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.::Downfall Chronicles::. the END.
« on: November 06, 2008, 07:02:00 pm »






DOWNFALL CHRONICLES
when will he ever accept my love?


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The Figures: (click numbers for pics. ^-^ enjoy!)

Serene Cruz 1 x 2 x 3 x 4
Sophie de Vera 1
Chyna
Mina Seanne
Charlotte Santos 1 x 2
Francine Tan 1 x 2

Daelan Tanseco 1
Crayon Cruz 1
Grey
Valen
Drake
Nico Lee 1


CHAPTER LINKS.

1 x 2 x 3 x 4 x 5 x 6 x 7 x 8 x 9 x 10 x 11 x 12 x 13 x 14 x 15 x 16 x 17 x 18 x 19 x 20 x 21 x 22 x 23 x 24 x 25 x 26 x 27 x 28 x 29 x 30 x 31 x 32 x 33 x 34 x 35 x 36 x 37 x 38 x 39 x 40 x 41 x 42 x 43 x 44 x 45 x 46 x 47 x 48 x 49 x 50 x 51 x 52 x 53 x 54 x 55 x 56 x 57 x 58







Probably, the person who can experience a series of HEARTACHES from ONE PERSON (only) in a long period of time... is the DUMBEST of all! :'( :-[





But it can’t be helped.
I can’t help it.

It's just that simple... I CAN'T DAMN HELP IT!







START
Serene Cruz





Sa isang gabing maulan at madilim. Nagsimula akong magkagusto kay Daelan Tanseco noong Grade 3 pa ako! Nang nagkaroon kami ng Girl Scout and Boy Scout Camp! Kami ni Sophie ang magkasama noon! Hindi sana ako papayagan ni Mama at Papa dahil bumabagyo noon at takot ako sa kulog, kaya lang pinilit ko sila at sinabi kong nandyan naman si Crayon - ang aking pinsan. Kahit ngayon, malinaw parin sa alaala ko ang mga nangyari sa gabing yun!

Since kinder, classmate ko na si Dae. Tahimik siya. Saka lang siya nagsasalita o nag-iingay kapag kasama niya sina Grey, Crayon, Valen, at Drake; kaya naman hindi ko na lang siya pinapansin. Pero I think... something is something with him. I don't know but I feel like there is something in him that I can't resist... or maybe something between us! Hindi naman kami nagpapansinan, pero I still notice him. Or maybe, talagang hindi niya ako pinapansin! HEHE.

Pero, saka ko lang narealize kung ano yung nararamdaman ko sa kanya pagkatapos nang gabing yun. Walang ulan pero madilim. Mga flashlight at ilaw na galing sa mga teachers namin ang maliwanag. May mga tent na rin. Lumabas kami ni Sophie para maglakad-lakad nang biglang kumidlat at kumulog ng napakalakas. I can`t help but run away. OO, NAKAKATAKOT! Natatakot ako sa kulog! Si Sophie naman ay natakot sa akin dahil baka saan ako mapunta, so she called the teachers! She informed my cousin! And me? I'm running away with myself on the forest! NABIGLA AKO, at ganito ako kalala. I CAN'T HELP IT! Ewan ko kung bakit ako napunta sa isang napakalaking kahoy. I hid myself on its roots. It rained hard, and I don't know what to do. Umiyak ako ng umiyak. Kasabay ng pag-iyak ko, ang kulog at kidlat!


"Ano? Tumakbo si Serene!?"
"Oo! Teacher, she headed that way!"

Nagsimula nang humupa ang ulan. Parang flash rain lang yung nangyari pero nagpatuloy ang kulog at kidlat. May nakita akong anino, and I saw a familiar face.

"Dae." Hikbi parin ako ng hikbi.

He handed his hand. "Hinahanap ka na nina teacher at nina Crayon. Halika na! SUMAMA KA SAKIN!"

His face was light for me at that time.

"P-pero," Kumulog ng malakas! I cried and he hugged me.
"Wa'g kang mag-alala, andito lang ako." He was always cool since forever.

