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THE ONE WHO WON MY HEART chapter 14 pa pala ako *wink*
« on: December 13, 2008, 10:37:50 pm »
The One who won my HEART


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       Matagal nang magkaklase sina Julia at Brian. Ngunit bihira lang kung mag-usap ang dalawa. Gaya ng iba ay takot rin siya kay Brian dahil sa inaakala niya ring suplado ito. Ngunit magbabago ang lahat sa oras na makikilala niya si Brian.
   Hindi rin masyadong malapit sa isa’t isa sina Julia at Paulo. Ang naaalala niya lang na nakapag-usap sila ay nung tinulungan siya ni Paulo na bitbitin ang mga gamit niya. Naging crush niya pa nga si Paulo dahil dun. Ngunit di rin naman nagtagal.
   Si JP naman, dahil sa playboy, syempre siya yung unang lumapit kay Julia. Tinatanggihan pa siya ni Julia nun. Ngunit nagging magkaibigan rin sa katagalan. Magaling lang talaga sigurong mambola si JP.
   Nakilala ni Julia si Jillian sa isang out-of-town workshop. Naging malapit sila sa isa’t isa dun pero nung matapos na ang workshop kailangan na nilang umuwi. Kaya ayun..di naging sila kahit gustuhin man nila. Walang gustong sumugal sa LDR.
   Syempre di ko kakalimutang ikwento sa inyo si Nikki, ang babaeng unang nakakita sa tunay na katauhan ni Brian. Nagtataka rin ako kung paano niya nagawa yun eh di naman sila close. Matagal na niyang gusto si Brian. Nagkakamabutihan na sila ngunit di nila ipinapakita sa mga tao dahil ayaw ni Brian na matsismis.







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Julia Belmonte

she’s a sensitive girl
she gets hurt easily
all she wants is someone to love and to care for her
someone who will make her feel important.
someone who will protect her
and that someone should be someone she loves


Brian Ventura

he’s the smartest guy in town
many are afraid of him because of his suplado look
it’s just because he’s not happy
who will try to know the missing part in his life?
who will try to complete him?
whom will he accept?



Paulo de Rivera

the answer to every girls’ prayer
looks, talent, wit
this guy has it all
he brings jealousy to girls
the question is “who will have the right to get jealous?”



Jillian Markus


the boyfriend type friend
he wants his first love to be his last
(no so common in guys nowadays)
he’ll travel a thousand miles just to see the love of his life


JP Valdes

his hobby is to collect and select
but how can you resist such a sweet talker?
but his sweetness fades
is there still a chance for this guy to change?


Nikki Gaviola

this angel can soften a man’s heart
she’s the first to see through Brian’s heart
does Brian love her because of her?
or because of her love?











   This story is about finding a boy who is man enough to show his affection to our girl and will not be ashamed of it. A boy who will listen to her and discover that she makes sense.
   Will it be Brian? Will his IQ help him know how to win Julia’s heart? How about Nikki? Will he take the risk of losing the girl who has loved him for all those years just for the girl who will always be there for him (and loving him in secret)?
   Will it be Paulo? Julia wishes for a guy who is exactly like Paulo. But is it what her heart wants? Being with Paulo is every girls’ happiness. Could it be Julia’s happiness too?
   Will it be JP? What a wonder?! Let’s just see if Julia can make miracle for this guy. Grow up JP! Grow up!
   Oh yeah! Who will forget Jillian? Julia and Jillian could be a perfect love story. They’re friends. They want each other as more than friends. Distance will make their hearts grow colder.




A girl with many choices
Her choices’ option
Who will be the one who will win her heart?






may mga pics pala yung mga characters
click niyo lang yung names nila
sa susunod na ako gagawa ng banner pag may photoshop na kami sa bahay
tapos yung theme song click niyo yung title
thanks po for reading!!
reply lang po kayo saka yay kung di pa masyadong abala sa inyo
masaya na po ako
yun lang po hinihingi
bigyang pansin niyo naman tong story ko
salamat!!!


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Re: the one who won my ♥
« Reply #1 on: December 13, 2008, 10:40:41 pm »
kyaaa. first tagger! continue mo sis, interesting. supporter/reader here  :)

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« Reply #2 on: December 13, 2008, 10:52:56 pm »
Go ice! Wuhoooo. XD
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« Reply #3 on: December 13, 2008, 11:07:23 pm »
ice i love it hihi :)
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Re: the one who won my ♥
« Reply #4 on: December 13, 2008, 11:14:47 pm »
...this is interesting :D ;D


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Re: the one who won my ♥
« Reply #5 on: December 14, 2008, 12:05:05 am »
parang familiar ang story?
hehehehe

pero i support you claud! :)
keep it up!  ;)
thread ni ninzy

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Re: the one who won my ♥
« Reply #6 on: December 14, 2008, 05:53:26 pm »
hi po... excited na for chapter 1...

