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One More Chance © [Chapter o.25] Valuable- Salamat sa support!
« on: November 14, 2008, 09:12:30 pm »

One More Chance


© cezz.angelica || 2oo8

Princess Jan H. Ramirez

Patrick John N. Castillo

Abegaile H. De Vera

Jacob Samuel D. Vergara

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TABLE OF CONTENTS

Introduction TRAILER :)


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"He never meant to let her go.
But she loathed him for doing so.
Can they still fulfill the 'promise',
When they both remembered 'nothing'."




PREFACE

Ano ba naman 'tong si Princess oh! Haaaay. Princess, gising na. Your parents are already on their way outside. Baka hindi mo na maabutan yun!

After I heard my Ate Stephanie told that my parents are already leaving. I stood up right away and run for the door, pero, bago pa ako maka-baba ng stairs naka-alis na yung mommy ko. Mommy! :'( Hindi man lang sila lumingon, bakit kaya ganun ang parents ko? :'(

Kawawa naman ang alaga ko, bakit ba ganun ba sila? Kawawang bata. Princess, maligo ka na. Sige na.

Ate Steph, Yung mommy mo ba ganun din? Iniiwan ka rin ba nila? :'( Even though I want to curse them both, hindi ko magawa! Funny right? :'( Hindi ba nila ako love Ate Steph? Bakit sila ganun? :'(

Princess, Love ka ng parents mo, they just need to work. And need talaga nila na umalis, para mabigay nila yung needs mo.  Sige na, Stop crying na, Dadating daw sila John ngayon sabi ng Tita Eva mo.

Sila John? YEY! Mag-lalaro nanaman kami ni John-John! ;D

Sige na, maligo ka na. Baka abutan ka nanaman ni John na hindi pa naliligo, aasarin ka nanaman nun! Sige, aakyat lang ako at hahanda ko na yung gamit mo.

Ok. Ate Steph, gusto ko yung favorite kong dress ah!  Matagal na rin hindi nag-visit sila John dito eh!

Of course princess.Sige na. :D


Ang tagal naman ni John, nasan na kaya yun? Ate Steph? Dadating ba sila? Doon muna ako sa tree house ah! Sayang naman yung dress ko nu! Pumunta na ako sa garden, umakyat ako ng tree house namin. :) Pinagawa 'to ng parents ko para samin ni John. Naka-pig tails ako ngayon na pink, dress na pink, slippers na pink. Kasi, color coding namin ni John ngayon pink! Ang hindi sumunod sa color coding, hindi kakausapin. ;D  Naka-higa ako dun sa bed ko, may bed din si John, blue naman yung sa kanya. Hindi mainit dito kasi, may AC naman.

I am wearing a blue short, blue shirt, and a blue cap. Pwwiiincessss!! Aii! Tulog pala siya, pumasok ako ng dahan-dahan, umupo ako doon sa side ng bed niya. I stared at her, she really is beautiful, sabihin niyo man na masyado pa akong bata to recognize the opposite sex. OO! masyado akong feeling mature. I stared at her knowing that this could possibly be the last time I could.

John! Let's go. Ma-lalate na tayo sa fight natin.

My mom shouted, buti na lang hindi nagising si Princess. Wait lang mommy! I stared at her againl. Sorry Princess, Sabi ni Mommy babalik din kami, mga madaming tulog lang daw yun. Lagi ka titingin sa stars ah. Wag mo kakalimutan.. You are the only Princess of my life. Then, I went outside, leaving a letter sa mailbox niya. After my last step sa ladder, she called out for me.

John-John! :'( Nagising ako when he shouted at Tita Eva. Saan ba siya pupunta? Akala ko ba hindi mo ako iiwan? Saan ka pupunta? :'( Hindi na siya lumingon, kahit anong sigaw ko ng pangalan niya wala na siyang paki-alam. :'( I hate you John-John! :'( :'(

Mommy, Sandali lang please? :'( Then she nodded, I ran up the ladder then embraced Princess. Babalik din ako PJ! Babalik din naman ako. Don't worry. :)

Ayaw ko na sa'yo! Hindi mo na ako love, iiwan mo na din ako katulad nila mommy! :'( Hindi ka pa sumunod sa color coding natin! Galit ako sayo PJ! Galit ako sayo! :'(

Princess, Wag ka na magalit, please?

