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Author Topic: {OH LOOK A DOG!} [THEMESONG.. LOL pg.3] (readers please? i need inspirationXD)  (Read 1056 times)

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"OH LOOK A DOG!"
[AUTHOR][BANNER][TRAILER][THEMESONG(not yet available)]

(misspelled right it's right not write XD)

CHAPTERS:
1//2//3//4//

CHARACTERS:
[DOGS] [Carina and Claire] [Prince Travis and Trevor] [Andrea] [Yule]

STORYLINE:
Prince Travis and Carina hates each other so much, they quarrel ever single day. The kingdom where they live tries to endure this scene everyday but Carina's evil twin sister can't stand it anymore.

She casts a spell on both of them, sending them away to a different world, in a different body, the body of a dog.

They both searched for their bodies, as they did they met Andrea, someone who could actually understand them. Andrea actually keeps their bodies in her house, where she lives alone. This is because her dogs turned into human beings one night.

Carina and Travis learned that they need to work together in order to make the two used to be dogs fall inlove with each other, this is the only way they could get their bodies back.

Claire, the dog that has Carina's body, likes Trevor, the dog inside Travis' body. Problem is, Trevor doesn't like Carina.

Will they ever be back in their own body?

Can Andrea actually help them? When she has problems of her own. Stalker. Yule, also known as Andrea's tail, is the person that has one big crush on Andrea. But All Andrea want is for him to leave her alone.

Will they ever have a fairytale ending? Or will everything end as nightmare? Find out in OH LOOK A DOG! :)
« Last Edit: November 08, 2008, 01:15:09 am by leeteuk »
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wow . very interesting story u got here poh . ngturn xla into dogs ? :o wow . ehehe . its nice poh . next na poh ! :)
we should be contented in what we have, or else, we will keep on searching for what we don't have, until we realized, that we have lost...everything

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^yeah yeah.. naging aso sila..  :D
sure.. chapter one will be posted tomorrow agad.. ;D
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nice...interesting...
:D next na poh.. :D :)

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i'll post 1st chapter later this afternoon.. :)
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uwa uwa uwa!new story sis! :))
keep it up!
napaka-unusual talaga ng mga plot mo. :D
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CHAPTER 1: THE SPELL

One sunny day at Deans Village Palace…

“A-Ha! You servant! Clean up this mess will you?” 

The idiot then gave me a weird smirk. I actually don’t get it, why in the world am I actually staying in this Palace in such dirty clothing. My exquisite beauty and charm must be exposed in a pretty pink gown while I sit in that big red chair. I, Carina, vowed to make this happen. I mean, atleast I have brains unlike that dumb Prince Travis. Talk about idiocracy, look at him wrestling that poor pillow down. What a weirdo.

You pillow! How dare you look down upon me like that?!?! I am the prince of this castle”

Yes, he does this every single, I could just kill myself.

“Servant! Where is my tea?”

As he called me servant, I could feel the heat on face, it’s turning fiery red. I could kill him.

“Yes, my dear Prince, please wait”


I told him kindly, well of course, I was faking it.


“Do you think I’m dumb?”

He said in an angry tone.

Oh my gosh, did he already realized that I was faking everything? Oh well, who cares? My life is already ruined. How much damage could he possibly do to my life?

“Of course not, your IQ is below sea level, your highness”

I bowed down to the freak again, wait, I’m dead. Did I just say that? I covered my mouth.


“Oh yes, I am below sea level”

He paused for a while; I guess I was wrong his IQ wasn’t below sea level, he doesn’t have a brain.

“Is that a good thing?”

He then continued, how irritating.

“Oh yes, your highness, it is”

I said, secretly I thought for someone like him, that is already a compliment, he should thank me.


“Ok, now where is my tea?”

He then said, as if he is Simba almighty.

“I’m going to get it now, your highness”

I told him as I went off.


“Oh! Please get the white one, I’m allergic to the black one”

I heard him blabbering from a far, but I couldn’t hear what he was saying clearly. The only thing I heard was “the black one”.


As I went inside the kitchen, there were two kinds of tea there. The white leaf tea and the blackberry tea, I took the black one, since he did say the black one.


