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Author Topic: One More Chance © [Chapter o.25] Valuable- Salamat sa support!  (Read 35338 times)

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Re: One More Chance © [Chapter o.24] ..Tears..
« Reply #945 on: September 13, 2009, 10:46:56 pm »
@krizzy: Hindi ko alam eh, wag ka mag-alala, tatanungin ko. ^-^

@Farshyn: Happy Endings? :-X Mahirap yata yun.

@.o4: Nawala inspiration ko eh. :-X Hahahaha. Joke lang .o4, Joke lang.

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Re: One More Chance © [Chapter o.25] ..Valuable..
« Reply #946 on: September 13, 2009, 11:44:17 pm »

Chapter o.25


(Valuable)

I was crying, hindi pwedeng mawala ngayon si Gaile, not now. She's too young, madami pa kaming plans sa life, hindi pwede, hindi! then, lumabas yung doctor. "Mr. Vergara, I have a good news for you." Good news ba na wala na si Gaile? :'( Hindi naman eh. Hindi! I was crying so hard that I looke so miserable. "Ms. Ramirez, she's . . . safe." Safe? :o Gaile's safe? Thank God. "But she needs more time to rest, makakasama para sa baby." She's pregnant?!

"Doc? S-ss--hee's what?!" I don't think she's, no she's not. "Jake? Buntis si Gaile? You certainly don't know about this."

"Wala akong idea, she's never mentioned having a baby. We did something on our honeymoon but, that's it." Hindi ko lang maisip na tinago pa sa'kin ni Gaile 'to. She's not that kind of girl, she'll tell one of us.

"You can visit her tomorrow she needs to rest, no stress, bad for the baby." Ok. Too unusual

* * * *

Next morning, nagmadali naman kaming bisitahin sa room niya si Gaile, masyadong excited maging ninang? Haha. "Hi Gaile! How's the baby?"

"Love, gusto mo din ng sariling baby? ^-^" Si John, ang kulit lang eh! ;D

"Ok na si JC, yun na lang alagaan natin."

"Hindi naman sa'tin yun eh. Kapatid ko yun eh. Gusto ko yung baby John at Cezz. ^-^"

"Che! Alagaan muna natin ang baby nila Jake, wag ka muna makisabay."

"Inunahan mo naman kasi ako Jake eh!"

"Ewan ko sa'yo John, tara nga bili muna tayo ng pagkain natin. Gulo mo din eh!" And they left us. I looked at Gaile, my tears began falling.

"Bakit ka umiiyak?" then they fell as if they were raindrops falling during a stormy night. "Hindi ka ba happy that I stayed?" I ran to her then I hugged her. "Don't be childish Cess, I'm here to stay, as long as you want."

"Never going to leave?" She shook her head sideways. "I Love You Gaile."

"The change you got for giving John One More Chance" Then I cried more. "Life worth living?"

"Definitely." Then we laugh, I told her my moments at the chapel when I thought she's ****. "Don't you ever give that feeling again, I swear. I'll be mad next time."

"You never know what you got until it's gone, remember?"

"You don't need to die before I know your important, don't be insane. I know how valuable you are ok?"

* * * *

After that day, everything went on as usual, after Gaile's hospital moments we went back here at Pier Uno, 'di ko alam kung bakit gustong-gusto namin dito, but it's just like that. "Cess, have you ever regretted giving me another chance?"

"Never, not at all." And all was well, forever.




Credits;

mnstr, salamat kasi sabi mo tuloy ko 'to. Ayan! Done na!
ANNA, sa lahat ng support .o4, kahit hindi na related eh, ni-rrelate mo parin! Mahal kita. ;)
READERS, Salamat sa pag-suporta, mahal ko kayo, sobra!


