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Between The Two [First Story]
« on: January 25, 2009, 01:49:43 pm »
Between The Two

                   
wIll thEy fiNd wHat they wAnt?

                wIll thEy gEt whAt thEy neEd?


Kirstein Alexis Villarreal

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Kirstein Alex Villarreal kilala rin bilang Alex.. she is  pretty, mayaman, matalino… but never been into relationship… there is a man I mean men’s in her life who is really important to her  among them who will she choose the He or Him….


Nathan Mave Salazar
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Kilala bilang Nate…. Gwapo, smart, rich, and the BEST BUD of her… has a secret feeling for  her… but can’t tell her… he is running for Valedictorian in his school…. Nasakanya na lahat but not Her….. will he be ready to tell the truth…..




Preston Benjamin Larkin

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Know as Jam…. Spoiled Brat dahil rich sila… matalino, gwapo, mayaman, binansagang BOY NEXT DOOR maraming chix but never in a serous relationship… but when he meet Her, his world CHANGE… it’s not like before… will He fall in love with her and will he changer for the better…


tell me ph kung itutuloy ko pah po 2... tnx... first story...



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Re: Between The Two [First Story]
« Reply #1 on: January 25, 2009, 02:47:25 pm »
Chapter 1

Ija gumising ka na malalate ka na…..
Yes…. Mom just a minute…
There is no minute left Alex..
Ok, ok I will..
What! 6:00 a.m. pa lang ha…. Si mommy talaga… nakakainis…


  Dining Area

Good morning… What’s the breakfast for today?
Hotdog and egg…
Ok, ok… btw mom when will dad arrive?
Sabi nya baka next week daw, kasi busy pa sya e…
Ganun ba? Can he attend my birthday?
Of course!... Hurry up you wll be late already…
Yup…


Alex POV

Naku si mommy talaga… an gaga-aga akong ginising…
Sana makadalo si daddy sa b-day ko… halos 2 yrs. ko narin hindi sya nakikita e… He is working as civil engineer kasi kaya kahit saang lugar napapadpad… but that’s ok alam ko naman nagwo-work sya for my future ako lng kasing isa nilang anak….


Anak!?

Naku si mommy talaga… nageemote pa nga ako ditto eh….
Bakit ho?

Nandito na si Nate… bilisan muna dyan..
Ahh.. ok, nariyan na..

End of POV
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Kamusta na ho kayo tita?
Ok, ikaw ijo?
Ayus lng po ako…
Pagpasensyahan muna na si Alex ijo ha… alam mo naman….
Ok lng tita.. sanay na ho ako dyan sa anak nyo....


Ako bah… pinaguusapan nyo?
Ang bagal-bagal mo kasi…
Sorry! Sigena aalis na kami mommy… bye..
Mauna na ho kami tita.. Bye…

Ingat kayo..Bye..

Alex POV

Nasa na car kami ni Nate… sya nga pala Nate is my ‘kuya’ and bestfriend since we were kids…. Kung itatanung nyo kung meron akung car ??... meron pero na sira e kaya nasa repair shop 2 ngayon…

End of POV
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So… kamusta kana….
Ok lng… gwapo parin…
Kapal mo ha!......
Ikaw kamustah kana….
Alam mo naman dbah wlang magbabago sa akin….
Gusto mo ligawan kita?
Anu….????/  Aray…. Anung nangyari?
Joke lng nuh… Na sa school na tayo bumaba ka na…
Naku!..... Hindi ka talaga gentleman… >:(
Sunduin kita mamaya ha…
Baki--- ???
Pagdadate tayo…. 8)
Loko….[/size] :)


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Re: Between The Two [First Story]
« Reply #2 on: January 25, 2009, 02:54:32 pm »
....pers.... :D

hi sis,,,cesz nga pla ...

Full package si Nathan ahh,, gwapo na,smart at myaman pah,,hehehe,,kulet nya,, ligawan mo na sya hehe,,

nu nga pla name mo?..
next nah sis,,, :D
« Last Edit: January 25, 2009, 03:00:09 pm by mamoru14 »
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Re: Between The Two [First Story]
« Reply #3 on: January 25, 2009, 03:04:44 pm »
..dos..

ahaha
hello..
andrea nga pala..
ahaha
next na sis..
ahaha

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Re: Between The Two [First Story]
« Reply #4 on: January 25, 2009, 04:21:34 pm »
tnx u...
ako nga pala c dinzz..
salamat sa pg support nyo... :D

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Re: Between The Two [First Story]
« Reply #5 on: January 25, 2009, 04:22:29 pm »
tnx u...
ako nga pala c dinzz..
salamat sa pg support nyo... :D

welcum..
ahah
sis..
pwede mo ba try story ko??
thanks..