Matagal din akong naghintay, pero kahit may kumukuha na sa akin ngayon... I still doubt. Baka matamaan kami ng kidlat!

"Kanina ka pa naghihintay diba?" He wiped my tears, "andito na ako. Halika na!" Hinawakan niya ang nanginginig kong kamay then we both ran away.

THAT WAS THE HIGHLIGHT OF MY ELEMENTARY YEARS! Yes, because after that... there was nothing but NOTHING!

Simula noon, nagustuhan ko na si Dae. Si Dae na walang alam kundi magsuplado at manlait! Kailangan ko pang tanggapin ang masaklap na katotohanan na ganun ang ugali ng lalaking nagustuhan ko. Pero kung gaano ka sahol ang pag-uugali ng Dae na yan, ganon din ka gwapo ang mukha niya. Habang tumatagal, lalo siyang gumugwapo. Maybe I am just hooked with his beauty! When we reached Grade six, we were still at the same class. At nag-aalala akong baka hindi ko masabi sa kanya ang nararamdaman ko hanggang gumraduate kami. VALENTINE'S DAY of our Graduating year nang napagdesisyonan kong bigyan siya ng love letter!

"Serene, sigurado ka na ba talaga sa gagawin mo?"
"Oo, Sophie! This is it!" Sabi ko.
"Pero, baka ipabasa niya yan kahit kanino!"
"huh? Hindi naman siguro, Sophie." I frowned.

Si Sophie - hanggang ngayon, bestfriends parin kaming dalawa. We share almost the same attitude, kaya lang mas private lang siya at may pagkaseryoso minsan.

"Hoy, Serene! Love letter ba yan?" Tanong ng pinsan kong si Crayon.
"Huh? H-Hindi ah!"
"Naku! Hindi ka parin talaga marunong magsinungaling! Akin na nga!"

Agad kong tinago ang loveletter at kinaladkad si Sophie. Yung walang hiyang Crayon na yun talaga! Baliin ko kaya yung leeg nun! Pasalamat siya`t pinsan ko siya!

"HOOOY! Serene, para kanino ba `tong love letter?" Lumingon ako kay Crayon habang ipinapakita ang pinaghirapan kong love letter. Malayu-layo na rin ang narating namin ni Sophie sa paglalakad, pero kitang kita ko ang malalaking hearts sa labas ng envelope! Kitang kita ko rin sina Dae at kanyang mga kasama na inuusisa ang love letter ko. WITH THEIR EVIL SMILE!




 :o
 :o
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NOOO... NO. No. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~! :'(







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« Last Edit: March 22, 2009, 07:44:08 pm by jonaxx »

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« Reply #1 on: November 06, 2008, 07:26:33 pm »
ako ang first! ako ang first! waha..
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Probably, the person who can experience a series of HEARTACHES from ONE PERSON (only) in a long period of time... is the DUMBEST of all! :'( :-[





But it can’t be helped.
I can’t help it.

It's just that simple... I CAN'T DAMN HELP IT!

aww! nakarelate ako dun!
next na ate jonahnahnah.. lol..[/color]

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« Reply #2 on: November 06, 2008, 07:50:46 pm »
ako ang first! ako ang first! waha..
aww! nakarelate ako dun!
next na ate jonahnahnah.. lol..
hehe! Thanks arianne! I YAYed you!
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« Reply #3 on: November 06, 2008, 11:22:07 pm »
OO meron.. continue mo lang... hehehe.... ;D

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« Reply #4 on: November 07, 2008, 12:37:10 am »
wooot! GANDA!
another good story :)

weeh! takot din ako sa kidlat noon. :o
hahahaha.