I went back to him and gave him his tea, I was kind enough not to put poison on his tea. He should really thank me.

I was supposed to go back to my duties when I heard him choking, he was turning...
green?

Green! How could this happen? Did I unknowingly add poison to his drink?? My mouth dropped. I heard him cry for help as he asked me,

“Is this the white one?”

“No it’s the black one” I innocently said.

I felt the room temperature dropped, as the lights dimmed down, what in the world? Is this some horror movie? I turned back to him, his face changed, he has this gigantic red spot on his already green-blue face. I guess this is some horror movie after all.

His eyes were changing from dark brown to red, is this the effect of the black tea? I felt a gush of wind behind me, my, it’s really cold. I’m starting to develop goose bumps, ok, he really is scary, and ugly.

I could hear him growling a bit, his breath was quite cold.


“YOU IDIOT!”

He said, WOW! I never thought he would be able to use that word before I could ever tell him that.

“How can you be a careless idiot?!?”

Ok, this guy is getting on my nerves. So he kept blabbering about how poor I am, how stupid I am and that my parents are worthless…

Wait, that’s crossing the line!

“You can say anything about me! But leave my parent alone!”

I shouted at him, he backed off. Who cares if he is a prince? He’s the real idiot.


“How dare you!”

He defended himself; I on the other hand can’t contain my anger any longer. So this was the start of our fight, every single day, the same scenario happens. It became an ordinary thing, to the point that I almost killed him. Too bad some healer brought him back to life, scary.

Everything was fine, or so I think it was, until one day.

“You are just a poor pauper! How dare you talk to me life that!”

I wasn’t listening, I just made faces behind his back.

“And stop making face behind my back!”

I was shock, this guy has powers, telepathy to exact, or maybe he’s just learning, oh my I can’t believe it, he now has brain and it’s below sea level!

“Stop that, I really can hear you”

I paused and thought, Wait, you can? How?

“I stole a magic spell from your sister, it could last all day”

My eyes widen, my mouth dropped, oh kill me now, please!

“DO YOU KNOW WHAT YOU JUST DID??”

I screamed at him, before I know it he was screaming too.

“DUMBHEAD!” I shouted.

“IDIOT!”

 He then said, I could feel the palace shaking by then, but I didn’t bother to find out what it was. I continued our battle, and as I did, I realized that the only insult he knows was the word “Idiot”. How pitiful.


Our noise could be heard from miles away, before I knew it, people started complaining. The noise grew bigger. The palace shook even more, I stopped, he did too. The skies went black, yes, it was clearly black. Rain started to pour, thunder strikes everywhere.

I could feel someone smirking at me, as if someone was watching us, suddenly I heard someone laughing, it wasn’t an ordinary laugh, it was freaky, even weirder tha Travis.


“hahahaWAHAHAHA”

I could  hear noise coming from a far, little by little, the noise grew closer. Travis held on to me, I shove him off and slapped him.

“Hey!”

He said, I didn’t really care. My heart was beating really fast, what is happening?

“You two”

I heard someone call from behind, it was my twin sister and she was flying. Man, how does she do that??? 

Anyway, If you wandering. Why be scared? Well first she’s flying, second, my twin sister is a witch, how did that happen? How should I know? I never lived with her. All I know is that once we were born, she was separated from our family, then that’s it. Although, it’s weird, at present she actually just lives on that mountain near the palace. Travis always goes there, but my twin doesn’t know, I guess she’s asleep that time.

“It’s Prince Travis”

Travis butts in again, i hate the way he reads my mind.  

Sh ut up! When will that wear off???”

I replied, although I feel like i shouldn't have said a word, now she seems suspicious.

My sister’s eyes grew big, she glanced on Travis, I could feel her anger. I mean, who wouldn’t be angry at him?

“You! Not only were you noisy enough to disturb my slumber, you, my dear Prince also stole my potion”

She said, her emphasis on the word “dear” didn’t feel welcoming, it seemed more of a “You're-going-to die” tone, but Travis didn’t took it that way.

“Oh yes, my dear witch”

Dear? I thought to myself, he is crazy.

“I am not crazy, you’re the crazy one!”