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Re: Between The Two [First Story]
« Reply #6 on: January 25, 2009, 04:23:38 pm »
no prob...  :)

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Re: Between The Two [First Story]
« Reply #7 on: January 25, 2009, 04:34:13 pm »

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Re: Between The Two [First Story]
« Reply #8 on: January 25, 2009, 05:23:09 pm »
Chapter 2

Alex POV

Si Nate talaga o.... seryoso kaya yun?..... ???
Pero bahala... na nga.... Hay school na naman....
Meron kayang bago????


Friend!......

Aba cnuh yun......

Alex.... Dito ka umupo.....


Nandyan na sya o.... ganda talaga....

Hai naku... c Kara lng pala... and aking girl bestfriend... nagkakasundo kami sa lahat ng bagay.. except for lovelife...
Bsta ewan ko bah.... At teka??? hindi rin papahuli sa eksenah.. ang mga studyante sa school na2..... buhay naman talaga...[/size]


End of POV


Friend.. kamusta summer mo?
Ok lng... ganun pa rin... walang nagbago...
Talaga.. hindi ba kayo nagouting ni Tita?
Wala... nakakulong ako sa bahay the whole summer... ikaw?? [/color]anung mga kalukuhan ang ginagawa nung summer...
Pumunta kami sa resort ng Auntie ko...
Ganun bah...
Kamusta na nga pala c Fafa Nate??? Kau na bah.... ;D
Tigil-tigilan mo nga ako dyan.. sapakin kita e....
 >:(


Ok class.... settle down...
Good Morning to all of you... before we start our class I'd like you to meet ur new classm8 Mr. Larkin...


Anuh... cc...cc.. Jam! :D

Sis!!! :D
Anuh ba??...
C... Jam... kaklase natin sya....
Duh... pakialam ko... hindi ko ngayan ka kilala e....
Anuh kaba sya lng naman po ang BOY NEXT DOOR ng west high...
Talaga... I don't care... >:(

Mr. Larkin... introduce urself...

Sup! As u all know I am Preston Benjamin Larkin I m from west academy high...i hope... we can all be friends.....

OK, ok Mr. Larkin u can sit beside Ms.Villarreal...
Ok Ma'am

Sis.. ang swerteh mo....
Um... hi.. i am Benjami---
Uu.. narinig ko.. di mo na kailangan ulitin pah.....
Ok?? ???

Jam POV

Wow!! anung problema nito... kung makaasta ha.... talaga naman... Baka 'meron' 2 ngayun ;D.. jwk..

End of POV

Hey... wat's ur name btw....??

Alexis, but just call me Alex...
Ok. r u busy later...
Nope, why?
Would u mind if i ask u to  hang---
No, tnk u.. i am not interested of that kind of things... and especially i am not interested to u... get it...
Wow... Is that a speech?? ;)
Shut up... >:(

RING! RING!

ok class u can go now..

Hey Alex hindi ka ba talaga sasam---
Uie Alex.. yung bf mo na sa my door hinihintay ka?
BF? ???, hu the hell is that?
C--

What the heck are u talking abou---
Hey??? ???
It's me Lex... kool ka lng
Kool?? e ano pinagsasabi mung bf kita......??? >:(
BF means bestfriend... at BOYFRIEND...
ok..kkk... WHAT BOYFRIEND?
Yep.. soon to be... dbah sabi ko liligawan kita...
Pumayag bako...?? [dko maalalang oumayag ako ???]
Nope.. but i know u will be my gf... so.. halika na...
Ayee... ikaw Alex ha... d mo sinabi na nililigawan ka ni Fafa Nate..
Magtigil ka ha...  >:(

Alex POV

c Nate talaga anu ba kasing kalukuhan nito pero infernes... kinikilig ako ha.... pero feel ko hindi tama 2ng nararamdaman ko e..... ewan ko...

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Re: Between The Two [First Story]
« Reply #9 on: January 25, 2009, 05:52:37 pm »
uno!!
ahaha
di ko lam kung maakakrelate ba ako dito o hindi eh..
ahaha
basta parehas kaming may best guy!!
ahaha
next na sis!!

