February 26, 2009, 08:31:57 pm »
hmm...interesting story sis!
i think i'll like this one..haha!
update na sis!
 
btw, im eka..
 
read mo din story ko,
BFFguy+BFFgirl=L.O.V.E??
 
 8) ;)
you cant SHINE like ME..

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Re: 10 wishes<new story.ÜÜÜ>preface.Support nyu po.please?Ü
« Reply #2 on: February 27, 2009, 07:58:18 am »
hey sis :]]
paextra.
yieeee

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Re: 10 wishes<new story.ÜÜÜ>preface.Support nyu po.please?Ü
« Reply #3 on: February 27, 2009, 08:12:49 am »
hi sis! Nice preface. Ten wishes? Genie b? Haha.Joke lang.Abangan ko yung next ah?Ü
pls read my story dn. ;D. Thanks so much!
the road not yet taken is the..

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Re: 10 wishes<new story.ÜÜÜ>preface.Support nyu po.please?Ü
« Reply #4 on: February 27, 2009, 09:28:42 am »
hmm...interesting story sis!
i think i'll like this one..haha!
update na sis!
 
btw, im eka..
 
read mo din story ko,
BFFguy+BFFgirl=L.O.V.E??
 
 8) ;)


hi sis! thanks for reading. try ko mag-update mamaya.Ü
sure. i'll read it. ;)

hey sis :]]
paextra.
yieeee


heyya sis! hehe. sure, sige. extra lang. hehe.Ü

hi sis! Nice preface. Ten wishes? Genie b? Haha.Joke lang.Abangan ko yung next ah?Ü
pls read my story dn. ;D. Thanks so much!



hehe.. genie? pede na din. hehe.Ü
sure, i'll read it. thanks for reading mine.Ü

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Re: 10 wishes<new story.ÜÜÜ>preface.Support nyu po.please?Ü
« Reply #5 on: February 27, 2009, 10:33:05 am »
may story ka palang gagawin hindi mo man lang nisabi. hehe.
nice intro ha! i like it!  ;)
support ko to! yeah!  :D
« Last Edit: February 27, 2009, 10:45:31 am by yhukie »

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« Reply #6 on: February 27, 2009, 10:39:34 am »
may story ka palang gagawin hini mo man lang nisabi. hehe.
nice intro ha! i like it!  ;)
support ko to! yeah!  :D



hehe. ang hirap kasi mag-advertise ng story. masyadong busy. nag-aantay na lang ako ng makakapansin. :D ;D
hehe.. sankyuuu sis!☺☺☺

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« Reply #7 on: February 27, 2009, 10:45:03 am »
hehe. kung sabagay. baka isipin pa nila kaya ka napunta nila sa thread nila para magadvertise lang ng story mo. hehe.
Kelan ang chap. 1 siz??

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Re: 10 wishes<new story.ÜÜÜ>preface.Support nyu po.please?Ü
« Reply #8 on: February 27, 2009, 11:21:52 am »

CHAPTER 1



"Sa gwapo kong to, syempre, napasagot ko si Mimi. 8)" oo na. mayabang na ako. lam ko. haha.

"yabang mo pre." oha! may batok epek pa tong si Kyle, bestfriend ko. Gwapo din yan, mas gwapo lang ako. lamang ng sampung balde.  ;D

"ay pusa!" nakakabigla naman yung kuting na dumaan sa harap ko. Nasa kalye nga pala kami, pauwi na kami ni Kyle.

"anung pusa?" ???
"duling ka ba pre. may dumaang pusa.."
"wala naman ah. sira to."
"meron nga. ayun yung..." ituturo ko yung pusa kaso pag tingin ko sa direksyon na pinuntahan ng pusa... :o :o"Shete pre! yung babae masasagasaan!" 

tumakbo ako para iligtas ang isang babaeng nakita kong tumatawid na parang wala sa sarili. Masasagasaan sya ng truck! anu ba yung driver?! bakit hindi sya tumtigil?!

"Ron! Anong gagawin mo?!"