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« Reply #5 on: November 07, 2008, 03:04:14 am »
WOW. Another story ! HAHAHA.
Nextttt na xD I'll support this one too. ;D
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« Reply #6 on: November 07, 2008, 03:19:00 am »
next please... :)
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« Reply #7 on: November 07, 2008, 05:32:51 am »
hala ?! :o ... etong Crayon tlgang toh ! >:( ;D ehehe .. awee ! very nice intro poh .. danda tlga ! :D awee ! continue mho poh .. dami mgbabasa nito .. hehe .. ge poh .. tcgbu :)
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« Reply #8 on: November 07, 2008, 12:24:14 pm »
OO meron.. continue mo lang... hehehe.... ;D
hehe, okay okay! thanks! ;D

wooot! GANDA!
another good story :)

weeh! takot din ako sa kidlat noon. :o
hahahaha.
thanks! Ako rin eh. haha. ;D

WOW. Another story ! HAHAHA.
Nextttt na xD I'll support this one too. ;D
If you dont remember pala, I'm Daphne. xD
hehe, thanks Daphne!
Nice name. ;D
Thanks for supporting my other stories!

next please... :)
LOL. Okay!
Thanks for reading. hehe :D

hala ?! :o ... etong Crayon tlgang toh ! >:( ;D ehehe .. awee ! very nice intro poh .. danda tlga ! :D awee ! continue mho poh .. dami mgbabasa nito .. hehe .. ge poh .. tcgbu :)
hehe, okay!
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« Reply #9 on: November 07, 2008, 03:10:23 pm »
with evil gr talaga.. hahah... boys like me will be boys... hahaha... Kakahiya naman yun for Serene's part... and to her cousin... hahah... very mean...like me... haha..

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« Reply #10 on: November 07, 2008, 06:50:39 pm »
hi ate jonah!!
mukhang na.intriga ako sa intro mo ah..
hahahahaha...
support ko to...
i wanna see what happens next??
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« Reply #11 on: November 07, 2008, 07:30:44 pm »
welcome :)

weeehh! NEXT, NEXT :D

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« Reply #12 on: November 07, 2008, 07:34:08 pm »
wow new story..! I'll support this..! Goodluck po!
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« Reply #13 on: November 07, 2008, 08:57:47 pm »
with evil gr talaga.. hahah... boys like me will be boys... hahaha... Kakahiya naman yun for Serene's part... and to her cousin... hahah... very mean...like me... haha..
hahaha. LOL.

hi ate jonah!!
mukhang na.intriga ako sa intro mo ah..
hahahahaha...
support ko to...
i wanna see what happens next??

hehe, salamat!
sana basahin mo ang nextie. ;D

welcome :)

weeehh! NEXT, NEXT :D
yeahhh, thanks!
i`ll post it tonight!

wow new story..! I'll support this..! Goodluck po!
hehe, yeah! thanks!
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« Reply #14 on: November 07, 2008, 10:19:27 pm »
;D Thanks for the comments everyone, I`ll post the 1st part of the FLASHBACK right now... so... ;D I hope you`ll like it! Please please comment! I really need comments. ;D








1st Fall
Serene Cruz: Makikita mo, Dae!






"DEAR DAE!" Pangalawang ulit nang binasa ni Crayon sa harapan ko ang loveletter na para kay Dae.

IIYAK NA TALAGA AKO, kaya lang tinitingnan ko ang reaction ni Dae. May gusto rin kaya siya sa akin? Habang nagtatawanan sila (kasama si Dae), mas lalo kong narerealize ang dalawa kong problema! :-[





UNA: MY DAMN LOVE LETTER WAS EXPOSED IN FRONT OF DAELAN!



PANGALAWA: NAIIHI NA AKO SA KABA!!!!!!




"Se-Serene!" Sophie whispered at me.

ALAM KO! Umihi na ako. And we were just Grade six, I mean we are ALREADY at the 6th GRADE!

"HAHAHAHAHA!"
"HAHAHAHAHAHA!"
"HAHAHAHAHA! Naihi si Serene dahil sa kaba!" Sabi ni Valen.
"Nakuuuu! Matuturn off si Dae nyan!" Sabi ni Grey.
"Hoy Serene! Wa`g mo nga akong ipahiya sa harap ng mga kaibigan ko! Nakakadiri ka naman! HAHAHA~!" At sumama pa sa kantsawan ang walang hiyang pinsan ko!