I don't want to cut their moment of truth, pero, John and I are already late sa flight namin. John, let's go. Princess, We're going back.

Princess, hintayin mo ako ah? Wag ka mag-lolove ng iba. Ok? Gusto ko, PJ for life ka pa rin! Pag-balik ko mag-lalaro ulit tayo. Tapos, lahat ng dreams mo tutuparin natin. ok? Princess for life ako! Bye, Princess ma-mimiss kita. :'(

Bahala ka! Ayaw ko na sayo PJ! :'( Umalis ka na! Wag ka na babalik hindi na kita bati for life! Magagawa ko lahat ng dreams ko kahit mag-isa lang ako! Hindi na kita kailangan PJ! I HATE YOU! tapos, umalis na siya. :'( :'( Ni-lock ko na yung door, humiga ako sa bed ko, umiyak ako hanggang gabi. They are trying to open it pero I won't. Binantayan ako nila Ate Stephanie sa baba ng tree house. One week ako nag-stay dun, hanggang sa na-get over ko na yung nangyari. :-\

After 13 years...

Princess, gising na. Your parents are already on their way outside. Baka hindi mo na maabutan yun!

After I heard my Ate Stephanie told that my parents are already leaving. I stood up right away and run for the door, pero, bago pa ako maka-baba ng stairs naka-alis na yung mommy ko. Ate Steph, kailan ko kaya sila maabutan? When will they ever say goodbye? It's unfair! Haaay. :-\ Sige na Ate Steph, wala lang akong mapapala sa ka-dramahan ko! ;D Yung fa--- pinaka-magandang pantalon ko ah. :D May masasabi dapat ako, ewan ko kung bakit. And this scene looks a sad dejavu. Bakit kaya?

After Princess prepared for her rehearsals, nag-pahatid na kaagad siya sa driver niya. :) Habang sila ay nasa school...

Jan-jan! :DAbegaile H. De Vera. :) Ako ang pinaka-matalik na best friend ni Jan. :D Well, wala ng mas close pa sa kanya kung hindi ako! :D mwahaha ;D ;D

Gaile, tapatin mo nga ako. *then I placed her in front of me* Adik ka ba? ;D then she looked at me seriously. Ganyan lang talaga kami mag-tanungan ni Gaile. She was my very best of the best friend. ;D Joke! ;D ;D

Jan, Kung gusto mong matuloy lahat ng balak mo sa mundo, umayos ka ah! pwede ba, tigilan mo ako! PJ! ;D Ang cute ah! PJ! PJ! PJ!

PJ? It sounds familiar, even though ngayon lang ako natawag na PJ. Masyado lang sigurog magulo ang utak ko, masyadong madami ang iniisip ko. :-\ Yuck! Cut it off Gaile, mukha na ba akong lesbian ngayon? Oo, aaminin ko, compared sa mga girls dito sa campus namin wala akong masyadg arte sa katawan. Simple but elegant? Nah. I don't think so.

I never saw Princess at her best. She looks pretty everyday, pero, iba pa rin kung aayusan siya. She'll look like a beauty queen. Jan, napansin mo naman siguro yung napapansin ko diba? :P

Yeah. Pero, Gaile, you know how I don't need.. vanity diba? There are so much to do, wala akong time para sa ganyan.

Jan, ako na ang nag-sasabi sayo, tatanda kang dalaga sa ginagawa mo. Ikaw rin! Naglalakad kami ngayon papunta ng auditorium, mapa-isip sana ang kaibigan ko. Madami naman nanliligaw sa kanya, pero, kahit isa wala naman siyang sinasagot. Bakit kaya?

May point nga naman si Gaile. Gaile, Alam mo naman kung ano ang gusto ko diba?

Oo naman Jan! Simple lang naman ang gusto mo diba? A guy that will walk with you on the beach as the sun sets, a guy that will sacrifice everything for you? A guy that will stay with you under the stars on a perfect night? Ang simple lang nu? Yun lang kasi ang mahirap kay Jan, she tends to look for something that is impossible to find.

DANG it! She's using her sarcasm again. A guy like that exist naman diba? Bakit naman si Edward Cullen?

So Jan, nasan na ang common sense mo? Vampire si Edward nu! a fictional character! Jan, you're on reality not on a book.