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Re: Between The Two [First Story]
« Reply #10 on: January 25, 2009, 07:08:53 pm »
Chapter 3

[Nasa maburitong restaurant namin kami ngayon, pero parang galit parin sakin c Lex]

Hey... r u still mad at me???
Anuh bah sa tingin mo... >:(
Naku naman nageenarte ka naman o...
Talaga lng ha...
Eto naman di mabiro.. sorry na Lex... please???
Sorry mo mukha mo.... >:(
Anu bah dapat kung gawin para patawarin mo ako???...
Ewan ko sa yo!

Alex POV

Naku hirap naman nito.. dko kasi 2 matiis c Nate e... pero naiinis talaga ako sa kanya.... kahit anung gawin nyah.... bahal--- anung?????? :o

Kirstein Alexis Villarreal will u forgive me??? :(

Anung??? !@#$ talaga 2ng mokong na2 o.... LUMUHOD ba daw bah sa harapan ko..... >:( pero ang sweet nyah ha... ang swerte talaga nang magiging gf nitong mokong....

Nate.. tumayo ka na nga!
Sagutin mo muna ako.....
Ok, ok.. i forgive you....

Ayeeee.....

Naku! pahamak talaga 2ng c Nate o...

End of POV

So... is that means pumapayag ka nang ligawan kita? :)
Of course no--
Excuse me? Nate is that you...
Tif..fan..y..
Nate!... I miss you so much...
{aba yakapin daw bah sa harapan ko pah.. di na nahiya...]

Hey.. Tif, when did u arrive??
Last week pa... sorry kung ngayun lng tayo nagkita.. pero i really miss u..
Ok, ok.. anung ginagawa mo rito, hu r u with??
We are eating our diner I am with my mom and dad... u know they will be glad to see u...
[Teka lng nga.. naoOP ako dito ha....]
Syanga pala Tif, this is Lex my---
Ur bestfriend! Yah I know u.. palagi kang kinukwento ni Nate.. I heard good things abt u... nice meeting u...
Tnx... nice meetin u 2
Hey Nate mom and dad will be glad to see u.. so will u join us??..
Wait.. Tif I'll be glad to see them too but I am with my friend at this moment so maybe next time...
C'mon Nate.. kakakita pa lng natin e.. at tsaka busy na cla daddy next time.. so please join us....
Tiffany---
Ok I'll ask a permission 2 her... Hey Lex would u mind if i borrow Nate for this night.. Kakakita lng kasi namin e... so please.. palagi naman kaung mgkasama right??
Umm... no problem with m--
Tnx.. so Nate halika na....
But Tif..
She said yes... C'mon
Go on Nate let's eat next time..
Bye Lex, nice meeting u again...
Bye..

Alex POV

Naku ha!... nakakainis yung babaeng yun ha... hindi nya bah nakikitang nagmomoment kami ni Nate.. Naku... btw she Tiffany Jade Chiu she is the girlfriend of Nate.. but sa pagkakaalam ko break na cla so ex sya ni Nate... sinabi ni Nate sa akin na iniwan daw sya ni Tiffany dahil maspinili pa daw ni Tiffany ang career nya.... hai naku talaga... pero bakit ba ako nagseselos hindi naman kami ni Nate e tapos hindi ko rin naman sya gusto... diko nga bah sya gusto... naku ewan...


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Re: Between The Two [First Story]
« Reply #11 on: January 25, 2009, 07:27:20 pm »
...pers ulet..hehehe,,

basa mode munah ko..hehe,, :D

,,sayang di ko nkita knna ung chap. 2...
galing nman sis!1,, bilis mo mguppie...whee!!..

Kilig nman ako dun kina Nate at alex...heheh,,
naku,, ngseselos ka na sis!,,, hehehe,, may feeling ka na kay Nate,,heheeh,,

ahhy?,,may Tiffany nngexist,,syang ung moment,,ahhy??,,
Di nman nkaplag si Nate,,hehe..

sis nu nga pla name mo??,, ;D



uno!!
ahaha
di ko lam kung maakakrelate ba ako dito o hindi eh..
ahaha
basta parehas kaming may best guy!!
ahaha
next na sis!!

