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Author Topic: The Tiny Dancer - Back from HIATUS. (Notice on P. 4)  (Read 2568 times)

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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter One, posted.
« Reply #30 on: December 01, 2008, 04:31:02 pm »
HEYY GUYS. SORRY FOR THE DELAY. I`LL MAKE IT UP TO YOU.  :-* :-*



2. Leave Me Alone

Yohanna Marie

Ah, limelight, I surely miss my co-models. Yes, you heard it right, I was a model since I was 13 and I quitted when they tried to make me fly to England just to meet another model like me.

“Are you ready, sweetie? We can cancel the meeting today and move it back to Friday you know.” My mom, she`s the owner of Yulda Co. the most biggest and not to mention famous modeling agency in the whole world.

“Ready, Mom. I`ll just get Yuri ready for her appointment at the grooming parlor.” Yuri is my dog, she`s a Yorkshire Terrier, Dane gave it to me as a gift last Valentine`s day.

I ran to her room and stumbled upon Dane getting out of it. He smiled at me and said. “She`s in the car now, let`s go.” I smiled back, turning my face away from him and started to run again but he caught my hand shaking his head with disapproval.

“No running, remember?” He reminded me then he let go of my hand. I bowed down and ran anyway. He just sighed and laughed quietly.

“Don`t worry brother. Besides, I need my daily exercise, remember?” I told him and snatched my bag.

“Come now children, we`re going to be late.”

“We`re on it, Mom!” We shouted.

Yulda Co. Studios

I looked up to see the big name on the middle most part of the building. I haven`t been in here since I was like 14 years old! And now I`m turning 17, my mom is turning the business over to me next year.

“Some business woman you turn out to be.” He mumbled.

“Oh grow up, Dane! At least you get to have Yulda`s Animal Shelter in San Diego.” Honestly, me and modeling? Not a very good combination. I`d trade it with Dane`s anytime you know.

“I don`t even get along with Yuri very well.” True, she once bit his toe and played with his stuffs.

“Let`s go now kids. They are waiting for you on the 44th floor.” Woopee. How could I tell my mom that I don`t want this kind of business? So help me brain. Sigh.

“Good morning Mister and Miss Andrews.” They bowed down. Oh Dane would like this, being the boss and all.

“I don`t like them at all. The girls are all staring at me like there`s no tomorrow.” He whispered.

I just giggled. What can we do? All Andrews are head turners, he should get used to the fame.

“Yohanna? Yohanna Marie Andrews?” Some guy asked.

“Dane, can you fetch Yuri later?” I asked.

“I might, if you`d stop being rude to the person who`s talking to you.” Dane told me.

“What do you mean?” He pointed out the guy beside me and had a grin shape his lips.

“I`ll give you 3 minutes Mister---?”

“Oh you can call me Krey, Mister Andrews.” He grinned back.

“I can`t believe this! Krey Dwayne Lee?” Oh man, this is going to be a very long day.

“Excuse me, but I think that I was the one who had the permission to talk with this ‘Krey’ person.” Unfortunately, while I was talking, I found them laughing together and a meter away from me.

“Nice talking.” I whispered, then someone called me to go inside.

“Everyone, quiet down please. This is my daughter, Yohanna Marie Andrews.” As expected, she introduced me and commanded that I shall be called, “Miss Andrews is what you should call her.” Great.

“H-Hey you guys.” I stammered.

“Good morning Miss Andrews.” They greeted me in a chorus.

“So what do you plan to do, Miss Andrews?” One guy in a black suit asked. Oh man, what should I say?

“Now, now, I just brought her in just to be introduced. She won`t be expressing her thoughts for now.” Thank you mom!

“Hey mom, if you don`t mind. I`ll just go now.” I said.

“Sure honey, take care.” I kissed her goodbye and ran towards the door. Sadly, this happened…

*BLAG!*

Everyone came to my rescue and all I saw was this Krey person holding the knob and Dane laughing at me. And then I blacked out.



I slowly opened my eyes and felt a strange burst of emotion running down my veins.

“Oh honey! I`m so glad that you`re okay! You hit your head pretty hard.” She said.

“I wasn`t expecting that it`d be that bad, I`m sorry Yuna.” He looked down and pleaded once more.

“You don`t have the right to call me Yuna, so shut up and just leave me alone.” I was shocked by the way I acted because it sounded so harsh. But I don`t care, this is the strange burst of emotion that I was talking about, anger.