"Miss!!!" tumingin sya sa akin at.... ngumiti?! :o ???
anong problema nito? masasagasaan na nakangiti pa rin. anla, ewan. "Tabi miss!" itinulak ko sya...



*boooooooooooogsh!*


"ayyyyyy!yyyyy!!

"Yung lalaki nasagasaan ng truck!!!"
"Ron!!!"
"Dali! ambulansya! dalhin natin sya sa hospital!"



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"nagigising na sya..."
"oo nga.. nagkakamalay na.."
"ron..."
"yes! buhay na ang mokong!"

hmm... ang ingay ng mga to..."aghh.. saan ako? sino kayo?? bakit ang papangit nyo?"
"sira ka! pasalamat ka nasa hospital ka kung hindi babatukan kita eh!"
"O kyle. kaw pala yan. kaya pala ang panget. ;D"
"dapat hindi dito bagsak mo sa hospital eh, dapat sa mental." >:(
"to naman. hindi mabiro." ;D
"ron..."waa.. si Mimi.<3"ayus ka lang babes?"
"fine na fine ako babes. Dyan na ang angel ko ih. mwuah!"
"teka nga.. wag muna kayo mag-smoochies dyan na magsyota."epal naman tong si kyle eh.
"at bakit asungot?"
"gusto ko lang itanong... ano bang meron yang kukote mo at bigla ka na lang tumawid sa kalsada?! ??? ??? nag-su-suicide ka ba? sana sinabi mo agad, para natulungan kita, marami akong lason sa bahay. libre lang."
"babes. kuha lang kita ng maiinom ha."
"sure" pagkalabas ni Mimi...
"Kyle.. hindi ako nag-su-suicide no. iyo na yung lason mo. pakabusog ka dun."
"eh bakit ka nga bigla biglang natawid? at truck pa ang pinili mo!"
"may babae kasi akong nakitang tumatawid na parang wala sa sarili eh anlapit na nung truck sa kanya kaya ayun sinagip ko..."
"babae? sinong babae? Kyle. naka-drugs ka ba? ??? la naman babae dun sa kalsada nung tumawid ka eh. wala ka namang sinagip eh..."
"pre. meron!"
"adik ka ba?"
"sira! hindi! meron talaga."
"hindi ka pala dapat ginugutom pre. sumasama ang tama mo."

>:( :o ???what's happening? bakit hindi nakita ni Kyle yung girl? bulag na ba si Kyle? nung una, yung pusa ang hindi nakita tapos yung babae... teka...adik ba ako?... hindi naman eh.nakita ko ang nakita ko! >:(




☺☺☺end of chapter 1.☺☺☺
pasensya na po. hindi po kasi ako magaling na writer. pagtyagaan nyu na lang. :P Ü

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« Reply #9 on: February 27, 2009, 11:25:02 am »
nice start siz! I love it! haha! ang ganda!!  :D

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« Reply #10 on: February 27, 2009, 11:56:57 am »
nice start siz! I love it! haha! ang ganda!!  :D


thanks sis!☺☺☺
yay!

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« Reply #11 on: February 27, 2009, 02:23:26 pm »
haha natawa ako sa dialogue. ayos s nakakaaliw. galing mo kaya magsulat sis :]

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« Reply #12 on: February 27, 2009, 02:40:20 pm »
haha natawa ako sa dialogue. ayos s nakakaaliw. galing mo kaya magsulat sis :]


hehe. thanks sis!☺
wala na nga ako maisip na kasunod. haha. out of the blue lang ang pagta-type ko. kahit ano na mailagay sa story. xD

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« Reply #13 on: February 27, 2009, 03:04:09 pm »
hi!..
new reader here..
Kim is my name..
ang kulit naman ng story mo!..
ahaha...
I am...
FREELY FALLING

*click click click! New story on the run~ Please do support, ok?

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Re: 10 wishes<Chapter 1>.Support nyu po.please?Ü
« Reply #14 on: February 27, 2009, 03:20:19 pm »
hi!..
new reader here..
Kim is my name..
ang kulit naman ng story mo!..
ahaha...


hi Kim!
hehe. thanks for reading my story. Godbless! teexee.☺

 

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