=)

nakakaexcite naman...

waiting for it..

telle here, 14..

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Re: the one who won my ♥
« Reply #7 on: December 14, 2008, 05:58:43 pm »
icedteagurl!
to na ung kwento mo? hihi!! :D

continue mo.

gogogo!! :)

support ako here!

quennie.  ;D ;)
you and her might have history. but YOU and I have CHEMISTRY. =]

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Re: THE ONE WHO WON MY ♥(audition) CHAPTER 1 POSTED!!
« Reply #8 on: December 14, 2008, 07:50:14 pm »
Kapitulo Uno
   

         “Ms. Belmonte you can choose your seat.”

   “Thanks Ma’am.” dalawang seats ang bakante sa gitna nina Brian at Marion. Kanino kaya ako tatabi? Baka sungitan ako ni Brian, kay Marion na lang. Pero ang manyak naman nitong si Marion. Di bale. Di niya ako kaya.

   At kay Marion nga siya tumabi. At syempre dahil unang araw sa klase, maingay. Puro kwentuhan tungkol sa mga bakasyon nila nung summer saka pakitaan ng mga pictures ng cute na nakita nila sa mall.

   “Brian tumangkad ka ata.”

   Tiningnan lang siya ni Brian.

   Suplado nga.

   Di naman sila nagtagal sa ganoong sitwasyon. Unti-unti rin nilang natutunang magsalita. Isang araw…

   “Grabe talaga yung mga pinagdaanan ng Pilipinas sa mga dayuhan.”

   “Oo nga. Inangkin na nila yung Pilipinas. Inalila pa nila yung mga Pilipino. Pero kung magpapasakop man ako, dun na lang sa mga Amerikano. At least, kaya nilang tulungang umunlad ang Pilipinas.”


   “Ako, di ako papayag. Kaya namang paunlarin ng Pilipino ang sarili niyang bansa. Kulang lang tayo sa disiplina.”

   Hindi ko akalaing makakausap ko si Brian ng ganun.

   Nagtagal naman sila sa ganitong uri ng usapan. Nagpapalitan ng mga opinion at kung ano mang nasa utak nila. Pati mga teachers sa school kinukutya nila. Binabantayan yung mga maling pronunciation saka grammar. Tapos tatawanan pa minsan.

   “Ms. Belmonte!Mr. Ventura! Anong pinagtatawanan niyo?”

   “It’s nothing Ma’am. It’s just the bugger on Julia’s nose.”

   Nagtawanan ang buong klase.

   “What? HOY!nililinisan ko palagi ang ilong ko noh. Gusto mo---”

   Hindi na napatuloy pa ni Julia ang sasabihin niya dahil umaksyon agad si Brian na tatakpan ang bibig niya kaya tumigil na lang ito sa pagsasalita at umiwas.

   Bumulong agad ako sa kanya “Sumakay ka na lang. Baka mapaguidance pa tayo eh.” Nakangiti pa.

   “Pinapahiya mo ako eh.”

   “Ok lang yun. Bagay naman sa’yo eh.”

   “Ang sama talaga ng ugali mo.”

   “Ok class. Tumahimik na kayo. Nasasayang ang oras ko.”

   Tumahimik naman ang lahat. Nginitian lang ni Brian si Julia habang nakasimangot ito.

   Nakakainis talaga ang Brian na yan. Pinapahiya ako. Di man lang ba niya iniisip yung mararamdaman ng tao. Napakamanhid talaga. Kaya siguro walang kaibigan kasi ang sama ng ugali. Eh kung isumbong ko kaya siya. Siya naman kaya ang nagsimulang kutyain yung pronunciation ng teachers naming. Sigurado mapapagalitan yan. Pero di bale na nga lang. Nakakainis talaga!!

   Natapos na ang klase nila. Uuwi na silang di nag-uusap. Nagtampo kasi agad si Julia. Wala namang pakialam si Brian.

Kinabukasan…

   “Hello” hindi ako pinansin. Galit ata. huh..ang babaw ng babaeng to.

   Buong umugang sumusulyap si Brian ngunit di talaga siya nilingon ni Julia. Gaya ng sinabi ko sa inyo, sensitive si Julia. Kahit mga ganung simpleng biro lang, nagtatampo agad siya. Masakit daw kasing isiping nakakaya ng isang tao na ipahiya siya.

   “May ipapagawa akong project sa inyo. Isang artwork. Bahala na kayong mamili kung anong klaseng art ang gusto niyo. You’ll do this by pair.”

   “Are we going choose our pair ma’am?”

   “No. You pick a paper here then hanapin niyo yung kapareho niyo ng color.”

   Kumuha na nga silang lahat ng paper.inunahan ni Julia ang iba niyang mga kaklase.