I saw Dane come in and I told him this:

“Could you please get out of my sight?! I`d rather die right now than see the two of you looking like you care for my condition.” I looked at Dane then at Krey, I closed my eyes and tears fell from them.
   




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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter Two posted.
« Reply #31 on: December 01, 2008, 04:44:09 pm »
...pers...may papable na :D :D

...curious ako jan kay krey :D
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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter Two posted.
« Reply #32 on: December 01, 2008, 04:54:23 pm »
Ayos. Yohanna pa talaga. ^-^
Nice update, Labs. *HUGS* Post more.

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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter Two posted.
« Reply #33 on: December 01, 2008, 04:56:45 pm »
 @ Zai -- Ako rin eh, curious din ako. Ewan ko nga kung bakit biglang sumulpot eh. :D Anyway, thanks for reading.

 @ Labs -- Eyy Labs. Thanks for reading. Ewan ko ba kung bakit lagi nalang konti yung nagagawa kong update. Hahaha. Thank you thank you. ^^
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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter Two posted.
« Reply #34 on: December 01, 2008, 05:02:54 pm »
@ Zai -- Ako rin eh, curious din ako. Ewan ko nga kung bakit biglang sumulpot eh. :D Anyway, thanks for reading.

 @ Labs -- Eyy Labs. Thanks for reading. Ewan ko ba kung bakit lagi nalang konti yung nagagawa kong update. Hahaha. Thank you thank you. ^^

 

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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter Two posted.
« Reply #35 on: December 01, 2008, 05:06:54 pm »
Poor Yuna... Who is Krey? Nice up... Next please! :)
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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter Two posted.
« Reply #36 on: December 01, 2008, 05:20:53 pm »
 @ Ramona -- Well then, let`s find out.  ;) Thanks.
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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter Two posted.
« Reply #37 on: December 01, 2008, 05:28:43 pm »
*woooot*
i love the names of your characters twinnie! lol..
next! next! haha..

demanding much! lols..

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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter Two posted.
« Reply #38 on: December 01, 2008, 06:02:59 pm »
 @ Pree -- Talaga? Hahaha. Salamat pree. Buti naman at nakakausap pa kita dito? :D
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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter Two posted.
« Reply #39 on: December 01, 2008, 06:19:42 pm »
ang cute kasi ng names nila.. haha..
ayun nga eh.. hay.. inactive na ako sa off-line eh. tapos stuck ako sa smart for the mean time.. tsk..

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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter Two posted.
« Reply #40 on: December 01, 2008, 07:20:22 pm »
ROYALLL. galeng its your name. hahahaha.
your the sister of DaneMYLABS. Lewl. ;D

Nakoo! DaneMYLABS ha, bakit mo kasi tinwanan si Royal nung na untog siya sa door. LAGOT KA! Hahaha ;D Mas kakampihan ko ngayon si Yuna. LOOL.

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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter Two posted.
« Reply #41 on: December 02, 2008, 05:10:35 pm »
uwa!the more you hate the more you love ang drama ni krey and yuna aa!  ;D
gee.ankkyut ng names && anjan na namaan si Dane  :-*!waaaaaa!   :D ;D ;D

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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter Two posted.
« Reply #42 on: December 02, 2008, 08:19:04 pm »
 @ Pree -- Glad that you liked `em. You`ll push through, why are you busy ba? Lapit na Christmas eh. Haha.

 @ Coke -- Actually, I`m the sister and creator of DaneYOURLABS. Hahaha. Sige, mag talo lang kayo, may something nananaman akong naisip. Bwahaha.

 @ Kea -- Teka, anong meron kay Dane? Hahaha. Nakita niyo nananaman ba yung mga muscles niya? Haha. Jokeee, salamat Kea.  :D
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« Reply #43 on: December 02, 2008, 08:57:14 pm »


 @ Kea -- Teka, anong meron kay Dane? Hahaha. Nakita niyo nananaman ba yung mga muscles niya? Haha. Jokeee, salamat Kea.  :D


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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter Two posted.
« Reply #44 on: December 03, 2008, 11:26:18 am »
Hey, Hanna!

First, I have to commend your grammar and way of writing. So good. The characters' lines were delivered well, very much congruent to the mood that they were trying to depict. ;) All I can say is great job, Hanna. ;) Keep the uppies coming! :)

 

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