He then continued, he forgot that he wasn’t referring to me in the first place. His reaction seemed like he was referring to my sister, yes, she is crazy, but you can’t tell her that. He covered his mouth with his hand, but it was too late. My sister is gonna bury is alive.

“You two have no respect for me! You shall pay!”

She said, oh no, she is going to bury us alive.

“Wait no! Don’t kill us! You can just kill him! Not me! I’m your sister!”

I told her, begging for mercy.


“Imbecile! I am not your sister! I have no family! You left me alone, for that you shall also pay!”

She furiously said.

Wait, also?? ALSO?? Does that mean I wasn’t really a part of her wrath?? I wish the ground would just eat me alive! I shouldn’t have said those to her, our family, she doesn’t need to remember. Well, not at a time like this.

I glanced at Travis, he seemed serious, as if he is actually thinking, I stared at him for a while, hoping something good would come out of his mouth, he took a deep breath, I swallowed my dignity, giving him the one last shot to prove that we are worthy to enough to live

His mouth slowly opened as he uttered… .


“Kill her, not me”

I turned grey, my mouth opened wide, before I know it we were screaming at each other once more, I saw my sister observing us.

“SHUT UP! I won’t kill both you anymore”

She said as she slowly backed off, she went down to her feet and walked near to us.

I saw Travis with his head up high, he must think he’s a hero for saving us, when he actually did nothing.


“Instead, I’ll turn you into this earthly creature, something called man’s best friend, you will switch bodies with this creature and the only way to get your bodies back is to be able to work together to make the two dogs you exchanged bodies with fall in love with each other, you have 5 months to do so, if you can’t do it, then you will stay that way forever”

I didn’t really understand what she just said, and if I wasn’t able to process whatever she told us, for sure, Travis didn’t understand it either. Before I could utter a word, she pushed us and this black portal was eating us alive.

“Find the girl that owns the dogs, she has your bodies and don’t worry she can understand you”

I could hear her mutter another sentence, but it wasn’t clear.

I fainted inside the black hole and as I regain consciousness a creature with white fur was licking my face. Before I could even speak, I could feel my nose, it was wet and cold. The creature spoke to me, wait, the creature was Travis and I am the same.


“Doggies!” I heard a little girl say as she. I was looking around to see who she is talking to.

Then I realized she was talking to us. Oh no, I’m this thing called, dog.

“Woof woof ah-ROOOOooooo!” (NOOOOOOOOooooo!!!!)




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Kea: ikaw ba ulit si jaijai or si jaejae? nalito kase ako ee.. XD anyway.. thank you.. :) hehe.. ganun talaga.. unusual din isip ko ee.. XD

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So chapter 1 is posted already.. Please support my new story.. Thank you.. :)





« Last Edit: October 27, 2008, 02:59:54 pm by leeteuk »
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Re: {OH LOOK A DOG!-what if one day you turned into a dog?} [CH1:THE SPELL]
« Reply #8 on: October 27, 2008, 03:05:37 pm »
nice... :d
hehehe, mukhang mas matalino pa ang servant kesa sa Prince.....  :)

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« Reply #9 on: October 27, 2008, 03:11:09 pm »
^yeah.. mas matalino talaga si Carnia kase kay Travis.. lol.. XD
btw.. what's your name?
and thanks for reading.. :)
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« Reply #10 on: October 27, 2008, 03:24:07 pm »
ang B*Bo naman ng prince na yan..
daig pa si CARINA.
AHHA.
next na po..
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« Reply #11 on: October 27, 2008, 03:57:55 pm »
Ngek?!grbe nMn ung nangyari?!awee!ang anu nMn nung prince!ehehe,nice up p0h!
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« Reply #12 on: October 27, 2008, 04:04:20 pm »
yay! chapie 1!! ;D
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« Reply #13 on: October 27, 2008, 05:21:39 pm »
THANK YOU SA MGA NAGBASA.. :)
yayed you all.. :)

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hehe.. ang eklat ba nung prince? mas magiging eklat yan.. XD
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« Reply #14 on: October 28, 2008, 12:32:54 am »
OMONAAA!!! si jaejin!! waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh...

abangan ko to.

sino si yule?? ang red ng lips ah. kekekeke.
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I am, indeed, polygamous.

 

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