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Author Topic: The Tiny Dancer - Back from HIATUS. (Notice on P. 4)  (Read 2297 times)

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The Tiny Dancer - Back from HIATUS. (Notice on P. 4)
« on: November 23, 2008, 12:56:52 pm »

The Tiny Dancer
“Believe in what your heart says and never miss a second of it.”


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Prologue
In this story, life is not a fairy tale. It won`t have a Happily Ever After like most stories do.
We just have to find out. Life might not have a fairy tale or a prince to save you at times when you need him the most, but there is one thing about my story that made us live our own unique happily ever after.

Mortified, as the witches of the 'Happily Ever After' are, for they are not present in this world. But there is something more powerful that only love, friendship and trust can defeat.

Sadly, this story won`t start with a ‘Once upon a time’ but it started when there were two completely different worlds, collide.
So let`s get ready, to witness my very own surprise.





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« Last Edit: February 25, 2009, 01:49:07 pm by o8hanna22 »
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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Come in please.
« Reply #1 on: November 23, 2008, 01:03:07 pm »
Nice intro...

I hope you continue this...

Cristine Jin here, 14...

 :)
« Last Edit: November 23, 2008, 02:43:43 pm by tsukushi_tin08 »


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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Come in please.
« Reply #2 on: November 23, 2008, 01:20:44 pm »
ROYALLLL! :]
-Nice prologue. LABLABYOO! :) :*

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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Come in please.
« Reply #3 on: November 23, 2008, 01:28:57 pm »
Nice into...

I hope you continue this...

Cristine Jin here, 14...

 :)


Heyyo, thanks. I will, promise made. ^^

ROYALLLL! :]
-Nice prologue. LABLABYOO! :) :*



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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Come in please.
« Reply #4 on: November 23, 2008, 01:53:08 pm »
Hi, nice prologue,, chapter 1 na po
btw, Kate here, 14
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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Come in please.
« Reply #5 on: November 23, 2008, 02:00:55 pm »
I love it, Labs. :) Keep it up.

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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Come in please.
« Reply #6 on: November 23, 2008, 02:08:17 pm »
nice.. :) nikki here. :)
I'll do anything for you.. This story is for you..
Cause I'd do anything you want me to for you
I'll do anything for you
Kill anyone for you..

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« Reply #7 on: November 23, 2008, 02:38:28 pm »
Your always welcome, royal :)
I'll support you, the story as well also ;)
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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Come in please.
« Reply #8 on: November 23, 2008, 02:46:20 pm »
.....kakaiba itech :D ;D

.....nice pro...

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« Reply #9 on: November 23, 2008, 02:52:17 pm »
woah.niceeeeeeee. :D
kea here to support. :))

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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter One, posted.
« Reply #10 on: November 23, 2008, 04:39:04 pm »
1. A Former Couple

Yohanna Marie

As soon as I heard the alarm clock ringing, my eyes were fully aware of the sun rays that covered them. And then it hit me, Ah morning! It`s the last week of summer, and I`m here wasting my time having a staring contest with the wall.

I stood up and looked at the person in the mirror. I`m not half bad, I just have bad perm. “That`s it! I`ll have a haircut!” I said to myself, triumphantly.

“Let`s say hooray to your new idea later and let`s go to the bookstore now!” My twin brother said, sarcastically. We do get along very well and do everything together except to disrespect each other.

“Oh Ha-Ha, Dane, keep it down, mom might hear us!” You see, mom doesn`t like it when we`re making noise early in the morning. That`s why she always post one rule on the cork board near our rooms just to remind us.

“Okay, but we have to buy our things now, we don`t have all the time you know.” He exclaimed. Don`t mind him, he`s just time conscious.

“Fine.” I mumbled. “Now let me do my rituals before I change my mind!” After I said that, he quickly took his feet with him and a second later, he was out of sight.

I slowly closed the door and started doing my morning rituals.



I am so psyched to see my friends again! “Correction, it`s our friends, Yunnie.”  And have I mentioned that my twin brother can read minds? Well, I guess I didn`t. We can`t explain how he can do it and we are not allowed to tell everyone, especially our mom.

“And your point is?” I asked, sarcastically. “Let`s just go.” He said while pulling my hand.

At last! We`re here, and I`m tired already. “Dane, why can`t we--” “Because we need to have our exercise and it`s just 15 blocks away from our house.” There he is again. I`m so very tired and I`m just wondering why we didn`t take his car instead of walking all the way to the bookstore.

“And when did we have to take our daily exercise?” Well, he always takes a jog around the park or walks his way to his destination when the sun is always up and awake. “…Miss Independent, won`t you come and spend a little time…”

So he`s listening to his IPod the whole time I was talking?! How Dane-ish. :D But I understand him, he can`t stop listening to other people`s minds. That`s why he needs to cloud up his mind so he couldn`t hear them.