   Isip bata talaga. Ang babaw na tao.

   Hayun may mga pair na yung ibang classmates nila.

   Sana makapair ko siya.   

   “Pink? So girly.”

   Ay! sayang. Blue yung sakin.

     Gusto niyang makapair si Brian? Well sorry Julia things will not go your way.

    “Ma’am ala po akong makitang pink.” anong color ba naman kasi to eh. ang baduy ng teacher namin.

    Wala rin siyang pair. Ako rin di ko mahanap ang pair ko.

    “Hanapin mo na lang makikita mo rin yan.”

     “Ahm..Ma’am hindi ko rin mahanap yung pair ko.”

     “Lahat na ba kayo may pair?”

     “Opo Ma’am”

     “I guess both of you don’t have a color match so you two pair up.”

     “Ano pa bang magagawa natin?”

     “May sinasabi ka?”

     “wala”

     Pair kami. YES!!

     “So what are we going to do?”

     “Ha?”

        “Ok. Saturday, 9 am, sa bahay namin. Dun na lang din tayo mag-usap kung anong gagawin natin.”




 




kyaaa. first tagger! continue mo sis, interesting. supporter/reader here  :)
salamat sa pagsuporta
i'll read your story sa christmas vacation

ice i love it hihi :)
salamat super..sana ipagpatuloy mo yung pagbabasa nito

...this is interesting :D ;D


...tuloy tuloy ;)

...zai here. 13 :D
hi zai!!salamat sa pagbabasa

ate steff pala

parang familiar ang story?
hehehehe

pero i support you claud! :)
keep it up!  ;)


ate lala
nakabase lang dun pero di talaga ganito ang story
thanks for reading!!

hi po... excited na for chapter 1...

=)

nakakaexcite naman...

waiting for it..

telle here, 14..

hi kristelle!!
you can call me ate steff
i'll wait na mabasa mo to
thanks!!




please give this story a chance to bloom
bago pa lang po to
di ko po kayang gawing climax agad yung first chapter
basta i'll make sure na your time is not wasted
happy reading!!!!


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Re: THE ONE WHO WON MY ♥(audition) CHAPTER 1 POSTED!!
« Reply #9 on: December 14, 2008, 09:17:06 pm »
salamat sa pagsuporta
i'll read your story sa christmas vacation

anu kayang mangyayari sa pair-up nila? hohoho.
thanks sis.  :)

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« Reply #10 on: December 15, 2008, 04:56:19 pm »
Sis. Exciting ang storyyy. Tuloy mo na. Haha. Kakabitin yung chapter 1. Haha. :D

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« Reply #11 on: December 16, 2008, 04:02:48 pm »
Ngayon ko lang nabasa, Keep it up! Mukhang maganda nga talaga. XD
It was heaven--right smack in the middle of hell.

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« Reply #12 on: December 16, 2008, 04:27:25 pm »
to ate steff, ang cute naman, partner na sila.. hihihi.. parang ang gulo ata ni Julia ah.. hehehe... next chapter na pho.. hehehe... keep it up po..

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Re: THE ONE WHO WON MY ♥(audition) CHAPTER 1 POSTED!!
« Reply #13 on: December 16, 2008, 08:58:31 pm »
anu kayang mangyayari sa pair-up nila? hohoho.
thanks sis.  :)

sa tingin mo ano kaya?
abangan...


babasahin ko nga pala sana yung story mo kaya lang mali yung links na andun eh

Sis. Exciting ang storyyy. Tuloy mo na. Haha. Kakabitin yung chapter 1. Haha. :D

talaga??
sige naiinspire na akong gawin tong story na to
bukas may update na

Ngayon ko lang nabasa, Keep it up! Mukhang maganda nga talaga. XD

salamat ha
sana di ko kayo madisappoint


to ate steff, ang cute naman, partner na sila.. hihihi.. parang ang gulo ata ni Julia ah.. hehehe... next chapter na pho.. hehehe... keep it up po..


lahat naman talaga ng tao magulo
kaya nga hinahanap natin yung taong makakaintindi sa atin
yun rin ang hinahanap ni julia
salamat uli!!





sana dumami pa ang sumuporta sa story ko
bukas pala mag-uupdate na ako
magreply naman kayo para ganahan akong mag-isip
sige na please....

salamat!!!



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Re: THE ONE WHO WON MY ♥(audition) CHAPTER 1 POSTED!!
« Reply #14 on: December 17, 2008, 01:05:02 pm »
sa tingin mo ano kaya?
abangan...


babasahin ko nga pala sana yung story mo kaya lang mali yung links na andun eh



waaaaah.! mali ba? hmm. pero na-check ko na siya eh. try mo lang i-scroll down sis. di ko kasi alam kung papaano isasakto dun sa mismong post eh.  :)

thank you nga pala. wait ko next chap.  :D

 

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