Malay mo.. I can dream right? tsaka, dadating din siya.. someday. :D





Readers, heto nanaman ako, nag-sisimula ulit. :D
Sana po bigyan niyo ng pansin ang aking story.
Salamat po. :) Don't forget to watch the trailer. ;)

Love,
Ms. Author. ;)
« Last Edit: September 13, 2009, 11:51:28 pm by cezzo18 »

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« Reply #1 on: November 14, 2008, 09:50:18 pm »
....nice intro ;D :D...ankyut

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« Reply #2 on: November 15, 2008, 01:14:32 pm »
....nice intro ;D :D...ankyut

zai here ;)


ehehehe.
Salamat. :)

hello zai. CEZZ here

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« Reply #3 on: November 15, 2008, 02:08:06 pm »


sis thanks for sharing the story..

next chapter na po..

:)

mas gusto ko kasi magread than to watch the trailer :)

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« Reply #4 on: November 15, 2008, 02:09:32 pm »


sis thanks for sharing the story..

next chapter na po..

:)

mas gusto ko kasi magread than to watch the trailer :)

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No prob. :) Salamat sa pag-daan. ;)
Pagpatuloy mo mag-read ah.

Ano nga po pala name mo? ^^
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« Reply #5 on: November 15, 2008, 02:39:27 pm »
...hi cezz :D...

...ur welcome ;)
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« Reply #6 on: November 15, 2008, 02:48:53 pm »
` hey, nice story. :)
di ba meron ng story na Hate that I Love You? :]
hmm, anyway. continue mo ah?  ;D

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« Reply #7 on: November 15, 2008, 02:49:55 pm »
...hi cezz :D...

...ur welcome ;)


no prob po. :)
continue mo po sana mag-read. :)

` hey, nice story. :)
di ba meron ng story na Hate that I Love You? :]
hmm, anyway. continue mo ah?  ;D


oh? sorry. sige, palitan ko na lang siguro title. :|

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« Reply #8 on: November 15, 2008, 02:50:52 pm »
oh? sorry. sige, palitan ko na lang siguro title. :|


` Hmm. okay lang yan. Hehe.

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« Reply #9 on: November 15, 2008, 03:00:27 pm »
` Hmm. okay lang yan. Hehe.

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ano ba ang mgandang title? ;D ;D baka kasi magalit yung author eh. :P

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« Reply #10 on: November 15, 2008, 04:16:18 pm »
No prob. :) Salamat sa pag-daan. ;)
Pagpatuloy mo mag-read ah.

Ano nga po pala name mo? ^^
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« Reply #11 on: November 15, 2008, 04:23:17 pm »
raine here sis...

loraine is my real name...

a college student, BEED-SPED
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« Reply #12 on: November 15, 2008, 05:36:48 pm »
aii nakooo.. nagtatampo parin ako sa FORBIDDEN LOVE..tsktsk..
tama raw bang ilock?! wahaha.. tapusin mo toh .o4 ah?
support ko talaga toh. hmmp. :D

nice trailer! gumaganon! hahaha..
yung new story ko, ndi na trailer... MOVIE na!
wahaha jokes... basta abangan mo nalang din.
Wii. lahi ng mga eyebags! attack! hahaha..
;D KOREKADOODLES!  ;D

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« Reply #13 on: November 15, 2008, 05:38:55 pm »
aii nakooo.. nagtatampo parin ako sa FORBIDDEN LOVE..tsktsk..
tama raw bang ilock?! wahaha.. tapusin mo toh .o4 ah?
support ko talaga toh. hmmp. :D

nice trailer! gumaganon! hahaha..
yung new story ko, ndi na trailer... MOVIE na!
wahaha jokes... basta abangan mo nalang din.
Wii. lahi ng mga eyebags! attack! hahaha..


.o4! tama bang manlaglag. ;D ;D ;D
wahaha. .o4 naman eh. :P
OO, promise hindi ko na ito i-lolock. :P
Salamat sa support .o4! YAY! :D Love mo talaga ako nu?
Nandito pa rin si John. hindi pwedeng WALA! ;D ;D ;D

Oo na, tama na. Lahi na nga kami ng eye-bags. :D
mwahaha ;D ;D ;D

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« Reply #14 on: November 15, 2008, 05:58:54 pm »
new reader here!

I like your story...gusto ko mga ganitong story..childhood love..hehe..

kapangalan ko pa yung bida..hehe... :D ;D

princess po pala...

next upie na po!..pls..




 

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