Here's the next story of Cezz,
-> ALLABOUTLOVE



Love,
Ms. Author. ;)
« Last Edit: September 13, 2009, 11:48:10 pm by cezzo18 »

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Re: One More Chance © [Chapter o.25] Valuable- Salamat sa support!
« Reply #947 on: September 14, 2009, 06:48:51 pm »
sa wakas may updat na hehe kakatouch naman un hhehe
The greatest part of life is finding someone
who knows all your faults and weaknesses but still thinks you're amazing

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Re: One More Chance © [Chapter o.25] Valuable- Salamat sa support!
« Reply #948 on: September 14, 2009, 10:43:14 pm »
Awwww ^^ Natouch naman ako. HAHA! .o4!! Bakit ang.... ikli? BITIN! MORE! MORE! MOOOOOOORE!  ;D :D ;D

Haaaay, sa wakas, they lived happily ever after na sila. :D Si John (dyan sa story), super kulit pa rin as in! Ay lab it!  ;D

BRAVO! *applause*

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Re: One More Chance © [Chapter o.25] Valuable- Salamat sa support!
« Reply #949 on: September 16, 2009, 08:38:18 am »
@janne: Hahahahaha! ;D Sorry naman. :P

@.o4: Eh, makulit naman talaga si John .o4 nu! ;D Parang hindi ka pa nasanay! Suz! JC ka lang eh! >:D

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Re: One More Chance © [Chapter o.25] Valuable- Salamat sa support!
« Reply #950 on: September 16, 2009, 06:18:02 pm »
.o4 naman, wag mo idamay ang mga hindi dapat dinadamay.. :D nananahimik yung taong yun dun oh.. DOON! napakalayo.  ;D

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Re: One More Chance © [Chapter o.25] Valuable- Salamat sa support!
« Reply #951 on: September 18, 2009, 02:23:38 pm »
wait!

the end na yun?
BiTiN pa rin AKO!



ang galing.. nabuhay si Gaile.!

very good. very good. [:

hahaha

LIFE and LOVE is a bi*tch..
KARMA is too.

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Re: One More Chance © [Chapter o.25] Valuable- Salamat sa support!
« Reply #952 on: September 18, 2009, 06:03:31 pm »
err, hindi pa tapos to, right? hehe.
update ulit! namiss ko din tong story na to.
shockers naman about yung kay gaile saka un baby. wahahaha.
And when the stars fall, I will lie awake. You're my shooting star. <3

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Re: One More Chance © [Chapter o.25] Valuable- Salamat sa support!
« Reply #953 on: September 18, 2009, 07:11:46 pm »
hi sis new reader is here! ;)
One look
One smile
One touch
One embrace
One kiss
One love
Two people
Two minds
Two souls
Two destinies
One road
One journey
One ending
Together.

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Re: One More Chance © [Chapter o.25] Valuable- Salamat sa support!
« Reply #954 on: September 23, 2009, 11:12:54 pm »
@.o4: Hindi ako nang-dadamay, sadyang kasali lang talaga sila nu! ;D

@Krizzy:/b] Well, Gusto niyo ba ng continuation? ::)

@Farshyn: Tapos na ba? Gusto niyo pa ba ng continuation?

@_rockerry_2391: Hi sis! ;) Ano name mo po? Cezz here!

:)ANNA(:

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Re: One More Chance © [Chapter o.25] Valuable- Salamat sa support!
« Reply #955 on: September 24, 2009, 10:46:28 pm »
haha! ay.. if i know..  ;D
.o4, tapos na 'to diba? hahaha. kasi naman ehh.. bitin!  ;D

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Re: One More Chance © [Chapter o.25] Valuable- Salamat sa support!
« Reply #956 on: September 25, 2009, 01:35:14 pm »
hi ate new reader po  :)
love and like your story ate. :)
may kasunod po ba ito? hehehe. xD

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Re: One More Chance © [Chapter o.25] Valuable- Salamat sa support!
« Reply #957 on: September 26, 2009, 10:33:51 pm »
cezz!!

back..ahaha...hahabulin ko tOng story muh...
ahaha..
musta na c John at c cess?
ahehe...miss ko kayong lahat  :-*

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Re: One More Chance © [Chapter o.25] Valuable- Salamat sa support!
« Reply #958 on: September 27, 2009, 09:58:26 pm »
@.o4: Kaya nga tinatanong kita kung gusto mo ng Part Two eh. :)

@imim17: Hi! Cezz here, and you are? Salamat! ;) Well, yung Someone to Love, parang part two na lang din. Kasi, magka=ugali sila nung bida. :-P

@Miss P: Na-miss ka naman ni John at Cess. ;)

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Re: One More Chance © [Chapter o.25] Valuable- Salamat sa support!
« Reply #959 on: September 28, 2009, 01:30:54 pm »
Part two? MAY PART TWO? Pero... tapos na kayo ni.... Uhhh.... Joke! :D Sige ba! Part two na, go!

 

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