Hi sis!!,, princess nga pla,,

incesz nlang dmeh kasi may ka-name ko dito sa cc ehh,,hehe
Tama,, saya mgkaroon ng bfriend na guy,,(bestfriend)
hehe,,

nu pla name mo sis?...
« Last Edit: January 25, 2009, 07:36:21 pm by mamoru14 »
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Re: Between The Two [First Story]
« Reply #12 on: January 25, 2009, 07:40:27 pm »
tnk u sa pagbabasa... dinzz na lng tawag nyo sakin yun ang palayaw ko e...

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Re: Between The Two [First Story]
« Reply #13 on: January 25, 2009, 07:47:19 pm »
mgpo post nakuh ng chapter 4 :)

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Re: Between The Two [First Story]
« Reply #14 on: January 25, 2009, 09:03:29 pm »
Chapter 4

[talaga naman... todo sa pageemote na ako rito]

Ang sama naman ng lalaking yun... gf kapa naman nyah tapos iiwanan ka lng rito at sasama syah sa ibang babae.. naku.... ;)

[aba cnung??? kumag pala 2 e kita ng nageemote tau rito]

Anu bang pakialam mo?? At tsaka.. hindi ko sya bf nu.... NEVER! >:(
Eh.. kanina sa school, diba--
Hindi yun tototo, kaya pwede ba...
E. bakit ka nagagalit??
Nakakainis ka kasi...
An..n..o.. ako pang maykasalanan...
OO.. nakakainis ka kasi...
Talaga... e bakit ka umiiyak??
Hin..d..i ako umiiyak ha...
Sure ka!? e papatak na yang luha mo e...
Pwde bah....[sasapakin ko na2]
Stop, stop... jwk lng naman e...
JOKE!? sa tingin mo maypanahon p ba akong makipagbiruan sayo....
Sorry na.. gusto lng kasi kitang asarin...
Iba rin trip mo nuh....[naku.. tutulo na yata luha ko] :'(
Ang ganda mo kasi pagnaaasar ka...
:o[Ano daw???].. ewan ko sayo.. umupo ka muna..
Pwede bang magtanong??
Ano yun...
Sino yung kasama mo??
Ah.. sya c Nate bestfriend ko...
Matagal.. na kaung mgbestfriend?
Uu simula nung bata pa.. kami...
Ganun ba..
Sya nga pala... bakit ka nandito??
Kumakain ako dito ng diner ko....
With your gf?
Nope.. wla akong gf nuh..
Talaga lng ha.. dba c Mr. Boy Next Door ka!.. e, bakit lakang gf?
Meron akong mga chix pero.. la akong gf.. hindi ko pa kasi nahahanap yung girl na para sa akin..
Ang oa mo naman... e, r u with ur parents?
Hindi rin.. parents ko nasa America... ako lng isa kumakain dito palagi..
Dika ba nalulungkot??
Sanay na ako nuh.. at tsaka iba ngayung araw na2...
Anung ibig mung sabihin?? ???
Nandito ka e.. kaya iba.. maykasama na ako...
Korny mo... :)
Mas maganda kapala pag ngumingiti...
Magtigil ka ha!
Sorry?? Alex...
Ok lng...[aba infernes ang gaan ng loob ko sa taong 2ha]
Btw.. gusto mo hatid nakita?? 8)
Ano... wag na nuh....
Sure ka??
Oo, tnk u sa pagaalok mo..
Ok, dina kita pipilitin.. cgeh mauna na ako... nice to know u..
Nice to know u too..

[Mabait na man pala yung mokong na yun]


Argh! bakit ngayun pa umulan...
Naku ang basa-basa ko nah... Argh! >:(

[naku naman pagminalas ka talaga o... laka na ngang masilungan la ka pang payong... giniginaw na ako :-\

Alex POV

Naku naman o... c Nate kasi.. nakakainis talaga syah... wla ring taong nagcacare sakin rit--- tumigil na bah ang ulan?? hindi umuulan pah... pero bakit... don't tell m-- :o


Sabi ko naman sa iyo e na ihahatid na kita.... ang tigas kasi ng ulo mo... tingnan mo anong nagyari sa yo....
J..a..m..mm, akala ko umuwi ka n--[pinayungan nga nya ako, SWEET :-[]

[Ano... may YAKAP! mode pah... chansing yan ha :o, bakit nya ba ako niyakap??]

End of POV


Magpapakamatay ka ba!?

An..u..n..g--?
Anung ano, e muntik ka na masagasaan ng kotse e....
Sorry...
Isuot mo 2ng jacket ko o.. para di kana ginawin...
Tnk u Jam..





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