So you`re probably confused right now, why does Dane have all the cool things? Why can`t Yunnie have one? Well, Dane doesn`t have all the cool things in life and I don`t know why I don`t have super cool powers, we`re just getting to it.  ::)

I tapped Dane`s shoulder lightly and said, “Isn`t that your girlfriend, Cassey?” I asked while pushing the cart, he looked at the person who I was referring to and said; “Yeah, and isn`t that your boyfriend, Derick?” I looked at him with disbelief.

“No, really, it`s them… Together.” His tone is mixed with pain and anger now. “I—I can`t believe this, no. This is not happening to me!” I left the push cart with Dane and hid where Derick and Cassey is visible. I heard their conversation:

“Hey Derick, how`s Yuna?” She was referring to me. “I don`t know, I haven`t talked to her in a while.” What?! But we just talked yesterday!

“How about Dane? How are the two of you?” He asked, obviously bored with the subject. “Oh us? We`re going nowhere. I don`t know why I even wasted the opportunity to break up with him at the bonfire party last weekend.” And there I saw Derick`s glittering eyes with joy. Then I stood up and quietly walked out of that place.

Why do I have the feeling that this day is going to be my worst?


Dane`s Point of View

I saw Yunnie stood up and walked towards my direction. She hasn`t told me anything yet, but I know. I can`t let them see me break down; I have to be strong for Yuna.

“So I heard. Don`t worry Yunnie. You`ll get you`re chance.” I told her while trying to calm her nerves down. “I`m going to be strong. I won`t let them get to me.” She said, holding her tears.

“Y—Yuna? D—Dane? Do you know each other?” And haven`t Yuna mentioned that they don`t know a single thing about our private lives? That`s some couple alright.

“Actually--” “Yes, do you?” Yuna told them with a confident smile. I don`t know how she does it but she seems perfectly fine to me. “What do you mean--?” Yuna cut Derick off and started telling me something, in her mind.

I just smiled as a sign of approval.

“Quit changing the topic and answer me, Derick.” She said. “A—Actually Yuna, we do--”  :-[ Cassey answered her question. “Shut up, Cassey, I`m not talking to you.” She said that with pure authority that made Cassey look... How can I say this, mortified?

“What the hell was that for, Yuna?”  >:( He asked furiously. “Oh, now you want to know what I`m up to, huh Derick?” The way she speaks right now, it seems so unbelievable that she`s even serious about this conversation. She speaks so calm like nothing had happened.

“What happened to you, Babe? Is this even you?” The way I see it from Derick`s head, he seems to be out of the box. Confused, I might say.

“You disgust me, Derick. And don`t call me babe, we`re not even a couple anymore.” She said, while being such a snob all of a sudden.

Let`s go now, I don`t want to waste another minute with these losers. I read her mind and Derick`s as well. What the hell?! Is she breaking up with me?! Poor, Derick.  ;D He doesn`t even know a thing.

“Wait, before I forget, Cassey?” I said while having a grin shape my lips. “Yes, Honey?” I laughed at the thought of having her as my slave. “Get out of our way if you still want to meet tomorrow.” I heard Yuna giggle. I don`t know why but I feel much better, all of a sudden. 

©The Tiny Dancer




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@Labs -- Heyy, you`re here. Thank you so much. Love you, laaaabs. :]

@Nikki -- Thanks. Nice to meet you.  :-D

@Coke -- Thank you so much talaga. Eto na update oh. :D

@Zai -- Heyyo Zai. Thanks for being here. Sobra. :>

@Kea -- Thank you talaga. ^^
« Last Edit: February 25, 2009, 01:55:15 pm by o8hanna22 »
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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter One, posted.
« Reply #11 on: November 23, 2008, 05:59:07 pm »
...pers... :D

...mga taksil kayo >:(

...ang galing nmn ni dane ;D nakakbasa ng mind ::) :D
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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter One, posted.
« Reply #12 on: November 23, 2008, 06:02:50 pm »
Second!!!

Tama!!! Agree ako kay Zai... nakaka read sya ng mind and it was really cool!!!

Nako!!! Break na si Yuna at Derick??? eh sina Dane at Cassey???

Hindi ba nila alam na kambal sila??? huh???

BTW, nice chapter 1!!!



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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter One, posted.
« Reply #13 on: November 23, 2008, 06:07:24 pm »
aishhh.... bakit naman ganun pa?
Taksil parehas mga labidabs nila! >:(
btw, ang cool ni Dane, mind-reader hehe ;)
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Re: The Tiny Dancer -- Chapter One, posted.
« Reply #14 on: November 23, 2008, 07:13:22 pm »
@Zai -- Oo nga eh, sana totoo mga mind reading humans na yan. :D

@Jin -- Si Dane at Cassey? Tanong natin sakanila gusto mo? Hahaha. Sasagot yan, promise. :D Thanks. ^^

@Kate -- Oo nga, sama nila noh? Magsisisi din sila sa huli. Haha.
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