Lumapit si Dae sa akin. OMGEEE, Ba`t pa `to nangyari sa oras na magtatapat ako kay Dae? Nakakahiya! Basang-basa ang lower school uniform ko. Si Sophie naman, tahimik lang sa tabi at mukhang siya pa ang nahihiya sa nangyari sa akin. Linapit ni Dae ang bibig niya sa tenga ko. Kinakabahan ako. Kabadong-kabado ako. Parang lalabas na ata ang puso ko sa dibdib ko. I`m excited! Anong sasabihin niya?

"Nakakahiya ka." He whispered gently.

Ugh. My eyes started to produce tears.

Tinalikuran niya ako at umalis silang lima sa harapan ko. Ilang sandali ang nakalipas, narealize ko na ang mga taga ibang section pala ay nanood sa lahat ng nangyari at hindi sila nagreact kanina dahil nandoon pa sina Dae. Kaya naman ngayon, puno ako ng kantsawan! Hinila na lang ako ni Sophie papuntang clinic at siya na rin ang kumuha ng damit ko sa bahay namin. Nakatunganga lang ako at hindi parin ako makapaniwala sa nangyari.

"Napaka bobo ko talaga! Ba`t ko ba ginawa yun?! GRRR..."
"Serene, tama na nga yan! Magpalit ka na lang ng damit!"

Pinalitan ko ang damit ko.

"Ba`t ka ba kasi hindi umihi muna?" Matatawa na sana si Sophie pero tinitigan ko siya.
"Eh malay ko bang makukuha pala nung stupidong Crayon na yun ang love letter ko?" >:(
"Naku naman oh! Nakakahiya yun!" She sighed.
"Ehhhh di bale na nga! Hindi naman sayo nangyari eh! ang sakit-sakit nga nun! Napahiya na ako, binasted pa ako!"
"Sabi ko naman kasi sayo noon pa diba? Wala na talagang pag-asa ang lalaking yun! Hayaan mo na lang ang ibang babaeng magdusa sa piling niya no! Ang feeling-feeling niya naman! Kala niya kong sinong gwapo siya!" She crossed her arms.
"Eh, gwapo naman talaga siya eh."
"Lam mo ikaw...? wala ka na rin atang pag-asa no? Tigilan mo na yan! Bata pa tayo!"
"Pero Sophie, mahal ko na ata siya eh."
"Tseeeh! Wa`g mo nga akong artehan ng ganyan! Lika na! Huli na tayo sa klase."

Nang pumasok na kami sa klase, nagtawanan ang lahat ng mga lalaki sa klase habang ang mga babae naman sa room namin ay namangha sa akin.

"Grabe, Serene! Nagawa mo yun? WOW."
"Perooo wala rin namang nangyari eh."
"Pero at least diba?"

Pumasok sina Dae at dumaan pa sila sa harap ko. Crayon made a face, he was always like this! Kasalanan niya talaga `to! HUMANDA KA TALAGA CRAYON KAAAAAA!






"Excuse me, dadaan ako." Nakita ko si Dae.

SANA LAMUNIN NA AKO NG LUPA. Hindi ko maigalaw ang paa ko. Masyado kasi akong naentertain sa pagpaplano ng makakapagpabagsak sa Crayon na yan eh, kaya ngayon...

Saka lang ako nagkamalay nung, "Excuse me... naririnig mo ba ako? O baka naman namamangha ka na naman diyan sa kagwapuhan ko?" >:(
"Abah... excuse me! Kung akala mong bidang-bida ka na sa puso ko dahil binigyan kita ng loveletter, pwes nagkakamali ka! P-U-P-P-Y LOVE LANG YUN! Pagkahighschool natin, makikita mo!"
"OWWWS? Sige nga???! Ipakita mo sa akin, Serene? You`re under my spell." Evil smile ni Dae.

Nagha-hyperventilate na ako dito at hindi ko na mapigilan ang sarili ko!

*SLAP*





"Makikita mo, Dae! Hinding-hindi talaga kita sasagutin kapag manliligaw ka sa akin!"
"NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKS!" Nagtawanan na naman sina Crayon!
" >:D Bakit? Manliligaw ba ako sayo?"

Everyone laughed. :-[ :'(



HAAAAY, so... my last year in elementary was ruined.






should i continue?

 

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